Testimonials

Hi Jeanie,

Wow!!! You did an amazing job! I will make some edits and get back to you.

My business partner was so impressed with it, he wants you to do his as well.

Do I go through the same process for him as far as paying through the website?

Thanks for making me look good!

Brent B.

Dear Greg,

To begin with, my apologies for the delay as I had a personal issue that I needed to take care of. The CV looks awesome! Your reputation was stellar to begin with but this is better than my expectations (they were high).

There is one minor edit that I am attaching.

Thanks so much!

Very respectfully,

Adil R.

Greg, good afternoon.

Thank you for my updated resume and cover letter.

I thought you did a great job with both conveying my career experiences and core competencies I had a few edits and corrections on the resume to follow up with you on.

I have attached the draft resume and highlighted the edits and corrections in YELLOW for you. I did not make any other changes to the resume regarding format and or spacing I will leave that to you as you instructed.

Please let me know if you have any questions and or comments regarding the edits and corrections.

Best regards

Jeffrey S.

Hi Pierre,

Please see my updates & responses in the attached. Let me know if you have any questions.

I really like how you've captured the essence of my strengths - I have trouble articulating that at times 🙂

Please feel free to ask any leading question to the recent achievements to help make stronger.

Thanks.

Maria H.

Hi Greg,

I printed out the resume and read it through thoroughly.

WOW! I would hire me

Seriously, this update to my resume is spectacular and it gives me great confidence to be successful in my career search.

Attached is my revision. Please let me know if there is anything else you need to finalize my awesome resume!

Cheers!

Barbara S.

Peter,

Jean finished my resume and she did a great job.

Couple of questions:

How is the ATS formatted resume different from the resume Jean completed for me?

Can you give some insight on your resume distribution service?

Thanks

Jim B.

Hi Pierre,

Thank you soo much for all the help you have provided, I feel satisfied with the work at this point including the LinkedIn Profile.

I hope that I will email you soon updating you that I got the job I want (fingers crossed).

Thank you again and wish you all the best 🙂

We will stay in touch

Best Regards

Hala Al O.

Jeanie,

Just touching base to make sure you saw those few edits sent over mid day Tuesday. Your work was outstanding and the edits were fine tunes at the most.

When do you think we can conclude everything w/Linkedin and final resume package? I sent you the linkedin URL info.

Again, my thanks and just looking for a completion date.

The resume work – did what Peter said it would.

These days, I think there are few out there that deliver as promised. It’s been great to have your help. I’m eager to get underway with it.

Susan D.

Mr. Newfield/Jeanie,

I wanted to take a moment and thank you and Jean Oscarson for your services.

I am very satisfied with the final product and I believe that she did a tremendous job top to bottom.

During our initial conversation you had mentioned, that your organization also provides services that assist with gaining greater visibility.

I would be interested in pursuing these options at this time, with.

Please let me know how I can help with this.

Best Regards,

Ryan J.

Hello Pierre,

I wanted to catch up with and thank you again for the resume.

I appreciate all your hard work.

The resume truly was eloquently done, and was a production of someone who knows and respects their craft.

Merci,

Danielle C.

Pierre,

You have managed to sum up my career frustrations in a couple of sentences.

You are absolutely correct. My background has exposed me to nearly every HR discipline there is, but in a support role.

Your typical HR Generalist lacks the technical and financial skills that I have obtained along the way, but when given the opportunity, I have easily slipped into his/her role quite easily.

I have had to learn the details of the discipline in order to configure the applications accordingly. The opposite would not be required of the Generalist.

Thank you for your help thus far,

Vin D.

Perfect, thank you so much Pierre.

I appreciate your help and turning this around so quickly this week. It's 100% better than before.

Again thank you and look forward to speaking with you next week!

Thanks for getting a jump on the cover letter and LI profile.

I need all the help I can get!

Enjoy your weekend!

Best regards,

Joanne S.

Hi Jeanie -

This looks amazing!

I really think this sets a great foot forward and engages the reader.

I have a few, mostly minor, edits. Once you incorporate these, please consider the resume final!

Edward J.

Pierre,

Thank you for the quick turnaround.

The style and setup are dramatically different. It’s almost like reading someone else's work history…

Overall, it seems to be more fluid, represents the position well and is much more clear and precise.

I look forward to hearing back from you.

This is very impressive and I sincerely appreciate your efforts.

Jonathan P.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for the profile. I have pasted the new profile into LinkedIn.

I am very pleased with the results.

I have also recommended you and Peter and passed your name to a colleague.

Thanks and kind regards,

Steve S.

Pierre,

I think the resumes look great and I appreciate all your hard work!

I agree with you that this is a great stand alone resume but I am going to look at this tonight and see where I would to make changes or additions

Thank you for everything and speak with you soon - and thank you for your expediency

Sincerely

Danielle C.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for reply. My resume looks good then, you can go forward with a revision of my LinkedIn Profile.

Thanks and kind regards,

Steve S.

Peter (Dan),

Just a quick note.

Dan (Cc’d here) has provided excellent results for my resume, cover letter, and LinkedIn profile. (I have not edited my online profile yet, but I will soon.)

Many thanks to you both, and I will report to you when I land my next position.

Frank P.

Tammy,

This looks very good except I’d remove the high lighted statement about fluency in Spanish. I’m not fluent, but can pick up most of what I hear in Spanish. It’s probably best just to delete the statement.

On another matter, would I work with you (or could you direct me to) who I would work with to re do my linked in page?

Thank you for your help.

Steve F.

Hello Jeanie.

Wonderful work!

This is condensed, creative, and an articulate approach to presenting my experience and offering.

I have attached some minor adjustments (tracked changes) for you to finalize.

Please verify the LinkedIn hyperlink works for you.

Ben D.

Peter (re Jeanie),

I wanted to say I have had a great experience working with Jean -

I think she really helped with the resume and its in great shape.

After consideration I would also like to do a profile update for linked in.

Can we talk about the best way to do that - I think would be a good investment.

Amy D.

Hello Jeanie,

I’m just dropping you a note to let you know my schedule last week was crazy and I apologize for the delay in getting this to you. I am now making progress on my worksheet this week in the evenings. I hope to have this to you in the next couple days, but no later than this coming weekend.

I look forward to seeing your work and an objective summary (resume) of my experiences in a way that markets me for my next career move.

I’m enjoying the worksheet process and can already see how this will yield a more complete image of who I am and what I offer.

Kind Regards,

Ben D.

Greg:

Thanks for the expedited turnaround.

The resume definitely feels more assertive and powerful now. I don’t have major things to address.

Because my PC has the latest version of Word, I decided to use highlighting rather than track changes because I wasn’t sure how track changes would come through in MS Word 1997-2003.

Again, thanks,

Barry R.

Greg -

It looks fantastic.

I have attached the draft with corrections. If you have any questions please let me know. I do have one area of concern.

I found my positions with ABC Company and XYZ Company through Automotive Consulting & Management. Should "(ACM)" be included before the names of these two companies so that it flows more evenly?

Further, do you feel the specifics under ACM are specific enough?

Please advise.

Thank you,

Shawn C.

Peter/Jeanie,

I want to thank you for your assistance in updating my resume and Jeanie was wonderful to work with throughout the process.

You had mentioned a discount code with BlueSteps and I was wondering how to take advantage of that offer.

Regards,

Rob P.

Pierre,

This looks great! I assume I can just go copy and paste this in. While I have not crossed this with my resume, I assume you did ensure accuracy.

I will review both one more time together as a side by side and if I have any other questions will circle back.

Erik S.

Hello Greg,

I reviewed your first draft of my resume and cover letter.

I am very pleased with them except some minors errors.

Please check and update the changes in RED.

Any questions, please let me know.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Best Regards,

Hugh B.

Greg,

Ok looks good to me then. LinkedIn is all we got left.

I appreciate the hard work you put into this.

I was skeptical about paying to write a resume, but feel you’ve earned your money on this!

Gerrick W.

Tammy,

See attached redline to your “outstanding” first draft.

Call with questions.

Thanks

Pat B.

Dear Pierre,

Thank you very much for all your help with my resume.

Appreciate your thoughtful insights and knack to write crisp descriptions.

God bless you.

With best regards

KB,

Hi Jeanie,

I hope you are doing well. Great job again on my resume! I do not have any remaining edits to the document.

I now need your assistance to draft a cover letter and revise my LinkedIn profile.

Please let me know the next steps.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you.

BB

Greetings Dan and Good Morning,

How else can I best describe how one person has finally clearly understood who I really am as a complete person and the value I am able to deliver "WOW".

I will now look at it on my laptop to see what it looks like.

Attached is what I see on my new Apple laptop. Per the first attachment I'm not sure if it is reconfiguring your original font layout and uncertain if it is changing anything what you are seeing from your end. if you could send me a print screen of what you see or advise to see exactly as you see it.

This is my first new Apple product and I hate it.

Overall, I love it but I want to be certain silicon Sally hasn't chosen to change/reconfigure your original masterpiece.

If the attachment I have resent you is what it should look like then I would say we can continue to move forward with the cover letter and whatever else needs to be completed for LINKEDIN.

Thank you,

Maurice G.

Jeanie,

Thank you, it looks great.

Is this the final format you are recommending including bolds, yellow highlights, etc?

Also I did sign up for the LinkedIn option as well, what do you need from me to start that process too?

Again thank you.

Brian C.

Hi Dan,

Thank you so much for getting back to me and for sending me the version of the resume' with details of what was going on, in your previous e-mail.

I definitely appreciate the transparency and the hard work that you have put into this project. Much appreciated.

I'd like to apologize for my e-mail yesterday, if I came across as too confrontational, I just wanted to start my job search as soon as I can.

Thanks for your understanding, your help is much appreciated!

I will review the 2 page version with the addendum, and I will most probably send it to you over the weekend.

Regards,

Michel S.

Hi Peter (Pierre),

My husband is interested in having his resume professionally revised.

Pierre Daunic provided such great services revising my resume, and we would like to have his resume reviewed and revised.

Please let me know what the next steps would be to have this service provided?

Thank you

Regards,

Demi G.

Peter (Jeanie)-

I wanted you to know I shared edits with Jeanie yesterday and think she did a wonderful job!

Looking forward to the revision, LinkedIn copy and cover now.

Stellar work as promised.

Dave S.

Peter (Jeanie)

Wonderful! I'm glad to hear it.

Jeanie did such a great job with my resume,

I often had multiple interviews in a day.

I recommend your company to anyone I know who is job hunting. 🙂

Elizabeth B.

Dan,

First, thank you for the great work and I am quite pleased with the formatting and verbiage.

Secondly, I don't require any changes at this time.

Finally, I am grateful for your support and wish you continued success.

Respectfully,

Greg S.

Hello Peter (Tammy).

My resume has been completed and I am very happy with how it turned out. She did a great job I would like my Linkedin profile updated.

Please let me know how we can proceed.

Thank you.

Paul F.

Pierre,

That is an awesome cover letter! I wish I could say I am a change agent for the Medical School and Health Systems. It should read ... change agent for the School of Dentistry ... I can make that change.

I am completely satisfied! By the way, I am interviewing for the Assistant VP of Human Resources at XYZ State University located in XXXXXXXX. Up early, I have a big day tomorrow.

Thank you so much for the resume and cover letter, they are both awesome!

Tina P.

Hi Greg,

This looks great.

Made a few edits and they are highlighted via track changes in the attached doc.

Let me know if we should talk this week to get to final.

Tom L.

Dan,

Not sure if you remember me but you updated my resume a year ago.

Great job by the way. I'm needing another update to reflect my current role as CMO.

Thanks,

Trent S.

Hey Peter (Jeanie),

Thanks for all the help. Only one more thing to go and that is the LinkedIn profile.

I just sent a note to Jeanie to get things going on that.

Good thing is the new resume helped me find a new job within Microsoft! So all goodness!

I appreciate the work Jeanie did

Gus G.

Hi Greg,

I made the final corrections in RED type and left the original with strikethrough/red.

Thank you very much for your hard work on this,

I will await your final corrections to approve.

Joey H.

Hi Pierre:

Hope you are well.

Thanks for sending both documents.

I am happy with the results.

I will go through both documents carefully and and make sure that I haven'y missed anything. I was wondering if you can spare a few minutes for a phone call as I have a couple of questions regarding LinkedIn.

Thanks again for all the hard work, especially in the such a short time frame.

I will let you know how things go, although everything takes forever at this company !

Best Regards.

Rupa P.

Hi Peter

I have the resume, and it looks great. Am still reviewing. And adjusting a bit. It is a different perspective on my career. I think a good one, but I have to shift my self marketing, I think.

Regardless, could please remind me, did I order the LinkedIn page assistance? And could I get the details again on your recruiter database?

Thanks

Ron McC.

Peter/(Jeanie),,

I wanted to say thank you so much for such a great, professional resume on my son's resume!!!

Really nice job – we’re all very pleased!

Please thank Jeanie for doing such an excellent job!

Will recommend your services highly in the future!

Brian B.

Peter/Greg,

I am sending someone to you who wants to get their resume up to date, given I was happy with my resume.

By the way, I did get a new job internal to IBM as a result to help get a startup internally going, which is quite exciting.

I've sent her all your contact information.

Sharon C.

Gentlemen,

Just wanted to drop you a note.

I'll be starting a new job as Director of Technology for Orange Regional Medical Center up by me in Middletown, NY.

This is a huge IT operation that I will be heading up. Kudos on the resume work Greg; you did a fantastic job.

Thanks for everything guys.


Best regards,

Craig F.

Peter,

Jeanie finished my resume and it looks awesome.

I am looking for recruiters in the Technology area as that is where a majority of my experience is based.

I would also be interested in recruiters that specialize in a job such a Procurement/Purchasing.

Let me know how to proceed?

Thanks,

Robert H.

Dear Dan

Thank you very much for your efforts and cooperation. what do you feel about the CV does it have some
weight-age

i feel ok and hope this cv must give good results. let me use it and see the response. and i will give
feed back in due course.

Regards,

Sundar B.

Hey Peter,

The resume' that Greg did for me looks great.

Did you mention that you could do an Executive Bio?

Thanks,

Mike B.

Hi, Peter/(Jeanie).

I hope you had a great holiday break. I just received my resume draft from Jeanie, and it's looking great. I've sent over some minor edits, but I think we are very close.

I would like to go ahead and move forward with a LinkedIn profile as well, but I was wondering if your team does that in Word and then I copy and paste or how that works exactly?

I'm assuming Jeanie would be doing my LinkedIn profile as well, but I'm not positive. I just realized I never connected with you on LinkedIn, so I'll do that now - sorry about that.

If you still have my cc on file, please proceed with that same card for the LinkedIn profile charges as well. Just let me know what else I need to do on my end.

Thank you!
Randa M.

Hi Peter/ (Jeanie),

Just wanted to give you a heads up that Jeanie completed my resume, much to my satisfaction.

I’ve asked her to send the LinkedIn/ Bio/ Cover letters as well as I believe she’s handling that also. Is my assumption correct?

Hope you have an awesome holiday and a great 2016. Separately, I passed along your contact information to two of my friends for consideration.

Regards,

Dev P.

Hi Jane,

Jeanie has been doing a fantastic job on my resume, we're almost done. I would like to add on the LinkedIn and Cover letter work. I'm sitting on the fence for the Exec Bio a lot of money especially at Christmas which I may just hold off on.

If I add the Bio on? How best to proceed?

I also gave Jeanie a heads up, she gave me Peter N. email if needed but I remembered you had mentioned these services also.

Happy Holidays 🙂
Mick W.

Tammy,

This looks great. I am ready to finalize it and move onto the LinkedIn profile.

Also I would like to expand the work being done to include a cover letter and a one page executive bio.

Would you be able to coordinate that or should I ask Peter about it?

Thanks

Cindy K.

Hi Jeanie,


This looks great,

I have no other edits or changes required. I consider this version the final version of the Resume, I know I will create some variations of this.

Now we need to move on to the cover letter and linkedin profile docs right? I found a position that is a bit different than what I was planning to apply for, I'd love for the cover letter to be positioned for this job, I'll modify the resume to accommodate and I'm working on the other documents they are requesting:

Thanks!

Meika D.

Hi Jeanie,

First draft looks great.

I made a couple of small changes/additions per your questions on the draft resume. I have a couple of associates reviewing the resume as well.

Peter – what are your thoughts? It has been A LONG TIME since I interviewed and I need your expertise as to what works in today’s market.

What are next steps?

Thanks!

Kevin H.

Greg,

I had a chance to proof read the document for accuracy and attached is the updated resume highlighted in red.

Overall it looks good on depth and message and I am very satisfied with how you could manage to compress it 2 pages.

Let me know if you need any additional information.

Thanks,

JK

Hi Greg,

Wow, it looks GREAT!! Thank you,

I made some changes and listed in RED as you requested.

I have some data that may be beneficial to showing my performance at my current store.

Joey H.

Peter/Dan,

I’ve forwarded your email to Veronica, she’s currently deployed and may be hard to reach.

You’re welcome on the referrals…I always remember and recommend those who have provided an excellent product or service to my friends and coworkers.

Just imagine how much work you’d have if I had more friends! J

I’ll certainly recommend your services to others when I hear them considering retirement from the military or switching companies.

Thanks,

Tony W.

Dan,

Thank you very much, it looks fantastic.

I have one question and one change:

I have been in automotive for 30 years; why do you just say 18 years?

I do not like the word "Spear headed" in my Company highlight section, can we change that?

Otherwise it looks great. Now

if I want a cover letter and update to my linkend profile, do I do that thru you?

Thank you

Paul B.

Hi Tammy,

This looks great!

I think you higlight my achievements very well and a very concise way, definitely very pleased.

I have made a couple minor changes in red. I do want to add one career highlight but not sure how to frame it well. Since I am looking for both small to medium size company CFO roles as well as VP finance in companies, I want to add a highligh that point out my strengthy in business partnership or financial managment... I have throw in some thoughts in the revised draft, hope you can help me out on that.

Much appreciated!.

I am also interested to have you help me with a cover letter.

Maggie Y.

Greg,

Thank you very much for your hard work!

I an ecstatic how this came out! It would never have been as powerful if I had written it myself.

A few proposed edits and questions included within the attached document.


I am surprised submitting resumes in PDF format is no longer appropriate. I thought this was standard practice, or at least it used to be. Do you suggest protecting the Word document is any way to maintain its integrity?

I would also like to have a cover letter written. Do you write that as well?

Thanks again.

Sincerely,

Steve S.

Peter,

I will continue to refer friends to your company, so far everyone has been very pleased and become very marketable after hiring you.

I have some picky friends and co-workers ---we have high standards and we're not great at creating our own resumes.

Happy to hear good companies prosper.

Donnetta B.

Greetings Peter/Jeanie,

Let me first start off by saying that I am a pleased client from five years ago.

I've gotten several interviews and jobs since we last spoke. I am sure this is not a surprise to you.

As a result, I am reaching out because I would like to utilize your services once again to update my resume, create a Marketing Bio for Linkedin and possibly an Executive Bio as well.

Shazzma C.

Peter, Jeanie,

I want to come back to the resume Jeanie did for me some time ago.

You will be pleased to hear that I was offered and accepted recently a very senior legal role starting January 1 2016.

So this was a good exercise. The resume worked really well !

There is one thing left to do: I paid also to update the LinkedIn description. Can you still propose something there? The text need not be "aggressive" or too much fishing for new opportunities since I just scored what I think could be a dream job!

Let me know if you need something still from me.

With thanks!!

So happy I met you guys and put in the money.

Johan H.

Dear Pierre,

I would never been able to write such an introduction letter as you wrote and to me sounds perfect.

I thank you so much, that allows me to send it tomorrow.

I will write you next week with other information that I would like to add on my linkedin profile.

Have a nice weekend

Massimo B.

Greg,

Thank you for your work!

I have made some minor changes via track changes. I look forward to seeing your final revisions.

Doug B.

Good morning, Tammy.

I have gone through the draft thoroughly and have made some very minor changes.

I used the "Track Change" feature in Word as you recommended and highlighted those changes in yellow as well.

I appreciate all your help and guidance through this process.

I'm very pleased with what you have pulled together.

Thank you,

Larry D.

Good Morning Peter,

Dan has finished my resume. I like it.

Does it have enough numbers in it?

Also, how do I get my Linkedin profile synced up to my resume?

Do you have someone else do that or does Dan handle.


Thanks,

Andrew F.

Peter,

Jeanie has been a true joy to work with, and the first draft she sent me this week looks terrific---she has done a great job!

I sent the draft back to her this morning with just a few tweaks, but wanted to ask you what I need to do next to have the resume included in the executive job search board you had mentioned to me when we
spoke?

I am also interested in looking for positions overseas.

Please let me know next steps and what the additional cost for that service
would be.

Thank you again for sending me Jeanie--she is awesome, and I appreciate your help throughout..

Robin V.

Peter/Greg,

Resume, cover letter, and LinkedIn are all great. Thank you.

What is your feeling about Blue Steps and its success rate in generating placements?

If I proceed, I think I should be asking you for a discount code for them.

Please let me know your opinions.

I'm happy to have a quick call if that's easier than email.

Thanks,

Tim B.

Greg,

Well done! I have made some minor adjustments, to numbers within the resume.

A quick question, I know the last 5-10 years are the relevant years for experience, but it does not state the overall number of years of experience I have or the companies I worked for,

Just wanted to know the rational behind that.

The cover letter is perfect.

After these are complete, you can start working on my linked in profile.

Thanks Again,

Jim H.

Good morning, Pierre,

This looks great with the condensed format.

Thanks for making the changes, as I'm happy with what you've done.

Regards,

Demi G.

Peter,

Thanks again Peter. I have had some really great feedback on the Resume'.

I actually was on a site called "Glassdoor".. They have a free Resume' feed-back service.

Well, I of course submitted mine..They came back almost immediately.

They told me I was the exception, because I have an outstanding resume' !!!

Scott P.

Greg,

I like a lot of things you did to help me see the situation better.

I made some changes to ensure accuracy and to highlight important key words.

Debra C.

Good morning Peter,

i received my resume back from Jeanie and it looks great.

I'm ready to talk about getting it into recruiter's hands.

If you are free in the next hour or so please give me a call. Otherwise, I will try you later this afternoon.

Jerry D.

Thanks Greg.

I have been looking at this document, it is fantastic. That is my problem. I had forgot to add "DOCSIS 3.1" modem specification for Century Link.

I was going to just "add it" right?

Not on this, it is too nice and awesome, I'll mess it up.

Are we done and will it cost me more money to add the DOCSIS 3.1 info? Where would you recommend I add it if a cost is associated with your effort at this point?

Scott P.

Jeanie,

I was just going to check in with you.

I must say, this is just great. It’s just what Peter promised!

I do have a couple questions. Would it be possible to speak on the phone or should we just do it via email?

Hanan F.

Good morning Gregory.

Thank you for the quick turn-around. I did see the missing City and state and have changed it with tracking on.

Otherwise I believe we have an awesome document!!

Thanks Budddy!!

Scott P.

Tom,

Attached please find my edits... just 3 things.... name, email and amount of revenues...

Look forward to the remaining item.

I am very pleased with the presentation and it sees concise and representative.

Now if you can send me some 7 figure jobs I can quality for , I will be very happy.... Just kidding.

Thanks

JEFF C.

Greg,

This looks wonderful! There are just a couple of very minor corrections, and I can't access "Track Changes" from the computer I am currently using:

Change the word "public" to K-12; most of my experience below college level was at a Catholic school. I did teach at a public school for a year and have substituted in public schools, but that is not the bulk of my experience.


Under core competencies, take off "counseling."

Thanks again for a wonderful job.

This looks SO much better than what I had before.

Have a great weekend!

Elizabeth W.

Greg,

Looks great!

A few modifications in the attached.

Thank you,

Alexis P.

Greg,

The resume look very good.

Attached is a "redlined" scan copy for you to review. There are few minor adjustment to reflect more on what is real happening on each achievement.

Please let me know or just call me to discuss if you have any question.

Thanks!

Henry W.

Hello Dan,

I just had a chance to read your email.

Thank you very much for the good job.

I will go ahead and complete the job application and will let you know.

I will definitively recommend friends to you.

Thank you again.

Best regards,

Oumar D.

Hi Peter,

Jeanie Oscarson did an outstanding job with my resume.

Have a question for you: do you have any contacts at Northwestern University Chicago, who tutor for GMATS?

I recall that you work with the MBA students with resumes.

Any information would be appreciated.

Thanks,

Christa S.

Greg,

The resume looks great.

It's night an day compared to the one I wrote.

I am curious as to why some of the 2011 accomplishments were not included.

Jeff B.

Jane and Dan:

Thank you for your diligence and professionalism in preparing my marketing documents, CV and LinkedIN.

Although I am still in the search, I have had a phone interview and two very positive responses from professional recruiters on how my presentation, keywords and style now reflect a modern and experienced executive.

Special thanks to Dan for willing me through the process when I got stuck and being creative in packaging the great with the good and the other.

If you have use for a sound-bite referral please feel free to ask.

Best regards,

Paul C.

Hello Greg,

Thank you for your effort and the draft.

Here are my edits for your review.

Sincerely,

Petty H.

Kathy,

You have taken my resume to a different level and I am grateful. Thank you.

Could you or Peter Newfield please also do the cover letter he mentioned to me?

Thank you again.

Peter B.

Pierre,

Thanks Pierre,

This is great work.

I really appreciate your help.

Attached is the final version.

I made a few more tweaks myself.

Ross L.

Peter/Tom

Thanks again for the help with my resume. The finished product was great!

My wife is also interested in updating her resume and I was hoping you wouldn't mind reaching out to her to talk through the steps, etc.

Thanks again!

Dana T.

Peter/Jeanie

My pleasure referring another person to you.

The feedback I got from Egon Zehnder on how the CV was written was very positive.

To the point that i landed an interview for a Chief Of Strategy position - direct report to the CEO - of a company on the Milan stock exchange.

Clearly a position well above what I'm targeting (VP level)

I didn't land a job for other reasons, but the CV was a key door opener.

Now I'm on the consideration set of Egon Zehnder for similar assignments - which is great!!!

So I was very comfortable recommending your services to Rodolphe.

Hopefully it won't be the only refererral you'll get from me.

Alberto M.

Hi Peter,

My pleasure to recommend you. I’ve given your name out to a number of friends. I hope they’re all contacting you.

BTW, after updating my linkedin profile with your resume update, my phone was ringing off the hook. I recently left and took a job as head of IR at XXXXXXXX.

Thanks for your help!

Best,
Brian S

Hi Peter,

The resume that you and Wendy Haylett developed for me just over 2 years ago worked wonders (I've been a VP of Engineering ever since), but I think it's time for another go-around.

How do we begin the process of updating what we built back in 2013?

Would I still be working with Wendy?

Thanks,
Mathew W.

Hi Jeannie -

You reviewed my resume for me last year and did a fabulous job -

I received many compliments! I am in the process of updating it now.

I added my newest position and listed trainings, but it needs to be cleaned up and tweaked.

I can also send you my official "job description" in the am.

How much do you charge to update?

Thanks,

Audrey A.

Greg

OK - Here's a few changes under selected Accomplishments. Increased Sales Volume 23% Yr. over Yr. since inception.

Now under Professional Experience
eliminated $750,000 in losses.

*Grew used car department to Top 5 level and then to number #1 in county for registrations. also there is no mention of increased monthly
sales volume from 30 units per month to 150 units per month within a 3 year period.

I think that's it?

Great Job!!

Michael K.

Hi Pierre,

Now we're talking!! 🙂

It looks much, much better and much more robust!

I only have a couple of tweaks

I would like you to make: please see notes on the document attached.

I think we're finally there!

Will you make revisions to the cover letter as well?

At the very least I would like you to include the header with my name and address in the cover letter as well if possible.

Thank you so much for all your help!

Gabriele D.

Hi Greg:

Overall, the resume looks great.

I made a couple changes which I tracked in the attached document.

Please review and let me know your thoughts.


Tom B.

Jean,


This resume is great,

We should move forward with the linked in profile.

Lisa T.

Hi Greg,

Very good work; I have three small edits.

Please see the attached word documents.

Thanks,

Valerie B.

Kathy,

Thank you so much for your efforts, expertise, and professionalism to help me move a couple levels up on my job search.

I greatly appreciated you doing the resume and cover letter in such a timely manner.

I apologize for not getting back to you on the 16th of April. I am working night shift and is hard sometimes when catching up on sleep.

I will let you and Jane know when I land my new job.

Thank you again for all of your expertise and professionalism,

Sincerely,

Paul L.

Pierre,

They [resume and cover letter] both look great. Thank you so much for your help.

Have a great weekend,

Frank O.

Kathy,

It looks great with the changes. Please finalize both.

Lets now update LinkedIn Profile.

What information do you need to do this?

Thank you,

Paul L.

Kathy,

I received your email with attachments yesterday. I was at work not able to review it until this morning. I am following your directions regarding proofreading, editing, and procedures to finalize.

I need about 24 -36 hours to check and make any minor changes. I will have it back to you before noon on Wednesday, April 15, 2015.

FYI: I appreciate your hard work in getting it to its current state.

I know this task was a challenge.

Thank you very much for an outstanding job! I am very excited.

Thank you again,

Paul L.

Greg,

We are almost there. The cover letter is perfect. The resume just has a couple of strikethroughs that were missed:

On line 3 the word SAP should be taken out
On line 10, after the word BW the comma and word and should be removed.

Everything else is perfect.

Thanks and regards,

Jorge L.

Greg,

I reviewed both the resume and cover letter documents and indeed I am very pleased and excited about the results.

I followed the editing instructions in your e-mail and used Track Changes in MS Word so you can easily identify them. The cover letter just has one minor change while the resume has several changes or additions that may require formatting changes as well.

Attached are the revised documents. Let me know if you have any questions.

Thank you and best regards,

Jorge L.

Peter,

I have completed the resume writing process with Tammy Chisholm and attached the results. I believe it is a much stronger resume.

Per our prior conversations, I would like to explore headhunting services. Do you have contacts that you can introduce me to?

Thank you in advance.

Best regards,

Quin E.

Hello Peter,

The job is done, and I guess perfectly.

Please find attached the final outcome.

As per your vast experience did Jeanie or myself miss anything?

Thanks again,

Rabih H.

Hi Peter,

I am very pleased with the resume done by Tammy.

I shared with some of my associates and received positive feedback.

I would like to work on my LinkedIn profile.

Abraham S.

Tom

Looks great. I just had a few changes,

I attach the marked up version.

The cover letter looks terrific thanks.

Joe G.

Dan and Jane,

I wanted to reach out and say thank you,

The new resume got me an interview, offer and now job acceptance and in a few weeks I will be moving onto a new career.

I am the new Proposal Compliance Manager for Sierra Nevada Corporation in Sparks, NV.

Thank you again for all of your help and support.

Regards,

Jack B.

Hello Greg,

Thank you for your incredible, truly amazing assistance.

The final format, except for a typo, is great!

Could I request perhaps the bio and linked in bio etc?

Saju J.

Hey Pierre,

The new resume looks fantastic!

I really appreciate it.

I'll likely do a few minor tweaks to it, but all in all an outstanding job.

Thank you very much for the help!

Matt McC.

Greg and Peter,

I needed to utilize the resume 'as is' for my interview on 3 March 2015.

The interview process was lengthy; though I did receive feedback yesterday that I am the preferred candidate; compensation may be the issue.

I will now complete the review.

I am hopeful that we will also be able to complete the update for LinkedIn.

Thanks,

Francis L.

Peter,

Re: Tammy Chisholm

In today's job market, having a well-written, concise and clearly articulated resume including a summary of one's job strengths and skill-set, with enough metrics to highlight achievements, is paramount to having your phone ring or email box filled for job interviews.

Having chosen Career-Resumes.com to help me recraft and rewrite my resume, I was fortunate enough to have been paired with Tammy Chisholm to achieve this undertaking.

I was amazed at how easily and swiftly Tammy was able to take my information and provide me with a resume with the right content, with the right tone, and the right emphasis for the type of work I am seeking.

I think that no matter your field of endeavor, Tammy has an uncanny ability to quickly decipher and understand your job or career aspirations as well as your skills and experiences and merge them to create a long-lasting document of which you can be proud.

Any one looking to have their resume professionally written should look to Career-Resumes.com

You won't be disappointed!

Lee C.

Dan,

This looks good.

I think I’ll need to have another version done to reflect the skills I’ve learned in school as this mainly highlights sales and customer service achievements.

I’m guessing this is common practice, more than one version? I’ve already used this to apply for a management position within my parent company, STERIS.

They emailed me within a couple days of submitting it and I have an initial phone interview scheduled tomorrow afternoon.

I think this effectively speaks to your skills!

Thank you,

Paul R.

Hi Greg,

Some minimal changes, mostly in the order of the bullet points, and few typo mistakes (from my side).

All changes were highlighted in red, as per your kind request.

Pls consider the one attached as the final draft on my side.

Thanks for your effort and great job.

Waiting for your final feedback.

Cheers,

Alex Di N.

Jean,

Here are my changes. The first draft already got rave reviews…

Is there the possibility of converting an alternate version to a serif font such as

Garamond for use in more formal submissions? Fonts without serif are considered more casual….

Regards,

Karen F.

Hi Greg,

Pls find enclosed the revised CV (version 2) with changed highlighted in red.

Some of the changes are due to the verification of some data I’ve sent to you and that proved to be wrong afterwards.

There is still one info that I need to verify

Unfortunately, all these changes jeopardized the 2 pages Word format .. hope you can fix this small issue.

Waiting for your next draft of my CV ..

Thanks again for your GREAT JOB!!

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Alex D.

Greg;

I am very pleased with both of these. Thank you for the patience and extraordinary work.

My first reaction when I initially read these was “WOW” and that has not changed. Some small tweaks were needed but overall a great experience.

I have only made a few very minor tweaks to the attached documents. In my opinion, they are ready to rock and roll.

Let’s move on to the final step and get my profile updated. What do I need to provide you with? Is email the best way to do that?

THANKS!!

Nick A.

Hi Dan & Jane,

Just a quick note to let you know that I'm very happy with the resumé and it appears to be working.

I applied to the position I sent you on Friday and had a preliminary phone interview yesterday.

Thank you and I'll be in touch.

Best Regards,

Miguel V.

Pierre, good day again.

Moments after receiving the completed CV and cover letter from yourself, I applied for the position I was looking at (Projects Director, 25K/Month Tax free).

That was yesterday.

I have just received a call from the agency saying that my credentials and skill set match what is required.

They also commented on the excellent application presentation !

First hurdle over and crossed with ease.

Thanks for the great work.

Stuart D.

Good day, Pierre.

Many thanks for the work you have put into creating my CV.

99% there, I think.

I have attached the copy with comments and added in blue.

In the overview I prefer to not steer towards XXXXX (unless I am looking to approach a xxxxx firm), so I prefer to be more generic.

Apart from that, and the notes I made, it looks very good.

Thanks also for forwarding over the weekend, much appreciated (my weekend is Friday !)

Regards,

Stuart A.

Good Morning Peter,

I just wanted to let you know Jeanie reworked some items on my resume and it is great! – I asked Jeanie if I could replace the LinkIn summary with a cover letter…however after thinking it through I would like to keep the LinkIn summary and pay additional for the cover letter – so please let me know what I need to do.

Even though this process has taken a little longer than expected I see the value in Jeanie’s writing ….she is wonderful.

Best Regards,

Jeaneen S.



Dan,

I have updated my LinkedIn with the information that you sent,

It works great and I feel pretty sure that a lot of people on my network will go and recheck the information on my page, so simple and looks completely different because of language usage.

Thanks, also I reviewed the cover letter and is great for me,

I have shown to my sisters and close friends and they liked and were impressed for the way the message flows.

Thanks again.

David O.

Dear Jane,

First, I would like to thank you for the excellent CV, Cover Letter, and Linkedin Summary service. I am very much pleased and appreciate!!!! what Jeanie did.

From the CV distribution, I have got so much responses and still must make a summary for myself and send it to you. It seems will be working!!!!


With the year end, it was very overwhelming in the office, as usual 🙂 and I felt a bit behind plus my PC has died and now I am writing to you on the new one - a Christmas Gift and believe it should help me to land NEW Job in the New 2015.

I am so delighted to wishing you and your family Happy, Healthy, Prosperous, and most Fascinating New 2015 Year and lets all your personal and professional come true in the new year.

With All MY Most Warmest Regards,

Margarita L.

Greg,

The resume and cover letter looks PERFECT AND VERY PROFESSIONAL I AM IMPRESSED.

Gregory, I did pay for the linked in as well.

Thank you very much for the great cover-letter and resume

James L.

Thank you Greg.

Great job.

I just had several questions/comments that I added using Track Changes.

Thank you in advance for your feedback.

Best regards,

Jeremy H.

Jeanie,

I like both cover letter and resume. Thank you very much!

I will send it now to the recruiter.

Question- I have not gone on my linkedin page, but Peter advised that the linkedin page mirror the resume.

I suppose that will be our next effort?


Again, good job!

I will keep you posted as to outcome on the opportunity mentioned above.

Sincerely,

Guillermo G.

Hi Greg,

Thank you and this looks great.

Can we move on to the update of the linkedin profile?

Jennifer G.

Peter,

I have a friend who needs your services due to a recent layoff.

Your services improved my resume so much that my phone is still ringing.

I plan to pay the cost of having her resume done by you.

What do I need to do to get the ball rolling?

John G.

Greg,

First with sincere gratitude for what you have done!

Secondly, with apologies that I have NOT as yet followed up with you, need your assistance in developing the draft for a LinkedIn Profile for me.

This is becoming quite critical - my lack of presence in LinkedIn and that too with something appropriate.

We had paid for the services and just wanted to get to finish this up asap.

Thank you sir.

Joseph S.

Good evening Pierre,

I reviewed the cover letter for the [Executive Director] position, and it is fabulous. I love the format and the bullets are great for changing the letter for other positions.

The LinkedIn profile looks good also. I will make changes to my existing profile. I am not sure why you can't find it.

I looked at your LI profile. So maybe mine will show up under people that have viewed yours.

The resume revisions look good also ....

I truly appreciate all of your help...

Thank you so much!

Julie G.

Dan,

I have just completed my first reading of your comments summarizing the work which you did to SIGNIFICANTLY improve both the content and appearance of my KSA writeup and resume for the OTI Country Representative - Niger position.

I am REALLY PLEASED with your work. I will review both documents thoroughly today, and will likely submit my application tonight or tomorrow morning.

Kindly note that USAID has also announced a Deputy Country Representative position for this role. As you and I have mentioned in earlier communications, I am truly qualified for all aspects of the Country Representative position. However, knowing full well that the competition for all positions, especially good ones such as this OTI position, I will also applying for the Deputy position.

I will review the announcement and send it to you today. Together, we can decide if I can just tweak the resume and KSA for the Country Rep position or we will need different documents for the Deputy role. Since the deadline for submission for both roles is Nov 7 and since the additional work on preparing the docs for the Deputy position won't be 'too much', we should be able to complete both documents in time for me to meet the application deadline.

Once again, thanks very much for the professional work which you've done on my KSA writeup and resume.

Kind regards,

Mopoi N.

Hi Greg,

Looks great the first time !!!

I have read it a few time and have my changes in Red (Track Change – ON).

Please update as appropriate…Thnx

Regards & Thanks

Sunny.

Peter,

I want to reach out to you and tell you that Jeanie did a wonderful job on the resume.

I also paid for an intro letter.

Any idea on when that will be finalized?

Regards and thank you again.

Bob Mc.

Dan,

I LOVE what you have put together for me with the federal resume and private sector resume.

I will start using it immediately. I was under the impression the text Only Version was for both the cover letter and resume.

I want to know a little more about your Corporate Recruiter resume services as well.

Thanks again,

Steveson S.

Hello Dan,

All I can say is WOW! I will go over in depth once I get off today and have comments if any for you in the morning.

So, once that part is complete is that where the cover letter and update to LinkedIn come into play?

You took all that data and turned it into an awesome product!

Thank you,

Shawn W.

Hi Pierre,

I made a couple of changes (in red)- one I need you to edit the content - you will see my note.
All updates are in red

As I had mentioned, let's use the key word arrangement that you put together. I like it much better!

Wording is great.

If I added too many words, please see if they fit or we can change them so the content fits correctly.

Thanks again!

Looks great! Yeah! Finally.

Rosalie P.

Good Afternoon, Pierre,

Overall, this looks good.

This process is interesting - the resume reads so much better.

After review, there are some minor changes I would like to make but it appears that I can save and enable editing to make those changes on my own.

Please advise if there is a different process we should follow.

Also, I would like to discuss the additional services available. LinkedIn info as well as working with/identifying recruiters, etc. that may assist me in connecting with a position that I may otherwise not come across on the traditional job boards/online career listings.

Regards,

Bradley T.

Dan,

I've been meaning to email you sooner but I have been busy job searching.

I reviewed the resume, cover letter and linkedin profile information. Everything looked great.

I updated my linkedin profile and have started to distribute my resume.

I've received some positive responses to my resumes and have landed some interviews.

Hopefully, this will be the first step in landing my next career.

Thank you very much for all your help in putting this all together.

Sincerely,
Patricia A.

Hello Peter,

Would you mind sending me information about the "resume blast" option you mentioned when we talked about my resume review?

What do you need from me? what type of organizations and or recruiters will receive it?

By the way, Pierre did a great job redoing my resume.

The statements in your site are true.

The number of calls increased after your organization assisted me.

Thanks,

Jorge O.

Dan,

First of all - thank you so much for the great job done on my resume. It is a dramatic improvement from where I started and I believe it will help me in my job search immensely.

Dan -



First of all - thank you so much for the great job done on my resume. It is a dramatic improvement from where I started and I believe it will help me in my job search immensely.

If I were to order a cover letter what would be the turnaround time to get it back?

Thanks again and look forward to hearing from you,

Lijana M.







Dan,

Thank you very much for the LinkedIn profile and cover letter.

They are both fantastic and you really did a superb job.

Thank you again,

Frederic R.

Peter

I have the cover letters and resume and just waiting on the linkedin profile and I am very pleased with Jeanie's work. It's Exceptional!

Glen J.

Dan,

I reviewed my resume and it is AWESOME! I very very much appreciate the effort, time and dedication you have shown and provided. Thank you very much!

I would like to add a cover letter to the services that I had ordered. Do I need to contact Peter for the billing?

Thank you again,

Frederic R.

Dan/ Peter,

Attached are my comments/redline edits of the first draft.

Overall, all I can say is “WOW!”, great improvement articulating accomplishments over previous versions.

First, my comments are mainly to generate dialogue for my own education and not criticism.

I’m trying to gain an understanding why you chose certain phrases/titles. Our ultimate goal is to land and interview.

Secondly, I see numbers where normally I’d see them written out, is this due to space constraint? Or is that “accepted practice”? again, I’m trying to educate myself.

Otherwise, a few minor corrections and I think we are there.

Thank you for the great work and I look forward to your responses.

Ron L.

Hi Peter,

Wanted to let you know that Greg Faherty did a terrific job on my resume and LinkedIn bio.

Thank you for recommending him.

I will call you tomorrow regarding resume distribution options.

I'd like to add you to my professional network on LinkedIn.

Richard M.

Greg,

Items need to be addressed

1. HIPPA-should be HIPAA
2. Server 2003-2013-should be 2003-2012

Other than that this is one excellent looking resume!

Thank you very much.

David G.

Thanks Peter/Jeanie,

My new resume was key in helping me land my new job.

I will be having my wife update her CV with you soon.

Can you send me a formal receipt for tax purposes?

Thanks,

Andrew S.

Greg,

It looks just a little better than mine… :o)

I’m really pleased! I made a couple of changes and added some comments.

I used tracking in MS Word. Please take a look.

Best,

Mike G.

Jeanie,

I reviewed the linkedin profile revisions and the cover letters – They are AWESOME!

Thank you so much for doing an exceptional job!

Best,

Dave B.

Hey Dan,

I have received both the cover letter and resume both excellent thank you.

I will contact you if any other added information need to be added.

Once again thank you.

Desmond B.

Dan,

I took a quick glance today (will review much more fully later) and at first glance I am delighted!!! THANK YOU!

I'll get you some cogent feedback in the next day or two, but I wanted to circle back and tell you how "right-on-track" this is for me.

I am so glad I contracted your services!

Holly McG.

Hi Peter,

Tom Albano has completed my resume and my Linkedin profile and did an excellent job!.

I will give you a call on Monday to discuss the additional services with regard to recruiters you provide and the cover letter.

Best regards,


Joann M.

Hi Peter,

I wish to express my sincerest appreciation and gratitude for the work Tammy Chisolm has completed for me.

She is truly a professional!

Ginger R.

Hi Jeanie,

The resume looks great, thank you for your diligent efforts!

Best,

Dave B.

Jeanie,

I reviewed the resume and made some comments and edits which should be visible using Word’s Track Changes function.

Except for the technical information corrections the rest of the comments are just questions and suggestions for discussion (you’re the experts).

The rest of the document looks fantastic,

I am impressed.

Let me know what you think.

Best,

David B.

Hi Jeanie!

Thank you for your quick response to my inquiry.

I received the draft and after a quick scan, I thought it was very good. I will be taking a closer look at it today and get back with you over the weekend with respect to any questions I may have and we can discuss on Monday.

Have a great weekend and thank you again for your diligent efforts.

Best,

Dave B.

Hello Kathy,

Thank you again for the wonderful work you have done with the resume! Katya and I have made some minor additions and i am attaching the latest version hereby.

Katya has started a new job at Fresco Bank Ltd a month ago in the same capacity as her previous job.

Please let us know if you have any questions.


Best,

Anita S.

Hi, Greg;

I really like what you've done.

You've really captured what I couldn't seem to get right. I used track changes in Word so you can easily see the edit's I've made. I also added one comment.

Thanks a lot.

Let me know if you have any questions/concerns.

Brenda S.

Greg,

Very nice job – professional, good looking and accurate.

I would be interested in the pricing for a LinkedIn profile update.

John L.

Greg,

I think you did a great job of capturing my experience, value and expertise and I appreciate your hard work and attention to detail.

Please let me know if I can provide further clarifications.

Thanks again,

John L.

Hi Jeanie,

That's perfect!

Thank you for the nice job.

Now, I'd like to ask Peter about my LinkedIn updating.

How does it work and what about the cost?

Regards,

Flávio R.

Dan,

Looks great.

I was away this weekend and didnt have a chance to read through it carefully but will do later or tomorrow.

Thanks again!

Ilene M.

Peter,

I wanted to say 'thank you' for assigning Peirre Daunic to assist me with completing my resume.

Peirre is a true professional, and a did a terrific job.

I enjoyed working with him very much, as his communication was excellent.

I wanted to let you know how pleased I was with Pierre's willingness to work with me until everything was 100%.

Truthfully, he started fresh and very little revisions were needed. I would highly recommend Pierre!

Once again, I am very grateful for you working with me until I was satisfied.

Best Regards,

Leslie J. M.

Happy Friday Greg!

This looks excellent. I made a few comments in red.

Thank you,

Kristine G.

Pierre,

Looks great !!

Thank you,

Brent L.

Pierre,

Your support has been absolutely world class in terms of quality and speed of delivery, hugely appreciated.

Cheers,

Daan de K.

Hi Dan.

Just a quick note of thanks!

I used your resume for 2 jobs and I was hired by both companies!

Many thanks and have a great day!

Kelley C.

Dear Peter/Dan,

To say that I have enjoyed and greatly appreciated the work which Dan and I have so done together, under a very serious time crunch, is an understatement.

I am also grateful that after I had spent a considerable amount of money on various combinations of Federal and non-Federal resume writing firms, I seem to have finally found one that, I believe, will truly help me advance my career with the Federal Government. That Federal resume writing firm is yours, and my resume writer is Dan!!!!!!

As I have mentioned to Dan, resume projects going forward will not be rushed---especially now that we have successfully completed the first project.

We will begin the new phase of normal turnaround time for a Federal resume with resumes for the first 2 of the attached 4 announcements.

Have a great day.

Mopoi N.

Jane,

I received my resume from Tammy today.

She did a wonderful job.

I was crying when I got my resume because for the first time I felt hopeful about my job search.

Thank you and Tammy!

Jennifer L.

Greg,

The resume really look great. I have only made two changes:

1) added my training in change Management and Leadership
2) added skills and combined Frameworks and Architectures.

I am perfectly fine with the resume.

On the cover letter have I have a question.

Should we indicate that I am willing to relocate and travel (30%). I have planning to relocate to Georgia or North Carolina.

Thank you very much for you help.

I am only attaching my resume with mentioned updates. Let me know the next steps.

Regards,

Ravi L.

Mr. Newfield/Dan,

It is my pleasure to have worked with Dan on this venture and rest assured, I will pass along the recommendation and refer family and friends to your services.

Most recently I showed my Mom and Dad the final products and they like what they see.

Tim R.

HI Peter,

Attached please find my new updated resume - thanks to both Jeanie and yourself for a job well done !

Please advise next steps and time line for both the cover letter and LinkedIn Bio as described below.


Regards,


Vince A.

Dan,

This is great and thank you again for masterful work.

You were able to achieve exactly what I had hoped to with my profile and resume'.

If there are any feedback cards or surveys you need me to do to assess your work or services in general please pass them my way.

Respectfully,
Tim R.

Greg,

This is awesome...

One comment is the justified paragraph format is that standard? With all the bullets and items that don't take things to the margin it makes the document look like there are too many spaces in places...

I also have some comments in the reviewed document at first I wanted to strike the address but you can ignore that comment.

Again thanks and the Cover Letter I have no comments on.

Brad F.

Pierre:

First impression - Wow!!!!!.

You did a good job pulling out the HR experience. In addition, thank you for your recommendations.

The resume represents me. I can not wait to put it to the test. XXXX will be the first for the HR generalist 2 which is an entry HR opportunity. 🙂

I specifically sent you the job description to capture some of the key words. ....

Rachel G.

Dear Pierre,

All is fine with your draft [of my bio]; no modifications needed, very good!

Kind regards,

Christian W.

Pierre:

Thanks for making the changes.

I have reviewed the resume to see if we missed anything, nothing jumps out at me.

As we say, here in Texas - " I think it's done, we can stick a fork in it ".

Would you please save the document without the reference to the version #, and also save it in a PDF format?

Meanwhile, I will get to work on the changes you've suggested to my Linked In profile.

Nydia G.

Hello Greg -

Resume looks great!

3 edits attched are in bold red.

No edits to CL.

Thanks.


Andre' B.

Hello Peter,

I would like you to know how happy I am with your services.

Pierre Daunic did a great job with my resume and LinkedIn page.

Thank you!

Elana S.

Peter,

I received my completed resume re-write from Jean Oscarson last week and was very pleased with the final version.

Please have the LinkedIn profile done for uploading onto their site and was wondering if this has been completed or do I need to get in touch with Ms. Oscarson for that information?

Thank you for your help.

Chris C.

Greg,

Can you check the font size of the bullet points-other than that we’re done and ready to post it up on LinkedIn and call it a complete job.

Thanks again, Really appreciate the great work and attention to detail!

John M.

Hello Peter,

You did a great job on my resume last year. I am referring your services to a very close friend of mine Barbara C. I have her on the email distribution, so would you please reach out to Barb and take care of her resume.

Thanks.

Altaf H.

Dear Peter,

I wanted to let you know that I have accepted a new role as Chief Operating Officer for XYZ, Inc..

I will be traveling to San Diego often from my home in Northern California when not visiting plants and offices in Singapore, Germany, China, Mexico , Japan, USA and Brazil among other places.

Kevin B.

Thanks Greg!

Looks GREAT (but would like to review one last time before we call it complete)

I also signed up for the LinkedIn template. Is that something you’ll send me?

John M.

Hi Greg,

Attached is my revised Resume in track changes.

I really am very pleased with the version you provided but have made a few additional tweaks.

Thank you,

Pat D.

Hi Gregory,

You did a great job!

I only have very few comments/changes.


Carlos H.

Dear Greg,

I want to thank you for your work on my behalf.

I received an offer today for employment as Director , Manufacturing Operations from Dunkin Donuts in Florida .

I couldn't have done it without your help

Sincerely

Tony C.

Greg,

Impressive!

Thank you for putting so much into my resume and excelling at what you do! The results surpassed my expectations.

I was able to spend some time reviewing the resume & CL. Feedback is attached.

I’ll be on travel all next week and unable to work on this further (in case we don’t finalize things this week and you don’t hear from me).

Thanks again,

John M.

Hello Pierre,

I went through the draft resume.

I am very pleased with the resume. I just added few things to it under computer skills.

Thanks!

Rosalyne W.

Dan,

A remarkable job!

I know this wasn't an easy project for you.

Thank you for your hard work.

No changes necessary.

I hope you are staying well and best of luck to you in the future!

Valerie B.

Tammy,

It’s perfect !

I honestly was very shocked at first when I had been told the cost of all of this because I did not think there was much you could do to a resume.

After having seen the work you’ve done, this was worth every penny and it’s absolutely incredible.

Thank you so much Tammy!

Faryal A.

Hi Peter,

I loved the resume that Jeanie helped put together for me!

I am very proud of it now.

Jeanie was such a pleasure to work with.

I’d now like to hire your firm, and specifically Jeanie, to help me develop a cover letter and update my Linked-In profile.

Can you direct me as to how to make this happen as soon as possible.

Thank-you.

Paul D.

Greg,

My first response is WOW! Very impressive.

I noticed you did not include the date of my graduation from Oklahoma Christian or Capella. Intentional?

Thank you for a great job.

Warren P.

Jeanie, Peter,

Please note my new email address 🙂

Many thanks for all of your efforts, I really appreciated it.

As a result, I have now been offered a job with XYZ Company.

I have also made recommendations to my friends and colleagues to use your services; first class!

All the best

Anthony L.

Greg,

Thanks for the resume.

All and all it looks pretty good. I am impressed you could make sense of that mess of a worksheet that I gave you 🙂

Thanks,

Victor L.,

Greg,

I'm very happy. Great job.

No further edits.

Thanks,

David M.

Greg,

I made some changes in the resume. I use Word on the Mac.

There was 1 compatibility issue and of course it does not tell me. What else is new:-)).

I appreciate the work and creativity.

Arnold F.

Thanks, Greg.

It looks fantastic.

And everything was correct :-)).

James H.

Pierre,

I appreciate your help. Attached is the version of my resume that I sent to the open position this morning. I made some changes but overall it retains the revamped look and feel you gave it.

Thank you for your hard work.

Thanks again,

Colleen F.

Hi Peter, (About Pierre)

Hope this email finds you well.

Just wanted to let you know that I just accepted an offer with an incredible company for a VP position!

Thank you for having me work with Pierre, as he helped me develop a strong resume that really spoke to my strengths and accomplishments.

Thanks again and I'm sure I'll be contacting you to help me update my Linkedin profile!

Best regards,

Joanne S.

Greg,

Thanks for the first proof.

It’s looking good. I only have a few items for review or correction. My feedback is in red in both attached documents.

Let me know If you need any additional information.

Thanks,

Mark P.

Hi Greg,

This looks great! Very impressive.

I am hopeful that it helps me land a job soon.

I have noticed that a lot of the jobs I am considering mention P&L management skills. Is it necessary to add it to my resume? Is it implied from my background?

Thanks,

Charles W.

Hi Greg,

It looks great. I did have to make one minor change, which is noted in track changes, otherwise I think it looks really good.

I’ll want to proof read it again, and have another 3rd party (wife) proof read it as well. I didn’t make any changes in the cover letter. I think it’s good as is, but again I’ll want my wife to proof read it as well.

Take a look at the change I made in the resume and let me know if you have any questions.

Thank you,

Kelly H.

Jeanie,

I have finished reviewing and editing the resume - well done.

I do think I purchased the cover letter, bio and linked in profile as well.....when should I expect those items.

Thank you.

Howard N.

Greg,

The resume looks great.

I made a few corrections, nothing big. Here are the attached files.

Thanks.

Larry B.

Hi Greg,

Attached you will find a copy of the reviewed resume.

On your first pass you did an excellent job and for that I thank you.

There are a few minor changes for you to incorporate.

Regards,

Matthew M.

Jean,

GREAT job on this !! I am very, very impressed with the quality of the work.

This is fantastic. I think that you did a great job of turning the CV into a shorter work.

I have made a few crrections of facts; and am sending back to you for one last look.

Is there anything else that you would recommend adding? deleting?

If you can let me know about this, then I will appreciate it.

Also, after you get this back to me with any final changes, I will be ready to go to the next step.

Probably for this, I will be contacting Jane again--though it may take me a few days this week to get back to you all; I am quite busy M and Tu.

Thanks again,

Jo G


Thanks Mr. Newfield,

Still with the military no new job yet.

Also thank you for introducing me to Dan he did a great job on my resume and CV Letter.

Very happy with the outcome.

Need to discuss LinkedIn options at some point.

Michael T.

Dan,

You have done some wonderful work!

Thank you!!

Marty P.

Pierre,

Thank you!

I continue to tweak and revise along the way. Your keen eye for details is greatly appreciated!

I will contact Peter this week regarding updating my linked in information.

Thanks again,

Joanne S.

Dan:

What a pleasant surprise to wake up to a resume of this quality!

I shared this draft with my wife and her comment, "Finally, a well written resume that sets you apart from the group," summarizes it best.

I have attached my comments and please recognize I "speak" as a novice when making the comments.

Thank you so much!!!!

Roman Z.

Peter,

It has been great working with your company so far. Dan Dorotik has gotten my resume done, but I have decided to get a linkedin makeover done.

How do I need to go about getting that started and done?

Look forward to hearing from you.

Have great day.

Brian F.

Pierre,

Just read it and I love it! Thank you so much!

Question for future purposes when I do the advance program do I come back to you for that tweak or how is that handled just so I know proper protocol.

Thanks again Pierre! I pray that I can fill up my practice ASAP with more quality, steady, clients with this beautiful resume!

Sincerely,
Wanda S. 🙂

Dan,

This looks great I like the content.

Here is the last of the resume I think.

I guess the box is the best solution. I am not sure the format changes overall in order to accomplish the additional field nuance are for the best, but I understand.

Thank you,

This looks great, honestly.

Susan L.

Hi Jane,

Hope you're enjoying what's left of summer.

I'm wholly satisfied with the work that I have received from Dan on my resume and I would like to explore the possibility of having more work done.

I believe we spoke before about updating my LinkedIn profile and a few other options.

Can you please let me know what services are available to me?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best,

Yasmine F.

Hi Pierre,

First of all, thank you for the resume - it looks great!

I have made some changes based on your comments / questions and I think that it is ready to go out.

Attached is a copy for your reference (please let me know if you have any further questions / comments).

Unfortunately I haven't seen a job posting that suits me yet but as soon as I do I will send it to you so that you can assist me with a cover letter.

In the meantime I'm going to circulate my resume to my friends and family (and my husband's colleagues).

Thanks again so much for your help!

Danielle H.

Pierre

I am very very happy with the work that you have done and I want to thank very much for your assistance.

I promise to introduce others to your services.

Sincerely,

Sahr L.

Greg

Really nice work.

Thank you.

Joseph A.

Pierre,

We need to change the cell number to xxx-xxx-xxxx. I have to say you have done a really good job with this and i am very pleased.

Good job !!!

Greg K.

Hi Greg,

I first must thank you for the work that you have done!

I am most impressed by the cover letter and your ability to string together my experiences and put them into my resume in a most meaningful, powerful, and attention grabbing way without hyperbole!

I have very minor changes on the cover letter and the resume itself as attached using Track Changes funcitionality in MS Word.

Fred R.

Pierre,

The draft looks really good.

I have responded to your questions in the attached document.

If you have any questions, let me know,

Andriette T.

Hi Jeanie,

This is great -- thank you.

It is now ready to be prepared for the LinkedIn 'document'; and I have also arranged with Peter for a cover letter to be created.

Please let me know if there is any further any information you need from me to help you.

Cheers,

Amy F.

Jeanie,

I think you have done such a great job, and really done justice to the roles I have worked in -- thank you.

What a difference you have made!

Amy F.

Jeanie,

It looks outstanding!

I cannot thank you enough for your time as well as your patience throughout all of this.

If you need a recommendation, endorsement and/or testimonial, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Ian S.

Peter,

Jeanie recently did my resume and I want to pass on a referral.

His name is XXX XXXXX (email attached) and he is currently a CIO at a recently sold company.

Can you reach out to him and give him the information he needs to get started.

BTW, I did get a COO job within 60 days and the resume certainly helped so thank you.

Dan A.

Hi Jean,

You did a great job! It looks fantastic.

I made some tweaks in red.

Some of the values changed based on a reprojection we just completed for the year end and will be more accurate.

I have paid to have the resume, cover letter, Linkedin Bio, and Executive Bio.

I will review the cover letter next. Please advise when the other two will be complete.

Lastly, Paul had mentioned a mailing service to recruitment companies.

How can I proceed with that?

Thanks.

Brad G.

Gregory,

I think it looks really good.

I really like your career notes section.

Great idea.

I think I am satisfied with everything.

Glenn G.

Hi Dan,

I looked the resume over and it looks great. I also noticed that you removed my 1st job from the roster,

I was debating that myself so I'm glad that you did that.

The resume has more flow now and shows better growth from job to job.

I have no further changes and can run with this version.

Thanks so much for your effort and good work!

Pasquale P.

Pierre,

Wow !!

This looks really good... I responded to your comments in the resume...

I'm excited about how my LinkedIn profile will look after looking at this.

Thanks!

Demi G.

Hi Peter,

I received my resume back from Greg and it looks much better than what I could have definitely done.

You asked me to call you once I get the resume and was wondering what would be a good time for you to have a chat.

Thanks and Best Regards

Dwaraka I.

Dan,

It looks great and I wanted to express my appreciation for doing an exceptional job.

Tony T.

Dan,

Thank you for the revamped CV and also for your valuable suggestions which I will follow.

Will let you know of the results.

Regards,

ILidio G.

Hi Pierre,

I wanted to let you know that I have found a new opportunity, I greatly appreciated your assistance in writing my resume.

I have left CBRE and joined a consulting company, great match with Big Four culture plus Information Technology recruiting.

I am now earning the salary I had with Big Four, four years ago, which represents a 20% increase to my salary at CBRE.

Kind regards,

Rita K.

Hi Greg,
:
I am VERY pleased with the work that you performed. So pleased that I would like to have you write me a winning default cover letter in addition to my linked in profile. Is this something that I can pay an additional to have you prepare?

I have marked some changes to dates and a couple of clarifications which I have done in red and with strike through an attached.

Again, thank you.

Derek S.

Hi Pierre,

This resume looks awsome!!!

The only correction that I would make is the following: "As a case in point"..(.this major oil company is looking to purchase one million barrels of oil per month for a 1-2 years with possible rolls and extensions. ...

I am in agreement with an additional version for flexibility etc.

I like how you have the begining of that set up..wouldn't change anything.

Once again, I more than appreciate all of your support and work into this.

Just let me know the next steps..thanks so much and have a great weekend.

Sincerely,

Christine M-E.

Jeanie,

Thanks – who is this person? I'd like to hire him.

Your writing and organization of my resume did an amazing job of capturing my work history and putting it into a context that makes a great impression.

I think it's a really nice format and like the progression.

There are a few minor changes that I'm thinking about and will forward along later this evening or early tomorrow.

Again, thanks for a great job.

Doug D.

Hi Greg,

Here are my comments.

I used Track Changes.

Great work!

Anthony G.

Hi Jeanie,

Everything that you composed was very well done.

I am very happy with the look and the content of each component.

What you did really is a work of art!

Thank you very much for all you have done, and,

I'll let you know how the job search goes!

Sincerely,

Rocky S.

Hi Jean,

You did a fabulous job on this resume.

Thank you very much!

I made a few suggestions, though I'm not necessarily set on making them permanent changes. I will defer to you and your expertise on these things.

I appreciate all of the time that you have taken on this, and all of the thought that went into it.

I didn't feel that I had a lot to include on a resume, but, you have made much of what I thought was mundane work experience, sound more substantive, and of value...thank you for that as well!

I look forward to the final draft and/or any final suggestions you might have.

Thank you!

Rocky S.

Hi, Pierre,

I wanted to let you know that I have found a position with a company in San Jose Calif.

The job is exactly what I was looking for.

I know that the resume you created for me was the key to obtaining this job.

Thank you very much!

Joanne W.

Pierre,

Wow! I look at this and have to remind myself I did all this!

You did an incredible job.

Pierre, I wish you the best of luck.

Maybe we will cross paths again one day.

Best of Luck!

Eric E.

Hello Greg,

Thanks for sending the resume for review.

Attached version has my changes for your review and revision. Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks again for sending a great looking resume. The cover letter looks great as well.

Altaf H.

Peter,

When I spoke with you on the phone, there was one group of executives in Bay Area that you wanted me to join.

What was that group? It slipped out of my mind.

BTW, Greg Faherty did a great job on my resume.

Sincerely,

Sam S.

Peter,

I forgot to let you know that the resume was completed by Greg.

It looks great.

Thank you very much.

Jim C.

Hi Jeanie,

I apologize for the delay, but I wanted to get some additional feedback on my resume from a few family members, as well as thoroughly review it myself.

I would first like to say that your work is excellent! Well written, great format, and it paints a much better picture than my old resume.

In fact, the more I look at it, the more impressed I am with what you have done.

So, thank you!

David H.

Jeanie,

Thank you so much! I can't view the resume in the right format right now.

So, I am not sure what changes were made. I will be able to see it better on my computer on Monday.

As for the LinkedIn, it looks great!

Thank you!

Maureen O.

Jeanie!

You are the best! If you ever need a referral or anything from me, please let me know!

I appreciate you very much! I hope to keep updating my résumé in my future role with you to keep it up to date & I hope we stay in contact.

Thank you again & bless your heart for your help!

Have a wonderful weekend!

Mark H.

Pierre,

I've made a few comments. But, I love it.

I was afraid that I would not recognize myself. but you've done a great job!

Robin K

Hello Gregory,

This is an awesome job! My resume is more elegant and readable in a very short time.

Thanks for all your efforts.

Kindly feel free to contact me if you need any further information.

Thanks!

Regards,
Lokesh R.

Peter,

My new resume is already reaping dividends. I applied for an opening with the California Automobile Association of America (AAA) at their corporate office in Walnut Creek, California for a newly created position, Enterprise Data Governance Manager.

I submitted my application on April 30th, had a telephone interview with XXXXX XXXXX, HR Recruiter today. I will have a 2nd interview with XXXX XXX, Executive Director Insurance Product Management & Analytics on Wednesday, May 15th. I will keep you posted.

Jerome C.

Dan,

Thank you so much for doing this for me.

I've already begin shooting this out to all my contacts and will continue to apply to as many jobs as I can find.

I'll definitely look into the resume distribution services as well.

Thanks for all your help, this looks great!

Tom P.


Hi Dr. Daunic (Pierre),

Your work is very impressive! You have done an excellent job at displaying my credentials.

I am extremely excited at what lies ahead.

Thank you so much for your hard work and also getting back to me well ahead of schedule 🙂

I've attached another copy with comments.

Aside from that everything else looks amazing!

Again, thank you thank you, thank you!

Best Regards,

Vendell S.

Dear Peter,

I am so impressed with the resume Tammy wrote for me. I only hope I can live up to the document - it makes me sound so good!

I am interested in having Tammy create a cover letter, Linked-In profile and a bio.

Will you please let me know how to proceed?

Thank you

Terri H.

Hi Pierre,

Thank you! Looks great to me, given I am looking to make a move to the Southeast US.

I want my resume to stand out as an applicant who is not even in the local area, and I think this document certainly places
the focus on what I do well.

In fact, when proceeding with this career service, I wasn't sure if I should make my focus employee relations or risk management.

Let me know if you would suggest any additions or corrections given the safety/risk management functions. At this point I still want my focus to be employee relations.

Thanks,

Matt S.

Hello Greg,

I am very happy with the resume, with some minor changes attached using track changes.

At what point would you recommend including references? or would that usually be done only on a conditional offer, as it is with some states?

Thanks so much for your help and have a great weekend,

Best Regards,

Mary D.

Hi Pierre,

I read through this latest version and you’ve done a great job of pulling in my changes.

I will take another look at it and send you any suggested modifications and suggestions.

Thanks so much!

Joanne W.

Hello Pierre,

I must say that your drafts seem to inspire and invigorate me.

Thank you for the pleasant side effect 🙂

Please find attached draft 2 with some additional notes and removing some items to help save space.

Thank you for your continuous effort,

Indira F.

Pierre,

I have reviewed the resume and appreciate all of your work.

I appreciate all of your efforts on my behalf.

Thank you,

Nathan W.

Hi Jeanie,

Wow, the resume looks great! It is a night and day difference from the resume I was thinking about distributing. Thank you!

Now that the resume draft is finished, will you begin working on my Linkedin profile?

I am looking forward to updating the Linkedin profile and preparing my resume for distribution.

I am very pleased with your work and I look forward to your feedback. Thank you!

Regards,

Daniel E.

Dan,

I sent out my previous resume a total of 53 times, resulting in one phone interview, no in person interviews, and about 10 flat our declines, over three months.

With my resume re-written and customized by Dan, I sent it out 49 times, had only 3 declines, 4 phone interviews, 1 live presentation, and a job offer in less than a month!

Proof is in the results.

Dan's version of the resume clearly worked better.

Thanks Dan, I really appreciate it

Dan,

Everything looks great thank you.

I will connect with you and write you a recommendation on LinkedIn, just can't do that yet as I am connected to too many people I currently work with.

Thank you again for all your help.

Sincerely,

Matt T.

Pierre,

Thank you!

It all looks amazing!

Malissa S.

Thanks Jean,

I made a few edits (in red and in some cases with strike throughs or additions/replacements) in the attached.

I think once they are changed, it will still fit on the two pages. Let me know if you are OK with these.

Thanks for your help. Good progress!

I was impressed.You packed a LOT of info into two pages.

Thank you,

Neil C,

HI Jeanie,

Thanks for getting this to me.

I am very happy with the way this has come together.

I was able to make a few changes for my interview last week.

I am attaching some edits for you to take a look at for final review.

Regards,

Kathy F.

Wendy,

I thought it would be a good idea to share some of what has been happening with me the last couple of days.

I have actually gotten 3 hits off my LinkedIn profile in the last 18 hours alone.

All seem to be senior or executive positions. 1 with a company I know very well in the PLM space and the other two seem to be leadership positions at a high level.

So things are moving along nicely.

Thanks for the boost.

Steve D.

Pierre,

This version looks very good. I have attached comments, and one area that does not read quite right. With these corrected, we should be complete.

I looked at the LI draft. I need to review it in more detail, and I have a few questions about the mechanics of LI that you mentioned in your preface.

I am pleased with our progress on this project.

Regards,

John L.

Jeannie,

This is excellent.

Need a couple of changes which I’ll get to on Friday, but big thank you.

Regards,

Chris V.

Good Morning, Tom

I reviewed my resume, cover letter and LinkedIn bio and all looks fantastic!!!

Thank you for all your hard work.

I am extremely happy I hired Career-Resumes and very satisfied that Peter assigned you as my writer. Your writing skills are superior!

Thanks so much, again.

Kind regards,

Veronica O.

Greg,

Thank you for the work!

I have only few comments.

Please see the attached.

Adrian B.

Hi, Jeanie,

Great job on the resume and cover letters.

I laugh to think that when you synthesize down what I have done over the years, it actually makes for a good 'career' story.

Thanks for doing that for me.

Donna DeR.

Hi Peter,

I am "over the moon happy" with Jean and my new resume.

It has even worked on it's first mission. I have moved straight to the decision maker with a company.

But, I do not want to stop or more to the point, I don't want to have only one employer looking at me.

As I think about sending a blast out to recruiters and or employers in my field, how can we keep my resume off the desk of my current employer????

Also, you mentioned the Bluesteps.com?? As a sales guy, are they worth a look? Attached is Jean's work. I am so proud.

Let me know your thoughts,

Thanks,

Joe B.



Jean,

Thank you very much! These look great.

I have some minor changes but I am comfortable handling on this end.

What is the procedure now for the linkedIn update?

Thanks again.

Best,

Michael O'D

Jean

I made a couple of minor changes. Please review them, otherwise this is great!

Thank you

Jacqueline B.

Pierre,

Looks great! Thanks so much.

People will be aware of all the skills I have to offer.

Laura C.

Afternoon Dan

I must say, this is amazing!!!

How you got all of that stuff into 2 pages is unbelievable. I read over and over again that you really should not go beyond 2 pages, but had no idea how to get it all in there.

I have atatched my copy using the "comments" feature. I was thinking that for the Section Admin Officer we could use Branch Manager because that is in effect what I did everyday (managed the day to day activities). For Unit Head, I put it as Office Manager. A Unit is like an office within the section (or branch). It is not easy to take our lingo and put it into the "private sector", but you have a gift for it.

Again, the comements that I put in are just that, comments. Beside some more accurate information than I originally supplied, They are my thoughts. if you don't think so, then so be it.

Thanks again Dan. I say again, excellent job.

Neil B.


Hi Jean:

The first draft was really amazing.

You did an amazing job distilling everything I sent to you and making it make sense and making me sound great.

A world of thanks.

Matthew B.

Hi Wendy,

It looks awesome. Makes me sound like I should be running a company somewhere.

I only hope I can live up to how I look on paper. LOL

Just a couple of minor changes/comments then I would say we are done.

You have been a great resource and done a great job. Thank you so much.

This will certainly reinvigorate my job search and be a valuable tool when marketing myself as a consultant.

Leslie L.

Greg, this is excellent, thank you.

When I first read it there was no one home and it was quiet and I was talking to my self and I kept saying “Wow”.

I would like to pursue a Cover Letter as well now that I had held off on.

When I set this up with Jane I told her the resume first than a cover letter.

As directed. I added some changes that I think are minor or clarify a little more than I put in the worksheets. If you think it’s ok good if not I will go with your recommendation.

I do not see any other changes after this. I did forget a task I had not put on the worksheet as the Wet Process Engineering Manager that was key. You’ll see that added. I led a technical team to implement Laser Direct Imaging for our exposure processing and it eliminated the use of glass and film saving us millions of dollars per year. I can’t recall the exact amount but it was millions per year in glass, film and an entire photo lab that made the glass and film.

I’ll reply to Jane’s email to add the cover letter service for payment.

Regards,

Tom L.

Hi Jane,

Trust me when I'm telling you I'm already sponsoring your services.

On a very pragmatical point of view, the return on investment to me has been really impressive, 18 days!

Here in Italy, most of the people are asking me 'how did you get it?'...and my answer it is quite linear:

' Willingness + Methodology + Investment'

Investment means You.

This is to say, I'm already sponsoring your services, and this simply because the CV really worked, forcing you to deeply analyze who you are and where you want to move.

Thank you very much.

Your mission is a gift for the people.

Luca DeA.

Dear Tom and Jane,

Great news: I've found a new job in Switzerland!

I'll be the deputy CFO of multinational company, really amazing!

Your support has been strategically addressed and my new CV worked very well!

I want to say thanks to you for your brilliant service!

You guys rock!

Luca De A.

Hi Jean!

Yes, love it!

Made a very minor addition regarding company rev for a couple employers and ask a question about showcasing my promotion at current employer.

Other than that, this really does capture my skillsets and well worth the wait.

I have a lead on a job and look forward to sending this out after we discuss.

Joe B.

Greg.

Thank you Greg. You're a master in writing!

***Thank you!***

Harikrishnan T.

Jeanie,

Thank you......I appreciate all your work and spectacular adjectives

Mike P.

Hi Jeannie,

Good news to report. Last night I ran a virus scan on my computer and reinstalled "java". It seemed to resolve the issue of being able to see the resume.

It looks absolutely fantastic.

Thanks so much for all of your hard work on this. I made only a few edits for your final review and implementation.

Then this is good to go.

Thanks so much!

Mary N.

Greg:

Thanks for the wonderful document you prepared. I proposed few changes incorporating few additions. Attached find v1.

Have a good weekend,

Thanks again,

Thirumal H.

On Wed, Feb 13, 2013 at 7:23 PM, Thirumal H M wrote:

Thanks for timely response. Let me go over it in detail and respond. Once again thanks for all the tips.
regards,
Thirumal

Hi Greg,

This is very well done, thank you. I have only two comment I put in line.

You are the expert and will know if my questions are valid or not. When you have a minute review my 2 questions and get back to me.

Mostly I think this is complete as is. I will get back to you on the cover letter.

Again thank you for your work on this.

Vincent McG.

Hi Greg,

Everything looks great - thank you!

My comments are attached.

Voja S.

Hi Dan,

The resume is fine. I don't require any other changes.

What about the cover letter and the Linked-in profile ?

Greg M.

Hi Wendy.

Thanks for all of your hard work. I really appreciate it.

I look back on my old resume and now realize why I received no responses.

All I have to do now is take it for a test drive.

Thanks again.

Dave P.

Dear Jean,

The resume looks great. I could have never pulled it off.

I have attached my comments. They are all aimed at avoiding confidentiality issues or accuracy questions.

I know I signed up for a cover letter but don't remember if I signed up for linked.

I think I may have said I would wait and decide after the resume was done. In any event,

I would like to have my linkedin page done. Please let me know the cost.

Thank you.

Best,

Ken J.

Jeanie,

Great first draft!

Just made some minor adjustments in the attached version.

Do you think their would be value into also doing an executive summary?

Linda B.

Greg,

The cover letter is very professionally written and targeted for my job interest - I love it.

I like the thank you letter as well, it is a nicely written fresh approach to the types I've used in the past.

You already know I love the resume.

I feel sensitive to the bio, and I need to do more review on that today - it's the whole LinkedIn glasshouse thing.

Thank you for your response to my questions on matrix v. matrixed, and for helping to answer all of my questions.

Again many thanks for all of your hard work, the results are excellent.

Yours truly,

Lynn M.

Hi Wendy.

WOW!!! Nice job. Looks a lot better than I had expected!

I was at a job fair on Tuesday and was eyeing other resumes trying to get an idea of what mine would look like. I saw nothing that even came close to what you have done!

Awesome job!!

Here is my draft with corrections. Any questions just let me know.

Thanks

Dave P.

Greg,

Thank you for all of your hard work on my resume. Please let me know when you would like to begin the linkedin bio.

I would also like to inquire about the cover letter and thank you letter, please ask Peter about the rates we discussed previously.

Lynn.M.

Greg,

I LOVE IT!

Lynn M.

Dear Greg,

Thank you very much for the rewriting of my resume and the cover letters.

It is much more impacting and clear!

Kind regards,

Arnaud E.

Hello Dan,

I just had a chance to look at the resume and I have to say, you did a wonderful job.

I cannot thank you enough. I could not have done this on my own.

Now I will not feel uncertain of not knowing if I am good enough to obtain an Executive type position because by way of resume.

I know I will at least get my foot in the door to get the interview.

I will be contacting Peter again to have a cover letter and my linked-in account updated soon and I will request you to do it.

Thanks again and hopefully, we will be working together again soon.

Sincerely,

Candare G.

Tammy,

Came out fantastic. I’m very happy.

Hope people aren’t spooked by three pages. Thought too much would be missing by reducing to two. We’ll see.

But thanks so much, you were great.

Having done this, how easy and how much would it be to do a standard cover letter?

Scott P.

Hi Peter,

I used your services back in 2010 for a resume.

I continue to get great compliments on the content and the format.

I will keep you in mind if I need to update it in the future.

Regards,

Jerry B.

Peter,

I am pleased with my resume that Tom Albano wrote.

I would like to move forward with a cover letter.

What are next steps?

Iggy K.

Hi Greg,

Attached is a markup, as requested.

The resume is fabulous –thanks for your work on this.

I apologize for taking a while to get to this , I had a death in the family and had to go to Australia – I just got back.

Regards,

Ray F.

Jeanie,

I appreciate your fast reply.

I will spent time on the draft the next two days.

First glance was impressive, thanks.

Maarten R.

Greg,

Attached is my resume with minor changes. I've highlighted the changed in a bold format with yellow highlighting.

It looks great and look forward to seeing the final result.

Also I did order the Linked In profile update. Is there something you need from me to provide the details needed for the profile?

Again, look forward to seeing the final product.

Scott W.

Hello Peter,

I really appreciate you having Darlene work on my résumé.

The finished product is very impressive.

I am on my way to Atlanta for business and will be headed to Aruba from Atlanta.

Would it be possible to connect at some point the week of the 24th?

Thanks again,

Jared G.

Greg -

Thank you for sending me my re-written resume. I have attached the resume with a few corrections. Otherwise it looks great.

I do not have any changes for the cover letter.

My only general comment to add is that I am looking in my next job to have more of a "thinkers" position instead of a "doers" position and I wonder if a few words up front about my innovative and created solutions to complex problems should be more highlighted (along with the tactical results you have clearly outlined)?

Thank you again Greg!

Lynne R.

Dan,

The resume really looks good.

I am very pleased. You have done a great job on this!

So moving on................ Now that the resume is complete, the next question that I have. "What is the timing on the the LinkedIn profile?"

Jeff D.

Peter,

I hope you are doing well. Greg has now finished the resume along with the Bio and linkedin profile.

He has done a great job. Everything is reflected in a much better way than it used to be before. I don’t know if you have had a look at his work or if you need to do in order to close this work.

I would also like to ask you for a formal invoice since I will need to declare the expense.

Sam B.

Hi Wendy - was delayed by "bad back" episode

Attached are my few edits - very much like the format and verbal impact.

You are very good at what you do.

Dan M.

Hi Jean,

After reviewing the resume, I made only minor changes.

You did a great job.

Thus, it will not be necessary for you to make any other adjustments. Consider it complete.

Thank you very much,

Biljana G.


Greg,

Thank you for the resume. It is exactly what I was expecting. You have done a great job.

Please find attached the resume with a couple of modifications.

Other than that, all is good.

Thank you again,

Sam B.

Greg,

Got it, thank you, again.

It looks great, no changes needed.

Once finalized, lets get it out on the email blast as I requested.

Charlie M.

Hi Greg,

I am impressed with your work, you are certainly good at what you do!

As instructed, pl find attached resume and cover letter with my feedback using the “track changes” feature.

Let me know if you have any questions

Regards,

Nandu G.

Hi Greg,

Thanks again for taking the time to put this together. I have to say you did a fantastic job.

Attached are my revisions. Let me know if we can make those.

If you have any suggestions, please don't hesitate.

I don't have suggestions for the cover letter.

Chris V.

Peter,

I wanted to follow up with you and let you know that I am extremely pleased with my resume written by Greg.

He did a very good job and delivered it to me a day earlier than expected, great job!

Also, I wanted to ask your opinion as related to automotive headhunters regarding my position.

I would appreciate any feedback or recommendations you might be able to provide for me.

Again, thank for the help.

William J.

Hi Wendy,

To my eyes it looks GREAT!, I never thought to myself in this way,

I do believe that it can work, give me couple of days to read it and digest and I'll write you back.

Regards,

Salvo P.

Greg,

I have made the requested edits, please see attached. I have asked some questions of you and your personal opinion. Please do not hesitate to reach out to me

As far as references are concerned, do you have a template or can you write them for me. Let me know if there is additional cost.

You have done a great job and I really appreciate your help!

William J.

Jeanie,

The resume looks awesome! Thank you.

Do I need to talk to Peter for you to do the cover letter? Or can I arrange it through you?

Mike L.

Hi Jeanie,

The resume looks terrific! Please write the cover letter too.

Many thanks,

Cindy J.

Greg,

You did an awesome job on the resume and cover letter!

Thank you very much.

Please note the changes that I have made (indicated in green) and call to discuss.

Thanks.

Scott D.

Peter,

First of all, thank you very much for referring me to Wendy for writing a resume for me.

She has done a phenomenal job for me. I could not have come up with what she has put together for me.

I just received the final version from her and wanted you to take a quick look at it and see if there was anything that jumped out as unusual.

I am sure, since Wendy has put this together it covers the "qualitative results" and "core competencies" issue you had mentioned after your first review.

I appreciate any and all feedback you have for me on the resume.

Thanks,

Ketan P.

Dear Jeanie,

Hope you are well, just wanted to touch base.

Firstly I have had lots of fantastic feedback about the resume and you maybe be getting a few of my colleagues also investing.

Also I had posted my resume on one site in the Mid East and had some agency wanting to sell me an offer to have my cv more
visible they also do a cv service but said the CV is done so well they would not suggest that service to me.

So thanks for the great work.

Kind Regards,

Avi A.

Tom,

Thanks for your further refinements.

I read it clean again and made the final edits to it - and am copying you for your files.

Thanks again.

Peter - thank you for arranging this time with Tom.

Thanks

Dave D.

Dear Jeanie,

I have now made some minor changes and answered the questions you had asked me using the track changes on word as advised.

I must say that I printed my previous CV and compared to the one you have done and what a difference. I am extremely happy with what you have done.

Having read some of the testimonials on the website, some of your clients have mentioned they dont know how such a fantastic job is done and I am of the same opinion.

I will also be investing in a cover letter once I receive the final CV version and would be happy if you could also prepare that once I make payment.

Finally could you advise how and when you will revamp my Linked in profile.

Thank you so much for a fantastic CV, I am so looking forward to sending this out.

Kind Regards,

Avi A.

Ms. Jeanie,

The CV you created just blew me away--

Never have I been presented in that light with such clarity and force.

Vernon V.

Jeanie,

I answered the question you had on my draft, it is highlighted in yellow.

I am very impressed with the resume and all content is correct.

I also commented on the first page of instructions regarding showing me how to make some adjustments, see attachment for details.

Please move forward with cover letter and change the resume as you see fit regarding the question asked at the bottom of page 1.

Thank you,

Tim N.

Hi Jeanie,

I got the resume. You did a wonderful job. I made the 1 change myself as XXX did not have a website.

Otherwise, what a terrific job you have done. The letter looks great.

Thanks for the superb and professional work.

My best always,

Glenn J.

Dear Jeanie,

I have received the email and resume attachment.I don't have my lap top with me today and briefly reviewed the attachment on my iPhone.

My initial reaction is WOW!!! And I now clearly understand why a professional should do the resume and you certainly are a professional.

I will re-review once I get my laptop and answer the queries you have asked for.

In the meantime please accept my sincere thanks.

Avi A.

Peter,

Thank you again for helping me out with my resume.

I think Darlene did a great job!

I'll let you know how the job search goes in xxxxxx.

I really appreciate your kind offer and your help!

Christina B.

Dan,

The resume looks great.

Nice work.

Rob C,

Hi Wendy,

Thank you very much. I've reviewed it and I believe it's final.

Thank you for your hard work on this project, I think it turned out superbly - great job!

Jesse T.

Wendy,

Thank you I read through the cover letter and the bio, I am pleased with both of them.

I may have one question or two related to inputting the bio information into Linked-In. I am assuming I could contact someone for any minor questions or guidance on entering information into Linked-In?

Other than that I am satisfied and consider my order delivered and complete.

Thank you again for all the time and effort that you put into making my resume’ presentable, current and up to date with current resume’ trends and styles.

It was great working with you, especially someone from a local town near mine.

Sincerely,

Christopher F.

Hi Wendy,

It looks excellent. I think we can consider it final.

Thank you very much for the great work on this!

Jesse T.

Hi Mr. Newfield:

I'm sure you received an update from Darlene, but just wanted to let you know that my resume and cover letter are completed and they look very,, very good!

You had mentioned for me to touch base with you, once they were completed, in order to discuss any advice you may have for where to start with sending out my resume, possible head hunters, online services, etc., since I haven't looked for a job in 13 years. Is that still possible?

I'm off from work this Friday. Is it possible to call you at some point to speak for about 10 or 15 minutes? Please let me know. Appreciate it.

Thank you,
Alicia N.

Thanks Jeanie,

I think we have it – I do have one request – I would like one version with the word “field” inserted as shown in the highlight and one version without. If you can send for proofreading one more time we should be good to go.

Thanks again – this looks so much better than the previous version!

Michelle R,

Jane,


Just a quick note to let you know that Becky Felix has completed my resume re-write and her work is fantastic.

Thank you for your help. As I relayed to Becky, I will be in contact with your team in 30 days with an update regarding the level of interest I received.

Thanks again. My experience with your team thus far has been great.

Kind regards,

TJ

Hi Wendy,

I just wanted to update you, my Resume was sent out by an agency to a job opportunity, I was called for an interview screening with the HR Director, she mentioned that my Resume really stood out to her 🙂

She met with me and a bunch of candidates that day and narrowed her choice down to 3 people (myself included) to return to meet with the directors -

I was the first candidate back and they decided they didn't want to see anyone else 😀 I got an amazing offer and couldn't be happier.

Just saying a big thank you for marketing me so well on paper.

All the Best,

Dolores G.

Dan,

I am going to make this real easy for you and just say WOW!!!!!!

No changes required, you do great work, I am very satisfied with what you put together.

My next question is who does the overhaul of my Linkedin site? Is that you as well or someone else?

Once again great work and very much appreciated.

Cheers,
Matt A.

Peter-

Thank you again for your help. Very happy with the results!

Top Notch service!

Greg did a super job.

Thank you again,

Karl B.

Hi Peter,

You and your team did a great job updating my resume last year. Jeanie was the writer.

One of the options I did not choose at the time was updating my Linkedin information.

I now would like to have your team update my profile.

What do we need to do to have this done?

Thank you,

Chris W.

Dan,

Thank you for the final draft, I appreciate your efforts.

I have received high praise on the new resume, and I will conduct my first
test-bed to prospective target employers very soon.

This will conclude this process.

Sincerely,

Sean A.

Dear Gregory,

I have read the draft resume and cover letter very carefully and I am very impressed with your service.

Actually, I did not find much to change in both documents.

Kindly, find my additions as track change in the resume. I am ok with cover letter.

Again thank you for your service

Yours sincerely,

Adison L.

Jeannie,

You did a great job making me look like a rock star, you deserve a raise.

Chris F.

Peter, here is my resume with some revisions. Jeanie, great job. Thank you.

Now what are next steps to pushing this out to executive recruiters et al seeking senior marketing/loyalty leaders?

Thank you again.

Deirdre S.

Dear Peter,

I want to write to congratulate you for having Tom Albano on your team.

Tom's professionalism, expertise, and job excellence is above and beyond anyone's expectation.

Althought your $500 fee seemed high at the beginning, but after working with Tom and seeing his work, I would send you all my referrals without any reservation.

Thanks again Tom!

Jeanny L.

Greg,

Following up from last week, I wanted to thank you for all the hard work you put in.

I am very happy with the resume and cover letter in their current forms.

I will contact you if I am ever in need of help with updates or additional services.

Brendan L.

Peter,

I wanted to get back in touch with you. I wanted to let you know that after Dan Dorotik completed my resume I was contacted the next day for interviews.

I had 2 job offers the following week.

I am happy to report that I accepted a position as a logistics manager and relocated to Oregon.

None of this would have been accomplished if you had not revamped my resume.

Thank you again,

Tori A.


Peter,

I would like to express that my extreme pleasure with the resume and cover letter Wendy Haylett has developed for me.

I have shown it to several of my peers and each one of them have given me very favorable feedback.

Since she is now finalizing my LinkedIn Bio, I would like to discuss with you the services that you offer to get resumes in the hands of hiring officials and executive recruiters.

Thanks.

Kyle F.

Greg,

I apologize for taking so long with this.

Anyway the resume and cover look good.

Amazing how you can condense all so easily.

Thank you,

Catherine K.

Wendy,

Thank you, you have a wonderful way with people, you made me feel calm and at ease :

And a wonderful way of writing....God has blessed you with many gifts.

I'll keep you posted.

Best,
Dolores G.

Mr. Newfield,

Hello, I recieved the first draft from Mr. Dorotik and I love it, and don't feel there really is much need for any changes.

It is well written and it has everything in it.

What is our next step from here?

I sent you an invite to linkedin today. How does the updated on my likedin page work?

I was wondering If I could get a copy of an invoice for tax purposes.

Let me know if you need anything else from me.

Thanks,

Craig M.

Dan,

Minor changes on the resume.

I mean really minor, but I want you to
have my most current document.

Thank you,

Sean E.

Peter:

Darlene did a amazing job on my resume, thank you for appointing me to her.

I am interested in having her do a cover letter as well, but I was wondering if you have a lower rate for some that is currently unemployed? I did pay the full price for my resume, which was worth every penny.

Thank you,

Sean H.

Dan,

You are the best. Tthanks for your time and
patience with me.

Talk to you soon.

Be well.

Patrick A.

Jeanie,

Thank you soo much… you folks have been great… I did achieve employment… WAW….

Best regards,

Dale B.

Freddie,

Receipt confirmed. Already gave you a A+ review via Execunet survey and would definitely recommend you to others.

Until we meet again,

Walter W.

Wow, Darlene, everything looks great!

I really appreciate your work and feel confident in the materials you have written for me.

It was a pleasure to work with you. Thank you again!


Sincerely,


Maureen B.

Hi Greg,

Great job!

I had minimal edits and a few questions/comments embedded in the resume in red.

I also attached an old resume which has my career history going back to 1981. I don’t think 81 to 89 are relevant and make me seem old but not sure if it is required.

Thank you,

Michael DiB.

Gentlemen,

I am very please with results that Tom has produced.

A work of art and letters.

I will not hesitate to recommend your work to my colleagues.

Sincerely,

John M.

Hi Jeanie,

I found the way you presented my career GREAT! The format is also excelent!

I have read the resume several times and made some corrections. Please find it attached.

I have removed the Six Sigma Black Belt from the headings. Despite having lead the team of engineers to learn and follow Six Sigma Program, I have not been personally involved in any Six Sigma project as a leader or executer. I know what is Six Sigma about but would not be able nor qualified to carry on Six Sigma projects. Should I keep it there?

The resume is very open and does not hide any clues about me, my former and previous employers.

I believe we are close to the end version, hope you can review it soon.

Best regards,

Carlos P.

Jeanie,

Wow. Quick glance. Won’t have time to see until weekend.

VERY NICE.

Thank you.

Deirdre S.

Dear Jane,

Thank you so very much. I am excited about this and will let you know of any bounce backs or other items.

Fingers crossed.

You guys have been great, and I've been very very happy with my experience.

Best,

Greta Z.

Dan,

I just want to say thank you for all of your work. This cover letter is great.

I have already got an interview with the resume you generated from all of my scraps.

Thanks again,

Pat C.

Thank you Jeanie.

This looks good – I appreciate your efforts.

I also have contracted for LinkedIn Bio update. Will you also be doing this?

Regards,

Jackie B.

Dan,

I am pleased to say that I have no requests or suggestions regarding the cover letter and LI profile.

Your instructions on how to use the profile at LI were correct and comprehensive, and I have used slightly modified versions of the cover letter (tailoring them to the position, as expected) twice.

Although I believe I know the answer, just to be sure, there are no protections on any of the documents, correct? Hence, I can perform my own modifications should I wish to do so.

Perhaps it is a question for Peter, but there was another item that I purchased, something to do with the formatting/file type in which the documents exist. The purpose was to prevent me from being stymied if uploads and/or copy and paste options weren't allowed by the host. Know what I mean? If one of you could shed some light on this I would appreciate it.

Other than the above, I consider the process complete, and am pleased with the results.

Regards,
Ken H.

Hi Wendy,

Wow, this resume makes me appear like a high powered QA executive. I don't think that I every really realized that I have accomplished so much. I would hire me 🙂

I have updated the draft that you sent and the corrections are highlighted in red.

Please don't hesitate to recah out if you have any questions.

Thanks,

Barbara B.

Jeanie,

This looks great !!!

What is the cost for a cover letter?

Terrell K.

Dear Pierre,

Many thanks for your great work.

The application for ABB is sent 🙂

Wish you a great week and kind regards,

Janine A.,

Peter,

Jeanie Oscarson has completed all my documents. Everything looks great, and Jeanie did a great job.

With each document I made only minor edits on the drafts she submitted..she really nailed it the first time!

My LinkedIn profile is updated, and I've been using my new resume and bio.

It's early, but activity seems to have picked up.

I've received nice comments from colleagues who have reviewed my LinkedIn and new resume, and I tell them about your company.

Next time, I won't wait so long to update my c.v.

Thank you!--

Mark P.

Dear Dan,

Thank you very much, indeed, the LinkedIn Bio is fine for me.

I would like to take this opportunity to congratulate you on the good job
done.

I really appreciated, once again thank you.

Best Regards

Ed K.

Peter, Gregory,

The last version of the letter and curriculum did meet my expectations and is looking great.

Thank you for your interesting compiliation of the data into a new design - I will now immediatly test it and further recommend you.

Booking had been done as agreed from my
Kind regards

Markus B.

Becky.

Thanks so much for all your hard work

You have done an outstanding job!!

John B.

Hi Peter, Jeanie,

I was wondering whether you got a chance to go thru the previous email sent to you and am assuming that you went thru the document thoroughly since I am confident that we have finally reached a point where I don't foresee major changes except maybe minor changes if needed or recommend.

Frankly In my opinion the resume look great and honestly request your final opinion on the resume as you are the authority and specialized in this field and sure you have gone thru thousand of such resumes like mine.

Further there were many reason why I delayed the process of finalizing or preparing the resume since I wanted to be through or make sure and also this was the first time in my entire life/careers where I needed to prepare a resume or do so.

More so ever and as you are aware by now that I have always been self employed and have never needed to prepare such a document for reasons unknown but in fact do realize the importance of having one ,and was a great learning lesson and did open my eyes when you do write down all the achievements in your life /career.

Frankly it was about time and truly it's outcome is unmeasurable and the fear and curiosity I have had for many years are finally coming together.

I do hope you understand my concern and would sincerely request you treat this as if the resume were for you.

Once again thank you for your help and waiting in anticipation

Sam M.

Hello Peter,

Tammy has done an amazing job with my resume.

I would like a cover letter done as well and have submitted the fee on-line this morning.

Thank you!

Anita S.

Wendy,

It looks great.

I think we are set with the final product. Thank you so much for all of your help with this. I really appreciate it.

Now I have no excuses in taking the working towards the next step careerwise!!!!

With much appreciation,

Susie B.

Hi Jeanie,

This is absolutely great ! Thank you so much!

Just one comment: you don’t mention anything in the letters about my background of CFO and VP Internal Audit. Is it on purpose?

Thank you again. I am very happy with the quality of your deliverables.

Cheers,

Frederic R.

Hi Jeanie,

This looks great and I think is ready (found some small formatting
improvement areas---would you mind checking one more time all is OK?).

Would you start working on the Linkedin profile and cover note?

Thank you so much for all the great work.

Laura B.

Wendy,

The resume is very good thank you, consider me a happy customer . . . I would like you to write / update my linked in Bio -- how does that process work?

Peter, thanks for the professional support provided by your organization.

I enjoyed working with both Greg and Wendy, they both produced the quality adverstised.

A special thanks to Wendy for listening. I could have used her on my staff when I ran the Office of CIO at xxxxxx, we had a difficult time finding anyone who understood how to write with the right tone / style.

Lynn E.

Hello Peter,

I am in the process of finalizing my resume with Tammy, she was patient and very helpful!

This being the case, I am also interested in your Cover Letter and LinkedIn Makeover services, please can you please send me a quote for both services.

Best regards,
Aidan S.

Peter, Dan,

Thanks for your help on this. I used this resume in a few of the job applications, and was quickly contacted by HDR Engineering. I interviewed with them on Friday, and accepted a job offer this morning.

I'll have a 45 minute commute out to Ann Arbor every day, which isn't super exciting, but I deemed it worth it for this job. All of the opportunities closer in to Detroit had responded that

I was overqualified for their available position. The exception to that was in the automotive sector, which I wanted to avoid altogether.

I start on January 30th as a Substation Project Engineer at HDR. As I already have some background in management and business, they're planning to give me a small staff of engineers to oversee once I get up to speed on the work.

Thanks again, and I'll let you know how the job goes once I start.

Regards,

Josh B., PE

Hi Freddie,

I reviewed the changes and everything looks fine.

I wanted to thank you for a project very well done. I feel very good about the final product and you have made some nice upgrades.

In particular I like the value proposition statement and the up front 'synthesis'.

It was a pleasure working with you.

Best regards,

Niels F.

Peter,

You guys (Jeanie) just finished my resume last month... Definitely a "Mercedes" as you promised.

She is working on my LinkedIn profile now.

Thank you and happy new year!

Cliff B.


Dear Freddie,

Happy New Year! I hope you and your family had wonderful holidays!

I wanted to thank you for helping with my resume. I think it looks terrific and I am optimistic that it will help me open some doors and land a promising position.

It was a pleasure working with you and again, appreciate all of your time, efforts and support.

My very best wishes for the New Year,

Lynnsie P.

Peter,

I received my bio and letter from Jeanie Oscarson. This service was not something I had planned on obtaining; having had my resume done by a writer at The Ladders; but after reading Katherine's email and the personal attention I received from Annette on the telephone, I decided to pursue it.

Jeanie's bio and letter far exceeded my expectations. It is astounding that she has captured on paper my abilities in a way that has renewed my confidence for this journey.

I have asked Jeannie to work on my resume.

Would you please let me know the price and forward me the worksheet you use for resumes?

Thank you all,

Lisa W.

Wendy,

Thank you so much. It is amazing! Can't believe that is really my story!

I plan to spend time this weekend going through the resume and your instructions and hope to be able to get through it all and returned to you early next week.

Susie B.

Greg,

Great job, I would hire me:)

A couple of changes I saw was the opeing stores from the ground up both stores we up and running up one ws lossing money the other one was near bankrupty.

Thanks again for the help

Guy B.

Wendy,

This resume ROCKS! I am getting some action. Monday 12/5/11 God answered my prayers, and I got an emergency temp assignment for Carolina Legal Associates.

This is the first day I returned to work since 7/12/11! Talk about nerve wracking wreck! Today 12/6/11 was a completely different Karyn, all my work skills returned, my legal filing skills returned, my confidence returned, and I was asked to return Wednesday 12/7/11!

Thank you so very much for your talent and support!

I will keep you posted as to how this progresses.

Hugs,

Karyn M.

Peter,

Tom has now largely completed his work. I like it very much, thanks.

I’d like to talk about cover letters and linked-in. When you have a moment, can you call me on my cell?

Thanks in advance.

Roy G.

Wendy,

All I can say is WOW! My jaw dropped as I looked at what you had researched heavily and put together. Really stunned as to your accuracy and creativity.

I took the time to look this over three different times, and put in notes onto the draft sheet.

I know this is Thanksgiving Week and all will be quiet with the job hunts, etc. I've already checked into all three agencies this morning and don't expect any miracles.

I would like to thank you so very much for all the time you have put into this resume.

I hope you, your family, and your friends have a great Thanksgiving Week!

Hugs,

Karyn M.

Hey Tom,

This is good. I will let Jane know that I am happy with the final product.

I look forward to seeing the Linkedin Profile.

Thanks,

Gina H.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for hard work, I love it,

I did order cover letter (can you verify with Jane?), I only add the word SAP (in red), because that’s my expertise.

Let me know the packages price for thank you letter and corp bio.

Thanks,

Glen H.

Hello Jane,

The resume and LinkedIn Profile Wendy wrote are perfect, thank you.

I updated my Linked-In yesterday and what a difference.

I have asked for recommendations as well.

I didn’t before because I wasn’t comfortable the way my profile looked not very professional but not it looks AWESOME!

Thanks,

Mike N.

Hi Gregory

Thanks for a wonderful job.

I didn’t recognize it at first.

I did some revisions in red as requested.

If you want to call me to discuss, please do.

Thanks again.

Look forward to the next version.

Marilyn S.

Peter,

I just wanted to let you know that Tom did a wonderful job creating my LinkedIn profile.

It was different from my resume so it would be compelling for people to read in addition to my resume, which is fabulous.

Plus the cut and paste capability he provided made it very easy to update on the LinkedIn site.

Thanks,

Jim P.

Kathy,

I wanted to thank you. You did a wonderful job on my resume and Linked In Profile.

I hope that you're feeling better.

Michele S.

Dear Peter,

Thank you for the e-mail and the outstanding information.

I´m originally from Venezuela and I can tell you for a fact that I have never been exposed to such a detailed yet concisive critique ever.

Congratulations on this fine art, because I truly believe that to do what you do in your business, it is definitely an art.

I´m currently committed with a client, and it may be a few months before I can indulge myself with a brand new CV, but you have my word that it´ll be with Career-Resumes that I will definitely deposit my confidence very soon.

Thank you again for the outstanding critique and for contacting me. I have added you in LinkedIn.

All the best.

Rafael C.

Dear Peter,

Thank you for the e-mail and the outstanding information.

I´m originally from Venezuela and I can tell you for a fact that I have never been exposed to such a detailed yet concisive critique ever.

Congratulations on this fine art, because I truly believe that to do what you do in your business, it is definitely an art.

I´m currently committed with a client, and it may be a few months before I can indulge myself with a brand new CV, but you have my word that it´ll be with Career-Resumes that I will definitely deposit my confidence very soon.

Thank you again for the outstanding critique and for contacting me. I have added you in LinkedIn.

All the best.

Rafael C.

Peter,

Dan has written me a great resume and I'm now ready to move to the next step...cover letter, Internet postings, linkedin, Ryze, Ecademy, etc.

Can you give me some guidance on how to proceed with those tasks.

I've also found a couple of interesting jobs for which I'd like to develop the cover letter quickly so that I can respond to them within the next week or so.

Look forward to hearing from you and thanks again for a great resume.

Ed F.

Dear Wendy,

I would like to thank you for a job well done.

I am happy with the output and will take this as the final draft of my resume.

Regards
Arya N.

Tammy,

I wasn't sure what to expect but, I like it!

Having been on both sides of the table, I was well aware that my old resume was dry and unappealing.

When I read through this new one, it seems like a new person! More alive and interesting, with a better depth and breadth of experiences.

This one, even I would probably call in.

I wasn't sure about the 'small restaurant' example; it shows variety and breadth (and, perhaps, some humanity) but might diminish the larger, more corporate assignments.

I gave it, and the quote, to you almost as a dare and you included it. You're the expert so, let's give it a shot!

I made a few technical corrections; not your mistakes at all.

I think I would love for you to do a cover letter to go with this!

Thanks!

Rich S.

Freddie,

Thank you for a great job on my resume and cover letter.

I can’t imagine how you are able to sort through so much information and put it together so effectively….you really told my story well.

Sally B.

Jane,

I don't think I had a chance to contact you about my resume.

I was exceptionally pleased. Tom's work exceeded expectations. He was insightful, timely and very professional.

I have given your info to several friends who also would like professional resume service.

Thanks and best,
Min A.

Jeanie,

Thanks for your great work.

Vvery pleased with the outcome and the way it’s been conducted.

Kind regards

Keith P.

Hello Dan, Good Morning!

I hope you are doing OK.

Here is some statistics before and after you helping me with Linked in profile. After the changes you have made, the appearance in search increased 100%.

I thought you would like to know it.

Have a great weekend.

Best Regards,

Luis S.

Freddie,

THANK YOU for all this excellent work!

I am very pleased with the quality and speed of your work… and I am spreading the word with my network on your great work.

Thank you very much,

Joe S.


Wendy,

Thanks so much for delivering and promised. Please review the attachment with additional information.

I love it! I did have to read it multiple times, and will continue to review overnigth but I am very happy with the results. I will review and provide complete feedback by EOD wednesday.

Thanks!!

Hugo N.

Wendy,

Whoo-hoo !!!!

It is an extreme pleasure for me to work with extraordinary people, your work fits this precisely.

I was impressed as I even first glanced over the draft, then further as I read my quotes you incorporated into the headers.
Outstanding.

The next read I saw how you seemlessly took the ramble of facts I provided into a smooth read with great flow and impact. I especially liked the facts you wove into the tapestry of my experience.

Re-reads 2 to 4 also impressed me as I honed my scrutiny to the details
..
I would not have had the vision, guts, or objectivity to produce this document.

I will now final-proof and put it to my committee of experts (my wife, son and daughter-in-law) for their whoo-hoo as well.

At this point I am very happy with your (our) work. I will get my response back to you tomorrow AM.

With appreciation and thanks,

Jeff N.

Peter,

my resume is done and I am very happy!

I know I had also paid to have the Linked In bio done by you.

What are the next steps in doing this?

Thanks,

Pauline D.

Hi Tom,

I've reviewed the resume and LinkedIn bio-- both are excellent. I am extremely please with the results-- they exceed expectations.

One item I would like to add is-- in September, I will be testing for the MA Real Estate Salesperson's license and an unrestricted MA Construction Supervisor's license. Would you be able to send me an updated version of both documents with the appropriate wording and placement of these certifications?

This is the only change I require.

Thank you and best,

Min A.

Greg,

That looks great!

I just had a 2 things that I did forget to put in there and you may want to leave them out.

Also I only have word 2007 should I get a different version?

Thanks,

Lee H.

Greg:

Thanx for the speedy turnaround... Will have any revisions awaiting you before you return from your time off.

Your product is fantastico!!! I trust this tested you as it tested me - the outcome is wonderfully done.

Bob G.

Hello Peter,

I just got my resume back from Dan, last Friday. It looks great.

I would like to know who will take care of the cover letter, and Linked In profile.

Best regards.

Luis S.

Good evening Mr. Faherty,

Thank you for your assistance on my resume.

After reviewing it I must say that it is a document that stands head and shoulders above any resume that I have had to read as a manager.

I'll keep you posted!

Michael C.

Kathy,

Ok...now we are alligned.
The resume is perfect.

I'm going to start my search inmediately.

Very well done.

Thank you very much!!!

Ricardo R.

Greg,

It makes me want to hire me!

Very nice. Im not sure I would change any of it. I just hope it makes the phone ring.

BTW. I am trained in Advanced Parts Inventory Management by a ADP Company

Maybe we should include this

Thanks,

Clary L.

Hi Dan,

I received the document and I'm significantly impressed.

Thank you very much.

Natalie S.

Peter,

I just wanted to let you know that everything worked out with Dan.

He did a great job on my resume and cover letter, I couldn't be happier. I appreciate your efforts in assigning him to complete my resume and cover letter.

Doug P.

Hi Peter:

I hope you enjoyed a nice weekend!

I am pleased to advise that my Resume, Cover Letter, and Linked in Profile has been completed by Darlene Dassy who did a wonderful job, and I am now confident that I could do a job search with much success!

As I mentioned to you recently by phone, I also want to increase my client base here at my own company right now, and would also like to do a one page biography and a 2nd linked in profile based on the Biography.

I would like to go ahead and just want to double check the pricing with you, and then have Darlene complete this ASAP.

I will give you a call tomorrow or simply advise the costs to me via email for my reconfirmation, so our works can be finalized.

Many thanks and kind regards,

Noel C.

Tom,

Fabulous job. You did well in capturing the exciting parts of the career. Let me explain some of the changes and the motivations.

I only modified the Resume and the Letter.

After you have had a chance to review, you can accept the changes, tell me not to make them, or we can discuss further the reasoning.

Stephan P.

Thanks, Pierre,

The resume is very fine. I agree with your judgement on the length.

I have written it myself many times over the last five or six years and find shortening it omits too much of what could be valuable insight to the breadth of my career experience. ...

Ken C

Dear Peter,

Please allow me to give you a brief feedback in regards to Tammy's work on my CV & cover letter.

I am very pleased with what I have received from her. She did an excellent job and
over-exceeded my expectations by far. She met the previously communicated delivery dates, was friendly, clear in her messages and fully committed to deliver outstanding work.

I also felt she did all that with a genuine "service to others" motivation. If I would have to rate her between 1 and 10 she would get a 15 from me.

Also the interaction I had with Jane was excellent and it seemed to me that both Jane & Tammy work very well together.

Many thanks for the great service.

Regards.
Boro P.

PS: One of my former colleagues will place an order for your services next week.

Dan,

Thank you for your preparation of my resume and cover letter.

I am please with both and appreciate the time it took you to pull it together.

Sharon H.

Pierre,

The resume is great. Made one or two minor changes.

Need to think about cover letter in the context of the resume. Don't expect there will be much demand on your time but will send in the next week if I need your help.

Regarding my search. I was waiting for the completion of the resume since I am still working. This may change shortly so my search efforts will become very active over the next month.

Thanks for everything. Great job!

Rgards,

Earl L.

Pierre,

The resume is great. Made one or two minor changes.

Need to think about cover letter in the context of the resume. Don't expect there will be much demand on your time but will send in the next week if I need your help.

Regarding my search. I was waiting for the completion of the resume since I am still working. This may change shortly so my search efforts will become very active over the next month.

Thanks for everything. Great job!

Rgards,

Earl L.

Hi Greg:

First, thanks a lot for an excellent write up. I think it was bang on target.

While reviewing the document, I have made a few changes. I have used Track Changes feature in Word to highlight these changes.

I think we are pretty close to the final version.

Thanks for your help. This has been a terrific artifact. I have enjoyed working with you.

Regards,

Chandramouli M.

Hi Becky,

Thank you for the great resume your sent me last week!

The document is very important in my job search and I appreciate your contribution.

Manju A.

Hello Greg,

Thanks for the revision, and I think we have a winner.

I’ve made some final edits (added “Officer” to my military line, removed an errant comma). Feel free to wave me off the word changes if you had a specific purpose in mind.

I appreciate your help and am looking forward to giving the resume a trial run.

If you had any specific insights or advice regarding my resume, I’d appreciate the feedback.

Otherwise, thanks again for a job well done and I am off to hunt for that senior IT position.

Joel H.

Pierre,

Thank you so much. I have read the draft very carefully, and made note on some corrections to work through.

This afternoon I leave for a one week vacation to France (where communication to the US is relatively expensive) and suggest that we plan on my sending a more complete response sometime the following week.

In general the writing is excellent, the look is good (although the type size is smaller and the margins smaller than I had in mind initially –perhaps to due to the length of certain lines).

I also was thinking two pages, but see that three does seem to work out OK. Guidance is to include details for the last ten years, but I also think the earlier experience does communicate more about my background – your call.

I really appreciate your good work on this, and your excellent message below.

I feel very good about the progress made already, and look forward to completing it the week after next.

I like the cover letter very much … I welcome your further suggestions on using this letter with recruiters.

Many thanks,

Carol L.

Peter,

Greg did a masterful job on my resume.

I would like to proceed ASAP with LinkedIn. and a cover letter.

Any other suggestions you might have?

Sincerely,

Steve D.

Hi Pierre,

In one word....WOW!

This is amazing! I am so grateful for your work in doing my resume! WOW!

I did make a few additional notes and responses to your comments. I have attached it for your review.

Thank you so much,

Bob S.

Peter,

Thank you for the professional services of your firm. I enjoyed working with Jeanie Oscarson.

I have one request, could you please review my new LinkedIn profile in two areas. First, is the content appropriate for my background...it feels like a little to much content.

Second, I have a consulting firm. What is the best way to highlight this firm either within my personal profile or should I create a separate profile and link to it?

Thanks very much!

Dave M.

Peter,

My resume is looking great; will continue to work with Jeanie on changes and the final draft.

I am interested in your firmcreating cover letter and LinkedIn bios. What is the typical turnaround?

John P

Becky,

I just wanted you to know that in this first week of searching with my new resume call backs from online submissions are up 500% and I received 15 unsolicited inquiries ) up from zero over three months of looking on my own).

Thank you and feel free to quote me!

Bruce W.

Pierre:

I think it looks fine; much better than my attempt. I guess the real test will be in the next few weeks.

Thank you for your prompt attention, patience and assistance as we dealt with computer and file problems.

Good luck.

Jeff O.

Hi Peter,

I just wanted to let you know that I think Tom did an excellent job with my resume (he is in the final stage of completing it). Thank you!

Also, I am interested in having my LinkedIn profile updated (I let Tom know via email as well). What steps do I need to take to get that done?

Thank you,

Michael P.



Hi Jane,

Per our discussion today please find attached the proper and final versions of my resume, cover letter and text version of resume. I have verified all three.

The cover letter still has place holders for (Company Name), and I assume will need to be adapted for mass submission.

As we discussed on Friday, please create the text version of my cover letter and email back to me.

Finally, I believe we are ready for the mass submission. It's an exciting day, and I appreciate your help and that of Tammy. It's been a pleasure working with you!

Regards,

Andrew G.

These look great, Jane.

Thank you - I am all set and very pleased with the service.

Peter K.

Wendy,

The only thing that needs to be changed is in the last sentence you have "at missionaries". Should it be "to missionaries"? I can fix the Word files but not sure that I can edit the PDF. Otherwise, it is perfect.

I have always considered myself pretty good at The King's English, but you my dear, have mastered it!

Thank you for all of your help. I really feel like you went above and beyond your duty. I had a lot of reservations about having someone else help me with my resume. It seemed every day that I was getting an email about one service or another.

I can assure you that I picked the right service for the job.

You do outstanding work and I am happy to write a testimonial or reference any time you like.

I hope the Easter Bunny is good to you,

Michael B.

Wendy,

Thank you very much again for answering all my questions patiently and thoughtfully.

Yes the answers are helpful and makes sense. I apprecaite all your work and support! I did apply to half a dozen positions last night using the cover letter and the final resume "to get in the line".

We can consider my order delivered and final. If I have any important question regarding my resume or cover letter in the near future, I may ask through an email...

It was pleasant working with you through out this process. If you need me to provide feedback for your work to anyone, please let me know. It would be my pleasure to do it.

Have a nice day,

Kashyap S.

Greg,

I've attached my suggested modifications with Track Changes.

Thanks for great job!

Steve C.

Greg,

Thank you again for your efforts - the document looks great.

Attached is my draft of the resume with red lines. I added a few key complimentary concepts, along with some general edits.

I can work with the cover letter as is, changing the bullet points as each job warrants... so no proposed changes.

I very much look forward to receiving your response.

Regards,

Peter K.

Hi Kathy,

There isn't much to say but great job.

Attached is my resume, which I made minor changes to (I am not sure if I even need to send it back to you..or what else is there for you to do..so please advise).

I am very pleased with how well you were able to articulate my work experience in my resume.

I absolutely love the cover letter, and now think and hope with this professional introduction, I will be able to get more interviews.

Again, thank you and I do appreciate your assistance and your patience.

Kamara S.

Hi Kathy,

Thank you - this looks fantastic - amazing how you make me sound. I definately see the huge benefit in having this done by a professional writer.

Attached are the edits I have on the resume. As I read this, I realized that there are a couple of things that are missing - namely my experience with the SAP ERP system and my expertise in Excel - now it may be a given, which is why these are not spelled out - so I thought I would just bring that up.

Would that be something to include in the experience high lights? I have added these in on the attached, but would like your opinion as to if they should stay or not

Thank you,
Mark R.

Hi Peter,

I just wanted to let you know that Ken Moore has completed the final form of my resume and cover letter.

Thank you for the excellent work Ken did.

Ken and I interacted once by phone at my request after I completed the Worksheets and before he wrote the first draft. Ken completed the first draft resume and cover letter in a timely manner, offered me some insights, and awaited my comments/questions.

I replied with my comments and some questions. Ken replied back with some additional insights in answer to my questions, and attached a fresh resume and cover letter reflecting my comments and questions. He awaited any further comments, which I gave today, with my agreement that the resume and cover letter are in final form.

It was a pleasure working with Ken. I feel that he articulately and accurately condensed my formerly 3-page resume down to 2-pages, and gave me fresh insights regarding the current form of resume writing in the industry.

I can't wait to try out my new resume on some future opportunities.

Best regards,

Kevin S.

HI Freddie and Peter,

I wanted to let you both know that I have accepted a job offer here in New Orleans.
Thank you so much for all of your help.

All the best,

Tiffany P.

Hi Greg,

Please see my attached revised documents. It looks very good!

I really appreciate your help on my resume. Please let me know if you have any questions.

Please confirm you have received this documents.

Thanks!

Sarah C.

Hi Greg,

As advised, I have reviewed your document, and made some minor changes. I have used MS Word Track Change to highlight these changes. Pls feel free to re-edit if you think these changes are not reqd.

Your version looks great, and really puts all the relevant data in a nice compelling storyline.

Thanks for your work on this.

Rgds,

Shane O'N.

Mr. Newfield,

I will get back to Dan Dorotik.

It looks great!

John R.

Hi Greg,

Here are my revisions/comments. How soon do you imagine you would have it back to me?

Thanks so much. This was phenomenal.

You managed to take something "all over the place" into something very cohesive!

Michele F.

Hi Peter,

I just want to thank you for the extraordinary work Dan Dorotik did on your recommendation.

I am sure that he has not just helped my career but changed the future direction of my life by opening up new opportuniities and possibilities.

Regards,

Stewart F.B.

Hi Peter:

Jeanie did an excellent job with updating my resume. I will starting a new position with a new company soon. I am leaving my current company where I worked there for over 8 years. I will be turning in my two weeks notice on Monday. My new role will be Director of Admissions.

Part of my package, i requested to have my linkedin profile updated. I wanted to follow up with you to find out when this will be completed.

Thank you.

Rachel J. G.

Wendy,

It was a pleasure working with you. You have given me a profile that I believe has a competitive edge in the market place.

I will keep you posted with the outcome.

Once again many thanks for your help and I look forward to work with you again in near future.

All the best!

Sanjaya S.

Dan,

Thank you for the draft, I will look it over and send any comments back today.

It looks fantastic!

Ryan M

Dear Mr. (Dan) Dorotik,

What a wonderful letter, resume and Lindedin response. I really appreicate the work you have done for me and my career.

Oh yes I love what you have done and I love the letter...

Thanks
Deborah J.

Mr. Newfield,

I took you up on your offer of a free consultation regarding resume writing services from your company.

I spoke with Ms. Jane Quick this morning who spent all the time I needed looking at my resume and giving me basic advice on how it should and could be better.

She did a great job explaining the rewrite process of your company. Her experience and description of her service and the writers there put me at ease about the organization.

I am considering the offer and found that Jane Quick is an asset to Career Resumes.

Thanks you so much for her and your service.

Brian E.

Peter,

I wanted to let you know that Tom Albano just completed my Resume, LinkedIn bio and did a fantastic job!.

I've recently updated my LinkedIn profile and doing the same on BlueSteps.

When we spoke a few weeks back, you also mentioned a few other Recruiting websites that I should also make sure my profile is on and up to date.

Can you provide them to me again?

Thanks again.

Regards,

Spencer H.

Jeanie,

My changes are very minimal. I can make them. You did a great job!

Thank you very much.

Craig D.

Hi Dan,

How are you? Attached is the questionnaire for my updated resume. I’ve also attached a spreadsheet I developed at my most recent job that details my specific job functions. You may be able to pull some additional info from that.

You did a bang up job with my last resume, it got me in a lot of doors.

I look forward to a repeat on the update. If you have any questions please contact me at the number below. I know the normal turn time is 5-7 days, but I already have two leads waiting for a resume, so your expediency on this would be greatly appreciated. (Peter said depending on your workload you might be able to turn it in a couple of days.)

Thanks again,

Elicia R.

Hi Dan,

It looks good.

Also what are the next steps. I think I needed a cover letter and this document converted to txt format.

Is that something you do or is it handed off?

Great job and let me know whats next.

Vasu M.

Dan,

Thank you for the wonderful job done on my resume.

I feel that it clearly better represents me and the work I have done in Education.

I am ready for my next move.

I appreciate you work in this matter; I could have never thought of or listed the comments on my resume the way you have.

Thanks,

Deborah J.

Hello Dan:

It's good. I had already done the changes to my draft and had sent a couple of dozen applications.

Today I got my first invitation for an interview which is quite an accomplishment considering how few apps I sent.

Thanks.

Hiram T.

Dan,

I know I was a pain in the butt, but thank you.

I am going through it now and it looks fantastic.

I will let you know by Friday if there is anything I would like to add.

Thank You once again.

Patrick McQ.

Greg,

Thank you for your work and your explanations, Gregory.

I consider now your work done. thanks a lot for your kind collaboration.

Regards.

Gianni L.

Greg,

I have made just a couple of corrections for you to change.

I will be calling you tomorow to ask you a simple question that is easier to ask then type.

The resume looks great.

Thanks again.

Phillip N.

Greg,

Thanks - attached is document with a few comments/questions.

This looks great.

Thanks,

Jeff S.

Wendy,

This looks great.

Thanks for the patience. You are easy to work with!

I appreciate all you've done.

All the best,

Chris M.

Greg,

Thanks for your work and for your candid advice.

You are a true professional.

Tim K.

Jeanie,

This is final!

Excellent work. You may be hearing from other friends of mine. Everyone has been very impressed with your work.

Cheers!

Dustchin R.

Dear Pierre,

This is outstanding. I agree with your assessment and like what you have done.

I only see one small change I would like to make in the "core compentencies" section and have indicated it on the file in bold red font. ...

Thanks for all your help.

Von L.

Dear Pierre:

Okay, I feel like I have thrown a lot at you. I do need to say this.

That the resume you designed is already a million times better than what I had.

I really appreciate your help. I was so stuck with my resume I felt paralyzed.

Thank you so much for all of your help. I look forward to hearing back from you.

Sarah T.

Hi, Greg,

The Both Resume and cover letter looks great.

I add my comments in track changes mode. Please let me know your thought.

Thanks,

Chuck X.

Hi Dan,

I’ve gone through my resume and it really does look great!

I’ve tweaked just few minor things, but overall I love it and am very happy with the end result!

Money well spent!

Many thanks for all of your hard work!

Kryse K.

Dear Greg:

Tom is out of town and he asked me to review the revisions on the resume, cover letter and your re-typed reference sheet.

There are only a few more revisions that need to be done on the resume.

Thank you very much and you did a wonderful job.

Please send the revised resume to my e-mail since Tom is out of town.

Thank you very much,

Eileen W.


Jeanie,

I have to admit I wasn't too sure about going down this route before I contacted Peter.

I've now seen the end result and I'm really pleased with the outcome.

I should have done it years ago!

Regards

Dave K.

Hi Greg,

This looks good. I have attached a version with a some proposed changes that I'd like to incorporate

Again thanks,

Alan F.

Jane, I am happily employed in Alaska as the CHRO for Alaska Communications; thanks in large part to you and your team.

A colleague of mine is leaving the company for good personal reasons (it happens up here in the far north) and he's a great performer and person.

He is looking for top shelf service in resume construction, his LinkedIn profile and making a big splash with the key search firms.

I told him about Peter/you and the services his firm offers.

Specifically, how would you like me to direct him to your team? He is a senior level financial person.

Foster W.

Hi Greg,

Thank you so much for the updates.

The resume looks great and it does not need any more edits.

I have one final question regarding the cover letter. Is it possible to replace the word "logical" with some other word? The word "logical" just sounds a bit arrogant to me.

Thanks,

Rajnesh B.

Greg -

Great work! I really like the way you put this together.

Attached are both files with track changes. If you do not agree with any of my changes (English is my 2nd language), please let me know. I put a few questions in the doc as well.

Thanks,

Adriaan B.

Hi Greg,

Thank you so much for working on my resume.

Your version is far superior to what I had.

I understand now the difference between an "achievement-based" and a "task-based" resume.

Rajnesk K.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks for your great work and effort on this! Its looking very good.

I have made some changes/edits in Track Change mode in the attached version for your review and acceptance.

I look forward to receiving the next and possibly final version for my review and signoff.

One question: After the version has been finalized, proofread and reviewed for formatting, would I be receiving the final copy as both Word and PDF versions, or only as a Word doc...?.

Thanks,

Vineet W.

Freddie,

Definitely. My expectation is not to engage you daily or even once a week! 🙂

As you mentioned, I'll appreciate your feedback/change if any major changes need to made based on my responses.

Thanks again for creating a resume which I feel a much better representation of me than anything I had in my earlier resumes.

Thanks,

Chandan A.



Wendy,

This is a brilliant resume that's made me delighted with my prospects and has convinced me that I can indeed find a place for me in today's journalism world.

You're a dear, and I thank you so very much!

I really can't wait to start spamming you with the updates on what this resume has allowed me to do!

Do with it whatever you will- you are so talented at this- I'm deeply touched and so thankful to you!

Jamila B.

Greg,

Thank you!

The documents look good. No further revisions/edits are needed.

I am ready for you to send the resume in the alternate formats.

Thanks & Regards,

Santhosh A.

Thanks Jeanie,

Great work!

Look forward to working with you again.

Mark H.

Hi Peter,

My resume is now done.

I clearly see the difference in how my past is now presented verses before.

I am glad I spent the money.

Tom R.

Good Afternoon Jeanie and Peter,

Happy New Year. Hope you both have had a great holiday break and wish you all the success for 2011.

Thanks to your CV writing skills I was invited to several job interviews and got two job offers.

I wanted to see if you can help with updating my resume to reflect my current job that I have been in for 3 months.

Can you please tell me how much it would cost?

Regards,

Rene K.

Dear Peter,

I just want to wish you massive success in 2011.

Also I want you to know that I was so taken by Jane Quick's assistance with my CV.

Her imput and feedback set me up for the massive success in 2011.

Cheers,

Izabela L.

Pierre:

Glad to hear you are getting over your cold.

I have attached a document (version “b”) with a couple of highlighted areas to get your opinion on a few areas. I’m not adamant about the changes - - and really want to bounce them off you to get your thoughts (the changes are highlighted in yellow with a parenthetical explanation next to it).

Overall, this looks really great. I am generally impressed with the looks of this. ...

I would like the opportunity to look over your changes one more time and sleep on it a day or two before we finalize hopefully in a day or two.

Thanks!

Patrick J.

Greg,

I hope that you had an enjoyable and happy holidays. I think the resume looks great and I am good with it.

Let me know the next steps for the linkedin profile and what else you need from me.

Thanks and Happy Holidays.

Duane K.

Hi Peter,

I just remembered that I didn't call to confirm start date with the Center for Disabilities.

My start date is Jan. 10, 2011. I will be going in this Wednesday, Dec. 22nd to do new hire paperwork.

I am really excited for the challenge a fresh start in the new year.

Donna did a great job.

Talk to you soon and Happy Holidays.

Jude G.

Peter,

Dan delivered a draft resume today.

It looks real good - a couple of tweaks and we'll be complete.

Does Dan also do the cover letter and Linked-in work or is that someone else?

Mike M.

Hi Peter,

I took the resume service from you in 2009.

Recently I quit my job and moved to lexington, MA for family reasons.

I used the updated resume and applied for a few jobs & got a call back from most of them.

I just wanted to thank your company for a job well done.

Regards,

Samina M.

Thank you Peter for your team's help in preparing my resume.

I'd like to add you to my professional network on LinkedIn.

Partha B.

Mr. Newfield

Thank you so much for providing me with such a fantastic resource that will allow me to enter the workforce with the best possible chance of obtaining a great employment position.

The resume Kathy wrote looks great! I can't wait to see how many doors are opened to me because of your assistance.

Thanks again!

Alex R.

Kathy,

This looks great. Thank you.

I am going to look at it in more detail over the weekend on my home computer- but just wanted to let you know that I am really pleased!

Have a good weekend.

Kate H.

Hello Jeanie.

I am very satisfied with your new construction of my resume! You can proceed to complete.

Were you also assigned my LinkedIn page?

Thanks,

Tim F.

Hi Jeanie,

Just wanted to touch base with you this morning. I love the resume!

There are a few pieces of information that I need to gather for you (like a list of coursework to insert) and a couple of tweeks I need to make to some of the items. I will gather all of that information for you and get it to you this weekend.

I am away on business right now so I'll have to wait until I get home tonight to put it all together

Thanks very much Jeanie. Talk to you soon.

Kathy C.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you for the resume drafts!

My compliments, professional and concise.

I will have suggestions for a few additions/changes on which I would like your feedback.

Will forward by the weekend.

Thanks,

Greg S.

Hi, Jeanie,

I've completed the reading. Excellent job! There was just one minor edit which I've already made myself.

Do we have to do anything else about it or are we completed? If so, thanks a lot. And, sure, it was a pleasure to work with a skilled professional.

Be in touch in case you travel to Moscow one day. Promise you a good dinner.

Wish you happy holidays,


Kirill P.

Dear Darlene,

Thank you for the revised resume and for your suggestions and advice. The resume looks great.

I also added what department (school) at SDSU that I was an adjunct and graduate teaching associate since SDSU has many departments (schools) under its umbrella and I feel it was important to be specific.

If I’m wrong, please let me know and I’ll adjust it accordingly.

Thanks again for everything. This process has definitely been a learning experience for me, so thank you for your patience.

Robin G.

Hi Jane,

What an outstanding CV analysis you just did.

By all means I see the value and agree with your quote for a new CV.

I'd like to ask if you could include in the "package" instructions for adjusting my LinkedIn home page according to the new CV.

I'll wait your next steps instructions, including payment.

Best regards,

Luiz C.

Kathy,

I have made a few very minor changes to the Resume.

You have prepared an incredible resume for me.

THANKS,

Dennis F.

Peter,

I was wondering if you knew of a headhunter that you could refer me, please.

By the way, Freddie did an excellent job with my resume package--thank you for sending my info to her.

Best,

Tiffany P.

Kathy,

I would like to thank you for helping me with my resume.

I got two job offers last week. And I will start a new job from December 13th, two weeks from today.

I want to let you know how thankful I am for the new resume you prepared for me, which helped me standing out for the job opportunities, and being able to move forward ... ...

Thank you!

Regards,

Lyndsey Z.

Hi Greg,

You have done an excellent job.

I don’t think I want to correct anything. In any case I have pointed some things in red.

Please consider them.

Best regards,

Tryfon C.

Greg,

Nice job thank you, wrap it up.

Ted P.

Peter,

Good evening! I wanted to let you know that Darlene is a fantastic woman to work with and she did an excellent job revising/recreating my resume!

She took all of the information I provided and created a resume that accurately reflects not only who I am as an professional, but also as a person.

Thank you for connecting us!

You mentioned a few other options regarding my resume format, please remind me of those options and the associated fees.

Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

Kind Regards,

Laura D.

Dear Dan,

I am very pleased with the quality of the write up.

What I did is to review it thoroughly and provide my comments. From the summary point of view, I just suggest a couple of minor edits. For the sections on General Dynamics and General Motors, I am fine.

I thought we could beef up the Abbott and Bristol-Myers Squibb Company a little bit.

Please peruse the attached comments and let me know your thoughts.

Your arrangement of the subject matter and details are impressive. I like it.

Thanks!!

JR R.

Good day Peter,

I want to thank you for the excellent service you and your company provided me in my quest for a more aggressive resume . Kathy did a wonderful job in writing my resume, cover letter and Linkedin bio.

Thank you again for your assistance.

Sincerely,

Tim G.

Wendy:

I want to send a short note and let you know that I am very pleased with the content and format.

I can tell you that the CV looks very professional and I appreciate your help.

Please treat this email as my approval for the work done.

Regards,

Sundar R.

Freddie,

Thank you for polishing up my resume and letter - hopefully this will lead to a new position soon.

Regards,

Didier J.



Kathy,

Yes I am very please with the outcome. I will review everything over the weekend and send any comments back no later than Monday morning.

Hopefully we can resolve any outstanding items on Monday so I can forward the resume Tuesday.

Thanks again for an outstanding resume!

David K.

Dan,

My resume if anything captures your eye… thanks!

I already have an interview set up...

Thank you so much,

Rebecca H.

Peter,

Two things: Most importantly, I just wanted to let you know that Greg has really exceeded my expectations with the work he's done preparing my executive bio and resume.
Really, really nice. Worth every nickle.

I hope you recognize his significant and first-rate work!

Please let him know how pleased I am with his work.

Related to the above, I think I'd like to move forward with BOTH an updated LinkedIn profile AND Cover letter.

Here's a question: Since I'm planning on approaching tier-1 consultancies AND potentially mid-sized companies, do I need TWO cover letters which highlight different strengths?

I realize I'll have to adjust the cover letters before sending them. Just curious.

Please let me know how to proceed.

Peer B.

Peter-

I wanted to thank you for all of your help on my resume Dan has done a beautiful job on it and I am very pleased.

I need a favor if you know of any very successful companies that can use my expertise I would really appreciate it. I live in Southern California.

Thank you again.

Best regards,

Shane B.

Greg,

I really, really liked the work you did on my resume. Much better than I could have done and worth every penny. Many thanks.

I made a collection of changes to your excellent work. I used MS Word, 2007 and used track changes. I also used the "Add Comment" feature to elaborate on why I made the changes I did. I hope you'll be able to use my work and that my comments will make sense.

Many thanks again.

Peer B.

Dear Jeanie,

Hope you are doing fine.

Well I trust I can say MISSION ACCOMPLISHED !!!

There were very few additional amendments (mostly on the presentation) that I have managed myself and I'm now quite happy with the end result.

I thank you for your time and cooperation and congratulation on a Job well done.

Best regards,

Christophe E.

Hi Peter

Greg completed my resume. It turned out good.

Thanks

Ram P.

Hi Greg

Please see my revisions.

Overall looks good and appreciate your work.

Please provid me the revision, ASAP and we will finalize.

Thanks,

Ram P.

Hey Wendy,

This looks great! It shows what I have done in a much clearer manner w/o adding any fluff.

I really appreciate the effort.

I have attached the draft with a few comments inline.

Thanks,

Vidur G.

Peter,

Yes, Kathy sent this to me in the morning. She said she has been very sick. But I do like her work very much.

Thank you very much for following up.

Regards,

Lyndsey Z.

Hi Wendy,

I like my resume and cover letter prepared by you very much!

I have made some minor correction to the text and I would like to discuss with you them, so we can finalize document in less iterations.

When we can we have conversation about it?

Please let me know.

Sincerely,

Leszek A. W.

Greg,

The resume looks great, thanks for all your hard work.

I've made a few changes, let me know if they are ok or not.

Also, what is the price for a short cover letter and what would the turnaround time be on that?

Chuck N.

Wendy,

This is wonderful.

I will study and reflect on it over the weekend, and provide my feedback and answer your questions very early next week.

I appreciate the effort and quality you put into this.

Thank you,

Rennie M.

Greg,

The new resume and cover letter look great!!

I would not change anything on the resume, except possible to change the job preferences from:

“Chief Technology Officer · Technology Executive · Technology Management · Department Head” to “Staff Member · Technology Executive · Technology Management · Department Head”

What do you think?!?! Is “Chief Technology Officer” restricting my options too much?!?!

The only thing to change in the cover letter is a slight misunderstanding.

Everything else looks fantastic!

Do you post the updates when complete on my Ladders account or do I do that?!

Thanks again,

Charlie F.

Donna:

Looks great. Thank you for your help.

I have no further edits on either the cover letters or the resume.

Rich H.

Dear Jean,

A few years back I had got my CV created by CAREER RÉSUMÉS.

You had personally worked on my CV and the results were indeed great!

I am looking at updating my current CV with the other developments that have taken place along with a new direction that am pursuing towards my career.

In this regard could you kindly guide me as to how to proceed if I need the service from career resumes (personally I would request if the CV could be worked upon my you again)?

Best regards,

Pinaki A.

Wendy

I do not recall seeing the email that contained my cover letter. I am not sure if it came through and I accidentally deleted or if I never received???

The Cover Letter looks good and so does my resume. Please consider this final and complete.

I want to thank you for all you have done for me! This was an interesting experience, but I am very glad I hired you to do this for me as everything turned out very well and I am happy with the end result.

Thanks for all your work and assistance in this process!!!

Regards

Lyn S.

Hi Donna

I wanted to send you an update. A very good firm in town contacted me and asked me to apply for a not-posted opening they had.

The attorney who called had been on numerous cases I had prosecuted in recent years, and was familiar with my work. He said that he noticed I had moved to the other branch office where I am now, wondered what happened, and wondered if I was interested in applying there.

I promptly sent the resume you had crafted with me. He was impressed, so I am interviewing there Friday.

The position would be for criminal defense, and civil litigation. I will be interviewing with 4 individuals : the partner who recommended me, an of counsel who is chair of the local political party in power, an of counsel who is our state representative, and the head of the firm's board of directors.

I am a little nervous, as that is quite a stellar line-up. I have been thinking through potential answers to the typical interview questions so that I sound confident and ready.

Keep your fingers crossed that everything goes well.

Jessica R.

Dear Kathy,

I'm very pleased with the Resume you prepared.

I just made few corrections.

Thank you.

Rodrigo De.

Wendy,

I used your first draft to apply for a Job on Tuesday. I had two interview this week and I received a call this morning with a job offer!

Thank you so much!

Job well done, mission accomplished.

Rakib J.

Freddie,

Attached should be the final edits (minor grammar, font issues only).

The resume is the most effective one that I have ever had! I am glad that I met you through ExecuNet!

I am very impressed with the thoroughness and level of detail on the resume!

The resume is packed with information which portrays my experience in a very positive way.

I am excited about how the resume highlights my skills and experience.

Larry P.

Wendy,

Thanks very much for all the work. I have spent a lot of time reviewing the final products now and I am very happy with them.

I consider the order delivered and final, and am looking forward to putting my best foot forward using your handiwork.

Thanks,

Bill D.

Hi Wendy,

Thanks very much for the quick turnaround. There are just three more changes I'd suggest (please see attached document).

Other than those minor corrections, I'm very happy with the result and am anxious to send it out into the wild.

Despite my original caution about hiring a professional resume writer, I'm now firmly convinced it was the right move.

William D.

Greg:

The interview went well. Very relaxed. The interviewers were two woman, one was new to the FDA and the other had worked at the FDA for over 30 years.

There were a few questions we covered like what was a frustrating situation at work and how did you handle it?

And how do you feel about relocating to Rockville, MD. General questions, mostly.

They said at the end of the interview that they were really charged with accessing my interpersonal communication skills and whether I would be a good fit or not. They said they were going to give their recommendations to the Director who was in charge of hiring for the Center and I should hear back from him/her whether I will have another interview.

I thought it was a positive interview and I hope to hear from them soon.

The work we did on the phone on Tuesday will greatly assist me in another interview, be it the FDA or some other agency.

Thanks very much.

Madeline M.

Freddie,

The resume looks terrific! Thank you so much for combining all of my professional history in such an articulate and concise manner.

I had a couple of comments on the resume; please find the attached resume with revisions.

If you could please respond to ensure that you have rec'd the document with revisions , please.

Thank you for all of your help; you are an incredible writer.

Tiffany P.

Dan,

I appreciate the follow up. The resume looks great. It was worth every penny.

I did make a few small modifications.

Let me know if they need further discussion.

Thank you.

Charles McA.

Jane,

Just a quick update and thank you note. I recently accepted a position as CFO, and we have moved to Idaho.

My family and I are off on a new adventure!

Thanks to all for your help and support in this transition.

Best,
Jeff S.

Hi Jane, Dan,

A great thank you for helping me revised and rewritte my CV and Cover letter.

I have been using the new format for about 3 weeks now and have already received invitations for interviews!

Kindest Regards,

Liliane A.

Jeanie –

Reading the cover letter that you prepared for me brought tears to Jackie’s eyes. We are delighted with my letter. It so describes me and my abilities on one page!

Thank you so much for translating “me” into words, that we now hope will capture the attention of a company that we believe and know will be very happy they hired me.

We are very pleased and very proud of your understanding, commitment and professionalism – we gave you the information – just not sure how you do what you do, but you have done it superbly.

We shall always be very grateful to you.

Many thanks,

Arthur and Jackie C.


Outstanding Dan!

Thanks a bunch.

Arin R.

Hi Greg,

Thank you for your prompt reply and feedback. I wasn't sure what to put in and where to put the LinkedIn info.

I have made the final edit as requested, we should be good to go now.

Look forward to my LinkedIn profile.

Cheers and

Best Regards

Michael McM.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for your excellent draft.

I have made some minor amendments for you. Hopefully you agree they are good enhancements.

Apologies for upsetting the format as I made the changes.

Look forward to your next version.

Cheers and Best Regards,

Michael McM.

Darlene,

Good afternoon. Hope you are well.

I wanted to let you know that the resume you wrote was a big asset in my job search. First, the resume did generate more responses from HR and hiring managers.

Second, I just accepted a position that starts next Monday.

Thank you for everything and I will contact you in the future when I need to update my resume.

Have a great day!

Sincerely,

Bo K.

Hi Greg-

I've reviewed the docs,a nd they look great. I think I added 2 things in red to the resume, that's it.

I do have a question. What is the correct format for the cover letter when you don't have a specific person's name to put in the address and salutation? Do you just use "Dear Hiring Personnel" or something similar?

Thanks!

Eddie Q.

Hi, Dan,

I looked over your draft resume and everything was fine. I have attached the resume with comments not tracked changes from me.

You composed an excellent resume and addendum.

Dan, and I thank you very much.

Sincerely,

Bill B.

Thanks Dan,

I really appreciate your help.

I just quickly looked at the resume and it looks fabulous.

I am so excited about it. I will review it tonight and get any comments back to you tomorrow.

Thanks again!

Mollye W.

Dan,

Thanks. I thought I was up late sending emails, you win.

Your work blew me away.

I am very glad I had the chance to work with you.

I have no changes at this time. Look forward to getting your cover letter.

Mark A.

Hello Donna,

I must say THANK YOU for the difference you made with your magic!!!

I have finally accepted a position which I am thrilled about.

After your resume magic I had three options and went on 7 interviews and now finally I can start fresh!!

THANK YOU and if you ever needed recommending.... should I say more?

Kindest regards,

Ana M.

Hey Donna,

The resume looks great. It is so rewarding to see how my hard work impacted the resume. I made a few changes/suggestions. Let me know what you think.

Thank you again for your help.

Also, the wheels are in motion at xxxxxxxxxx...they are looking to add some people over the next few months to grow the division.

Hopefully my timing is right.

Scott K.

Dear Donna,

As I mentioned, I do not have changes for you, due to your excellent advises and recommendations.

Do you have any additional suggestions or advise for me?

Thanks,

Teresa L.

Darlene,

Good afternoon. Hope you are well.

I wanted to let you know that the resume you wrote was a big asset in my job search.

First, the resume did generate more responses from HR and hiring managers.

Second, I just accepted a position that starts next Monday.

Thank you for everything and I will contact you in the future when I need to update my resume.

Have a great day!

Sincerely,

Bo K.

Donna,

I am in negotiations with 3 companies so far because of your reworking my resume.

Thanks,

Ann J.

Great work, Greg.

Attached are my requested edits.

1. I re-ordered the positions right under my contact information to put the ones I am most interested in at the front.

2. I re-ordered the AREAS OF EXPERTISE to emphasize what I think is most important (putting those at the front of the list). I may have messed up the dot point formats, however.

3. I added an S to the end of "applications" under Technical Skills.

Please let me know if you have any questions. Otherwise, I look forward to getting the final version.

Thank you,

Bill L.

Wendy,

Fabulous, thank you !

I don’t see any edits or corrections that need to be made.

Thank you !

Cathy B.

Hi Wendy.

I've gone through the resume this evening and have marked it up and answered your questions. I am going to read it one more time tomorrow before sending it along. I will also try to find a few sample job postings.

I've also set up a new email address and applied it to the document. I'm working on obtaining another phone number as well.

I'll explain my markup semantics tomorrow in the email containing the revisions. There aren't many changes.

I remain impressed with your work - it's definitely as compelling as I'd hoped it would be.

Before I send the response back I'd like to ask a question about the additional services you offer.

What's the difference between the Executive Bio, Executive Profile, and the Online Bio? What's generally included within?

Thanks very much,

John T.

Hi Donna,

Just thought I'd fill ya in.

Talked to the hiring manager last Tues for about 45 minutes and I think it went really well.

He said the resume was really good especially the way it showed career history , he said he is surprised how many he gets that don't have this.

Thanks again for the killer work .

Have a great 4th

Don H.

Hi Peter:

I just reviewed my resume from Kathy and I am quite happy with it. Just a few minor changes and I think it will be good to go.

Can you advise status about the linked in page?

Thank you,

Janet B.

Hi Greg,

First, thank you. The draft is much better than my own version of the resume -- cleaner, more focused on the accomplishments, and and you have removed a lot of content that you (I am assuming) believe to be useless.

I have made a few changes, while trying to stay withing the same format structure. This is the summary.

Added a few key words that were missing when they seemed important (e.g., "technical due diligence" in Areas of Expertise).
Modified some numbers.

Removed or qualified statements that were stated too broadly to be justified (e.g., "Played key role in growing unique site visitors to one million per month" -- this occurred after I left the company, so I am not comfortable taking that much credit).

Made a couple of small editorial changes to reflect what I thought to be more common usage.

Please find the edits attached; changes are tracked using Track Changes in MS Word.

Looking forward to receiving your feedback.

Best regards,

Michael R.

Donna,

All good points. You are right about the intricacies of the companies. For lack of a more professional term, it does start sounding a little “inbred”. Yikes! But you’re right – it’s about me and I have always thought the important thing is to show steady progression.

I have made a few other notations.

I am glad I decided to invest in this process. Thanks for all of your insight.

Melissa Van O.

Greg,

Outstanding!!!.

I never would have thought you could get all that into two pages with out losing something

I only made a slight change to the resume and you'll see I added IT Architecture as a skill set,

I did not know how to add it without missing up your formatting so as you'll see I put it in place of another item (Change Management which should be a given). If you can fit both great but IT Architecture is one I want to get in there.

Frank DeA.

Greg.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!

I really appreciate your expertise. Now that I have seen what a true craftsman can do with so much data, and present it with clarity…

Well, I not only appreciate it, but also understand why my previous efforts proved less than optimal.

I have made just a few modifications.

The additional Work Experience was added only because of the names of the company and some of the other “skills” that would have suggested.

I will of course defer to your judgment.

Very Gratefully yours,

Harald G. S.

Hello Greg,

Thank you for the inputs. I agree with your inputs on the 3 items listed below – I defer to your expertise in this matter.

Please see attached documents for minor revisions and edits I made.

Let me know your thoughts on these.

Sincerely,

Ramesh S.

Jeanie,

Hi, It looks great. Ive updated LinkedIn and it looks SO MUCH BETTER.

Thanks so much for all you've done!!

Bonnie W.

Donna,

I really appreciate your assistance throughout this process.

I was surprised how different my resume looks and flows compared to the previous version.

The previous version was also written by a resume writer, but back in 2007.

It's amazing how quickly even resume writing has changed.

Thank you again.

Heather W.

Greg,

I have read through several times and thought about and additional changes.

The draft turned out very well.

Attached are some minor adjustments or comments.

Ron R.

Dan,

This is great work! Thanks!

I changed about three words (see highlights).

If you agree, we are good to go.

Ted E.

Hi Wendy,

This is a most terrific cover letter. It is extremely well –written, dynamic, and loaded with integrity.

I especially appreciate the three alternate approaches that will make the job of gearing toward the employer/recruiting entity much easier.

You have made my day, week, and month, and I can’t thank you enough.

Please let Peter know that you are the best, and that I am completely satisfied.

Looking forward to contacting you again someday soon!

Many thanks and best regards,

Judi T.

Jeanie,

This is good.

I made the necessary changes including adding the examples you suggested.

Thanks,

Mike P.

Freddie,

Thank you for the documents. All of them great - better than I ever could have done!

I would like to talk to you about your resume distribution services.

Let's set up a time next week.

Thank you again.

Edward H.

Wendy,

Sorry for the delay in responding.

I have lots of irons in the fire that are hot right now thanks to your help.

The final products are terrific and I am very satisfied with the results.

Wishing you much success,

Gordon D.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks for your work!

I believe now I can chose the highlight bullets that are most appropriate to each situation.

And, I think the CV is in good shape now, and appreciate your hard work on it.

I thank you once again, and you are the best!

Cheers,

Samuel V.

Greg,

Attached you will find my changes and clarifications to the documents. Any questions, please let me know.

The documents are looking good and I appreicate your expertise.

I hope this will begin to open doors...

Thanks,

Greg C.

Dan,

This is great work! Thanks!

I changed about three words (see highlights).

If you agree, we are good to go.

Ted E.

Hi Greg,

I apologize for the delay in getting these revisions back to you.

The resume looks great!!!!

I used ‘tracked changes’ for the revisions. I didn’t have many revisions but one of my changes threw the page breaks off a bit.

Most of the changes are in the technical skills section. Please let me know if you need anything else from me. Regarding the change I made under EDS for the KYC stuff – I have seen KYC or Know Your Client being asked for in some positions I have been looking at which is why I thought it should be included.

Again, thank you very much,

Katerina M.

Hi Jeanie,

I would like to thank you once again for the job you have done for me.

People to whom I wrote so far are really impressed about the skills and experience because you summarized it too the best.

They like to read the cover letter and highly appreciate to continue with the Resume to find out more.

Target achieved.

Thank you...

Thorsten V.

Greg,

Thank you for assisting me with this process.

If you have any further questions, or would like to make additional edits, please feel free to contact me.

Best Regards,
Greg P.

Greg,

Sorry for the delay. Things are crazy at work since I've been finishing up my two week notice. I start a new position Monday...less stress, less responsibility and more money.

Thanks, it looks great!

Russell C.

Hi Greg,

Overall the resume looks great. See attached my comments and changes (all tracked in MS word).

Most of the edits are to align the actual work performed and my experience, or questions around presentation and how/what to put in the document.

I am also sending back the one question on the Cover Letter.

I am expecting a linkedin profile as part of my contract as well. Will that be coming from you?

Thanks for all your help.

David L.

Thanks for this, Donna,

What I like best about the resume but even more apparent in the cover letter is that you've conveyed me as an energetic, creative person brimming over with enthusiasm.

Don't know how you managed, but you did.

Perhaps I was so bored with my other letter/resume combo (after seeing it that way for a year) that I couldn't create something fresh and exciting -- despite the fact that I consider myself a professional writer (and a pretty good liar -- I write novels, for Heaven's sake)!

Thanks again,

Laura W.

Peter,

I wanted to let you know that my resume is complete! 🙂

Debra Wheatman ended up being the writer to complete it for me. She was terrifc!!

Thank you for correcting the situation and getting me with a truly talented writer.

Constance S.

Donna,

OK... I love it...it is so much more powerful that the first one I got from the other gal.

Unbelievable!!!

I have made edits, I hope they are understandable.

Ann J.

Dear Jeanie,

Thank you very much for sending me the draft.

I am very happy with your work and it really is so much better than the version I had previously made myself.

As you recommended, I read it over a few times and am now attaching an edited version of it along with changes hi-lighted using MS word track changes.

Reshma P.

Kathy,

Wow! now I really might get looked at!

I have made a few suggestions, which are mainly fine conceptual distinctions

between your presentation and mine. . .

I think that when the tracking is removed, the third page will disappear.

You have a great creative job, unique in that you have to take x amount of information
and make it intuitively obvious and impactful.

And each person is unique, similar to how i work at my job.

Thank you very much. . .

Tom Lincoln

Thanks Dan,

The resume is fine as is. Please let me know when I'll be receiving my cover letter,


Watson O.

Dan,

I think the resume looks great. I made some minor changes like Jacksonville, FL instead of Jacksonville, TX and a minor tweak in the industry background description.

Thank you.

Jon R.

Hi Peter,

Just wanted to take the time to circle back to ensure that I communicated how pleased I am with my update resume that Jean completed for me, ahead of time last week.

She did a fabulous job and I look forward to much success with this revised version of my resume.

Kind regards,

Marilyn G.

Wendy - all I can say is "Wow!!!".

I just logged on and had a chance to look at what you did.

What a beautiful piece of work. Considering it's One in the morning here I will wait to go over this until tomorrow.

My plan is to have the redlines back to you with 48 hours, but I would prefer to make it 24 instead. I did give it a quick once over and I couldn't find anything you said out-of-line with reality; difference is you know just how to say it in order to get someone's attention.

Heck of a job, one heck of a job. I'll get back to you with the redlines very soon.

Oh, and let me say thank you very much for your efforts - great job!

Sincerely,

Harry B.

Wendy,

I have to admit the new resume is already getting hits...so Wow!!! not quite the right wage range but any attention is this market is amazing!!! So great job!!!!

I start my new job on Monday and honestly I am EXCITED>.....I have great 1st half data to post for results then I move on...But I am very much in the hunt for my next employer....

If you have a survey for your work please submit it to me when your done...as I would love to share my experience!!!!

Hope you have a great evening...

Stephanie K.

Dear Greg,

I command you for your work! I am privileged to have you as my resume writer.

Below please find some general comments, and more appear on the attached documents.

I hope I didn’t miss anything; please resend when ready.

Yours truly,

Avi S.

Greg,

Thank you for the resume proof. I think it looks really good, but I had a few tweaks in mind. One thematic shift, and then a few minor points.

It would be good if it talked to solution architecture / my being a senior architect more. It does that well, but I'm thinking just a minor shift in focus from management/sales to architecture.

Of course, feel free to get in touch if you have any questions about these, or if you want to offer alternative suggestions.

Also, the cover letter looks great!

Thanks for that too!

Thanks,

Brian L.

Jeanie,

Great!!

Thank you Jean, good job. Very much appreciated.

Wish me continued luck.

I have had some great opportunities due to your writing.

Regards,

Marilyn G

Wendy,

I reviewed your draft and provided some changes and responded to your comments on the draft.

The document is terrific.

I’m impressed that you were able to pull together so much information from the documents that I sent to you.

Other than the few corrections and one comment, I think you’re pretty close.

Thanks for the help,

Gordon D.

Greg,

I'm quite pleased with the proof.

I do have 2 minor changes in the attached.

Regards,

Martha H.

Hi Greg,

Resume looks great.

I have attached the Word document with track changes on. Looks like the track changes inserted a blank page. I'll leave it to you to handle the formatting.

I have no feedback for the cover letter, looks great.

Thanks,

Perry Y.

Deb,

Thank you for your effort. The only change I saw was an addition of "The" prior to Dysfunctional Family on the page indicating the classes I have given.

Other than that, it looks very good.

You do very good work!

Thanks again,

Cliff D.

Dan:

I have reviewed my resume and tracked the changes for ease of edited.

The edits are my thoughts and comments based upon my review. Either except or reject the changes. There are not that many.

I liked what I saw and believe that the project portfolio would be a nice addition at a potential interview as we previously discussed. Should it be referenced in the resume somewhere?

As you pointed out, I tried to delete as much as I added but not sure how it will turn out after your review. Basically, I eliminated the additional training section because I would need to be refreshed or brought current with those certifications anyway.

Look forward to seeing the next version along with a cover letter.

Peter P.

Greg,

It looks good to me; just couple of comments for you to look at after all you are the expert.

Cover letter looks good to me as well unless you think some can be improved.

Haider A.

Dan, What an incredibly concise, detailed and well flowing resume.

I have made a couple of changes all on the second page.

Warm Regards,

David H.

Dan,

My goodness!!!

This exceeded my expectation 1000 fold, from the lay out to the wording.

I'm truly impressed and completely satisfied with the product.

Thank you so much.

Lee H.

Hello Peter,

Thomas Wolfe has finished my resume and I wanted to send it to you along with my original resume. I would like to get your feed back.

I have also attached my current cover letter and would like you feed back on that as well, if I could.

Thanks so much and Thomas was/is great to work with.

Robert R.

Thank you, Peter.

You are an honorable man, and your consideration and integrity are very much appreciated.

I will most certainly recommend your company to others.

Best regards,

Tim B.

Rosie:

This looks fine and as far as I can tell - accurate.

Thank you so much for your great work.

Sincerely,

Rae T.

Hello Rita,

Just 3 letters... WOW !... amazing when someone other than yourself can portray a life at work in such a simple but utterly professional way I am speechless.

Thank you very very much for such an excellent job.

I will post it right away on my Ladder’s profile...

Best Regards,

George A

Hi Debra.

Ahhh. Thank you. I feel so much better.

I have just read your documents and am very happy. I quit my job today so it looks like I will have more time to work on this with you, but I need some time to digest both what you have provided, as well as, my new job-less state.

I'll try to get back with you in the next couple of days. The one thing that I'm not sure about - although it is nice - is the box of strengths in the upper-right. It might be to "artsy" for me. If you have another format that I could also see, that would be great.

I'll also work on providing clarification for the items you requested.

Thank you! Thank you! I am so happy to see you and I are on the right track.

Constance S.

Gregory,

Thank you for getting this done for me. It really looks great.

I only had a couple of things.

Do I need to include some additional years of history? I worked for XYZ Company in Atlanta from 1993 to 1996 as a pre-sales technical consultant. Before that I worked for ABC Company as a project manager from 1988 to 1993.

I don't know if this is important, but it shows just how far back my experience goes.

Please let me know what you think.

Thanks!

Alan M.

Greg,

Looks good. Made a couple of minor edits on the attached. We are done with the
resume:-)).

When applying for jobs online I noticed most of the sites require a 1200 character or less description of your duties, roles, responsibilities and outcomes as well as attaching your resume.

Do you write something like that?

Thanks,

Mary G.

Greg,

I have added some comments and made some minor changes for review.

Overall it looks good.

Thanks,

Mahesh S.

Greg,

This looks very good to me.

I just made a couple of suggestions and changes.

Thank you very much.

Ed DeH.

Greg,

You did a great job with my resume & cover letter!!!

Made a few edits though. The main edit is deleting the last bullet regarding my nomination for 2 awards. Showed it to someone who thought the nominations were old and wondered what I had done since then.

I like having them because it illustrates good skills when you consider I was a telecommuter who worked from home in LA most of the time and traveled to SF every few months or as needed. What do you think?

Thanks again for a great job!

Mary G.

Hello Wendy,

Wow. . .it is amazing to see my life on paper! Thank you. The resume looks amazing. I spent some time filling in the questions but have a few more to look into for accuracy.

The graphic designer in me forced me to make a few tweeks graphically, so I attached a copy for your review. I am not sure if font sizes, etc. have a history of attracting or distracting a potential employer, so please give me your feedback. Also, I am a MAC user, and the format made the document go to three pages, so some of the changes (i.e. Font size, reduced a line so it would be on one line) were to shorten it to two pages.

I will be taking your advice and opening a new e-mail account just for resume coordination and I will send out one with a CA address and one with an Atlanta address. . .being bi-coastal allows me be both places!

Thanks so much Wendy. I can see why you are so busy. . .amazing how you are able to screen all of the information sent and really get me.

Best,

Karen S. D.

Gregory,

I am very happy with this. Can you (or do I) post it on the ladders?

May the road rise to meet you.

Grateful

Miriam O'D.

Jeanie,

I wanted to let you know that I think you did a fantastic job on Jillian’s resume.

Thank you for all of your help and I apologize for the misunderstanding about the communication.

Peter, I will be sure to recommend your company’s services to anyone and feel free to use me as a reference.

Regards,

Janis R,.

Hello Wendy,

Things are going well. Out of the rushed resume blitz prior to my Mexico trip (sent around 12), I had responses when I got back that led 4 phone interviews (two have moved to in-person interviews at 3 companies already.

I’ve really just started looking, and the response has been good.

Thank you for the work on my resume – well worth it.

Thanks again,

John L.

Hi Dan,

Based on comments from my mentor, I made a few tweaks but changed very little from your excellent work. Final version attached.

You may tell The Ladders that I am officially delighted by the resume!

Thanks again for all your hard work on this.

Elissa R.

Hi Wendy,

I'm really satisfied with the result, you've done a great job.

It's been my pleasure working with you.
My wife sends her greetings!

Regards,

Daniel D.

Many thanks Deb,

These read well and provide a true and strong image of what I am and what I have accomplished.

Many thanks for helping me with these documents.

Best wishes

Bertil L.

Hi Jeanie,

Hope you had a nice weekend as well.

Thanks for the draft, looks and reads wonderfully well.

Kind Regards,

Paul L.

Dear Jeanie,

It looks great – actually it looks amazing.

Thank you so much, you definitely have the gift.

Best regards,

Janni B.

Hi Jeanie,

I've carefully reviewed the revised CV you prepared and it's perfect !

I don't need modifications or changes.

Thank you again for your high-quality work, I appreciate it a lot !

I wish you a great week,

Kindest Regards,

Luca M.

Wendy,

The resume and cover letter looks great!

I want to thank you for all the excellent work! I think we've got it.

Thanks,

Jim F.

Debra,

Thank you very much - I like how you handled my several times with XYZ Company. And believe the third time was worth it - my best
resume yet.

Thanks again,

Susan B.

Hi Greg:

Thanks for your good work!

Attached are the items I noticed.

Thanks Again!

Gordon K.

Greg,

First.., a very nice job, thanks.

I have noted a few items for us to consider in review of this draft (track changes on).

Included in the set of attachments are my versions of the documents with review comments, marks, and a short slide set that provides pictures (+ speaker notes) and may put the assets and channel and process skills into clearer context for you.

I know this is extra review but it is your fault :), you did such a nice job of distilling the rest I wanted you to have everything I can lend to the process you may squeeze extra value from.

Look forward to your next draft.

Regards,

George McM.

Tom,

Looks great.

You did an excellent job. Exceeded my expectations. Have a couple of questions that I would like to ask you. When is a good time to call you?

Bill F.

Jeanie,

I will probably like to talk about a few more tweaks but the resume was awesome!

I wanted to let you know I took it to my final rounds on Tuesday and got the job - I wasn't really even looking actively but the resume must have sealed the deal - it was for significantly more money!

I definitely would like to refer you to a few friends ...Wharton makes their MBAs use the resume template (during MBA recruiting) I've been using for a few years and many still use it.

You saved me so much time! thanks again

Have a great weekend.

Emily S.

Peter,

I'd like to add you to my professional network on LinkedIn.

I met you through The Ladders.

Thank you for passing me on to Dan Dorotik to do my new resume.

Wilmya G.

Hi Peter!

I just wanted to touch base with you regarding my resume.

First, Dan Doratak did an amazing job and really saw my vision and what I needed. So I wanted to let you know that.

I remember you telling me that your service also offers job finding services and I wanted to inquire about what specifically you offer. Is it a headhunter type service? Please let me know what you have to offer and the fees for these services.

Thank you very much!

Nicole M.

Pierre,

YOU'RE WORTH YOUR WEIGHT IN GOLD!

Oh my Gosh!!! I think of the hours & hours (I have a whole box of print-outs of how to write resumes, info on companies, sample resumes.....)

You are brilliant!!! I don't know where you came from...but... you obviously have had an incredible, successful career(s.) WOW! ...

Well...client just called..I'll be back with more responses...

Thanks Pierre

Bonnie B.

Hi Jane and Jeannie,

After reading these documents multiple times, I think they are finally ready for prime time.

I want to thank Jeannie for the awesome work on these documents, they look as good as they’re going to get.

The next step would be for you to send these out to a targeted audience based on your Resume Machine capability as discussed with Jane earlier in the week.

Regards,

Ian W.

Peter,

Jeanie finished my resume and I wanted to let you know that she did a great job and I was very happy with it.

Would Jeanie be the writer for the cover letter as well?

Thanks,

Dave C.

Hi, Greg,

This version looks really good and I like it a lot.

I would like the following modifications made, and then we can proceed:

Cover letter - The application in PRO is an existing app so I took out the word "new", and changed "design" to "enhance".

Resume -
A couple of my own suggested changes for the resume seemed a bit too technical and narrow, so I either took it out, or modified them with a broader expression.

I appreciate your help.

Thanks,

Angela H.

Dear Kathy:

Wow, I love it!! Amazing design and thought process!

I have two Quick questions for you.

1) In trying to better understand the "resume grammar", is it proper to
leave out articles such as "a" or "an"?

2) And in some cases, should I include changes to verb tense or are all of
the verb tenses correct and I should just leave them all alone knowing you
are better at this than I?

I do not want to attempt to correct something that should not be corrected.

Nate S.

Hi Wendy,

Just wanted to pass along the good news.

I received lots of interviews after posting my revised resume.

I found a great opportunity after the 5th company I interviewed with and accepted their offer.

Your help was invaluable in landing the position.

Thank you!

Regards,

Peter H.

Peter,

First, I wanted to let you know how impressed I am with Jeanie’s work.

She’s a talented and very effective writer whose work exceeded my expectations. Congrats and thank you!

With your permission, I’d like her to do a cover letter and a LinkedIn bio for me.

I’ve already made payment arrangement on your site. Please let me know if you need any additional info.

Warm regards,

Philippe S.

Hello Dan,

I have reviewed the resume and it looks great.

You did a fantastic job condensing a whole lot of information without leaving anything out.

I have no deletions or additions to the draft copy so if we can replace your copy with the origional resume that I uploaded several weeks ago that would be great.

if i need to do anything on my end to get this accomplished please just let me know.

Thanks again for the great job.

You did with the information I provided to you!

John U.

Tammy,

Just wanted to drop you a line to say a word of thanks.

Before I had my resume done I was getting almost NO interest by any employers.

Since you rebuilt it and I reposted it on various job sites my phone has been ringing off the hook with recruiters. I now have my pick of jobs.

I am so happy I made the investment in you and your teams’ expertise.

One very happy customer!

Lisa P.

Thanks Dan!

They all look great. I will be sure to tell Peter what a great job you did.

Thanks again for all the hard work.

Best Regards,

Victor G.

Hi Dan,

As usual, you've done a perfect job; I like it. No need for another draft.

Just to let you now, ever since you created my resume a couple years ago, I've only sent them to four companies. All four companies/recruiters called me and scheduled for an interview.

Thank you and have a great day!

Mark M.

Hi Freddie,

I hope you hear this from most people, but I can not tell you how much I appreciate your critique yesterday.

You have simply amazing insight. You are frank and straight-forward and that is an excellent way to get a point across. I am the same way so I can really appreciate it.

As I said, I am just now beginning to look at the market and I am sure I will be needing your services soon.

You are right at the top of my contact list.

Thanks again and take care.

Curt S.

Hi Kathy,

Thanks for your e-mail and the lovely work you have done on my CV.

I almost did not recognise myself as I was reading the completed CV.

You have put into words all the things I meant to say but did not how to express.

Thanks very much.

Please find attached the "revised" copy as you requested.

Thanks a lot, do have a lovely weekend and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best Regards

Yetunde I.

Hi Wendy,

I've read the initial resume draft and cover letter and came away very impressed with the high quality of work.

You did an amazing job!

Per directions, I've made changes and supplied answers on the attached document.

Regards,

Peter H.

Hi Greg,

Just want to start by saying that I am very satisfied with the work thus far and the direction this is taking.

I do have a few clarifications and questions about some of the working on three items. I turned on "Track Changes" and added comments to make it easier for you to see my questions/comments.

I'm anxiously looking forward to the finished product.

Please let me know if I have communicated my questions appropriately and accurately.

Best regards.

Paul S.

Dan,

I want to thank you again for developing my resume.

I thought I had a pretty good resume to begin with but I was wrong. I now understand the need to hire a professional resume writer to do this for me.

After reviewing my resume last evening, this new resume leaves the reader wanting to know more specific details and I feel this will get me the interview.

I believe this resume took quite a bit of your time to develop and I truly appreciate your efforts.

I look forward to receiving my new cover letter and starting the job search process.

Quite a few of my co-workers are looking for a new position due to our new owners bringing in their own people for current positions.

I would like to forward your contact information if you approve. Please let me know as 2 of my friends read my new resume and want to contact you soon.

Thank you,

Mike T.

Hi Wendy,

Wonderful!

As far as I’m concerned yes, my order is delivered!

I have actually posted this resume on a couple of my sites and am adding this to the rest of my postings.

So far so good, I’ve had a couple of calls about the new resume and I’m using this new resume on some interviews that I had submitted my old resume too.

Thank you very much for your excellent work J

Michael P.

Dan,

WOW, you are very good!

I do not see anything I would like changed.

I completely understand the need to hire a professional to prepare a resume now.

Thank you!

Mike T.

Jeanie,

I am ecstatically impressed. Using "track changes" I answered the two questions you had as well as making a few clarification edits.

Overall, it looks FABULOUS!

Thanks so much!

Martie N.

Greg,

Attached is my revised version with very few changes.

I read, proof read and printed and read again, overall, you did a great job.

Sami A.

Kathy,

Thank you so much! It says everything I was not saying myself in a resume.

And you seemed to really capture my style.

Amazing.

Thank you!

Kate S.

Dear Rosie,

Good morning! I hope you enjoyed your weekend.

Thank you very much for the your work.

WOW! You've taken my resume to the next level with the succinct and professional craftmanship.

I am sincerely grateful.

Angie M.

Greg,

I apologize for sending you the incorrect version of my resume. Your promptness as always is greatly appreciated..

Your work product is very impressive.

My only concern is the formatting of the knowledge list in the profile section.

I am relying on your expertise. Please do what you consider to be the best option for me.

Many thanks,

Phillip M.

Gregory:

My initial review has found no issues and simply, this is fantastic.

I am going to have a couple of other sets of eyes look at it today, and will get back to you with any issues.

Thanks!!!

Michael D.

Hello Dan,

I have reviewed the resume and it looks great. You did a fantastic job condensing a whole lot of information without leaving anything out.

I have no deletions or additions to the draft copy so if we can replace your copy with the origional resume that I uploaded several weeks ago that would be great.

If I need to do anything on my end to get this accomplished please just let me know.

Thanks again for the great job You did with the information I provided to you!

John U.

Greg,

Let me first say: thanks so much for the attention to detail and great job on both the Resume and Cover Letter. I really appreciate it.

Initially, I think I only have a few changes. The most major of these centers around the "Interim VP of Technology"-related verbiage. Although I served in this capacity at StrategyOne during most of my first year, this was not an official title that I held - for us to present it in that way would not be representative of the truth. I think we should definitely highlight the work, but we shouldn't attribute titles to me that I never officially held. Sorry for any confusion I may have caused in relaying this info initially.

Beyond this, I rephrased a few things in the Profile. Other than that, I think we're getting very close to a final version.

Thanks again - let me know what you think here. I've attached the updated documents with my changes in red.

Thanks,

Johnny L.

Dan,

Cover letter reads great.

I have to say the process and the resulting resume/cover letter proved to be a wonderful exercise in helping me focus on my strengths.

Thank you!

Bob H.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for resending the draft of my resume. It looks good, I have made some minor changes. I have attached my edits.

I have one question on the size of this resume, is it the standard size. My concern is regarding details. Is there a chance that I will be asked for a detailed resume?

Thanks,

Rao B.

Pierre,

I am so very pleased with this draft. It is very professional and I love the initial impression it gave me at first glance. Love it!

I'm resending you the draft, and I've answered your questions within the
comment boxes …

I especially appreciated how you emphasized "global" and "international" expertise to help make my resume pop for potential international employers.

Great idea, and I thought you did it very well.

Looking forward to your reply,

Heather B.

Hi Peter,

You asked me to cc you the email with my revisions to the draft so you could follow the progress, and I failed to do so.

Here is a copy of the email I just sent to Donna.

She has done an awesome job on my resume.

I don’t know how she did it with the information she had available to her, but she did and I am pleased so far!

Patty C.

Greg,

The documents look great. I just make one revision on the resume - it is highlighted.

Regarding formatting, please check to ensure that the formatting is correct. I say that because the “Areas of Expertise” bullets had green lines under all of the text.

All else looks fine, please call me tomorrow so we can discuss.

Thanks again,

Dino A.

Peter,

I got the final product from Freddie this morning and am very pleased with it.

She was very professional and did spend a lot of time trying to understand my needs. I am more than happy to recommend her and your firm.

She also explained the email blast service and I am considering to do it for recruiters and venture capital segments.

Thank you in advance.


Thomas K.

Dan,

Thanks, I just went to FirstPro Inc. (headhunters) and the resume helped.

Thanks

Jason W.

Hi Dan,

I understand from Russ at Ladders that you will have my cover letter today, just wanted to see if that was your intention.

By the way, the resume' is terrific I am getting great feedback.

Thanks

Regards,
Ken K.

Dan,

I really appreciate it. You have certainly equipped me quite well :-)).

All the best,

Paul J.

Dan,

Thanks for the draft. Great work.

Almost didn't recognize who it was.

Draft with my comments is attached.

Schiller C.

Dan,

The cover letter is phenominal as is.

Thank you so much for greatly exceeding my expectations with these professional documents that you have created for me.

Seeing the product made me understand just how big a leap it was to get my resume to the next level.

I will definitely recommend your services.


Regards,
Nathan H.

Dan,

I'm extremely impressed on the improvement of my resume. I couldn't come close to that. Thank You.

Lee B.

Hi Dan,

That's great. Thank you very much, both the revised resume and cover letter are excellent. Looking forward to recieving lots of contacts.

Regards,

Keith R.

Hi Dan,

I have reviewed the cover letter and see no changes necessary. It fits my needs exactly.

Thank you for your hard work and dedication to my resume and cover letter. I appreciate your efforts.

Nicole M.

Peter,

Greg Faherty prepared my resume. My previous resume was self-written and required the reader to sort through paragraphs of mess just to see what I did.

Greg gave my resume a complete makeover.

He’s an absolute expert when it comes to reading what you do and converting it to language that makes companies desire to interview.

I looked at the end result Greg provided and thought that this is exactly what I do in a language that I could not possibly have created on my own.

For example, I submitted my resume—exactly as prepared by Greg—for a position via e-mail. In 27 minutes, I received a telephone call from the recruiter. “I just got your resume and I want to talk to you.”

I don’t know what a reasonable turnaround time should be; but, I have never experienced this before. I know for certain that is happened because Greg prepared my resume. It never happened with my self-prepared document.

I am a satisfied client and have prepared this unsolicited recommendation.

Ken W.

Good afternoon Ms. Moretti.

Let me begin by extending a great big THANK YOU for the work that you did taking my varied professional experience and condensing it into a resume and cover letter that captures what I had hoped to achieve but was unable.

I have attached edited and proofed copies of the cover letter and resume. I did incorporate a few changes. However, I will defer to your professional judgment if the changes that I have made make my resume and/or cover letter less likely to be reviewed or searched.

Thanks again for your efforts.

Kind Regards,

Scott B.

Gregory,

I think you have done a wonderful job. I have enclosed a reviewed version.

Thanks,

Harvey S.

Peter,

While everyone has the time and inclination to share and pursue the negative side of any business equation, few find the time or inclination to share views on the positive side of the ledger.

I want to share a few impressions about the resume writing process as facilitated by OpsLadders.

First, I had my resume critiqued. The process was professional, thorough and expeditious.

Second, I wanted to be certain of the services to be performed. I had a lengthy conversation about the service that I could expect. This conversation did convince me to pursue having my CV rewritten. As I considered the process of having my resume ‘rewritten’ by a professional, I was riddled with skepticism. That skepticism had nothing to do with the cost, it had to do with the feeling that I couldn’t envision how the myriad of disparate achievements from my career could be brought together on one CV logically and cohesively.

Next, I spoke with Tom Albano explaining my goals and how I wanted my resume to convey my unique business experience. Tom took the time to listen to me and create an exceptional resume. Obviously, the process took a little time and Tom took the time to make it right.

Never did I feel, as I expected to, that my ‘detail’ comments were unimportant. We had several beneficial and productive conversations before the resume was finalized.

Even at that point, Tom made clear that if I had a future need, give him a ring.

The entire process of working with Tom was seamless, productive and expeditious.

In these difficult and demanding job seeking times, it is reassuring to know that there is a ‘team’ behind me working with me toward success.

Sincerely yours,

Brian A. V.

Greg,

Please see the attached resume and cover letter with my comments and edits.

These documents look great. thank you.

I look forward to reading your response to my edits.

Regards,

Patrick S.

Hello Greg,

Just wanted to write and let you know the resume rewrite you did for me worked and I did land several interviews based on the excellent work you did for me in recrafting my resume.

I finally did land the job I am going to be starting soon based on this resume.

Thanks for all your hard work in getting this done for me.

Regards,

John D.

Greg,

Thank you for your frank reply.

After additional consideration, I would like for us to go back to the format you believe is most appropriate. I have made one other change (the “k” in Taskforce was missing).

Once this is complete, I think we should be finished.

Thank you,

Thaddeus F.

Dear Freddie,

I wanted to email you my deepest thanks for your excellent work on my resume.

I submitted it with an email of inquiry to the Vail, CO position and today spoke with the recruiter who was very excited about my credentials and I am advancing to the next phase of consideration.

Because of the way you beautifully organized my background/skills, I was able to present myself easily (diving off from the simplicity you built into the information). And they were able to quickly see how my background met their screening criteria.

In the past, starting with that jumbled, complex resume meant I started in a catch up position from the beginning (explaining so much).

The elegance of the resume, to the point, was a joyful diving off point for me.

I was too close to myself to really be objective in writing a resume and your objectivity was the perfect fit for me.

In previous email exchanges I asked about your comment/offer re:coaching to deal with the brief tenure with the one organization that was my first/problematic...but I have not heard back from you on that offer (remember, you felt that the tenure was so brief that it wasn't significant to mention in the resume and said there was a certain way I should deal with it during interview).

Can you let me know how to access coaching on that point. While I am experienced in interviews, the brief tenure experience was my first ever and I am not sure how to handle it in interview.

Again, I thank you for you excellent service and I am still in the process of recovering those files; hoping to be able to get the rest of the information to you next week or so. I do want to finish that document even though it will not be important for this opportunity.

Let me know re: the coaching.

Sarah W.

Greg,

The new resume got me an interview and I got the job!

Thank you!!!

Kim W.

Hi Greg,

I want to first thank you fro all our hard work. The new format looks totally different and I am excited to try it out on a few postions that I recently found.

I did read through the document and there were a few corrections which I highlighted in red.

I am also including the original worksheet that I sent you. Its hard to believe that you were able to condense 27 pages down to 3. If you need any additional information please let me know.

Thanks agin for all the time you have put in to this document.

Brian S.

Dear Ms. Wendy Haylett,

I thank you very much for the final resume and cover letter.

It is now perfect, and I am satisfied with the excellect documents.

I have no further questions, and I am sure that this is the final.

Thank you again for your writings.

Nakamas. I

Greg,

You did a fantastic job of highlighting my experience, skills, and accomplishments.

I believe this resume will open some excellent doors for me.

I have made some changes, mostly cosmetic.

Please let me know if you think any of them are inappropriate, redundant, or unnecessary.

Your next version will be the final one, so I thank you in advance for your efforts.

Regards,

Michael S.

Hi Rosie,

I went over the resume twice and it seems like you have done a marvelous job.

It does not require any changes from me so you can send me the final copy.

Thank you.

Shan M.

Hi Peter,

Just finished the resume process with Deb Whitman.

She did a fabulous job.

Per your email on Ladders I'm linking to you.

Darren C.

Greg:

Thanks for the great resume update!

I have made some of the updates and corrections to the draft -- attached.

Kim W.

Greg,

I have reviewed the documents. I only detected one correction.

I am very happy with what you have done.

I hadn't written a resume in so long, it is now apparent to me that I needed the help of a resume writting professional.

Rob S.

Greg,

I have attached a copy of my resume with a few changes highlighted in Red.

Overall I have received very favorable compliments on the format from colleagues, friends and HR professionals that I asked to review it.

Any other thoughts or suggestions are welcome, I need to stand out as an IT Professional, especially in this day and age.

I appreciate your efforts, again, it looks great!

Rick H.

Wendy,

I am writing to you with enormous appreciation and admiration for your hard work. I am very grateful...THANK YOU!

I have sent out my Resume and Cover letter to various job openings I have found online and am now just waiting for any responses.

You will be among the first to know if I land any of these jobs.

Best regards,

Jose L.

Thanks Pierre.

I appreciate your efforts.

I was interviewed today on a quality job after applying yesterday.

That's the magic of the correct words.

Keep a good eye open for jobs in Columbus for me.

All the best,

Foster W.

Greg,

I have finished proofing my résumé and cover letter. I like both documents.

I believe you captured well my professional expertise on the résumé. I agree with you when you suggest that I should tailor the CL to positions I apply for.

I attached the revised résumé for your comments. I followed your editing guidelines while proofing the document. Please, take a look on the suggested changes and let me know if you see fit.

Again, thank you for your hard work.

Regards,

Fábio P.

Greg,

I was pleased with the first draft of my resume. I turned on the tracker function in Word. Please see the minor changes.

In my current role, there are three directors over the application area because of the number of facilities and staff. As far as the number of staff I supervise and applications supported, that is correct. I did remove the word "all" in the cover letter.

I'm a non-voting / resource on the IS Steering. Is the word "active" member of IS Steering too strong?

As a project manager, the physicians didn't work for me. We made recommendations and consulted them.

I made some minor changes on page 2.

I had several people review this and they thought it sounded good.

Randy J.

Pierre,

Wow. Nice job rookie! 🙂

One change. LinkedIn summary. paragraph 4 sentence 1. Suggest a period after the word "... experiences". I will save he resume and cover letter in word format and await the text versions.

I understand you will change my LinkedIn profile ...

Thanks very much, Pierre. Have a great evening.

Foster W.

P.S. I'd be delighted to work in Columbus and have season tickets to the Blue Jackets so please keep an eye open for me in your community and surrounding area.

Wendy,

Wow! Exactly what I was hoping for.

I read the resume several times and emailed it to my personal references for feedback.
(BTW, all we impressed!)

I had a question about the opening job title and summary description wording, semantics mainly.

I've attached the resume with track changes and comments (yellow highlight area) enabled.

Thank you!

Ed M.

Wendy,

I asked and you delivered. I got my "Ferrari" resume. Thank you!

How is your hip? I hope you are in a strengthening phase now.

Thank you for being part of my team. "You ROCK".

Tell your boss if you have one, that I think you are EXCELLENT! Not only writing but capturing the vision and outstanding communication. Even under unforeseen pressure and extra obligations. Also hats off to whoever paired you with me as well.

Looking forward to the summary and not rushing,

I like your high quality
product.

Thankful.

Dr. Michael F.

Greg,

Thanks for your work. My mark-ups/comments are attached.

Doug H.

Greg,

I've reviewed the resume and the cover letter. Both are very well done.

You've put in a lot of effort in to it and it shows. It's obvious that you took the time to review my old resume as well as the questionnaire. Thank you.

I only have one change on page two of the resume. The change is in red.
I added the word documentation and abbreviated the word database to DB
to keep the spacing the same. Access to the application documentation database on the AS/400 was integrated into the QA tracking application so that the programmers did not have to exit the Notes client to access
it on-line.

Great job!

Thanks again,

Larry W K.

Greg,

Thank you for creating a resume and cover letter for me.

I have reviewed both and have attached a few minor edits (see attached).

Thank you!

Caitlin P.

Peter,

Jeanie, gave it a quick look. Overall, looks great!

Saw a couple of minor edits. Will go over more carefully then send you some additional thoughts.

Thanks for the quick turn around!

Frank K.

Greg,

The resume and cover letter look great, thanks for the time and effort put into it.

The only two changes I see is one on the resume itself is that the company name needs a "minor" adjustment, and the second being on the cover letter that we make sure that we know that Cable and Wireless is the name of the company.

James F.

Peter:

Greg has done a great job creating my new resume, cover letter and LinkedIn profile. I will be posting the LinkedIn profile this weekend and start sending out the resume and cover letter Monday.

I am interested in hearing more about the various services you offer to get my resume in the hands of hiring officials and executive recruiters.

Thanks.

Bill L.

Peter,

Freddie did a super job with my resume...She is currently working on draft corrections.

Can you tell me again how you can help me with linked in and getting my resume in front of recruiters.

Thanks,

Neil S.

Greg,

I found only very minor edits; this looks great.

Thank you,

Joan F.

Hi Pierre -

I love the formatting, it certainly has a pop now that I never would have expected! ...

I'll have a chance to go through everything in
detail tonight.

Thanks again, it's really looking great!

Best Regards,

Jim P.

Greg,

You did a fine job, I want to hire this guy!

Very few changes in your originals, copies of Rev 1 attached to this message.

Can’t wait to try it out!

Michael K.

Gregory,

Please see attached edits to resume and cover leter...and advise.

GREAT JOB by the way.

Thanks,

David D.

Freddie,

Thank you very much. I was away from email this week-end due to snow etc.

I am totally fine with it as-is.

I think you did a great job and I am very appreciative to have it just when I need it.

Many SINCERE thanks.

Susan M.

Greg:

Thanks for your hard work. I am very pleased.

I used "track changes" to make edits to the resume. I only made changes where there were inaccuracies that needed correcting. However, in several places, I included a question mark; this meant that I was suggesting a change, but if you, as the expert, know better than I do that what you provided is what I should use, then I yield to you to provide what is best for me.

The cover letter is fine and does not need any changes.

Thanks again for your work. I look forward to hearing back from you soon.

Bill L.

Tom,

I cannot thank you enough for the professionalism you have shown me in updating my resume. In addition to the timely phone call and emails, you have produced a vastly superior resume than I could have expected.

You went far beyond expectations by not only updating the resume to reflect my last career, but by revamping the entire thing into a professional and concise piece that I am confident to send to prospective employers.

You have my sincere gratitude and I will by all means refer you to anyone I know needing resume help.

Thanks again,

Justin I.

Dear Jeanie

I am OK with this final revision, please just send me the remaining file (LinkedIn), but believe me you have done a great job in my resume.

Thank you,

Roberto L.

Peter,

My resume is completed by Jeanie Oscarson and at the moment I have had 4 companies contact me, 3 recruiters out of these - 2 phone interviews with two different companies and well on my way for the face to face interview with both!!

You provide an invaluable service..

Khalilah W.


Dan,

The Cover Letter looks great. Thank you for all you have done to assist me in my endeavor to find a new job opportunity.

I believe the resume and cover letter you have created on my behalf will work wonders for me now and in the future.

Thanks again.

Chris D.

Kathy,

WOW, VERY IMPRESSIVE.

I can’t thank you enough for the outstanding job you have done with creating a resume that projects a clear picture of my professional experience and accomplishments.

I have attached the resume with a couple of revisions.

Thanks again,

Mike S.

Dear Jean & Jane:

I want to both thank you for the outstanding and very professional work performed on my Resume !

I'll be reviewing it in further detail and let Jean know ASAP if minor adjustments or changes are required to make it look even better.

After having agreed on the final version, I'd appreciate also having the Cover Letter and Linkedin Bio to complement my Resume, hopefully I can start 2010 very well prepared.

Once again, thank you for your effort, dedication and attention to detail, it really has made a huge difference on the final product.

Best Regards,

Marc D.

Greg,

Thanks for your effort, I think the documents look great. I have made some corrections using the Track Changes feature.

Thanks for all your help with my resume.

Fred R.

Greg,

Thank you, of all the resumes I've written or had written, I think you've really managed to capture what I've been doing over the past 10 years.

Attached is the resume with my edits.

Thanks again.

Nestor C.

Pierre,

I really like the look & flow of the resume.

There are parts that really captured better than I did the essence. Here are a few things I would like to modify ...

Otherwise, I am very happy with the product & would like to review the next versions.

Best,

Kris G.

Peter:

Tell Rosie thank you for me, she did a great job without having much to work with for my nephew.

Rgds,

Mike G.

Dear Rosie:

I have not made many changes in the resume. The only thing I have really changed is that I changed the word to Broncos.

I just want to let you know that I am very impressed with the resume and cover letter. They both look amazing!

Sincerely,

Matthew C.

Hello Freddie,

I've taken a look at the documents you sent. They both look terrific. I think we have final versions now.

I look forward to receiving the final versions of the cover etc.

Regards,

Kiran K.

Rosie,

I have read the proof carefully and made some changes.

I really like what you have done and look forward to the final.

Janine P.

Rosie,

I have proof read my resume and only have minor changes that need to be made.

It turned out great!

Cathy A.

Rosie,

I love what you've done so far! VERY impressive.

I edited just a few things, and wrote in a bunch of stuff from the produce business I owned in Florida.

I'll be looking forward to see what you do with it!

Thanks for your hard work!

Paul H.

Rosie,

It looks awesome! I made some minor changes as you will see.

Thank you,

Joe B.

Peter,

Thank you for the speedy follow-up with Jeanie! As I was calling you she was sending me an email...please know I was concerned.

I am very pleased with the final product. She was very lovely to work with and I will thank her myself, but wanted to know first hand my appreciation....did you have a moment to look at the final copy?

Warm regards,

Geri B.

Hi Donna,

First (of many, probably) questions....is there somewhere in the letter that I should put something about keeping this confidential, as I don't want my current employer to know I am seeking other opportuntiies?

Take care!

And I should say, I really like your work....I'd hire me in a heart beat looking at how you've built me up!

Its an "up" to come home after a tough day at work and read it- yeah!

Sincerely,

Donna O.


Thanks Donna!

I'm finishing up the worksheet today and will send it over with everything else you've already got. Glad that you are excited!

The last time you did my resume I got an offer that was one of my favorite and most fulfilling jobs of all time so hopefully it will be the same this time 🙂

Clara F.

You're awesome Donna.

Hope the travels were safe. Thank you again so much. If I have any questions, I will most definitely reach out.

You've been such a pleasure to work with.

Kindest regards (and have a great day!)

Beth C.

Hi Wendy,

Just wanted to give you an update – I received 3 job offers in the past week! 2 are contract/consulting assignments and one is permanent.

I’m waiting on compensation package and then will be making a decision by Friday.

The jobs came via networking with friends, but I did use my new resume, so I believe it was a great product!

If only I found you a year ago 😉

Wishing you all the best!

Thank you!

Stacy P.

Jeanie,

I am so impressed!!! There were only a few changes. I look forward to the final document!!!

Thanks,

Khalilah W.

Hi Peter,

Yes I would like the cover letter, I will proceed accordingly. I must admit that the service is worth it, excellent job done by Jeanie.

Thanks and regards,

Angeles P.

Thank you Jane.

It was a pleasure working with you and Jeanie as well.

I would definitely recommend you my associates.

Kennith J.

Greg,

Just so you know, I had my wife and daughter read your version of my resume and they were blown away!

My daughter said she now understands what I do even though she knows nothing about project management.

Nice work!

I’ll wait to hear from you.

Thank you,

Gary H.



Greg,

Overall, I am happy with your efforts.

I never liked reviewing chronological resumes, preferring a functional focus, but I wasn’t hiring me. In fact, while I’ve done a lot of recruitment, I’ve never actually looked for a job before so this is an exciting new adventure.

Please do another pass to pick up any style or other errors I may have introduced. I’m looking forward to hitting the road with this material.

Thanks,

Tim M.

Pierre -

My apologies for the delay in responding. I've had a recent death in the family and have been out of town.

The resume looks great and the cover
letter looks fine.

August F.

Pierre,

Everything looks great. I don't see how I could ask for any better.

I can always insert info in the cover letter to tailor it to certain companies or head hunters.

Thank you so very much. My confidence level
has just gotten a boost.

Paul B.

Pierre,

I like it!!

I made a few more edits.......I would appreciate your comments.....

Thanks,

Barbara R.

Dan,

Both the resume & cover letter look excellent.

If you can please experiment with fitting the "PLANNING RELOCATION" statement (per our earlier phone conversation) for any promising out-of-state positions I may find, it will mean a lot!

Thanks very much again for your services,

Tom E.

Greg

I have noted two changes indicated in bold red. Both are in the experience areas.

Sorry if that was not clear.

I am sure you can incorporate these minor changes easily, otherwise it looks great!

Thank you,

Daniel H.

Hi Donna!

I have started sending out the revised resume to those that I had sent my old one to. The reaction has been very positive thus far.

A couple of CEOs have commented very positively and the GC of a public company said it was one of the best he has seen.

Thanks for your assistance in making it so.

All the best,

Hiram E.

Greg,

This looks great. Thanks.

I have two minor edits. The edit is on page one is a suggestion. The edit on page two is a correction.

Thanks again,

Jerry B.

Greg,

Thanks much. Looks very good.

I’ve got a few questions on each document, which I’ve noted using the Comment feature of Word. Let me know your feedback and we can go from there.

Thanks,

Jon H.

Kathy:

I have been busy so I apologize that I didn't get back to you earlier but the resume and letter looks good.

I appreciate your help and responsiveness.

Thanks Again;

Terry H.

Donna was a great find for my resume creation needs.

She was very thorough in her quest to understand all the details of my professional experience and personal attributes and mold all of that information into a very sound and productive resume and cover letter.

She was very professional and personable to work with and I have personally recommended her to several of my business associates.

I don't believe you could work with a better professional writer!"

Deb K.

Hi Greg,

Thank you for the great work that you've done on my resume.

I only noted one item which you can find in red.

I'm also interested in having you do my cover letter. How can we go about arranging that?

Thank you,

Tibor T.

Hello Peter,

To keep you up to date Dan Dorotick has done a wonderful job on my resume. He will now work on completing my cover letter.

Thanks,

Anthony S.

Hi Donna,

Wow, impressive! You've made me look like a million bucks!

I've reviewed in more detail and have provided comments in track changes and answers to your questions below.

Thank you so much for your help.

Judy D.

Dear Jeanie,

You did an excellent work on my resume and after a bit of time, I have found an opportunity as the MD of a German IT company in Bangkok. Its a small nevertheless growing operation. So thank you very much for an excellent work done.

I would once again approach you when I embark on my final step a few years from now.

Good luck and best regards,

Ravi R.

Donna,

Thank you for your excellent work.

Just finished 8 hours of interviews at General Motors, it went well.

Joel E.

Hi Greg,

I am very impressed with the work you have done and have only a few small edits in the attached updated version of my resume.

I made most of the edits to the skills section by grouping and picking ones that are more relevant to the position I'm looking for and the work I've been doing.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks,

Stephen P.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for the resume. It looks great. I have added couple of things to show my qualifications. I like the sample resume format where you have Project Highlight, Specialist, and Key accomplishment. Could you expand my resume with the same structure?

I will update the cover letter and send it shortly.

Thanks,

Ezana G

Kathy,

It looks great thank you. I made a couple of minor changes (highlighted in red) and have attached the revised version.

The cover letter is great! Thanks! What else is there to do?

Do I send this to Ladders or do you?

Chris R.

Kathy,

Thank you for a job well done. I am very happy with the end result. Now please pass along to everyone you know.... ha!

Thank you,

James B.

Donna,

You did a fine job !!

It all looks great!!

Do I need to do anything else with you or are we all set. I will be going on line to order the email campaign next week. !

Erland W.

Dan,

Excellent! The only feedback I have is in the Core Knowledge and Skill Areas portion.

My experience is broader as in, Total P&L Budgeting and Forecasting; however, if you feel Sales is a more treasured skill that need to be highlighted I am fine with that wording.

The wording change, if any, I will leave to your expertise.

When can I expect to see the cover letter?

Again, I am pleased with the result.

Thank you,

Barry L.

Hello Peter,

Wanted to update you, since I’ve subscribed to your excellent resume service, I’ve received a number of calls, and finally, an excellent executive job offer with a very hot company!

Tammy Chisholm helped re-writing my resume.

Thx,

Joe A.



Dear Donna,

Thank you so much for your quick and kind advices.

It's been a great pleasure working with you.

I sincerely appreciate your excellent work for my resume and cover letter.

Sincerely,

Sang J. H.

Donna,

Thanks again for your hard work and dedication for communicating my brand so well!

Now that we’re done, I feel confident in using my new resume. I want to start by refreshing my LinkedIn profile which I know I can do.

Do you have a good LinkedIn cheat sheet to guide my effort? I know we discussed it but if you have any guidelines I would greatly appreciate it.

Thanks again,

Rob M.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for getting back to me. I've made a few tweaks, but I'm generally very happy with the overall resume.

I'll look forward to your final copy.

Thanks,

Tony P.

Hi Deb:

Upon review of my resume, I have to say you have certainly earned all of the titles along side your name.

I was looking forward to responding back to you with “I paid $600 for this!?”…But instead, you shocked me with your exceptional talent.

So in response to your opening statement, I am pleased.

Attached are the resume and cover letter docs with my comments and possible revisions.

Thank you,

Rune J.

Good Morning Kathy,

First, what an amazing job you did in "telling my story".

You took a huge amount of rambling information that I sent and really reduced it to the important aspects of my career.

Thank you for the effort and commitment!

Attached is my resume w/a few changes/comments.

Enjoy the rest of your day.

Regard, Loretta F .

Wendy,

Sorry about that it just came through to my email. Looks great.

I've had two people review my resume.

Both had rave reviews of your work.

Thank you,

Jim W.

Wendy,

The cover letter looks fine. I think I’ll prepare three of them from it, one for each option. So, "Paperback Writer", it looks like your work is done. Thanks very much for such a quality job.

It’s been wonderful working with you.

I shall now go forth and see if I can get an interview.

Thank you so much.

Mic L.

Rosie,

I love what you've done so far! VERY impressive.

I edited just a few things, and wrote in a bunch of stuff from the produce business I owned in Florida.

I'll be looking forward to see what you do with it!

Thanks for your hard work!

Paul H.

Rosie,

It looks awesome!

I made some minor changes as you will see. There are some spacing issues that I tried to correct when looking at the doc in print view. For some reason, I was unable to correct the spacing and alignment issues from some of the sections, specifically under Major Account Mgr, look at the alignment, i just can't get it right.

Joseph B.

Wendy,

This is a great job.

Consider this my approval for the final version.

Thank you for all your help.

Jim W.

Peter,

I am writing to thank you for connecting me to Donna Allen.

She did a phenomenal job on my resume and she was patient and kind to boot!

I enjoyed working with her.

Best,

Margarita R.

Kathy

You did an OUTSTANDING JOB!! I am very pleased!

Thank you

Nora Keith-S.

Hi Peter,

The resume looks fantastic!

It's amazing how polished the resume now looks. It's clean and clear. Thanks for all your help and please pass along to Donna what a great job she did (we were going to include her on this response, but the e-mail below was the generic.

She was correct in the city / state (question #3), so we just made the text black.

Hopefully I get the interview.

Thanks again for working this on such a short notice,

Nyla T.

Mr. Faherty,

I am extremely pleased with the first draft of my resume.

I have attached my edits per your request.

The majority of my edits are regarding the timing and factual accuracy of my past activities and achievements.

Best regards,

Paul C.

Jeanie:

I love the work that you have done with my resume. I do not agree with my sister's comments. It is not aggressive and I love it and that is what is important.

She is from the french system of writing reumes which is different from the american system.

Kindly forward the final version to Mr. Newfield and myself. Mr. Newfield will be sending out my resume to recruiters and will be designing my linken profile.

Rachel J. G.


Jeanie -

Thank you. This looks outstanding - It is so much better than anything I could have done.

I have just one comment (see attached). Other than that, and your final additions/changes to the Career Highlights section, I think it's ready to go.

Thanks,

Derek Y.

Wendy,

Thanks very much for all your work to present me as someone who just might know what he’s doing.

I’m very pleased with how it looks and sounds.

I’m sure it has a much better chance of surviving the first glance than my others did.

Mic L.

Hi Wendy,

AWESOME! This is the final for sure.
I really like the Addendum too. I think that covers everything.

Please let me know what if anything else I need to do.

Thank you for your time and effort.

This has been an eye opening experience for me that I am going to have my wife and older son go through too.

My sincerest appreciation for your help.

Mike F.

Greg,

Thank you. This is great. I really appreciate all your hard work.

Sincerely,

Peter B.

Hi Peter,

We spoke the other day regarding the fabulous resume that Dan did for me and I'm really looking forward to receiving my new linked in bio.

Definitely money well spent!

Christine B.

Dan,

Attached is the final version of my resume. My changes were minor, and I've already incorporated them.

Per your guidance below, which I've highlighted, I look forward to receiving the cover letter by close of business today.

Thanks very much. The resume is great!

Mike T.

Hello Greg,

Let me start by saying THANK YOU -my resume looks fantastic.

Let me also apologize for not getting back in touch with you earlier, but my life took a turn for seriously crazy and I needed to find enough time to review your work with the attention it deserves.

Attached, please find a few suggestions for updates and clarifications. The biggest one is bullet three of the "Principal Engineer" block. This was a huge project that started with a simple request for analysis of data and ended up with saving the client a lot of money. I would like to emphasize that I did everything from development of the concept to system integration, coding and introduction to production.

Anyways, again thank you so much for all your hard work and I am looking to receiving an updated version at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely,

Peter B.

Greg,

Thank you for the prompt delivery of this proof.

I have read it a few times an I must agree everything you captured is accurate and in accordance with what I sent you.

When I initially saw the worksheet you had sent me, I was unsure if I should have included any previous experiences, however now reading this resume I believe at least one of them is significant since I pride myself of being a team player, and nothing provide more information regarding that than being in the US Military.

Rui F.

Peter,

In 2005 I contacted your organization to have my resume professionally written.

The task was assigned to Christine Schimpff, who did an absolutely wonderful job of reworking it.

My newly-written resume did in fact help me to get interviews, and ultimately, a new job.

As a measure of preparedness, I’d like to have the resume which Christine crafted for me updated with my current employment information. Since Christine did such a great job on it the last time, I’d like to request that she be the one who updates my resume, if possible.

Thank you very much.

Sincerely,

Warren G.

Kathy,

Looks great.

One change in the Education section as the 2 year diploma really is not a Bachelor degree. Don't know if that matters overall but thought it should be reworded. Let me know what you think.

Based on this, I would also like do have a cover letter prepared if you can let me know that process. I believe I have to prepay before you can begin that work.

Thanks,

Terry H.

Greg,

I have reviewed your first drafts of my resume and cover letter. I think that you did a very good job, considering what I gave you.

All of my changes and corrections are in red, with the exception of some extra spaces that I inserted between words, to improve legibility (I always do this in documents that I create), within my name and parts of my address, as well as in the company names, locations, and most of the job titles. Words or letters that should be deleted are indicated with a strikethrough.

Again, thank you.

Larry S.

Hi Greg,

I have review the resume.. I did make some changes to the dates and the support area. I was not sure how to put this in as my group did support Texas and California, however there were two sites we did not support and they were the headquarters located in Oakland, CA and the Data Center campus located in San Antonio. Everything else located in those states was covered by my group.

Everything else looked good..

Cindy W.

Gregory,

It looks good… I made a couple of changes… I turned on tracking changes with Word so you can see the changes…

Thank you very much.

Bill W.

Hi Pierre,

Thank you so much for sending this to me.

I'm amazed at how different this resume is from the one I sent to you.

It looks fabulous. As far as changes are concerned, I have made some comments below.

Tara C.

Hi Donna,

Just a quick update to let you know I didn't forget - - at first glance the resume looks fabulous; what a boost for my ego !

Thank you,

Daria C.

Hello Jeanie,

I would like to introduce to you a friend of mine, who is based in Argentina and interested in making his resume in English from scratch.

I told Diego that you did an excellent job with my CV.

It would be convenient if you could send Diego direct a quotation to make his resume.

Best regards,

Pablo P.

Dan,

The resume is excellent.

The only minor item is on the 1st line below "Professional Highlights". the -DATES appears to be out of place.

Please go ahead with the cover letter.

A number of coworkers have asked for your name and contact information after seeing the resume draft.

I was glad to provide them with this information.

Ulf S.

Hi Gregory -

Thank you - I have started my job search with the resume you prepared for me.

I have received incredible interest and everyone has commented on what a fantastic resume I have.

It's making a big difference in my job search.

You are worth every penny!

Karen K.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for all your efforts to work on my resume and CL.

I have proof read and edited the document to the best of my ability. I did turn ON the change tracking in MS word with red color font so it should be fairly straighforward for you to work on the document. Please let me know should something not be clear enough.

I look forward to the next version of the documents.

Best,
Gurpreet M.

Hi Freddie,

You did a fantastic job! This is WAY better than my original, and well worth every penny.

Attached are my edits.

Mike B.

Greg,

Your writing was very helpful to move me to a results oriented mind set and away from daily task lists.

I also appreciate the obvious time you took to review the plethora of information I sent.

I look forward to receiving your revisions.

Kind Regards,

Delora J. B.

Hey Greg

Attached are my updates.

It's been a big help to have a fresh pair of eyes looking at this - I was so tired of reading and writing about me!

Karen K.

Wendy,

Outstanding work - really exceeded my expectations. Thank you!

I've made my edits in track changes, and have also inserted margin comments for your consideration. Looking forward to the next draft.

Thanks again,

Heather L.

Greg,

Thank you for redesinging my resume.

I really appreciate the new look. I have made changes to the resume but the cover letter is good to go.

I've attached the changed resume for revision.

Sean B.

Darlene,

WOW! I am so impressed. I would say you earned every single dollar and if you would like me to do something for you and call someone or send in a report of some sort I would be more than happy.

You actually have taken my work and allowed me to cross over into a different bracket and move forward in life.

I sincerely thank you. Cover looks great.

Can't wait to send this out asap.

Very Sincerely,

Chris S.

Hi Peter,

My resume has been finalized and Debra did a wonderful job under difficult circumstances.

Thank you for your help.

Sincerely,

Manfred W.

Hi Jean,

Thanks for sending the draft. You are doing a very good job!

I'm sure the final resume will capture in a very marketable way my professional experience.

Saludos,

Mario N.

Ciao Jeanie,

Sorry for all the time I took. I carefully read your excellent job and apart some minor changes that you will find in the CV,

I think that the work is done - now it's up to me to find a new job!

I want to thank you again for your professionalism and kindness.

Ciao,

Luca F.

Jeanie,

Thanks so much for your good work – it’s true: one can never promote oneself as well as someone else can.

Best,

Gary M.

Hi Jean,

I think this looks pretty rock star! I may need refinements to target specific positions, but for the meantime, thank you.

Best,

Lisa B.

Jeanie,

I am very pleased. You have managed to really "sell" my strengths and accomplishments while aligning me with the goal (position) that I am hoping to win.

I have a long story to tell and you have done it well. My guess is that the initial opening keys on my goals and objectives as well as strengths....and if it captures the readers interest they read on to get a real picture of who I am and what I have accomplished.

I assume that this is the goal of a successful resume. Give me your thoughts on that and we can discuss any changes I might have. But for now,

I tweaked a date and corrected an award .....and that was it. I am prepared to release it as it is.

Your thoughts?

Tim L.

Dear Dan,

I would like to thank you for your thoughtfulness and professionalism in writing my resume. During the process you were very patient with me and accommodating in answering my questions to why we are using the format that you have chosen that professionally works.

I have shared my rough draft thru out the process with family members who at one time thought I had a great resume on my own until they read the one you wrote. They were very excited to learn that I had taken the time and money to get it done by you. They said that there was no comparism to the one that stood out and the positive reaction that was made on them reading your version.

I can’t thank you enough for my new resume and I would recommend your talent to any one who might need such services.

Sincerely,

Tom E.

Thanks Greg - very nice job!

I made some small edits to the Summary section of the resume. I only have an iMac and had to use OpenOffice.Org. All my edits should show up highlighted in yellow and as strikethroughs.

Thanks,

Simon D.

Dan,

Thanks much!

PS - I have a recruiter flying in from NC to discuss an opportunity (dinner
on Monday night) - EVP Construction. They saw my resume on "TheLadders"

Stephen L. M., AIA

Hi Wendy,

This is amazing! Thank you much 😉

Everything is definitely good (excellent) to go!

I'm sorry for this short reply but I'm boarding right now my connection to Phoenix.

Thanks,

Annalisa S.

Hello Greg,

Thanks for the work you have put in. I have put in my comments and edits in the resume. Please review my comments and let me know if those are viable changes.

Thanks again,

Albert C.

Hi Peter,

Pierre has completed my resume and cover letter. I wanted to share it with you. If you know of anything that will be opening in the Greater Boston area, please let me know.

Pierre was wonderful to work with.

Warm regards,

Dannielle G.

Greg,

WOW! Excellent job! Makes me sound 100% better-it really is a matter of presentation isn't it?!

Only a few changes that I see.
Please find attached and let me know your thoughts.

Additionally, I am in the process of applying for an MBA program. Should we add that?

Let me know thanks,

Petra S.

Pierre:

Thank you. These look so nice!

Vickie L.

Hi Pierre,

It looks like we're pretty much there. Attached are the 2 documents with a couple of comments on them.

I like the compromise on the company names -- doesn't overpower the title, but stands out more. Let me know what more we need to do. I think you mentioned that you needed to add in some tags/footnotes with key words so electronic resume scanners can pick them up.

Nice work.

Rick P.

Gregory,

I have review both the cover letter and the resume. I really have nothing to add to the cover letter.

You have really done an awesome job on it.

Thank you,

Jean F.

Pierre,

This is an excellent draft!

I'm going through and answering your questions removing a few items and adding a few things. A question for you... I noticed that some of the tasks like immigration, for example, are not listed in each job although I handled all types of immigration (such as H1-B, J, TN, etc) Should this be listed or is it not necessary?

The profile is great and I would like to add more to have even a greater impact. I'm not sure if there is a way to bring my personality out and my drive to bring people and business goals together. In addition, I'm incredibility passionate about what I do and will become a bull stopping at nothing when needed. Any thoughts? I don't want to get too wordy, but do want this section to jump out maybe using some unique verbiage to draw their attention to me. I know when I'm hiring senior level employees I tend to spend my time and energy there.

I'm very excited with what you have and I'm grateful for your help.

I love the overall feel of this resume.

You are wonderful!

Danielle G.

I should have the draft back to you shortly.

Dan,

I am profoundly pleased with this final product. It runs slightly over 3 pages on my copy—should I adjust the formatting, or would you want to do that? Or is it necessary?

Again, this nails it dead-on and I could not be happier with appearance and content.

You have captured the elements I feel are important and wanted to convey, no fluff, just outstanding work.

Will you also provide me some points on proper paper/bond, and cover letter?

Thank you so very much.

I consider myself a tough sell, but you have exceeded my expectations.

Regards,

Gina S.

Peter,

Hi! I wanted to extend my sincere thanks to you for sending me Thomas Wolff to help me with my resume. I was very pleased with the outcome and found Thomas wonderful with whom to work.

Thank you so much!

Michele DoR.

Peter,

Thank you for the service you've provided.

I am looking forward to the results.

Hope all is well with you.

Best wishes,

Eric P.

Hi Pierre,

I'm happy with the overall direction of this.

The resume and cover letters are much cleaner and concise than my previous drafts.

They get to the point and highlight my strengths. Quite pleased with this.

I am still scratching my head over creating a second resume focusing on Marketing. I don't want to exclude my experience here, since it's still apparently marketable -- however at the same time -- loading these strengths in an HR resume makes it too cumbersome and confusing.

I look forward to the next draft -- as well as your professional advice on some of the questions and concerns that I have. Much appreciated.

Best,

Rick P.

Kathy,

Just wanted to make sure you had these attachments, I am eager to see my LinkedIn bio as I will be directing several job leads to it as soon as it is ready.

Thanks for all of your help, one headhunter responded with "nice resume" and I know it is content and the great presentation he was impressed with!

Paige C.

Hi Tammy,

Good morning! Thank you for sending the final version and for saving a copy just in case....it is good insurance to have! 🙂

I also wanted to thank you again for your time and expertise (you were working late last night!).

You created a beautiful-looking, high-impact, professional product and I'm certain it will make a big difference in my job search!

Take care, and all the best to you!

Best regards,

Ortwin K.

Greg,

Attached are my edits for both the resume and cover letter. Overall, you did an outstanding job taking the Hodge podge of stuff I sent you and turned it into a polished product.

Changes/edits are just minor tweaks from my perspective.

Again thanks,

Martin P.

Peter,

I wanted to thank you for your assistance on having my resume produced.

The process really challenged me to find achievements that were the highlights of my work career. The document looks fantastic and Jeanie, your writer, was a pleasure to work with.

If it would be possible I would like to pay for the process of having the document placed in a format that is friendly to the job board sites and if I remember correctly you had stated that there was a service that you could provide with VC firms as well.

Thank you again Peter.

Steve P.

Hi Pierre -

Wow! You've done a great job. The resume looks great and you've done a wonderful job with the content.

When I spoke with Peter, he pushed me on quantifying accomplishments. Do you think I've done enough?

I'll be reviewing very carefully this weekend -

Pierre, I had only paid for the resume - but, based on your fine work - would like to arrange for a cover letter, too.

Please let me know how to arrange this.

Thank you so much, Pierre.

Have a wonderful weekend.

Marybeth P.

Hi Debra,

Thanks so much for sending the resume tonight; I really appreciate it realizing you have put a lot of effort into the process.

I can tell you from first glance I am extremely pleased with the result! This looks and reads like the resume I hoped to receive and one that I will be very proud to send out.

I will read through it carefully this weekend and let you know if I have any questions or minor tweaks and send you a marked copy.

I believe any changes will be very minimal.

Thank you again for your hard work and expertise!

Sincerely,

Catherine B.

Peter,

I was pleased with the result’s of Tammy’s rewrite of my resume. It is odd to me how one can take the same facts and make them tell a story that is much more compelling in one case than in the other. (I call that good marketing.)

I feel that I’ve received a good value for the resume writing services.

Now with a stronger document to tell my story, what do you recommend in terms of your resume distribution services? Remember, I am seeking a senior level sales and marketing role, preferably in a high tech environment.

Let's talk about it.

Frank C.

Greg,

I was pretty impressed with your effort. It is not something I would have ever come up.

I am anxious to see what interest it generates.

Edward P.

Hi Jeanie,

The letter looks great. Thank you.

As for the resume, no, I don't think it needs to be changed as long as there is only one use of the word strong in any given sentence or entry.

I think this process has moved along fairly expeditiously and look forward to having the products finalized and dstributed to a receptive, responsive audience.

Thank you for your efforts.

Best wishes,

Eric P.

Jeanie,

OUTSTANDING!

Thank you, so much.

Marc B.

Hi Jeanie,

The docs look great! thank you for capturing the information so eloquently.

The changes to the drafts are minimal so please let me know if there is anything that you will need further to complete the next/final draft.

Thank you again and have a great night!

Steve P.

Hi Greg,

Sorry for the delay. I had a family emergency I had to tend to last week.

Anyway, the resume and cover letter look great! Just a few minor changes that I tracked. Please let me know if you have any questions.

Again, thank you for assiting me with my resume.

I would be happy to recommend your services to friends and coworkers.

Have a great week!

Susan W.

Tammy,

Enclosed are my comments to the draft resume you prepared in a Word file, track changes activated.

You’ll note that my comments are relatively minor. That is because I think you did a good job on this.

I read the “before” and “after” – i.e. your draft resume, and there is little doubt in my mind that I would prefer speaking to the person behind the “after” resume were I the hiring manager.

Good job. I take it now you will send back the final copy.

I am going to tackle the cover letters myself. Do you have any advice on “do’s” and “don’t’s” of cover letters?

Again, I’d like to say I am pleased with your work here. I don’t find myself in the position very often these days where I believe I’ve received even a basic value for what I’ve contracted for.

You have been a welcome exception to that trend, and thank you for your time and efforts here.

Regards,

Frank C.

Jeanie,

I just want to say that I am very happy because of the things you have done for me.

The new resume has brought many new important contacts among the Executive Search community.

Your improvements to my draft Letters of Reference were also phenomenal.

Working with you has been a very pleasant and truly valuable journey.

You, with your writing skills, are a big piece of pure gold.

Sincerely,

Jari M.

Tammy,

This is absolutely outstanding. I never realized the importance and the value of having this process done professionally until now that I have seen the outcome.

Attached are some minor edits to reflect timeframes more accurately as well as some other tweaks related to roles (track changes was used). Let me know what you think.

Additionally, Although I have a long and successful history in sales, my preference is technical pre-sales, Professional Services or IT Management. I tried to reflect that with the edits without diminishing the sales achievements. I'd like to get your thoughts on that as well.

Steve F.

Hi Wendy,

Again, I would like to thank you for your hard work. You have a done a marvelous job. The resume, cover letter, and the executive profile looks perfect.

I do consider that my order has been delivered and final.

Best regards,

Wael J.

Donna, Everything looks great, I added one small comment on the resume, not sure if it is better or worse, so your input would be great. The cover letter is phenomenal. Thank you so much for your help, I am attaching the resume with my comments. Thank you,

Ken D.

Wendy, Thank you so much for your help. I was able to land a great job!!!

Keara F.

Hello Donna, I am absolutely thrilled by the work you have done. My resume looks so great! There was very little that I changed on the attached. Best Regards,

Jeannette P.

Greg, Overall, the resume looks great. I'm excited to start using it. I have made just a few small changes. Here is the new file with Track Changes. Please let me know if you have any trouble opening the document or identifying the changes. Thank you.

Deanna B.

Greg, Nicely done! I made some changes in the attached versions of the resume and cover letter Regards,

John M.

Thanks Jane for your email below.

Please let me know a website that specializes in quantitative analysis. That will be god-sent!

I also thank You, Peter and Deb for the hard work and professionalism. You were right that need to cast a net as wide as possible. Peter is right about timimg- out of 2,900 emails sent, only 60 were out of office, and only three with no ID. Timing is everything!

I appreciate Deb's vision and Hardwork more than ever... It may take some time, but you guys are quite good and, do want to help people. Thanks you all for being that way!!

With warmest regards to you, Peter, Deb,

Navin S.

Wendy,

It looks great – thanks!
I appreciate all you have done.

Yes, I consider this project finished. Please also thank Peter for me.

George S.

Donna,

It looks great! Well done... I didn't realize how awesome I am...

I responded to your comments with comments. I really have nothing else to change... I may mess around with the font... something more contemporary looking?

Money well spent.

Thanks,

John B.

Hi Wendy,

I liked the new version, thank you so much. I posted it today and used my cover letter already!

Thanks for all your help...

Jacqueline J.

Dan,

Excellent work!

Thank you,

Scott B.

Dan,

This looks great!

I am very impressed with the transition from my original resume to this one and can see how this version more accurately depicts my experience.

I do have a couple of corrections to offer and one request.

Denise D.

Hey Dan,

You made a mistake by my e-mail adress, there was a "n" missing on the End.

Please correct it also on the CV.

Thanks a lot for your work looks really great.

Philipp H.

Dan,

It looks wonderful. I see no changes necessary.

Thank you,

Sherri T.

Dan,

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Thank you sooooo very much - much softer looking for me =:

You are the best!

Tell everyone this thorn in your side is very please -:

Truly I appreciate all you have done and are doing!!!

Many thanks!

Angela G.




Dan,

Outstanding job.

Just a few minor changes.

Many thanks!

Stacey E.

Kathy,

Thank you so much for your efforts. My resume now looks amazing!

I made a few minor edits - nothing of significance - and am now ready to jump back in to my job search with much more confidence.

Thank you.

Sheila B.



Tammy,

Super, thanks for this.

That therefore concludes our work together I believe. CV and covering letter

Thanks for everything , I look forward to some positive developments going forward

Best regards

Glen S.

Thank you Jeanie.

You have been very helpful. I will keep you posted
and be in touch.

Thanks again!!! I will be a referral any time!

Best Regards,

Bob F.

Jeanie,

First this looks really good - well worth it!

I have highlighted all my changes. I am very pleased with this and am pretty excited about getting this out.

Thank you so much.

Dave G.

Hi Jeanie,

I just did a run through and I love it!

I will get to work immediately this evening and get you the answers to the questions and also provide some feedback.

Thanks so much for your help!

My best,

Kevin C.

Jeanie -

I first want to say thanks! I am very pleased with your excellent work.

I am making a few adjustments this morning and will send the document back to you soon.

Stephen C.

Jeanie,

All I can say is WOW. Thank you! What is next? If anything.

Thanks,

Ray M.

Hi Peter-

I did receive the first draft of my resume from Dan. It was worth the wait, he did a terrific job.

Thank you,

Tiffany D.

Dear Kathy,

In making any changes, they are questions subject to your professional approval. The final wording on my thoughts are up to you. If you wish to call me I will share the questions I am have.

I really appreciate your talents. I didnt know how close I am to walking on water:-)).

JRB

Freddie,

Thanks for transforming my resume into a CV!

It looks good.

I don't have any changes.

Be well,

Lyna M.

Hi Wendy,

Wow! I have given it a couple of reads and it really looks good. You have done a great job.

I am going to bounce off a few people I respect and I will advise early next week if we are final.

When dealing with churches I used to say that going to committee was the kiss of death on a project.

Dont worry I dont expect this will be the case with my respected folk.

Have a great weekend.

John S.

Greg,

I am very happy with the cover letter and resum you prepared for me.

Ive been able to use them both as-is and with some tweaking for a specific job, with pretty good results.

I am now interested in trying a resum distribution using the service provided by Career Resumes, and am interested in a cover letter that would work well with recruiters. What would be the cost and timing to put together something like that?

Regards,

Steve C.

Hi, Wendy,

Thank you for your good work.

I can see your revision is more effective in presenting me in front of the hiring manager.

I took a bit time to read the draft and made some corrections(in red) along with my answers to your questions highlighted in yellow.

It would be good if we can talk if you still have questions. Meanwhile I will replace my initial resume with this first draft even though the final draft is not ready yet.

Since it is better than my original resume and I had one recruiter browsed my resume, I figure I have nothing to lose by using even the draft.

Best Regards,

See Y.

Hi Wendy,

Wendy,

Sorry for the delay in getting back to you.

I am very pleased with the look and feel of my resume and your hard work shows!

I have added comments where you needed more information and highlighted in red one small typo...

John S.

Thanks Wendy ,

Wow!

Most impressive, excellent writing. I will work on this today.

Marni M.

Wendy,

This looks great. I do have a couple of minor edits.

Once these are complete, I think this will be complete. I don't think you need to send another draft...once these changes are added, it should be good to go.

Other than that, this looks really nice, and much better than what I had been using!!!

The cover letter is also, Wendy. I like the options for various cover letters depending on where there opportunity came from. Thanks!

I appreciate your assistance on this, and look forward to putting these new documents to the test.

Thanks again!

Don M.

Wendy,

This looks great.

I have two small edits which I have higlighted in the attachment.

Thank you very much,

Stephene L.

Hi Peter,

Just wanted to let you know that Jeanie did an outstanding job.

I would like to know how much it would cost to send my 2 pages resume to Private Equity Houses and VC Houses located in the USA.

You have my American Card number. Just let me know the price.

Thanks for your cooperation.

JJJ

Freddie,

Thank you for your excellent work. I will copy you on their announcement.

Wow, the end of the most challenging job search of my career. The organization required me to go through one full day of formal interviews with the Board and selected staff members,

These interviews involved going into 4 meeting rooms and responding to different challenge questions posed by each Board member. In addition, we had 4 phone interviews and I had to write responses to 10 deep questions.

Thanks again for helping make this possible. You helped me organize my thoughts and to prepare my mind for probing questions.

My best,

Chuck C.

Dear Peter,

I recently received my final CV from Jean Oscarson (the delay being completely due to me) and it was certainly money well spent - very happy with the result.

Kind Regards,

Malte H.

Wendy,

I apologize for not getting back to you sooner. This is perfect!

Thank you so much!

Eric B.

Wendy,

Everything looks great!

I consider the resume and cover letter final.
thank you again for your awesome work.

Best regards,

Jim R.

Dan,

This looks spectacular, I have nothing to add.

Patrick C.

Hi Kathy,

All I can say is WOW. This is fantasticc!

You took everything I put on paper and turned it into a very professional resume. I am so pleased.

I do not see anything that needs to be changed, I read it 4 times, performed spellcheck and grammar check, you are amazing!

I am going to stat reviewing the cover letter today, I am sure that it iwll be as perfect as this.

Thank you so much.

Grace G.

Hi Peter,

Your writer, Rosie, is awesome! She took my jumbled mess of techno-babble and turned it into a truly winning resume -- complete with 'plain English' attributes a technical recruiter can understand!

I submitted the finished resume to two job websites in late November 2007 and received more than two dozen legitimate offers for full-time positions, within days.

After several interviews from wonderful potential employers (I got a call from XYZ Company in Atlanta.

After careful consideration, and realizing that Rosie's resume put selecting a job into my control, I accepted the very best offer!

I've been a Senior UNIX Systems Engineer with this company for about eight months now. It's my 'dream job' and only gets better from here!

Thank you Peter & Rosie!

Best regards,

Chas H.

Kathy,

Just wanted you to know that I got rave reviews on my resume from a pretty big head hunter.

David S.


Mr. Faherty,

Then thanks are in order. Ive sent to a couple of recruiter friends of mine to get their opinion and the feedback has been 100% positive.


In fact, one of my colleagues said wordsmithing was spectacular.

Sothank you very much.

Best Regards,

R. Stacy S.

Hi Dan!

Wow. This really proves what a sad and pathetic document I produced.

You're awesome and make me sound totally fabulous. I don't want to change a thing. T

hank you SO much. I just know full employment is right around the corner and I'll have you to thank.

SWEET!

Cheers,

Terri P.

OK Dan. You're done.

I believe your work will help in the progress of the process of landing a job in my occupation.

Thank you ever so much.

I didn't like the way I started off so much. That being siad, I do like the way you started off with your 1st correspondence to me and I will add that includes your professionalism throughout this process.

You know what you are doing, but I feel I gave you a good basis for your excellent work which I hope made your job a little easier.

Thank you again for your excellent work and also the timing. As they say, "Timing is everything."

Dan C..

Hi Debra,

First, I truly thank you for showing me to "me".

None of this is an exaggeration. It is all but fact minus many glorious details, but, for a modest man it is difficult to blow his own horn/trumpet.

Your choice of words was excellent and the layout is striking.

Please help me to incorporate the additions/changes to augment the impact of what you already created.

The cover letter & resume are as attachments here in.

I also would like for you to reduce the width/size of the cover letter to the same as that of the resume ( how do you put ' over the e's in resume ? ). Mostly this document is dispatched to Employers by e-mail and it would be cumbersome for them to read at a glance on a standard screen. May be you will be magnanimous to share with me the know how of this.

Lastly how to insert a hand written signature in to the cover letter, when most are to be e-mailed ?
Thanks! (again),

Serai K.

Pierre,

Thanks so much for your help. I really like the revised format..

I made a few minor changes and am posting it on the Ladders site today.

Again - thanks.

Best regards,

Keith C.

Peter,

I wanted to let you know that I think Tammy Chisholm did a fine job helping me with my resume.

I have already sent this resume to a number of recruiters and it has been received favorably. Attached is a the amended draft.

Please let me know if you have any further suggestions.

Also, I please advise if you believe I could benefit from any other services that you offer.

Regards,

Peter S.


Hi Jeanie,

A few months ago you provided a sample of letter of recommendation which I needed to develop with relevant information and send it back to you for editing. I have totally forgot about it as I have been fully occupied writing a dissertation thesis to complete a masters degree. It's my fault.

Last month I relaunched my job search and I have already landed two job offers. One of the things that I will need to have ready is my letters of recommendation. I have all of them ready and available covering my entire professional career except for the one that we were supposed to prepare a few months ago. I will be having the final meetings to negotiate the salary package on March 9th and 12th and would like to bring all letters of recommendation with me.

I would appreciate if you could please look at the letter enclosed, edit and send it back as soon as you have a chance.

Once I get the revision from you I will send it to my former boss and he will sign it in the company's letterhead.

As in your previous work for me, please feel free to correct, add, omit as necessary.

I thank you again for all your time and dedication. Your help has really helped me in launching these job offers.

Best regards,

Otilio R.

Mr. Dorotik,

Offer today from Marine Corps Systems Command in Quantico and General Dynamics (GDOTS) called a little while ago for a Systems Program Manager.

Do not want to make your head swell.

Great job.

Bud S.

Debra,

Thanks for all your help.

I am pleased to report that effective March 1st I will assume the position of Commercial Director for Flabeg Technical Glass US with offices in Naugatuck, CT and Brackenridge, PA. Flabeg is a German based company that created this executive position for me to lead their Technical Glass finance, sales and IT groups here in the US.

I have already recommended your services to many of my colleagues; especially the resume re-write.

Thanks again and Best Regards,

Mike K.

Dear Wendy,

Thank you for your very good work. The resume looks fine.

What a difference in how a professional like yourself can take my information, and present it in an altogther different manner.

You can coniser my order complete.

Now it is up to me!

Best regards,

Dennis S.

Hi Peter,

I have both my resume and cover letter; I wanted to pass on that I am very pleased with the job that Dan did writing it. Both look fantastic!

I am ready to hit the ground running and distribute as much as possible. Once I do find another position, I will write a recommendation for you and Dan as well on LinkedIn.

It was worth every penny. When I got back from vacation Friday reading my new resume was the perfect ending to warmth and sunshine.

Best regards,

Renee W.

Wendy

While your resume was certainly good and helpful, I think I was able to fill a local DOD job through perseverance and constant hitting the base in northern NJ with my resumes for the last half year. I am delighted with all aspects of my job--just what I was looking for, including close to home,

It is clear that my resume was selected from many, While I do have many plusses on my resume, I feel that your ability to effectively rearrange my credentials and to highlight "me" was a key part of it standing out from the others in this tough time.

You certainly have been a pleasure to work with and a "can-do" person.

Thanks, and keep in touch.

Bill T.

Greg,

Overall, the resume looks great. I'm excited to start using it.

I have made just a few small changes. Here is the new file with Track Changes. Please let me know if you have any trouble opening the document or identifying the changes.

Thank you,

Deanna B.

Hi Wendy,

Attached are my track changes to your highlighted questions.

I didn't find anything I wanted to change because it is written right on the sweet spot. Much better than anything I had before on my old resume.

As for proofing I went over it twice and didn't find anything that caught my attention.

I am excited to see it formatted once it is complete as well as the cover letter. Please let me know if anything needs further clarification as well as when I will expect to receive the finalized resume with my cover letter.

Thank you,

Salma T.

Hi Wendy,

No no no, I am not letting go of you.

Yes this is great, thank you very much for all your help in the last few weeks.

I like the way it reads and feels. I am confident that I can speak to all the points that are on here comfortably and that is what I wanted.

Over the last 12 years at this company I have conducted numerous interviews and I could always tell if someone had spent the time to read their own resumes,

I do not want to be one of those that gets caught up in something I cannot explain.

Excellent write thank you, if you don't mind I would like to keep in touch to send an update once I land something.

Take care

Best regards,

Farrokh. B.

Gregory,

I've attached a copy of the resume you sent. My changes are in read, with a synopsis at the end. Please review.

Mostly a truly outstanding effort on your part.

Regards,

Tracy L.

Hello Greg,

I have made a few potential changes to the resume, and the cover looks good to me. I want to ensure that I show the new skills I have been acquiring on the most recent project properly.

I have been completely managing the entire education and training program from approach through deployment and assessment. I feel this is a valuable skill that should also prove prominent in the resume.

I'll let you decide how to fit that it, but training development and trainer doesn't quite cover this role.

I do however like the resume and think you are doing great at bringing my skills and history to light.

Let me know if you need anything further..

Thanks,

Bob LaF.

Hi Patricia,

Attached is the second draft of my resume. You did an awesome job! Wow, I could not have done this at all. It looks great!

I have made the changes you requested. Please review and let me know what you think. I look
forward to hearing from you again, soon.

Thank you!

Ginger R.

Greg,

First of all thank you very much for job well done.

As per your instruction I reviewed the documents and made very few changes. I made changes only in the technology sections. I just rearranged it and made some minor additions. I did not take care of the punctuations, as you will do the formatting.

Please finalize the documents and send me ASAP. I am sure you will again take a final look as I have made some changes.

I have to send my resume by posting in the hiring company's website, I wonder, how it will look when I will post in the website. Any tips?

Updated version I marked as v1. If you have any questions please call me.

Thank you again for identifying my expertise and portrait me correctly. A great job!!!

Amit N.

Tammy,

This is excellent work. I could only find one questionable word - marked in red on page one.

Please advise.

Best regards,

Howard M.

Rita,

I want to thank you for the wonderful and impressive job on my resume.

Best Regards,

Randy S.

Dear Darlene,

Thank you for sending these to me. I imagine it's quite common that people who receive the cover letter and resume don't recognize themselves on paper.

They look very professional, of course.

Kind regards,

Anna-Lisa S.

Thanks Wendy.

I'm all set now.

Great job all the stuff and I appreciate your diligence and communication along the way. I'll let you know where I land.

Regards,

Jim D.

Peter:

I have reviewed the resume Dan Dorotik did for me, and I have to say I have never had such a strong and concise resume from any of the other professional writers I have hired in the past.

Not only does it extensively highlight all the accomplishments that I have done in my industry over the past 20+ years, but is so comprehensively written and flows so well that all that hard work is right there, easy to determine what I have done and where, and easily puts me into a higher grade level of hire - just the result I was looking for.

The cover letter is so well written - it actually acts as a teaser. Hungry to learn more. Amazing.

You and your staff are phenomenal! I wish I had known about your services before I wasted all that money on the other "professional" resume writers in the past.

You clearly are at the top of the field. Words escape me except to say Thank you thank you thank you!

Your and Dan's expertise cannot be duplicated. You all are to be commended for such exemplary work.

Again, Thank You!

All the best,

Sue G.

Dan.
:
It's fabulous. I love it. I have no idea why I would want to change a thing on it.

I love the cover letter and the formatting as well. Again, I wouldn't change a thing.

I think we're good!

On the LinkedIn thing - sometime this week?

Thanks Dan! This is absulotely Fabulous Work!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Take care,

Sue G.

Donna,

Thanks. This looks good.

Have a few edits/questions in the attached document for your review and consideration.

Also, I have managed some fairly significant bankruptcy and workout cases with customers and vendors at Dell, Proidgy and elsewhere. In this economy, this may be an important skill to highlight. Can you recommend a strategy for how we do so?

Again, thanks for getting this to me and doing such a good job.

Greg B.

Dan,

Thanks for the Draft. It looks much better than my original.

I have highlighted in red some changes.

Regards,

Stephen R.
Stephen

Dan,

The first draft looks great, I have one request to see if you can add something about the diversity of industries that I have been in, for example.

I certainly don't want to lose anything currently written as it sounds very positive. I just want to know if this can be added to increase my industry options/reach.

Sincerely,

Tony M.

Dan,

Thanks for your first draft, I am in the process of reviewing, shall get back to you in a day or so.

Great effort and thanks for your time.

Robin McD.

Dan,

I reviewed the 1st draft and it looks greats and reads very well.

There are no additional changes.

Thank you.

Best Regards,

Richard L.

Hi Patricia,

Thank you so much for your work on this....

I really feel good about it and hope that this will help me secure some interviews.

Not so pretty out there these days...

Best,

Nancy C.

Freddie,

Here you go. I had to take that first bullet out. That section in the worksheet represented only a subset of the revenue and I dont want to be misleading.

You might be glad to know that I met with an outplacement firm today and they were pretty impressed with my resume.

They thought it was very well written.

Thanks,

Donna H.

Hi Wendy,

That is fine, we can get together later in the week and finalize the letter. You can target any area in the food service industry.

Wendy, I would like to take this time to say thank you very much for your help and expertise.

You were right, for a moment there, I thought that I was reading about someone else --

GREAT JOB and thank you again.

Cameron J.

Dan:

Great job on both the resume & the cover letter.

I'm very pleased with your work. Thanks very much.

Best Regards,

Randy F.

Jeanie,

The resume and cover letter are absolutely fabulous. It's been a pleasure working with you and I've been impressed by your experience, responsiveness and quality of work.

I'm assuming I should customize the cover letter for the particular job opportunity as well as the heading on the resume, but try to keep the base foundation in tact, correct? Also....do you have any other tips or strategies for making sure my resume gets to the top of the list as I launch a more aggressive search both with recruiters and companies directly?

Peter....I also wanted to enlist your guidance at this point on the same questions above now that Jeanie's got things wrapped up?

I also wanted to thank you for directing me to Jean and for your support in this process. I like what I've seen in working with the two of you.

Go Steelers.....I'll be rooting for them as well Jeanie.

Please advise on your thoughts on the above?

Thanks again.....

Fred K.

Patricia.

These are very well done and much appreciated. Just one final question on the linked-in bio.

Will the title make a difference when people do a global search (i.e. should I list Managing Director or Principal, Healthcare or a more specific title? that pertains to my last job/position. Advantages/disadvantages?

I will let you know when my linked-in profile is updated. I think Peter wanted a recommendation on linked-in re: your work and he was going to link me in to his network as well.

Outstanding work. I will gladly recommend you to others.

Regards,

Rob B.

Hello Greg

Thank you for your good work. Surprised that some of the information on the worksheets and existing resume didn't match up. You're correct that I have moved some information around to get it into the right place.

I turned on "track changes" so it should be clear what I have changed.

The cover letter looks good.

Looking forward to the final proof copy.

Have a good day,

Chris R.

Wendy,

You are the best! This is perfection!

I am so blessed to have someone as experienced and talented as you to help me.

Thank you,

Linda M.

Wendy,

Great....no changes necessary.

FYI....I have an interview on Friday for a CEO position....they are the only people outside you and me who has seen the resume...apparently they liked it.....

Regards,

Steve G.

Greg,

Nice job. I made only minor cosmetic corrections (not sure about capitalization of "Fiscal Year", and "aircard" should probably be one word even though it does not pass spell check).

Corrections were done in MS Word on a Mac, so I hope there were no format problems. Changes were tracked through the MS Word tracking tool. I will work on cover letter next.

Regards,

Jim W.

Greg,

I have reviewed the attached documents, providing suggested changes and one comment.

Your work looks great and is very close.

I have one additional question: Based on your experience, do people at this level generally offer references? Ive seen a mix of resumes where its offered as References available upon request, a list of references, and nothing on references (perhaps assuming that if desired, they will be requested).

Im just curious about what seems to be the norm.

Thank you.

Best regards,

Michael R..

Greg,

The resume looks great. It conveys everything that I did.

There is one modification I would like you to incorporate and that is under the Professional Experience section at the end of the first paragraph under Accounting Systems Administrator & Accounting Billing Manager, I not only supervised and trained 5 billing specialist, I also trained secretarial staff to do billing on the system.

Thanks,

Al S.

Gregory,

Please see attached resume. Minor changes mostly in terms of position requirements. The cover letter looks great, no changes. Thanks.

Best regards,

Bill L.


Greg,

I appreciate the feedback and comments. That brings up a good question. Would it be better if I had 2 resumes? One where we could incorporate ALL operations accomplishments and one more focused on Real Estate?

If so, how would you prefer we proceed with that plan so I can consider that direction. At this point, I would like to persue operations jobs as well.

Your feedback is appreciated.

Thanks,

Jeff M.

Greg,

Excellent job! I don't think the cover letter needs to be changed at all.

I have attached the resume with some minor changes which are indicated in red.

Best Regards,

Taylor B.

Greg,

Nice integration. Attached are the proofs with my suggestions. I'm looking forward to your feedback.

Rick S.

Gregory,

First let me thank you for your hard work. The cover letter was great and very much expressed what I was looking for to present my abilities.

Xavier I.

Peter,

Just a note to let you know Patricia did an excellent job in working with me to complete my resume this past fall.

I am referring a new potential client to you, William B.

What is the best way for him to get in touch and get started?

Thanks,

Mike C.

Wendy,

Thank you for your help. I am very pleased!!!!!

When I'm networking and find someone who needs your help, can I do a direct referral?

Thanks Again,

Frank B.

Hi Peter,

Your company (I worked with Freddie Cheek) drafted my resume this summer. It was fantastic and I landed a job within 3 1/2 months.

I have written recommendations for your company because I was so impressed.

My question is, I would like to add my new job to my resume and would like to know what the charge is for an addition to an existing resume. I'm not looking for an entire re-write - just the addition of the new position.

I work for XYZ Communications and I am concerned about its financial state so I'd like to be prepared.

Please advise at your earliest convenience. Happy New Year!

Michelle R.


Peter,

I recently received my resume from Greg Faherty and am very impressed.

At this time, I would like to move forward with using his services for a resume cover letter.

Please let me know how to proceed with this engagement.

Thank you and Happy Holidays!

Jeff G.

Freddie,

I am now a finalist for two positions. One is an industry CFO position and the other is with a medical college. I had my fourth interview at the medical college yesterday.

My international broadband leadership experience coupled with my recent Masters in Education provided me the opportunity to lead their instructional design division.

At each meeting with the college, the interviewers commented on what a great resume I had. The way that you designed the resume and presented my experience impressed the readers and gave me the flexibility to apply for this position.

I know that I am up against Ivy League educators already in the healthcare sector but at least I have had the chance to present my case and this was only possible because of my resume presentation.

Hopefully I will receive an offer (I feel good about the chemistry) but if I do not, I have a new feeling of confidence that I have a competitive resume that works in this market and across industry sectors.

Thank you for all of the time you spent with me to identify the salient points needed to make me stand out as a viable candidate.

Your fan,

Chuck C.

Hi Pierre,

Thank you so very much - I never could have written such an excellent resume or cover letter the way you did.

I see why you are a Credentialed Career Master, Certified Resume Writer and a Certified Electronic Career Coach, you know your stuff!

Cassie F

Freddie,

Thank you very much. Everything looks great! Good job!

Thanks and Regards,

Chris W.

Dear Pierre,

Thanks. As far as I'm concerned, we have a finished product.

Thanks for your help, and especially your collaborative and positive attitude. The entire process was quite painless!

Joanne O.

Hi Pierre,

Thank you very much.

I have reviewed what you sent me and it looks terrific!

You are certainly excellent at what you do.

I look forward to receiving the cover letter. I am preparing for court on Thursday and Friday but will review in detail and let you know of any changes/suggestions. From my first read though I did not see anything that jumped out at me.

Thanks again for your exceptional rewrite of my resume.

Rajendra P.

Jeanie and Jane,

Just wanted to drop a note to tell you three different recruiters I have contacted with my revised resume have commented that it is absolutely perfect and none of them had a single comment/suggestion to make.

Thanks for your quality work.

Best,

Jesper A.

Pierre,

Now that I've had time to really review and dissect the resume, I think you did a GREAT job.

It really speaks well about my overall experience and the skill sets I bring to the table ....

Lisa C.

Dan,

I leave all these changes in your hands as to which is standard business practice and not just symantics.

It looks great and the people that have been assisting me with previous drafts feel the same way.

Best regards,

Luke G.

Hi Donna,

I am pleased to announce I will be (finally!) moving onto an exciting role as Director, Business Development USA and Canada at XXXXXX Inc., an international pharmaceutical contract packaging company.

I wanted to take a few moments to thank you for your efforts and support and I wish you continued success personally and professionally and hope our paths cross again in the future.

Please drop me a line occasionally to let me know how things are going, Ill do the same!

Best regards,

Paul D.

Donna,

I love it--there is no substitute for hiring a pro!

Thank you. I will keep your email address and hopefully send you some business.

Thanks again,

Keith H.

Hi Dan:

This is really great!

Thanks. I am already getting some positive response to the new resume.

Best regards,

Jeff H.

Hi Patricia,

This version looks great now. Thank you very much for your help with it.

I don't think I'll go ahead with the biz dev resume.... first, I need to work out which direction I want to go in.

If I may, I'll keep your contact details and get back in touch if that changes.

Thanks again for your help.

Shaun F.

Freddie,

Thank you very much for your services. I am sure the investment will pay off soon.

The final documents exceeded my expectations.

Good job!!!

All the best,

Troy R.

Pierre,

Whoa! What was that?! Very concise and superbly written!

Well done, Dr. Daunic! My wife and I liked it so much!

This is much appreciated!

God bless you!

Sincerely,

Alfred S.

Hi Debra,

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I agree, you captured the "essence" of "me" and effectively combined a great balance of my capabilities.

Wow, this is great!

Deborah M.

Dan,

I cannot thank you enough.

Outstanding job.

Neil D.

Hi, Pierre,

Thank you very much for your hard work and providing me with such a valuable career tool in such a timely manner!

I sincerely appreciate your efforts.

Regards,

Dave F.

Patrica,

I really like the resume.

I am traveling back to CA tomorrow from Idaho and will make the changes over the weekend.

Thanks for all of your help.

I like the aggressive marketing style!!

Dave B.

Dear Deb,

Thanks very much for your time and effort, a very good professional document.

I have already had one recruiter contact me, not bad!

Best Regards,

Mark N.

Hey Pierre thanks so much!

I am very appreciative of what a great job you did of cramming some many different experiences I had into 2 pages! My wife just LOVED the moving...

I did note some things for you to consider. I've atttached a draft with comments.

Dave F.

Pierre,

Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. I think both of them look great! Nice job!

Any other steps to this process?

Laura P.

Greg,

Looking good, minor change on cover letter (e-mail) and minor comments on rewording 2 bullets on resume. Liking the summary changes.

Justin T.

Hi Dan:

I just accepted a position with a company in Ft Lauderdale as the Director of Planning and Logistics.

Frankly, I would have not gotten this opportunity had it not been for you and your teams outstanding work in preparing a "highly marketable" resume!!

Frankly, you made my previous resume look bad.

I received excellent and consistent positive feedback once I started sending this resume out.

Your services are worth "every penny"!!

Thanks again for your help and support!!!

Best Regards,

Bryan H.

Rita,

You rock!

I love my resume and cover letternow to put them to proper use. BTW, I have a friend (Mike S,) down in South Carolina who, by coincidence, had used your services in the past.

He said you were great and to look forward to excellent performance.

Thanks again,

Bill R.

Hi Wendy!

Another unique approach.

I appreciate the quick turn around. It's been a pleasure learning from your experiences.

I feel confident that future job searches will go much smoother 🙂

Regards,

Dave B.

Debra,

I absolutely love the resume!

I would not make any changes really.

Could you help me change the wording in the cover letter to reflect recent events, namely that I was discharged since they could not hold my position while I was on a short term disability?

I will try you tomorrow or please feel free to call.

Thank you for all the hard work, it looks great!

Mark A.

Donna,

I love it!

I am so glad I came to you to have it written.

I would hire me now.

What are the next steps?

Scott M.

Thank you Patricia ,

It is going great. I turned down one offer and have two others in the works.

Thank you for all your help.

Best regards,

Steve O.

Debra,

Thank you so much for all of the apparent hard work that you've put in to my resume.

It truly looks amazing and I'm excited about going out into the job market with it. First of all, I've made some comments on the side of the document. I hate working via e-mail because you can never gauge tone.

You truly have a talent that is jaw dropping in my opinion. Any comments that I have are not to be taken negatively in any way, they're just my way of trying to figure things out.

I'm also attaching a copy of a resume that I created while waiting for your resume to come through. Obviously it is not any where near the level of professional quality that you've sent to me but it might help to make things a little clearer for you.

Again, thank you so much for this resume. I feel that we are very very close and with a few minor tweaks it will be better than any resume I have ever sent out in my life.

Sincerely,

Dan E.

Rita,

Everything looks great.

I love this new resume.

Thank you.

Clyde B.

Jeanie,

Thank you for drafting my resume.

It is a great reflection of my work and told the story in an effective manner -- which my current resume was missing.

Hopefully, I can refer you new business!

Thank you again.

Susan J.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you very much for the final document.

It sure is a great improvement to the one I had before. I'm sure it will help me to further develop my career.

If there are any tips of how to keep my CV updated, please let me know.

Thank you once again.

Best regards,

Marco A.

Dan,

Thank you for a great job.

I don't see anything that I would want to change on the resume.

John B.

Dan ,

Thanks for the outstanding writing you have provided on this project. I made 2 minor word changes for US Military wording.

I am very satisfied with the format and appearance of this document.

I will distribute this document with pride and I am sure that it will generate desired results.

Best Regards,

Floyd B.

Dan,

The resume is perfect!

Thank you so much.

Valerie A.

Dan,

That looks great. What a transformation from my home grown resume to your professionally written product.

Thank you very much.

Steven G.

Hi Wendy:

I just wanted to thank you again!!

I accepted a position today as Patient Services Manager with XYZ Society of Charlotte, and start Monday.

While I did not get the salary I wanted (not unusual with Non-Profits) I truly think this is a perfect job for me and that I got an initial interview because of the resume you did for me.

Thanks so much again!!

--
Cindy L.

Hi Debra,

This resume looks beautiful (I love the format) and it reads very well; much more powerful than before. The cover letter is awesome!

I will take your advice and read it over a few times, sleep on it and contact you with any changes or corrections.

Thanks for a job well done!

Marcia W.

Wendy,

Thank you for an excellent resume and cover letter.

Yes - the resume is the final version. 🙂

Thank you so much for your patience.

Sincerely,

Katie R.

Debra,

You were excellent to work with and made the process simple and thorough.

I am pleased with the final product as it is accurate and markets my profesioanl achievements efficiently.

All the best.

John Z.

Hi Deb,

Attached is the resume you emailed me with my comments/edits.

Overall, I am very pleased. You did a great job!

I used the track changes and just noted areas where I had some questions on certain terminology and corrected a couple of inaccuracies. Please let me know if I can clarify any of my comments.

Regards,

Chris T.

Jeanie,

Thank you for the first draft.

It looks very good!

Attached are some changes.

Thanks,

Mark E.

Jeanie,

Have made my first cut at the resume.

Very nice job!

Looking forward to the completed document.

Regards,

Kevin D.

Hi Jeanie,

Hope this finds you well - the draft is looking great! My changes are in blue.

Thanks again,

Julie G.

Jeanie,

This first draft looks great. I will have just a few minor changes.

You did an excellent job of telling my career story!

Susan J.

Rita,

I reviewed the attached documents, and I approve them both. No further revisions are necessary.

Thanks for your help and expertise in articulating my work experience.

My resume is much stronger, and I am confident that it will have a greater impact through my job search.

Thanks again!

Shirley C.

Thank you Freddie

I have already seen a HUGE increase in responses to resumes I have been sending out.

I would like to leave a positive recommendation for you.

How do I do that?

I have also referred your company to my friend.

Thanks,

Michelle R.

Deb,

You've done a great job on resume.

Have made minor changes to document. Will also be providing within next 24 hours new cell phone number for resume.

Formatting was perfect as I am also a Mac user.

Thanks,

Richard S.

Dear Peter,

CV finalized, your people have done a great job.

Thank you.

Please let me know the convenient time for me to call you to discuss further.

Regards,

Olivier P.

Hello Ken,

I've reviewed your latest effort thoroughly making several small edits and I'm quite pleased with the results.

I've also had several peers review the document and their response has been favorable. That said, I'm going to run with this version and begin the job hunt in earnest Monday.

You've done a fine job of blending my past experience with newly acquired skills in an effective and succinct style that captures my new direction and ambitions.

I'm confident that your work will open a few doors for me and make the next career step an easy one.

Sincerely,

Dave C.

Dear Peter,

I want to tell you again about the great job that Gregory Faherty did with my resume rewrite.

The resume, cover letter, and professional bio look so good that I get excited each time I read about my skills and experiences.

We joked that reading my new resume makes me want to hire myself, but the truth is that it puts a big smile on face and a big boost of confidence when pursuing my job search.

I agree 100% that a professional resume writer is an essential aid to the job seeker, as I found that I lacked the objectivity to see my skills and accomplishments as others do.

I have started with the basic resume distribution and will let you know how things make out.

Sincerely,

Alfred F. L.

Hi Debra:

First of all I provided you contact information to my son, Ron M.. This service might be out of his price range but still you might hear from him.

Second....I have received a number of very nice comments about the quality of your work. I wanted to pass this along as I am sure you don't get a great deal of follow up.

Well....we just talked so I have already communicated most of this to you.

Thanks again.

Mike M.

Peter,

First, I loved the work Patricia did on my resume.

I was at first a non believer in the need for a resume change since I have never had a problem in over 20 years getting interviews and usually the job thereafter.

But, I agreed with the feedback as to why it was not great and I can not risk it not being great at this point.

Glenn G.

Greg,

Thank you for your hard work on my resume and cover letter. They look wonderful.

Christine W.

Pierre,

I enjoyed reading your draft of the resume. I think it is a vast improvement in the way it reads and the addition/omission of information is exactly what it needed.,

I think the cover letter is great and I will edit it when I have to send it to actual companies that I am targeting.

Thanks for the feedback about the US Surgical contact.

Catherine C. HR


Debra,

After hearing that you were assigned to this makeover and reading your blogs I knew I was lucky to be working with you!

What a terrific transformation from what I thought was an OK resume to this, which makes my previous documents look terribly mediocre. Greatly appreciated!

Please see attached, a few comments made in red. I made a number of small adjustments myself in places to exactly describe responsibilities on the Resume but did not turn on change tracking. The only items I'm requesting your input on are in red, and if you would be able to read it through once more (you'll notice my changes) and confirm that would be great.

We're just about done.

Thanks!

Dan W.

Hi Freddie,

Please find my requested revisions attached.

This is an excellent resume you have crafted!

Thanks,

Michelle R.

Hi Jeanie!

First I want to thank you, you did a really great job and I appreciate it a lot.

Following your instructions I modified some little details as you can see in the attached file.

I kindly ask you to help me completing the "highlights" details and the new CV will be perfect !

Cheers,

Luca M.

Hi Ken:

I edited the resume as suggested and I added text under the yellow highlighted area.

The resume is very good and I am very pleased with your work.

You actually made me sound exciting and its significantly better than what I previously had.

I am looking forward to the final version.

Thanks,

Mike B.

Dear Jeanie,

After a revision in depth of the resume and cover letter you have wrote for me, I want to thank you for this excellent job.

I'm sure that my visibility to head hunters will improve a lot. I have submitted yet the new resume in Bluesteps.

I will contact you when I obtain the first results.

Thanks a lot and have a nice day.

Best regards,

Salvador A.

Hi Greg,

Thank you for your work with my resume and two cover letters.

Please consider the efforts complete and accept my sincere thanks for a job well done.

Bob B.

Hi Wendy,

The cover letter looks great, and so does the resume.

Thank you very much for your hard work.

I also wanted to know if I had questions in the future, maybe about where I should use parts of my resume, ex. being The Ladders resume
input, if you would not mind me sending you a quick question?

Thanks again for all your hard work!!

Brett L

Hi Wendy:

Sorry I haven't gotten back to you.

My resume is great and I love the cover letters.

I went on a job interview today (it is a part-time, temp. teaching position to make-do until I get a job) and she was very impressed with my new resume.Thanks again for all your help!!

Cindy L.

Hi Jeanie,

WOW -- great stuff !

Please find the draft with changes included.

Thanks,

Anurag K.

Wendy,

I am very impressed with the effort that you made to learn as much as possible about me and my experience.

You very obviously put a great deal of effort into it. I am grateful!

Greg C.

Hallo Peter,

In your mail of July 17th, you wrote to send you a copy of my revised rsum and I do that after my correspondence with Jean Oscarson.

I am very satisfied and happy of the result ! She has done a great work, developing a complete and aggressive profile;

I have made only some esthetics in order to keep the text within two pages but all the wording is the original form Jean.

I wait to complete the job with her and to see the letter of presentation and the bio.

Thank you again for your advise and any suggestion from your side is more than welcome.

Ugo L.

Jeanie,

Thanks for your outstanding job!

I've read, checked and where necessary changed the document. I used the highlight changes feature of word. Hopefully it works...I've also wrote some comments and questions for you at the beginning: please read them as well.

I wait for your feedback and final version.

Thanks again,

Andrea M.

Wendy:

The resume if fine and you can consider it complete.
Thanks for your help on this. In my eyes, its a great
improvement....now we will see how well it gets me
noticed.

Also, I have seen comments regarding on-line versions of resumes...do you know what that is all about?

Regards,

Henry S.

Hi Wendy,

The resume can be considered done. There are a few minor changes that I can make (Vice President VS President etc.) . The cover letter will work nicely. Now, how do I get these read and appreciated in 20 seconds?!

Thanks for the time, effort, and thought you put into my project.

George ON.

Greg,

Excellent job! I don't think the cover letter needs to be changed at all.

I have attached the resume with some minor changes which are indicated in red.

Best Regards,

Taylor B.

Rita,

After reviewing my new resume, I must say, I would hire me!

I reviewed a couple of times and it's great.

I will read it one more time, but I am impressed!

Thank you so much.

Sincerely,

Stephanie L.

Jeanie,

An excellent job all round. You're the best.

My resume makes me look quite professional and attractive.

Thanks for all your good work,

Jack R.

Hi Jeanie,

Attached is my revised draft.

I have actually made very minor corrections, since your draft is very precise and accurate and reflects very effectively my profile!

Thank you !!

Ugo L.

Donna,

Look like you nailed it. It reads great.

Please send me the final formatted versions of both the Cover Letter & Resume removing all the comments and mark ups.

Donna, I appreciate all youve done thru this process. I feel you have tremendously improved my marketability with these updated documents. I look forward to obtaining several positive responses to my marketing campaign with this new positioning.

Again, thanks for the help.

Take care for now.

Paul R.

Hi Denise,

I wanted to let you know that Patrica did a very good job - she also answered all my question and gave additional insights that reflect her experience.

I would be very happy to refer her to colleagues.

Regards,

Thierry P.

Ilona,

Resume looks fine, did some minor changes.

First interview went well; I will need to come back for a next interview, with the President of the company.

Thank you so much for all your had work!!!!!

You are the best!!!

Michelle C.

Dear Jeanie,

Please find attached the document with my additions/modifications.

I must say that draft looks good and I am sure final version will be even better.

Thanks!

Atul M.

Jeanie,

Attached is my final draft for my resume. There are three small changes that I have marked in red.

I appreciate your professional work and format that you have provided for my resume.

I look forward to receiving the completed product for distribution.

Thank you!

Bob O.

Hi Freddie,

WOW! What a wonderful job. I am so excited and can't wait to begin circulation.

Please review my comments in red. I don't know which phone number is appropriate to list on my resume.

A few comments:

1. we discussed highlighting the fact that i have an MBA in profile.
2. i was under the impression, you were going to list my volunteer work as Operations Director as my current job. I've been working for this Committee since May - not sure if this is important, since we're not focusing on dates, but the experience i'm gaining is valuable.

That's it. WOW, what a difference. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

Zeli P.

Hi Donna,

My concerns over the cost has gone away.

You did a good job, just a few changes to be made, will be in touch the next day or two.

The doggy story was a way of showing my personality, which I think you got in there.

Thank you,

Terry H.

Hi there, Jeanie -

Here is the first review of the first draft. Please see the minimal changes.

I love how you minimized aspects of the printing industry. As you mentioned, please create a version with a different opening summary that highlights my extensive experience in the printing industry so I can use the document for those opportunities.

Im so pleased with your work thus far Im amazed how clearly the rsum captures my responsibilities and achievements.

As a result, I would like you to prepare my bio for the LinkedIn.com web site. I look forward to the completion of my final rsum.

Jeff M.




Hi Jeanie,

First, I'd like to say that I am quite impressed by the draft you sent to me.

Please find attached my modifications and comments. Looking forward to receiving your second draft,

Olivier R.

Patricia,

Thank you for sending this first-pass of my resume on the date you committed. I am always impressed by people who keep their word.

Overall, the resume looks great, is accurate, tells a strong story, and feels like a winner that will attract attention.

I have modified it as you requested and addressed your questions below.

When will I receive the next pass? I have several positions I want to apply for while they are newly posted.

Regards,

Art P.

Debra -

First let me say, you are great at what you do.

These documents make me realize what I have accomplished and that my other attempt at a resume was indeed selling myself short.

I proofread the documents and highlighted specific areas that I was either uncomfortable with and / or that needed correction. I used your "tools, track changes, highlight changes" method so I hope that helps.

I look forward to completing this project with you.

Ryan C.



Dear Debra,

Thank you so much for the work you did on my resume.

I think you did a great job modernizing the look, streamlining the text, and improving the power of the wording.

I have edited the resume and attached a copy hereto. Please take a look and let me know what you think.

Again, with my many thanks,

Susan K.

Rita,

This is OUTSTANDING! Other than a missing "s" at the end of the word "others" ( it's in red on this document) I am "pleased as punch" with this CL.

Thank you so much for making me sound AMAZING-Not that I am not, but WOW!

You've earned your fee with this alone!

Regards,

Lisa S.

Rita,

Thank you for all your help.

I am really excited about how well this turned out!

Shannon D.

Hi Debra,

Thanks for this work.. I read it over several times and really liked what you put together..

I think you did an outstanding job on this.

I only had one modification to the resume which is the time I was at Dial.. I highlighted the changes on the resume document in red with an underline on it. That is the only change I saw. I did not have any changes to the cover letter.

Thanks again for this work. It is excellent.

Robert P.

Freddie,

Attached are hopefully my final revisions. I am traveling most of today but will be able to review late this afternoon to hopefully finalize with you.

Thanks for your quick turnaround. I really need to get resumes out to several possible opportunities just as soon as we are both satisfied we have properly represented my background and qualifications.

Thanks for your commitment to excellence!!

All the best,

LeRoy R.

Pierre,

Sorry it took me a few days to take a look at this.

It looks great!

I'm not sure if I need more quantitative examples of my work though, not that I can think of many, but I like the project work designation.

I think that does portray it in a great light.

Lori K.

Dear Pierre,

All looks good. Thank you for putting it all together, it looks definitively more organized.

Antonio L.

Wendy,

Thanks for all your help!!

Excellent Job!

Steve S.

Hi Wendy,

Again, thanks for your assistance.

This is top-down the best assistance I've had with regard to my resume. Lastly, the session this morning was very valuable and information I can begin using immediately.

Sincerely,

Anedra S.

Dan,

You are right! I would hire me now! I do think its a really great resume.

I think I was just freaking out but I like the new bullets. Its shows multi-dimensions of my skills and that is needed.

I will print and go over it really carefully and get back to you but I think we have it!

Now I have to go back to work. Not sure that is a good thing:) !!!

Michelle M.

Wendy,

This looks very good. I appreciate it immensely.

Regards,

Dennis S.

Hi Dan,

No need to modify the resume. It is getting results !

Thank you so much for a great job and I will recommend you highly to anyone who needs your services.

If you don't mind I'll keep you posted. I am sure you find it satisfying when one of your clients gets a job with your help.

Have a good day.

Gisele B.

Dan,

These documents are outstanding.

You have exceeded my expectations. I really appreciate your time and effort in creating these outstanding documents.

I made one correction to the cover letter, which I attached to this e-mail. I am interested in obtaining an Internet ready copy of my resume.

How can I obtain that from you?

Sincerely,

Carl McC.

Hello Wendy,

I am quite impressed, it looks good.

As I said before you should think about writing the book 🙂

Attached you will find as well samples for targeted job level - Country Manager, Director Operations, Factory Manager.

Josef K.

Ken,

After reading and rereading both documents, I can not find any errors in either document.

You have done an excellent job capturing my work responsibilites and achievements accurately.

Since everything seems to be in order, I can not make changes to these documents.

Thanks again,

Kentril W.

Hi Jeanie,

I have reviewed and made some minor changes as well as answered your questions.

Believe you have done a great job - I truly appreciate your efforts.

This is a vast improvement from the uninspiring version of the past!

Debora H.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you for the great work. I really like the way my resume is transforming -- more powerful.

I have replied to your questions in red. I really appreciate the way you transform the information.

Kind regards and looking forward to your final comments and review.

Abrazos,

Fabrizio P.

Ilona,

You are good!

I'm going to be on vacation until next Thursday of next week.

I hope to accomplish what you have indicated and respond during this period. If I don't please forgive me!

Thank you greatly for your effort.

The very best,

David K.

Pierre -

I really like that you were able to get it down to 2 pages (and) I really appreciate your feedback ...

I have struggled with the "title" so to speak - I am trying to broaden my appeal to supply chain operations types of recruiters. I need to acknowledge my IT background/recent roles, but I am really looking to move more towards supply chain leadership roles in the future... it helps to have someone else's view of one's experience to make the most of how to present it.

Kathie K.

Jeanie,

I have reviewed the first draft, and it looks very good!

Thanks so much,

Michael M.

Dear Jeanie,

Thank you very much for the excellent documents. Really a good work!

Cheers,

Markku M.

Hello Jeanie,

Definitely worth every business day of waiting: I am impressed and encouraged!

I have made some minor modifications and comments and attach the current (now pathetic in comparison) CV for the information you did not have.

I am certainly looking forward to the next iteration!

Best regards,

Michel H.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you for the last CV version. I am very please with the ending result!

Agostino H.

Hi Jeanie,

This is a gigantic improvement on the very poor document that I have been calling a CV.

Thanks for your skill and patience. If I need a tweak or a rework - I'll be in touch!

Kind Regards,

Gareth S.

Hi Wendy,

Thank you very much for your work on the resume.

I am very happy with the results and would like to confirm that the formatted resume you sent me was the final version.

I am in the process of gathering the job descriptions and will send them to you sometime tomorrow.

Thanks again.

Regards,

Tarek F.

Pierre:

All I can say is WOW!

I am very impressed with your work, and the way that you have made me look.

It sufficiently captures everything that I have been thinking about, and would convey at an interview, but could not get across in my resume.

You made it look and sound great!

Terry F.

Freddie,

I looked the resume and cover letter over and they look great.

You did a wonderful job!

Thank you,

John M.

Ken,

This copy looks great!

I am well-pleased with what you have done. I have made only one revision in the resume and it is highlited in red.

The cover letter is very professional and persuasive.

Thank you for your efforts.

Bradley McD.

Hi Jeanie,

The resume looks great;

I don't have any further changes.

Regarding the cover letter, I'll get through it today and get back to you on it. I have a further question: how can I go about further changes/improvements from this point onward?

In other words, would career resumes also do maintenance for a reduced fee?

Thanks and I look forward to hearing back from you.

Cheers,

Ron T.

Hello, Ken:

I have read, and re-read both documents, and am very pleased with the summary and style !

I do confess that I did have to research the terminology for "matrix management" and agree that it is appropriate.

I do not see the need for any revisions, you transferred my information extremely well.

I look forward to getting these documents to work for me, and will keep you informed, as I progress through the next steps, as to the pending success that you will have contributed towards my career goals.

Kindest regards,

Rebecca B.

Hi Wendy.looks really goodand I get the gist of how to tweak each opportunity with the right paragraphs

I think we can officially say YOU ARE DONE with me.

Although we never met face to face I did ready your linked in profile and you sound like a very interesting person

Thanks again for the great job well done.

Best regards for a long and happy life.

Chris G.

p.s. if you ever need a recommendation, reference or attaboy about your writing skills please let me know

Thanks Ilona...GREAT WORK!!

Attached is the resume with the answers to your questions.

Best Regards,

Marshall S.

Freddie,

I have made very few changes to the cover letter and resume. A couple of the changes that I made I should have caught before, and I apologize for missing them. (One of the changes was to the size of the property at Pike's. The realtor listed it as 14.6 acres so I decided to go with that number to ensure accuracy.)

You did an excellent job on both my resume and cover letter, and I truly appreciate all of your hard work.

Beth W.

Dear Jeanie,

I received your work and must say that it is OUTSTANDING, and as Peter would say, I would certainly hire myself after reviewing the draft.

My deepest appreciation for your skills, your extraordinary capacity to read in depth career lives, like mine, which have an international background hard to catch in all its facets.

Gratefully,

Melissa de T.

Ken,

Thank you for getting it to me so fast.

It is short and sweet. I like it.

I will do as you said and read it several times.
Have a great 4 th.

Gary B.

Freddie,

I will check the website about those other services and let you know if I would like to pursue any of them.

If you don't hear from me, thank you again for your assistance and hard work.

Enjoy the holiday weekend.

Haskell B.

Donna,

Just wanted to say you are very good at your work and I can tell you enjoy what you do and it shows.

Thanks,

Joe U.

Hi Rita,

It is perfect.

Thanks so much - I have also sent you a linked in invite.

Your work is great!

Tina P.

KEN,

THANKS FOR THE DRAFT RESUME. I THINK IT IS VERY WELL DONE.

I HAVE MADE A FEW MINOR CHANGES/ADDITIONS AND HAVE ATTACHED THE AMENDED VERSION FOR YOUR REVIEW. I USED THE WORD "TRACK CHANGES" FEATURE AS YOU SUGGESTED.

HOPEFULLY, I DID IT CORRECTLY.

FINALLY, WHAT IS YOUR ADVISE REGARDING REFERENCES BEING INCLUDED WITH THE RESUME? ARE THOSE SOMETHING I SHOULD ADD?

BOB H.

Hi Freddie,

I apologize for the delay. I've been swamped at work.

I thought this draft was far superior to the first.

I am suggesting just a few minor changes.

One question I have. Is the "Additional Experience" section an acceptable format? This is obviously a new resume model for me so I was just wondering if employers expect to have those positions stand on their on own.

Thank you for all your time and hard work.

Haskell B.

Pierre,

After reading your writing for my resume, I must say that professional work really makes a difference.

Basically, I am accepting your structure and language.

Thnaks,

Steve F.

Tom,

Everything was PERFECT! I lOVE MY Resume and the cover letter provided.

I knew I could count on a fellow Jersey Boy!

Thanks for the hookup!

Have a Great Day!

Craig A.

Freddie,

Just wanted to thank you for your work on my resume.

The result is a big improvement over the former version.

Best regards,

David W.

Wendy,

It looks fantastic, Im very happy with it. My wife raved about it as well.

I didnt realize it was 3 pages, and I heard somewhere about resumes should only be 2. Im out of touch with these things, so Im only asking out of ignorance. Theres a lot of experience to show off and I think it looks good, so Im happy with it, just curious.

I guess the next step would be the cover letter. Im not sure on the process for that, so just let me know. Ill be traveling all day tomorrow and will be out of e-mail contact. You can call me if there is anything specific you would like to discuss.

Thanks again,

Rex H.

Hi Rosie,

The resume looks awesome.

I just made minor add and some comments. So I return it back to the professional 🙂

Ratna M.

Freddie,

Thank you for your great service and expertise.

Regards,

Mark Z.

Peter,

A huge thank you and compliment to Tom Albano.

He did an incredible job on my resume revision and cover letter- worth every penny. Wow!!!!

Please add this to his (I'm sure) already glowing accolades folder.

Anne B.

HI Debra,

I do not know if it is even possible to improve on these, this is far superior then anything I could have done on my own.

Thank you, I am very pleased.

Frank B.

Patricia,

It's an excellent piece of work and I'm really, really pleased with it!

I've accepted the comments and clarified the achievements in the cover letter - let me know if it works, and I'll send in my application.

Thanks and regards,

Alan H.

Hi Patricia,

I had a telephone interview for a different job yesterday, and it looks as though I've got it.

I'm flying to North Carolina on Friday, and if the face to face meeting goes well (I think it's a formality) I'll stay there the following week for training. I'll be based in Dallas as a remote worker selling their services in the south west.

I used the resume with the VP title and it worked great!

Thanks for your help.

Kind regards,

Alan H.

Hi Debra,

I must say...like a fine wine, my resume proof got better with age.

I read, reviewed, and reread my resume several times and each time your efforts proved more remarkable.

Your help is truly appreciated as you've done an amazing job capturing and highlighting my relevant career points.

Although I would be perfectly happy if this was the final draft, I did make some changes to the initial proof ('Track Changes' turned on). Most notably, I changed the order of the items in the "Qualifications and Expertise" box to roughly reflect my expertise. I know by doing so, the left margin is no longer uniformly decreasing. However, I think the re-ordered list is still aesthetically pleasing. Let me know if you agree or disagree. I have also changed some wording and included additional text in certain spots.

All of my changes are purely suggestions from my untrained eye and I defer to your professional opinion on what changes to make, if any.

Schyler T.

Rita,

Thank you for a great job!

Next question, I would like a cover letter for a Director of Market Research position as well.

Can I contract with you for this?

Sincerely,

Ross G.

Rita,

Thank you for the documents -- they are outstanding!

I would not have been able to capture this kind of aggressive style without you.

Attached are updated copies of the documents with my edits and questions.

I hope you and your family are doing well in the aftermath of the storms and flooding. Sounds like you were beginning the cleanup effort, but your area has been hit pretty hard. My thoughts are with you this week, and I pray the worst is over for you.

David S.

Freddie,

Thank you. you did a wonderful job for and I thank you!

After re-reading the resume several times (my wife also read several times), we did not find a whole lot we should change other than what I sent you.

Of course, if I need to tweak it for job specific applications I will do so.

Have a great evening,

Derrick S.

Rita,

Looks GREAT!

Let me look over this and I will be in touch tomorrow sometime.

Eric M.

Great Job Wendy!

I am good to go with both the resume and cover letter. In preparing my resume, you extracted information from me which was long forgotten but very relevant to my job search.

The cover letter document is perfect and offers flexibility in my presentation to prospective recruiters/employers.

I enjoyed our interaction during this process and look forward to landing an influential position in the world of business in the near future.

Thank you!

Richard S.

Hi Ilona,

I am so pleased with my resume, it looks incredible!

Please see attached. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best,

Sarah B.

Patricia,

I changed "Manage" to "Managed" in first paragraph of XYZ company to be consistent with 1996-2008 decision.

Otherwise I think it is great!

One question: is Rainmaker audacious? If I want to be more modest. Iis there another word I might substitute ... or is this a generally accepted term
in HR circles?

My meeting Sunday [with head hunter friend] confirmed that I should follow my heart and seek non-profit positions first. Therefore it could be a
while before I blow the dust off this for-profit piece ... but you never know.

You've done very well by me. I appreciate your gifts for understanding your client's inner workings and making a strong, concise statement about their
career and character.

Many thanks indeed.

Bart T.

Jane,

Thank you for all of your help. I really appreciate how quickly you resolved the issue with not getting the resume due to Donna's pc issues. I really appreciate it and you helped to ease my concerns.

I too think Patricia did a fantastic job...she really made the process smooth for me.

The hardest part was filling out the worksheets. However, it was a good exercise to get me to really think about my experience and accomplishments.

I will be sure to contact you again should I need the additional services.

I have already referred you and Patricia to a colleague.

Best,

Jackie R.

Wendy,

The resume looks great! Please go ahead and send the final... I look forward to the cover letter

Sanika G.

Ilona,

3:44 AM? Hope you weren't burning the midnight oil strictly on my account.

Resume looks great, far superior to anything I could create, the cover letter is fantastic as well.

Does this end our relationship? What happens if I want something 'tweaked' or if I find employment and would like help adding that piece to my resume?

Again, thanks for your help.

Paul S.

Dan,

First, this was worth the wait. Don't quit your day job as this is nothing short of outstanding.

Thanks for the outline below it took care of the questions I had and most I'd have never considered. I think my changes (see attachment) will fit your spacing concerns, if not let me know. I do have some questions about the cover letter but will wait for your direction after you finalize the resume.

I'm anxious to send this bad boy out to the outside world!

Rick P.

Hello Again,

This looks great, thank you so much!

I am very pleased with the resume.

I accepted the minor changes shown and removed the highlighting. Is there anything else we need to do to close out the process?

Also, I ran the resume by a colleague of mine, an HR executive, and she is also considering contacting you to utilize your services.

To me, that is the ultimate compliment!

Again, thank you for providing such an amazing resume with such a short turnaround time.

Best,

Jackie R.

Wendy,

Thank you so much for all of the time and effort put forth into reworking my resume and cover letter. The end result far exceeded my expectations.

Your services will be highly recommended.

Best regards,

Stephanie F.

HI WENDY,

EVERYTHING LOOKS PERFECT.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR EVERYTHING YOU DID

BEST,

HAVE A GOOD BUSINESS.

SEE YOU ON NEXT PROJECT:-)).

Robert A.

Debra:

Thank you.

I could have never prepared such a "bragging document" on myself.

It's interesting how I can sell products/services but seem humble about my own skill set.

I am in Chattanooga and GA this week with my manager and director preparing Q3 goals so work/life balance is extreme right now.

I will take the time to review your excellent efforts and provide feedback by the end of the weekend.

A sincere thank you for the compliments and your time.

Kind Regards,

Stephanie T.



Stephanie Tillman

Ken,

This looks very good. Is there anymore that needs to be done?

Thank you for getting my resume to look so professional.

Take care,

Niki H.

Tammy,

The first emotion I felt when I read the resume was "WOW!!!". I was speechless!

You did an amazing job in putting my career and it's achievements into a concise, well-written document.

Thank you!

Michael H.

Debra,

These are great.

If I were looking to grow a company I would hire me. Lol

I know you are very busy and I will start sending these out today. I have close to 100 jobs saved from various web based employment sites.

As you indicated earlier I would appreciate if you could take a look at my Bio. There is no rush as I will be quite busy over the next couple of days getting these out.

Regards

Rich S.

Hi Donna,

You were right, it was personnel. I also made a few other changes, let me know what you think.

I did read the entire cover letter and the resume, and I think its 1,000,000 times better then what I had previously.

Let me know when its complete. Also, how do I receive the original copy and do I print them on my resume paper or do you guys provide this included in the price I paid?

God Bless,

John S.

Wendy,

Thanks for the updated Resume, it looks brilliant.

Thanks again for all of your hard work and I look forward to receiving the cover letter.

Regards,

Paul R.

Thanks Tom for the very creative and striking rsum.

This is a total transformation from my previous statements.

I look forward to success based on your work.

Best regards,

Moses K.

Hello Peter,

I just wanted you to see the resume that your company did .

I am very happy with it ! I have had a few problems with the ladders trying to upload it but it is not an issue with Darlene's work at all - she is wonderful .

Thank you again for convincing me to use your company.

I showed the resume to some relatives who were skepitcal and they were impressed too.

Amy G.

Freddie,

Thank you for the follow up. I believe you have produced a far superior rendition than before, and your focus on the whole person vs. the quantitative aspects alone has delivered a set of products I am comfortable to use to represent me.

Whatever you need to do to close out this project, is approved by me.

Thank you once again for your talents and professionalism.

Now, the proof will be in the results!

Sincerely,

Dale L.

Wendy,

Thank you for completing this quickly.

I am happy with the resume and think you made great changes in correcting content and layout. It reads much easier, I believe, in the current format.

I can see no additional changes required at this time. I would assume we can close our "contract" out at this point in time. Let me know.....

Best,

Mike H.

Ciao Ilona,

Thanks for the resume, will do the correction.

I almost cried it sounded so good, you know I am a little nervous and sometimes I think I do not have enough experience or that I have not done a lot.

But the way you wrote it....gosh, I feel good:)

Just redid the references. I will do it again if you do not like it.

Have a good week.

Thanks Ilona

Rita M.

Hi Freddie,

It looks good.

I am having some troubles with my PC at home. I'll make the changes asap and forward them back to you.

But overall I commend you for doing a great job on my behalf.

Thank you.

Neal G.

Donna,

Thanks! Have a good holiday weekend.

I'm getting a lot of compliments by the way on the resume and a few more interviews now.

Bob B.

Rosie,

Overall looks VERY good!!!

So much better than my resume..

Gary W.

Freddie,

Wonderful... Thank you.

A job well done. Now say a payer for me!

Preston G.

Jane,

Submitting your recommendation has been on my to-do list since January :-).

Your service definitely helped me getting my new job.

I still talk to recruiters and they all are pretty impressed with my resume. So I hope folks in my network contact you for a critique at least.

Hope all is well, an if there's anything I could do for you, let me know.

Have a good holiday!

Fred J.

Hi Donna,

I love, love, love!!! Such a great job!!!

I made notes in the margins. if you want to talk anything through please feel free to call me on my cell 917.xxx-xxxx.

Thanks,

Sara A.

Hi Freddie,

Thanks for taking the time to speak with me and for providing valuable suggestions on what I can do to improve my resume and cover letter.

You advice is very clear and actionable and will help me now as well as in the future.

Thanks,

Ravi V.

Rosie:

Received your Bio Draft communication this evening.

I just want to thank you again for all your assistance.

Please put my name on your "satisfied customer" list.

It is no surprise to know you have won awards for your professionally honed skills.

Customers like me are indeed fortunate to have you
available to help with this critical career step.

I wish you all the best.

Sam O.

Darlene,

Approximately 20 days ago you sent me a resume and cover letter than you had created from the information I supplied.

In the prior 12 months I had used a couple of versions of a resume I had developed. I got NO responses.

Since I started using yours I have received 5 serious follow-ups from recruiters or companies.

By the end of this week I will not be surprised if that number doubles.

Thank you again.

Your work is worth ten times what I paid for it.

Since you expertise is obviously in wordings related to the job hunting process I would like to ask a simple question. When someone asks what salary you are looking for how do you answer without giving specifics (might be too hight or to low) yet in a diplomatic way say tell me what you think I am worth?

By the way you can use my comments above in any promotional material you wish. Feel free to doing a rewrite to make it read just right.

Will keep you posted.

Mike M,

Hi Pierre,

I just went through both and they look fantastic, very professional, polished, and most importantly they both are effective at showcasing my strengths.

Very articulate, I can tell you went back and reformed some ideas to tell a more in depth story.

The only thing I found was a typo for my first job at Cass Screw. It's Machinist and "CNC" not PNC programmer. It stands for Computerized Numerical Control. Other than that I think you can take the rest of the afternoon off, well done. I'm sending this to my wife so she can take a look at it also.

She was impressed with the first draft.

Thanks again,

Chris N.

Dear Jeanie:

I have now read the letter of recommendation that you have prepared for me and I'm quite happy.

This is what I wanted. I have also reviewed the last changes that you made to my resume and am quite happy with your suggestion.

I thank you again for all your help.

Otilio R.

Jeanie,

I think you've done a fantastic job already.

Please review my comments and I look forward to your second draft.

Again, overall, I'm very impressed. You seem to know what you are doing!

Alex I.

Dear Jeanie,

Looks great!

I have reviewed the document in track changes..which I hope make sense.

Thanks,

Michael W.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks!!

It's nearly perfect!!

Have made the changes, please finalize this at the earliest....

Purvi B.

Jeanie,

It looks great!

There are a few things I need to add or change. I'll do this asap and revert.

Thanks again - I'm really happy with the document.

I've made all changes without tracking (as this sometimes goes wrong for me) in bold italic orange. In some cases where i did not change text but only changed ordering, I also changed font to orange. Please let me know if you have any other questions.

Regards,

Jeremy L.

Hi Jeanie,

I like what you have done! I made some minor adjustments and also highlighted some items I would like your opinion on. Please let me know if you need further clarification on anything.

Thanks!

Regards,

Hamid H.

Darlene,

I am impressed with what an excellent job that you did.

As you can imagine, my budget is strapped and I did agonize over my spending extra money of the rework of my resume, however, with the wonderful job that you did,

I think that it was well worth the money. I have made a few changes to the resume, none to the letter. I also took out the number of employees supervised because of the re-structuring and layoffs at XXXXX, I felt it was better for me to address that in person during an interview. (Hopefully). Please let me know if you agree, as I am anxious to re-post this excellent resume and use this letter.

Again, I can't say again, how impressed I am with the job that you did. You have certainly helped my confidence in this process, which I have only had to do twice before in my career.

Sincerly Mike McN.

Please feel free to use any of my comments as a testimonial to your fine work.

Pierre,

I feel we are probably complete. I had an Executive Recruiter with a Tier 1 Recruiting Firm review the resume. Here are his comments:

"I had a chance to review your resume and think it looks great. We feel that the first page is absolutely the most important aspect since many companies only take a quick glance. Your summary/profile sections is concise and to the point. The format you used is current and up to date. Honestly, I would not recommend any changes."

Thanks for your help! I did make some formatting changes and will forward you a final copy.

Greg P.

Patricia:

On my way out for an evening with the family, but I had to delay our outing for a few minutes just to say I've given the attached doc a first read and I have one word to say: WOW!

I am flabbergasted. I can tell you that for years I have been reluctant to pay for these services, and now I wish I had done so years ago! I am extremely happy, and this is only a first pass on a draft!

This is the kind of document that I am sure will open doors for me. What I do once I am in, I realize is up to me, but your work is truly inspiring and extremely motivating. Like I said in my previous email
wherein I included my questionnaire, I was eagerly awaiting this draft to "see just how wonderful I am" on paper. I am SO impressed.

Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart.

I will give this a second, third and fourth+ look later tonight and in the morning and provide feedback. However, I just wanted you to know
that we are definitely on the right track here.

Thanks again, and hope you have a great rest of the weekend.

Tony R.

Ilona,

Here's my revised resume with the answers included.

Thanks! It looks great!

Cindy H.

Rosie,

I have reviewed the document and have to say that I am definitely impressed.

The only thing(s) that I found were a couple of spacing issues but that may be only due to compatibility of programs. I did use the track changes button, I have Office 2007 and I've been told that some things look a little different when opened with 2003 despite a supposed fix via office update. I hope that it comes across as you had instructed.

I think it looks great and can't wait to get it out there.

I thank you again,

Charny S.


Hi Rosie,

The resume looks great.

I added information to the company profile for Reiling Associates. Those are the the only two changes I made.

Thanks again,

Eric T.

Rosie,

Please review the attached document. I have made minor changes to your original.

Many thanks for the great job.

Myrene OC.

Rosie,

Thank you very much.

I like the way you set this up.

Thanks,

Gary D.

Hi Rosie,

Great job! I'm very pleased.

If you have any questions email me or call me on my cell..

Best regards

Dan L.

Patricia,

Thank you so much!

You have been extremely helpful and a joy to work with.

I am very happy with my Resume and CL.

You did a great job.

Thank you!!

Best Regards,

Kristin Z.

Pierre,

First of all, this is fantastic.

I can see how my older resume was very flat.

Thank you. Here are my notes and answers to your questions.

Stephen K.

Dear Mr Newfield,

I am quite happy with the resume that Jean Oscarson is writing for me!

I would like her to write a cover letter and a one-page marketing bio for a total of $275 as you write below.

Thank you, Jeannie!

Christine J.

Ilona,

I believe we have a finished product, I am very happy with.

As you suggested, I will adjust resume according to specific opportunity. If I see anything else, I will get back to you. Thanks again.

Gary G.

Ken:
Ken,

Wow!

The resume and cover letter are great. What a difference.

I've made a few edits and highlighted questions/comments.

Thanks,

Candace P.

Pierre,

"On first glance - I love it! It's easy to recognize a good resume (as I have often had to do in my roles) and yet so hard to create one! Though I wasn't satisfied with mine, I didn't really know what to do to make it better. I also like the cover letter and agree with the bullet point format - it allows me to change those out so as to meet the needs of the prospective employer. So, thank you!

I'm going to spend some time with the docs this afternoon and will get back to you with questions and comments. "

Thanks so much and I'll get back with you soon. "

Kimberly H.

Good Morning Ilona,

Please find attached my resume and cover letter for text conversion purposes. I made very slight adjustments to both. I can always modify as needed from this point forward. Thank you for the clarification on when and when not to use text versions.

One question regarding the resume: I assume B2C means Business to C- level executives (CEOs, COOs, Owners, GMs etc...), yes? Also, if I soon decide I want a Bio, would you be the person I would need to contact?

Ilona, I have very much enjoyed working with you during our brief association. Your professionalism, follow-through and generous assistance represent your company very well. Many thanks!

I look forward to receiving the final documents.

Best Regards,

Steve H.

Ilona,

First and foremost, you do excellent work!

And, thank you for your positive comments on my backgroud. I am pretty proud of it. Now, if I can just get in front of some potential employers!!

You asked me to remind you as we finalized this document that I will need it converted for Web posting etc... I realize we're not there yet, but thought I should mention it.

Thank you again for the marvelous job!

I am eager to see the revised version. Sorry about the confusion on the cover letter. Will this prove a big deal?

Regards,

Steve H.

Pierre,

By the way, you have done an amazing job with this resume.

I would never have thought to bring in all of my accomplishments, as I would it have viewed it as bragging.

Once I read the draft, I felt that if I were looking for a candidate, it would be hard to pass by the resume.

I never would have thought to market myself this way. It is amazing!

Thanks for all of your help. I know I will be able to move forward in my career to a career position, not just a job.

Sally-Anne P.

Wendy,

Thanks for your help; sorry it's taken me so long to follow up.

The resume and cover letter look great and I'm ready to restart my search with the new materials.

Consider this final approval and renewed thanks.

Regards,

David W.

Hi Wendy,

This looks great - Id like a few other small format changes, but I can take them from here.

Look forward to receiving the cover letter ASAP.

Regards,

Kevin B.

Wendy,

Wendy,

The first draft looks great! Take a look at my edits and comments and let me know what you think.

In addition, thes looks really good...the adaptability is excellent! Can you explain the next steps, if any.

Craig G.

Deanne,

Thanks and great job!!

I have sent out 4 resumes and have had 3 calls already!!

Mark D.


Deanne,

Many thanks for the excellent work on my resume.

I really appreciate your thoroughness (and your extra research -- I can see that you didn't get the information about my company from me and that you must have looked it up -- very impressive!).

Attached is my edited version. I thought of something very important that I had done in transforming the division's strategic direction and I added a bullet to that effect.

Please let me know if you need any more information from me.

I'm really pleased with your work and will be happy to recommend you to others.

Sincerely,

Phil S.

Peter,

Darlene Dassy did a great job fixing up my resume - the text leaps off the page and has very crisp text.

Now that we've taken care of this, I'd like to know more about how you can help me. While I'm not interested blanketing a bunch of companies with my resume, I would definitely like to know of any networking opportunities or career events with which you're affiliated.

Thanks,

Robert G.

Ilona,

I think it is perfect.

Thanks so much, and I am so glad
you were able to fit it into 2 pages and it really
does highlight what I needed-great work!!

Best,

Nikki B.

Hi Denise,

Thank you for your time this afternoon. You were so kind in the way you told me my resume stunk! I like candid but you were also diplomatic.

I did in fact complete the work sheets--I hope they make sense to Jean. I am hoping Jean will call me tomorrow for a brief introduction and to confirm receipt of the work sheets and fax. I really did spend the time in thought and to be accurate in the work sheets. Now make me out to be superman--I've got the cape but can I fly?

I will be interested in the global distribution of the completed resume so we can talk about that at some point.

All the best,

Thanks again.

Bill A.

Ilona,

I'm out of town for the weekend, but I got a chance to look at the resume and I think it looks great.

I'm really pleased with it in an overall sense.

I'll take time to go through it carefully as you outlined in your email and get back to you next week with any questions, feedback and answers to your questions.

I just wanted you to know that my initial reaction is very positive.

Thanks for making sense of what I sent you.

Rochelle N.

Ilona,

I received the drafts, and they look GREAT!!! I have answered most of your questions, but won't send the draft back until I have reviewed it several times as you suggested.

The formatting did get a little messed up which made the resume 3 pages instead of 2. However, I know that can be easily fixed during the final version.

Thank you for doing such a wonderful job on my resume. I feel much more confident about submitting this resume than I did my other one.

Have a great weekend.

Beth W.

Dear Kathy,

Many thanks for the resume and cover letter. They both read very well - miles better than my original version.

I have made a few minor changes on the attached.

Look forward to hearing from you shortly.

Regards,

Martin S.

Ilona.

I figured the scaling out....on the printing effects tab, I changed it from the default "print to scale" and now it looks great! Duh!

Thanks so much! You really kicked me out of a rut!

Tracy B.

Tom,

This looks great!!!

I can modify based on the position - thanks for your help once again.

It's a real pleasure work with such a pro!

Janis MH.

Kathy,

FYI, I put my new resume up on The Ladders today and last night on Monster. Already have 3 phone calls and 2 emails from the Monster one.

I am very pleased with your work. I have already spoken to one recruiter that I will be meeting on Friday and he said he was very impressed with the resume and asked if I had it professionally done.

I told him that you, a rep from The Ladders, completed it. He said that when he directs people to professional resume services, there are only two that he sends them to. One is The Ladders. So you guys have a great rep.

Thank you again,

Traei P.

Hi Ilona,

I think it looks great.

I really have no changes and liked the trimming down of the bottom portion for sure.

I will let you know what I land with this piece of art! 🙂

Thanks again,

Heather F.

Rosie,

This looks great and reads well.

Thanks for all your hard work on this. I am looking forward to seeing the bio. Is there anything you need for that or does it all come from the resume?

Eric T.

Hi Donna,

You may remember that you redesigned my resume and wrote a cover letter as well for me back in September/October 2007.

I wanted to let you know that within a week of sending my new CV out, I started getting interviews and landed a job as the Regional Marketing Director for Westfield Corporation. In fact, Westfield was the first place I sent my resume and I was selected to interview out of over 180 original applications sent via email.

There is no doubt your rewrite of my resume got me in the door and for that, I thank you.

Should you ever need a reference, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Kind regards,

Zanne A.

Donna,

They look great! There were a couple of things I noted and commented.

I would love for you to do a "bio" for TheLadders.com and any others you recommend.

What do you recommend as far as envelopes with snail mail? Handwritten vs. printed, etc.

I can't wait for my final resume.

Thanks again,

Chris J.

Ilona,

Well, It worked! I sent out my (your) resume and that same afternoon I got a call to fly to NYC for an interview.

I begin my new job next Tuesday with The Princeton Review.

Thank you for all your help.

Joe P.

Thank you Darlene,

Everything looks great.

I hope I get some offers soon. If I land a good job, I will make sure to let you know.

I will also make sure I let people know about your excellent services..

Thanks again!

Ryan L S.

Dear Jeanie,

Thank you very much for your work, I like both the CV as well as the cover letter.

I do believe there is no more modifications needed from your side, so I consider these attached versions as final approved documents from my side.

It was great to work with you, thanks again.

I wish all the best to you.

Kind regards,

Gabor T.

Dear Wendy,

I went through the revised resume and changed only 1 figure which I initially missed or mis-stated somehow.

But beyond that everything else looks good to go. I
have not had other postings within my target range
since our last contact. So I would say to write the
final version and cover + bio to cast a little wider
net for now. If I need to hone in on more specific
targets in the future, I will engage your service to
modify the exsisting copies accodringly.

Thank you for your professionalism in this whole
process, it has provided much relieve during this
stressful time of my life.

Best Regards,

Rick Y.

Patricia,

Wow, I'm impressed! I wasn't expecting this so quickly.

I agree with all the suggestions/changes you made. It does present a more polished and porfessional image the way you've presented it.

I made just a few changes in terminology to fit with industry standards. We refer to it as the "Quick Service" (QSR) not "fast service" and when referring to individual sales the industry refers to it as "check averages". I think I only found one or two minor things which I have highlighted.

I can't wait to start sending this out and seeing what results I get.

Danielle M.

Ilona,

Congradulations, what a great job!

I used MS Word "Track Changes" Function to allow you to easily see what changes I propose as far as information is concerned. There may be a better way to include the general information--I did not focus on sentence structure--well not that much).

The only change needed on the equally great cover letter is the addition of PMB (postal mail box) information in the header.

I really appreciate your work. What other information would be included in a bio? I seems to me that the resume is so informiative that a bio may not be all that useful. What do you think ? I will be leaving the resume with various national elected and appointed officials in DC if the job at IU does not materialize.

After you make the changes you deem need to be made, please send both the formatted version and a plain ASCII so I can simply copy for uploading on various job boards etc.

If I want to have your company distribute widely, then I will let you know. If I feel the need to broaden the search to industry, I will revise the current resume and ask you to edit etc. I understand your need to charge me for a second resume--given the quality of your materials you should be getting more money anyway.

I am now embarresed to tell you how much money I almost spent with another company...it was outrageous ($8,975.00). I received a full refund from them last week.

Thanks again,

Doug C.

Dear Ilona,

Thank you very much for your email and the work that you have done. I have to say that I would never have had the patience nor skills to do what you have accomplished.

I think that the cover letter is perfect, and I have actually just used it tonight. the CV is more clear and precise, and gives a message of action and execution. I have not yet decided in what form and with what numbers that I would use, since I have difficulty in using numbers (that are correct) but not yet approved by my company. So I want to use a lot of discretion upon using my CV.

Furthermore, I also think that the CV is very useful for the preparation for the interview with regards to the message that I want to give to the interviewer. I would like to take the time to digest it, work with it, adjust it to my discretion and then use it. I will not ask you for more help, unless something unusual comes up.

Again thank you very much and I wish you a great spring and summer. Thank you for the kind words on my experience.

The CEO was in town for two days (for the first time), and he was very impressed with the results, so I feel good about what I have achieved so far.

Best regards ,

Klaus L.

Hello Deanne,

Thank you for sending the first draft. This looks much better now.

Let me go through it and I will come back to you in few days from now.

Thanks and regards,

Ilijana V.

Hi Wendy,

My final revisions are on pages 3 and 4. What do you think about using another font instead of Times Roman? Is MyFonts California too modern?

Thanks for the wonderful makeover. I feel as though reborn.

Doug O.

Wendy,

WOW!!!!!!!

Honestly I must say you are good. Thanks I will get the responses back to you.

I must say it is night and day from before

Thanks,

Mike G.

Dear Tom:

You have done a great job! Congratulations! I'm amazed !

Attached please find the resume with few adjustments.

The cover letter is great too. I would like to highlight one of my strengths regarding consumer understanding/insights.

Additional request:

I need to write an additional cover letter for the position of Social Marketing Director to work with Bogota, Colombia team but based on Washington. Please find attached the guidelines. You will noticed that their requirements are matching with my profile but within a completely different industry. They required to attached a cover letter with the resume.
I have to tell them that I am highly competent and dynamic professional who are committed to fighting poverty and who share their vision. They should know also that I have a large experience with low income consumer research thorough Latin Amercia markets. Also, I think that telling them that as a Colombian I will understand the markets and challenges better.

Good luck, please let me know if you need further information.

I have to pay you this in advance, if so, please charge the value to the credit card you already have.

Thank you !

Regards,

Monica C.

Peter,

Wendy has finalized my resume. Thanks a lot for the real good job done. I'm very happy with your services.

In this email below you told me that once my CV has been finalized, you could offer various services to get my resume in the hands of hiring officials and executive recruiters, and also offer targeted email campaigns to recruiters, corporations and/or venture capital firms that specialize in my field and are in a hiring mode.

Can you inform me in more detail about these services.

Regards,

Ventura R. C.

Donna,

I appreciate the great resume.

I have an interview with the first dealer group I sent it to.

They said it was a great resume.

Thank you,

Rich Van S.

Hello Wendy,

Thank you very much. I'm very happy with your proffesional job done. You can consider the order delivered and final.

I also enjoied working with you, and be sure, I will contact you in the future for new Resume updates.

I am used to drive my career by myself, and I'm sure this powerfull Resume will be a good tool wich will help me to find the desired job.

After some months relaxing me I'm again with energy to fight again, and deliver important things in the global telecommunications industry. You contribuited to my ilusion with your job.

Best Regards,

Ventura R.

Hi Jean,

Thank you for your email & draft.

Very nice i have to say i like me when reading the resume.

I made a couple of changes and suggestions. suggestions where i simply propose changes and will rely on your professional advise whether or not to follow my proposals are marked with a (?). text that i would like to have changed is without.

Please do not hesitate to call me for questions to finalize as quickly as possible.

Gunnar T.

Hello Jeanie

First and above all, I think you did great and my resume looks a lot better and 'down to the point' than it used to be ... therefore thanks for your excellent work.

In order to get quickly to the final version I have inserted some comments in your draft (please refer to the attached marked-up version).

Please have a look and do not hesitate to get back to me!

Cheers,

Christophe P.

Dear Jeanie,

Thanks for the first draft, I like it.

You have done a great job. Thanks again.

According to your request I have made the necessary corrections with blue (and a larger font size).

Please provide me with the next version.

Thanks.

Have a nice day!

Gabor T.

Peter,

I received my 1st draft back from Dan and I'm very pleased.. I sent him a few minor revisions and then we should be good to go.

Charles S..

Hi Jeanie!

Well firstly, let me tell you what great work you do!!

Everyone who has read the resume thinks it is very strong, really well put together and tells a compelling story.

I have had some suggestions and have made some edits and would like to see about getting to a final draft.

Thanks again for really helping me shine!!!


Denise C.

Ilona,

Yyou did an amazing job... I love the way it reads, thanks for all your help, again!

David K.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks for the draft - it looks great! I am mpressed... by your work.

Please find attached the revised version.

Best regards,

Tomas H.

Jeanie,

I was very impressed with the look of the first draft.

I am feeling confident that the final draft will open the door for some future opportunities.

Sincerely,

Richard A. D.

Ilona,

I've been traveling and just started to review your work. At first blush it is fantastic.

I'll get my reply back to you by tomorrow.

It looks like you will be traveling soon too. I hope it's for Valentines day.

Best wishes,

Gregg H.

Tom,

Just wanted you to know I had a 30 minute preliminary interview with an executive recruiter, Paladin Staffing, which turned into a full hour, for a marketing psn wiht\th DANYA a nonprofit who works closely with CDC on HIV/AIDS initiatives. It IS nonprofit, but still offers a handsome salary - not quite for profit, but 50% more than my previous nonprofit. Paladin has worked with Danya for several years and has placed several very satified employees there. They told me they have a great work environment and there is room for upward mobility.

Best of all, they "found" me with my new resume on Mtkt/The Ladders.

Kudos for your excellence and thanks again,

Hal C.

Hello Kathy,

This time I have to ask for your understanding first! I had some important interviews recently and was unable to get back to you earlier.

Thank you very much for your hard work. I was impressed about the difference compared to my earlier CV.

There is no doubt that the new CV significantly better reflects my qualifications, expertise, and success. I am convinced now that it was a good idea to cooperate with Career Resumes.

As suggested, I had a careful look on the document, especially with regard to imported data, spelling etc. Please find the document with corrections and comments attached to this mail.

In case you do not understand a certain comment, please do not hesitate to get back; an email should be most suitable as I will not have the document with me all the time.

Please allow a general question: In Germany, companies often want to receive a CV in German in addition to an English one. Dou you know - by chance - someone who could translate the CV (after finalization)?

Looking forward to a last review.

Kind regards,

Harald S.

Wendy,

I accept the last version as final. I will make the small changes myself.

I would to thank you for the effort you put into my resume. My resume definitely has a fresh and up to date look.

I really appreciate working with such a knowledgeable person as you. The resume preparation experience you have has been invaluable.

Thank you for everything.

Sincerely,

Oliver A. K.

Dan,

I have made 2 corrections. It appears that in several instances an upercase i has appeared were a 1 should be. One is in my address where I have also added "Apt". Not sure how this fits into "Resume English", so you can make it appropriate for this style. Added certification grroups 1 and 2 as this is how they are represented by the organization responsible for the testing.

Thanks for the great work

Now that I see the job you have done I am interested in having a cover letter written. I will check into this.

Kurtis K.

Tom,

I just wanted to thank you for your great work on my resume, letter, and bio for Mktg/The Ladders.

Already, in only 3 weeks, I have had 48 views of my profile by recruiters. This is up from zero pre your word-smithing.

Also, completing online applications for specific jobs and online jobsites if far easier and speeds up my process.

Thought that you would want to know that I am getting immediate results. Now, for the invitations to interview....

Many thanks,

Hal C.

Dan,

I have now had a chance to go through both documents in some detail and have nothing but praise.

Of course there were bits and pieces that I felt were missing or perhaps not emphasized enough but realizing the importance of context, volume and overall message the delivered document is perfect.

Thanks for your assistance in this process,

All the best,

Mads M.

Hi Ilona,

First things first, nice work! I'm so pleased with the draft and thank you for getting this to me to review before you depart for your business trip. Much appreciated!

Below are my comments (in blue) to your questions per your email below. Also, I've inserted a few comments into the resume doc for your review and guidance as well. I'm not huge fan of the font, but if that's what is "preferred" or most pleasing, I'll trust your direction.

Please let me know what else you need from me. Thanks again for your help.

Lori R.

Hi Jean,

This looks great. I've made a couple of minor changes (marked).

Thanks!

Fran P.

Hi Jeanie,

Ive perused this now a number of times and I think there is enough there now for you to make a near-final draft.

Im quite happy with it well done.

Cheers,

Phil L.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you for the draft. Great Job!

Please find attached the revised document with some minor changes and comments.
Hope hearing from you soon.

Dominik K.

Peter,

Here's the final product. I think it looks very good. Tom did an excellent job of presenting my credentials.

I'm interested in finding out more about targeting recruiters and hiring managers in my field. I'll give you a call.

Dave B.

Hello, Jean.

Thanks for a very impressive piece of work. It looks great!

I have made some amendments see attached.

Have a good evening!

Teo C.

Dear Jeanie,

Thank you so much for your work on my behalf. This is a great boost to my search for new employment.

You have a great gift. I hope you continue helping people.

With warm regards,

Robin B.

Jeanie,

I am quite happy with the work you did and I would like to thank you for your efforts and for being able to understand and put in an very efficient and attractive way my careers of 17 years.

Thank You!

Cheers,

Pedro M.

Hi Wendy,

The resume looks good. Thank you for a job well done.

The section you have high lighted in the cover letter is correct. The device was FDA approved and successfully marketed. I do not know the sales numbers. I worked on it as a consultant and my job ended when it was complete.

Thanks again for a great job,

Rick E.

Peter,

I'd like to add you to my professional network on LinkedIn.

Donna Allen did a fantastic job on my resume.

Thanks again.

Annette W.

Kelley,

Excellent re-fresh and addition of my current
position. Thanks very much.

In the attached file, I have made a few updates.
Please take a read through it and let me know if you
have any final comments / suggested changes. Thanks again for your service.

Paul R.

Dan,

I received the first draft of my resume and I must say::" You did a GREAT job".

I am very impressed. It was certainly well worth the wait.

I would like your input on cover letters.

When you have a chance, please call me to discuss.

Thanks again and great job!!

Scott T.

Hi Peter - Happy New Year.

I cannot say enough about my revised resume - it is fantastic! Ilona was wonderful.

I would like to discuss the options for outreach to recruiters in the Not for Profit sector - is it convenient to call you next week?

Please advise at your convenience - thanks again this has been a great experience!

Janice R.

Wendy,

I just wanted to follow up and thank you for the excellent job you did with my resume.

I am now in the process of actively marketing myself and feel very confident that the product you generated will be a large part of my success of getting in the door.

Have a great New Year.

Thank You,

Tony L.

Merry Christmas Tom,

Opening your documents was like a kid at Christmas for meand I was over-joyed with what I found.

You did a great job, exactly what I had hoped for.

Great verbiage and peppered with some unique and compelling words that have never occurred to me.

You did an excellent job in compiling my history into a living document. I felt good upon completion of my homework assignment and once I read your first draft, I felt that it definitely focuses on my expertise and most importantly, my potential to make an impact in my next position.

I am most comfortable with 3 pages as there is solid info there, no fluff stuff.

I think I am most impressed with the top two boxes on page one. If this doesnt knock their sox off, they aint looking

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for a job well-done.

Hope you and yours have a wonderful Christmas.

Hal C.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you for everything. I have just returned from a much need holiday and wanted to let you know that I am pleased with the work you have done.

In fact, it has alteady landed me a interview with the company I most want to go to work with.

Additionally, I have reccomended your services to several friends and former colleagues.

All the best for the holidays.

Lenerl S.

Jeanie,

Wow!! This looks great.

Suggested changes:

1) Please add conversational Japanese language skills

2) Director of Corporate Mkg as amended on document.

Thanks,

Mike O.

Jeanie,

Many thanks for this first draft. I really like the work you have done - thanks!

I have made a few changes and comments as well as answered your questions by using the Track Changes functionality in Word. I have saved the resume in two different versions (Word 2007 and Word 1997-2003 format).

When can I expect to hear back from you again with a revised version?

The sooner the better!

Cheers,

Stefan R.

Wow Jean. Thank you!!

The bio and letter are great!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

Todd L.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks for the excellent work and I wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year for 2008.

Kind Regards,

Marc M.

Dan,

This was excellent work, I have no changes to make, and I am completely satisfied.

Good news - my interview went well and I was offered a director of security position at a major hotel in South Beach.

The investment in the resume was worth it, and my dad may be contacting the company to have one made for him (he is a stock broker/wealth management specialist).

Thanks again,

Craig M.

Hi Ilona!

Thanks so much for your help, it looks great!!

I have attached my resume and cover letter with a few changes. Of course, the changes are up to you, whatever you think sounds the best. I can't wait to get this 'out on the street!'

Please let me know if there is anything else I can do.

Thanks,

Jen E.

PS: I don't think I have a say so in editing the invoice, do I?? HA HA!

Ilona,

I am really happy with the results!

I must admit that I was reserving judgement because the resume was so different from what I had created before. (Of course, what I had created was terrible, but it's hard to let go sometimes!)

However, after having some people proof it for me the reaction was across-the-board positive. And the cover letter is really good. I'm genuinely excited about sending these out and beginning the job search.

I do have a couple of changes to request, but they're mainly about moving a information around. Also, the verb tenses can all be made in the past tense now. (I was a part of AOL's recent layoffs.) I've put most of my comments in notes in the document.


Thanks again for the work. I'm sending versions that have been converted into Word 2007 and then back again so if my changes or notes don't come through let me know.

James W.

Hi ilona,

Thank you very much for your work and I appreciate your creativity and input.

I added some criteria I hope works for you...and have attached it...please let me know if you need anything else.

This has really been a wonderful experience and I have enjoyed working with you - thanks again.

Janice R.

Jeanie,

You have done a fantastic job.

I have no changes please include the specific accomplishments in the career highlights section which should than be the final draft. .

I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your work.

Cheers and a lot of thanks,

Carl L.

Jeanie,

You have done a fantastic job. I have no changes please include the specific accomplishments in the Career highlights section which should than be the final draft. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your work.

Cheers and a lot of thanks,

Carl L.

Jeanie,

This is great! I love the format of this - so much better than what was recommended to me earlier.

I didn't have many changes. I inserted the questions that I have and highlighted changes.

Enthusiastically,

Robin B.

Dan

Awesome...I also have to share something. I sent my new resume out yesterday and got a call from a CEO within an hour.

One thing he said is that my resume was amazing.

Thank you! I have an interview for a Director
position next week. A hit rate of 100% is pretty good in my book.

Thanks,

Ryan P.

Rosie,

I just had to tell someone...and you're responsible!

I've been applying for Microsoft positions for months...with no response.

This morning, after the past 10 days of using your new resume, I got an e-mail from the Staff Leader of hiring for Microsoft saying that my resume was
"impressive" , and that they would like to meet with me for an interview.

This is big...huge!

Thank you!! Whatever happens...at least we know the resume is working!!

Jane B.

Rosie,

The resume looks great!!! I really like the way it all came out.

I made some minor changes. I have added the previous firm I used to work at.

I am not sure if it is important to add it in or not but I think it might help. What do you think? I dont think it was in the information I forwarded you. I hope it is not too much of a problem to add it in.

Please take a look at the new changes and take the liberty to jazz up the new info.

Again, the resume looks great.

Have a wonderul Thanksgiving along with a great weekend.

Speak to you soon.

Alejandro A.

Jeanie:

I must say that I'm quite impressed with your work.
You've really put my professional experience and
background in such a sharp and concise way.

I've made minor changes which I've highlighted in
blue. These are more concerning corrections of points that are hard to understand when one is outside of the packaging industry. I've also added some points and have provided reasons behind it.

I'm extremely happy with the work that you've done for me. I can't wait to start sending my resume to
headhunters and companies! It'll be a killer!

Thanks a million and am looking forward to hearing
from you soon.

Best regards,

Otilio R.


Jeanie,

First of all, I want to give you my compliments for such a good job.

I really enjoyed reading this first draft including the structure of the document and the brilliant wording you've used.

I've written all my comments and change proposals directly on the document, using "Track Changes" functionality.

I look forward for us to finish this project and start using this fantastic new CV and I also look forward for the letter for that specific job add I've mentioned to you.!

Thank you very much,

Pedro A.

Jean,

It looks very good. You really got the idea, seems as you know me for a while !

I made some comments/questions ate the end of the document. I also made some small changes in the document but most of them were not logged in the tracker (my fault !).

Please use the version I am sending to you.

If you have any additional questions, please let me know. Thanks a lot.

Carlos R.

Donna,

Long time no talk! Hope all is well. Not sure if I ever followed up with you, but I received a job offer and accepted it.

This all took place earlier this year. After you were finished with my resume, I started to send it out. I received an interview and an offer from XXXXXXX.

I accepted and have been there since Feb 20th, 2007. I need to get my resume updated to include my current position. How to go about doing this?

Thanks,

Aaron N.

Ilona,

You did a great job on the resume.

I put the answers to your questions right after them, in yellow also.

I'd like to go ahead and get a cover letter too. How do I get that now that I've already bought the resume?

Thanks,

Mitch D.

Wendy,

This looks very good and is final.

I will probably be putting it to use next year. A big improvement over my attempts at a resume.

People who have seen this resume really like it.

Thanks for your work on this project.

Thanks.

Dan B.

Wendy,

Thank you very much.

This is the best professional job that I have seen.

I did not realize that it was Thanksgiving !!!!Sorry for the inconvinience. Have a great holiday!!!!!!!

Javier B.

Rosie ~

Here are corrections to the resume. Generally speaking, I think it is excellent....I certainly can see the value of having someone else do it!

I don't think you can read my chicken scratches...so I'll fax back the original with the corresponding numbers..1, 2, 3, etc.....I'll make it clear below ~

Jane B.

Ilona,

Looks great, let's consider this the final version.

Great job, I love the way you simplified, formatted & re-phrased the items on my resume.

Looking forward to the bio.

Thanks,

John M.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you for the great job you did on my resume.

Can you explain to me what exactly is the advantage of the bio? And can you forward the Internet version of the resume as well.

Best regards,

Lenerl S.

Hello Rosie,

Thanks for all your help so far. You certainly make me look better on paper then I did!!

Ron R.

Rosie,

This resume is simply amazing.

Can I use the copy you sent me? I'm eager to put the resume online!

Kind regards,

Chassie H.

Donna,

For what it is worth, I want you to know that I am glad you and I have had the chance to work together and produce my documents.

I appreciate all of your hard work and your commitment to seeing this through to the end.

Adam W.

Peter,

Tom has done a fantastic job with my updated resume.

Thank you very much!

I would like to have him write a cover letter for me as well. Lets get that rolling if possible.

Go ahead and send me a link for authorization and Ill make the payment happen.

Best,

Bryan W.

Hey Jeanie,

Thank you so much for doing such a wonderful job on my resume.

You are certainly very talented and I'm honored that we received the opportunity to work together.

Todd L.

I used the resume-writing services (Peter Newfield and Jeannie Oscarson) and even though I am not looking for a job and even though I pride myself in being a slightly above-average writer...

I found the objective assessment value to be remarkable, and now, as I use the service myself, as I am always looking for an opportunity to build powerful brands, whether as a consultant or in-house....I have attached my resume, only to show that the power of the work that Peter and Jeanie did with me.

It is so amazing, I may hire myself :-)).

Charles E.

Jeanie

I am glad I got your resume and cover letter. I think they are great!

Consuelo C.

Jeanie,

I think it is excellent work.

I'm very impressed with your work and myself -- great initial draft.

Alex B.

Dear Jeanie,

Nice work...I am excited that even the first draft looks good! I have made some changes per the attached.

Kind Regards,

Andrew T.

Jeanie,

The updated resume looks great.

I had a few corrections that I input using Track Changes. There were a couple other minor changes on the last two pages.

Really a great summary and you did an impressive job once again.

Looking forward to final results.

Thanks,

Mike C.

Hi Tom

Well you were successful! I got the Interview...!

Thank you very much!

I am on the short list!

The Bank is flying me to Winnipeg Manitoba to meet with the Hiring Manager (Senior Vice President) (My current bosses boss) and The Regional President for Northern Ontario/Manitoba/Saskatchewan for a 90 Minute interview with the two of them...

Thank you very much I will let you know the outcome!

Craig L.

Darlene,

I love it. You did a great job.

It looks like it has 10 times the information than the old version, but it still is easy to read.

The layout is good. I like the way the accomplishments pop out with bullets.

Sincerely,

Henry H.

Hi Kathy,

Thank you very much for working on my resume.

I couldn't be happier and more pleased with the outcome. You have done a superb job in putting together all the important points and summarize it in two pages.

Attached please find the minor revisions I made. Now I am exited to see the cover letter.

Thank you again,

Alfred B.

Donna,

"Wow! Looks fabulous, great job!!

I've added my comments using the "track changes" feature.

Can you do my bio as well?"

Xiomara C.

Hi Ilona-

Thank you so much for creating a great resume and cover letter.

Attached are the revisions that I made. I was able to get some quantifiable results, but I am still trying to get more from my clients. I also listed out specific projects that I worked on, I'm not sure of the best way to include that information.

In regards to formating, can you please use a font from the Helvetica family?

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks!

Jennifer S.

Dear Peter,

Please ignore the request I asked Ilona to change the credit card from which the balance pending will be processed. I sorted this out right now and will be no problem

Ilona has done a great job in turning around my resume.

Will respond to her by end of today to have it ready ASAP as final word document to use

Thanks,

Hatem S.

Hi Jean,

Here is the revised copy again.

I really like what you have done.

I am in a hurry to get to a new position and I can get a bit stressed with running two companies, working on my own up start project and seeking a new position.

Regards,

Tom F.

Rosie,

I have attached a revision with track changes.

I think this is great!

Sherrie B.

Dear Jeanie,

I must say, that I was very pleased with the way you rewrote my CV.

Thank you very much!! You made it so that all the
important points come out with the very first glance.

I have wrote some comments and changes and changed the font in red. I just wrote down what is in my mind, since I understood that you would take the words, and turn them with the same great style you have used all over.

Thanks again. When could you send me the final version?

Luca G.

Dear IIona,

As for your instruction I:

Careffully read many times the resume by myself and with the help of one of my friend (it was responsible for purchasing,

Added all information you asked me.
I really appreciated your work; I also like the format you choose for me.

Please let me know if you need more information.

Best regards.

Angelo P.

PS. Please see my previous mail about cover letter, not BIO

Hi Wendy ,

I'll be sure to be in touch if the need arises.....and I'll send you the good news when I land my next adventure!

This was quite a process....and you really made it painless....so appreciative of your expertise and good care.

Happy Tuesday,

Carolyn C.

Peter,

Greg Faherty rewrote my resume earlier this month. Shortly after he completed his work, I submitted the new resume for a position for which Egon Zehnder is conducting a retained search.

I don't know if I will get this position, but I wanted you to know that the Egon Zehnder consultant was very complimentary about my resume.

He found it clear and convincing.

Thanks to you and Greg!

Steve U.

Thank you very much Wendy.

You and my sister in law are the experts so I am fine with what you changed and didnt change.

Once again I would like for you to be my permanent resume writer so please keep my resume and cover letter if you will accept me as a regular client.

I will be updating my resume every six months.

Thank you again for going the extra mile for me.

I will contact Jane and let her know how pleased I am with your work.

Best regards,

Michael J. N.

Ilona,

Very nicely done!

Thank you. (Even I would hire me now ) Attached is the proof with my additions, answers, etc .

I will await your final version. Regarding the invoice, am I correct in assuming you would prefer a check? And should I send it to your attention, or someone else?

Thanks again,

Gary T.

Thanks Jeanie.

I am content, happy and ecstatic.

This is great work. I would hire me!

Best Regards,

Charles E.

Hi Jeanie,

On first pass, even I'd give this guy a job!

Hope you're having a great weekend - we are enjoying unusually warm and sunny weather for Northern Europe in October :))

Thanks for the first draft - I'm delighted with the style you've adopted - and I can really see the benefits of using a professional already!

I've made a few changes and additions as requested,
and highlighted using the change tracker in Word - so should be easier for you to spot.

Look forward to seeing the next draft.

Many thanks so far, this looks great.

Ian S.

Hi Wendy -- well, you are truly amazing. I've never sounded so good!

I've read through a number of times and didn't catch any typos. I addressed your comments/queries with track changes....also, made a couple of additional comments that might help finalize the draft. Let me know if you have additional questions.

This is really looking great and I am so appreciative!

Best,

Carolyn C.

Deanne,

Thanks for your work. I do not know how you do this but I am amazed at how well it is done.

This is truly an expertise and a talent.

I have never been in a situation to look for a new job as head hunter or peers network did it for me.

I feel I now have the professional instruments to go to the trenches so to speak.

Thanks again,

Gilles M.

Ilona,

Thank you! !!

FYI, I sent my CV to Heineken and was invited in the next day 🙂

We are in the middle of discussing for me to work for them after maternity leave.

We will see,

Best wishes,

Veronique U.

Tom,

Everything looks good. I made only one change to page two of the resume.

Thank you again for your hard work, it looks fantastic!

I can't wait to read the Bio.

Scott F.

Deanne,

Attached are my edits.

This looks good. I was even wondering who this guy was!!

Nice work.

Thanks,

Doug R.

Jeanie,

It sounds good! If not very good!

Here is the modified version with the answers you were waiting for.

With my best regards and thank you for your work.

Francois V.

Jeanie,

This is quite powerful. You are very good at this!

I made very minor changes to attached, please help me complete the Career Highlights segment.

Thanks much in advance.

Charles E.

Jeannie,

Thank you for the draft.

The process has made me rethink what I want to say, so thank you.

Best Wishes,

Michael R.

Jeanie,

Thanks for the quick turnaround, it really looks great.

Wow, when I look at this I realize how much I've accomplished over the years.

Hopefully a prospective employer will feel the same! I made a few more edits (a couple I hadn't caught last time and a new addition I hadn't really considered before).

Please email me if you have any questions.

Thanks,

Stephanie McK.

Thank you Jeanie:

I must say that your version is much more impressive than mine.

Attached is my resume with answers and comments in red.

I look forward to your revision. Please let me know if you have further questions.

Enjoy your day.

Steve G.

Jeanie,

First of all let me tell you that I really like the format and how you integrated all of my accomplishments, it seems to be a very powerful document and I can't wait to get it into the marketplace to see what kind of response I receive.

I have attached the document with answers to your questions as well as some changes. I did it in word editing mode so the changes are very apparent.

Thanks again, look forward to getting this out!

Greg M.

Dear Ilona,

Thank you very much for all your help, the resume looks amazing.

I know Dave is in the process of starting to re-do his, so best of luck with that, hes really accomplished some great things in the past few years.

Again, you were a pleasure to work with and really do outstanding work. The rest is in my hands, ha.

Best regards,

Sheri K.

Tom,

Well done, this is well written.

I made a few minor edits - can you let me know how the revisions read? By the way, can you send over a pricing sheet for ongoing revisions if you have one available?

Thank you again and don't hesitate to contact me if you have additional suggestions or questions. -

Michael H.

Hi, Greg.

This draft looks good. I have made a few minor edits. Let me know if you have questions regarding those changes.

Thanks,

Pete T.

Greg,

Thanks. I am pleased with what you've created.

I've made a few edits to the attached file. Please e-mail or call me with any questions.

Mike W.

Deanne,

I made a minor change last bullet, last page. We are good to go.

This is an excellent rsumWe can see your expertise, which was obviously not mine!

Gilles M.

Peter,

I just received the final draft of my resume and it looks great!

Rosie did a fantastic job.


Michael M.

Hello Rosie,

It all looks great!

I made some minor changes and highlighted
them as you instructed in your e-mail.

Thanks again,

Mike M.

Dan,

The cover letter looks great! Thanks so much for getting this to me today.

Joanna Z.

Dan,

Great work! I like the draft. I have read it through once and you've captured things very well.

I will now reflect on some nuances some more and get back to you for some disucssion. I won't have wholesale changes.

Regards,

Todd H.

Dan,

Thanks so much for the cover letters and for the bio. I spoke with Peter who indicated that the bio was not originally assigned to you so I appreciate your extra effort to get this to me.

I regret the inconvenience this may have caused, and wish you continued success in your endeavors!

All the best,

Bob W.

Hi Dan,

You did a wonderful job incorporating my comments in the revised resume!

I added a few modifications and would really appreciate your feedback. Unfortunately I did not turn track changes on, but if you have time to quickly look it over and let me know if I did anything blatantly wrong or broke any rules.

Once again thanks for your help. You really made a difference on my resume. Now it looks very professional and at a director level!

Best Regards,

Rebecca O'D.

Kathy,

Everything looks fine. I thought I remembered you saying you would put it out on web site as well? Let me know. I've had some good results and am in the final for two positions; however I wanted to stay active in my search.

Thank you very much for your work, I am really pleased with what you have done. A very nice experience during a difficult time.

My best to you,

Scott G.

Dear Mr. Newfield,

I wish to inform that Ms. Kathy Moretti completed the job of my resume.

I like the final outcome and let me say that she has been a good writer.

Best Regards

Paolo V.

Wendy,

I have made some changes using the track changes function. Hopefully the final draft will be painless to develop.

You have done an outstanding job!

Thanks so much.

Ramani S.


Hi Rosie,

The resume looks great and thank you for your efforts.

I've made some comments about content that need to be addressed, but overall I think it is a good product that hopefully will get some attention.

Please revise as necessary and send it back to me as soon as you can. Please let me know when I can expect the revised draft.

Also, I would like to proceed with having you write a generic cover letter that I can modify and use when responding to various job postings and I would also like for you to send me an additional version of the
resume that I can cut and paste into online job applications.

I realize there are additional fees associated with
this work - just confirm for me how much it is.

Thanks again Rosie!

Sincerely,

Brian H.

Hi Rosie,
I have made the necessary changes and
input the info where needed. Please review
and let me know what you think.

You did a very good job with it, I must say !

Now I look forward to the final cut and the cover letter etc...

Kind regards,

Kieran T.

Rosie,

Thanks very much for your work and effort.

I feel this accurately reflects what I have done, and what I was looking for in a professional resume.

There are only a couple of minor changes in spelling of city names and such and I will make those changes myself.

Thanks again,

Justin I.

Hi Ilona,

Hope all is going well. I was very pleased with the work you did for me. Can you give me a quote for drafting a 'letter of introduction'.

Tamara R.

Tammy,

I will return the draft with any comments tomorrow (Monday).

Let me tell you right now that I was very impressed with what you have done. (I am not a "know-it-all, but with a Ph.D. and an MBA I thought that I could handle - as well as anyone - doing my resume.

I was wrong! I can tell you right now that my money is well-spent and I am truly impressed with this draft!)

Thank you!!!!!!!

Sincerely,

Greg G.

Ilona,

I have reviewed the revision of my resume. It looks
great!! I have no additional changes that need to be
made to my resume.

Let me know what the next step will be.

I am excited and anxious to submit my resume to pharmaceutical companies. I expect my phone will ring constantly with such an impressive resume.

You do excellent work, and I see why Career Resumes is so successful.

Thank you,

Beth T.

Hi Ilona,

I was very pleased with your work!

I gave a bit of feedback and answered your questions. Please let me know if you need anything else.

Thanks!

Tamara R.

Hi Ilona,

Thank you so much for all of your help. How much would it cost to have you create a second one for office management?

Hieka McL.

Hi Tom,

I think the resume looks great! You have done a terrific job - thank you so much.

I have attached one of my versions where I have incorporated all changes now (for some reason the version you sent didn't include all changes). Please use the attached version to finalize it.

Again, thank you very much for your time and effort.

Best regards,

Irene K.

Peter,
Wendy,
Donna,

Thank you all for your Five Star assistance this week. One week ago today, I learned I was no longer billable to any customer acct group in WGI.

One week later, thanks to your expert help, I have a killer resume and distribution plan to match. Outstanding !

Wendy & Donna, your ability to respond and provide outstanding customer support in a timely manor is just amazing !

* I have just updated my WSJ Ladders membership for 12 mos. Thank you Wendy for the reminder -


All The Best,

Brad McK.

Ilona,

I have finally had a chance to sit down and look at the drafts. I have included my changes, there were not many. Everything does look great.

As I mentioned before, I am also attaching my new job description and the announcement because I would like for this to be included. I think with this new position, this will be more what Pharmaceutical companies are looking for in a candidate (because this will include more of a sales aspect.

Let me know if you need anymore information from me.

I was really impressed with your work, and I appreciate the time you are spending on this project.

Sincerely,

Elizabeth T.

Hello Tom,

The resume looks great.

Thank you for all your hard work.

Regards,

Karla B.

Hi Kathy,

What a remarkable difference you made on my resume. If I am ever going to make a difference this will be the reason.

Thanks for everything you've done.

Best Regards,

Mitch B.

Hi Kathy,

Yes, I am very pleased with your work of art!! An investment well worth the cost.

And although we have not met, please accept my personal thanks and know that your hard work is apparent and very much appreciated.

I was not in the market but was planning on seeing what opportunities were out there so I decided to get my resume professionally written. Now I have 2 opportunities that came through 'networking' so I'll get a chance to get some feedback on my new resume soon.

The cover letter is perfect. I only have one question on a suggested change (i.e. should there be an 'a' in a sentence - see document/cover letter for my questions)

Thanks again,

Todd P.

Kathy,

Thank you for getting my changes back so quickly. I did get the interview I referred to earlier after this afternoon.

So I'd say your results are pretty good so far!

Scott G.

Dear Ilona,

Thanks for the resume. It looks great.

My daughter sent an edited version with tracked changes.

Peter L.

Dear Jeanie

I have read it just once and the draft looks SUPERB.

I am going to read it carefully and I am going to foward my changes.

Many thanks,

Emilio L.

Dan,

The resume looks great.

Sorry I have been such a pain in the $%^&$. I
don't see anything that needs to be changed.

Thanks,

Monty M.

Hi Tom;

I appreciate the changes you made to the resume.

I am quite pleased with your finished product and will certainly recommend your services to others.

Again, thanks!

Lynn G.

Jeanie,

I like what you did and am sending you the document with my revisions/notes (using Track Changes).

Here are a few of my overall comments:

I like the document a lot. At first I was surprised to see a 3 page document, but when reading it I realized it provides a very accurate picture of my background.

Thanks again for a brilliant version of my resume!

Chris G.

Dan,

WOW...nice job! I really like how that letter reads. Thanks for the update to the resume as well.

Have a nice Labor Day.

Peter H.

Hi Ilona,

I estimate that now we have a resume in 3 pages.(perhaps 1 line is out we can gain it using some new formatted margin or using some words to summarize well some sentences)

I'll wait for your FINAL VERSION of resume and related Bio.

I was very happy for your help to create my resume.
I'm confident that I will gain much more success from it.

I hope to stay in contact with you for any further .

Thanks a lot and
Best Regards,

Luigi B.

Good Morning Tom,

Thank you for the draft. I found the draft is an excellent document.

Thank you for the hard work. I look forward seeing the next draft.

Please find the attached marked up draft with very minor changes marked in blue.

I would like to know the process of adding the "covering letter" work at this stage. Please advise.

Again, thank you for your excellent work.

Regards,

Roger C.

Thanks Jean,

It looks great.

I made a couple changes and commented on the items you wanted more info on. Let me know what else you need as I am leaving tomorrow morning and will have very limited access to email until Monday night.

Thanks so much, I am very happy with your work!

Sincerely,

Jason N.

Jeanie -

Thanks, I am reviewing now -- so far it looks great!

Regards,

Donald E.

Dear Jeanie

I have read it just once and the draft looks SUPERB.

I am going to read it carefully and I am going to forward my changes.

Many thanks,

Emilio L.

Jeanie,

I am delighted , thank you . Excellent work!

Regards,

Alt B.

Ilona,

This looks great!

I really feel that this resume does a much better job of selling myself. I've added comments throughout the resume.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks for your help!

Rich A.

Darlene,

It is fantastic!!! Thank you so much!

I hope you enjoy what you do - because you do it very well -

I really appreciate the turn around time - it really helped me out!

Pass this on to your manager or whomever 🙂

Thanks Again,

Esther S.

Tom,

This version just got a rave from a Milwaukee based recruiter this week, praising its clarity and saleability.

I was still wondering about whether it would seem bland or was still missing "jump out" elements, but so far that is not an issue.

I think you can consider this document completed, although I'd like to reserve the right to just have a question or two answered or an opinion offered the remainder of this year if I run into trouble.

I would not expect major revision work to be done without a new work order.

Sincerely,

Kent V.

Ilona.

I'm sorry for the delay in getting back to you. I have answered the majority of the questions that you had within the first draft of my resume. There are a couple of questions for which I do not have the answers at my fingertips. I'll have to pull some information together. In the meantime, I wanted provide you with this information that I have completed. Once I gather the remaining information, I'll forward that to you as well.

Thanks again for your hard work.

I am very pleased with the first drafts of the cover letter and resume. I'm looking forward to receiving many job offers!

Randi K.

Hello Jeanie,

Pls accept my appreciation for a job well done. I will keep you and Peter posted about the potential it will have in pushing my career further.

I will also let some of my friends know about this facility, and they will contact your organisation directly.

Best regards and good luck

Ravi A.

Tom,

Everything looks good on the cover letter and I made some changes on the resume.

Also, I want to go ahead and have you write me a bio.

Thanks,

Justin A.

Jeanie,

Thank you for your work! I genuinely appreciate you lending your talent to my experience.

There is NO WAY I could have done this on my own.

The revised copy is attached for round two. I made changes in blue as I am simply not very good with the track changes function. In some cases, whole sections are blue. Please know that this is NOT because I rewrote them entirely. Rather, I consolidated bullet points and/or re-ordered bullet points.

Joanne McC.

Hello Dan:

Thanks for the feedback, I am using my cover letter along with yours depending on the search requirements.

You have been a great help and well worth the money.

I will keep you informed as my search develops.

Once again, thanks.

Reuben B.

Dan:

I was amazed by the clarity and direction the resume has now. Thank you.

I did not see however an achievement which I thought was worth mentioning and that was the one were I was mentored by the Company President for almost 4 years. Your thoughts....

Regards,

Rodrigo U.

Dan

Great job on the resume, cover letter and bio!

Jeff T.

Dan,

This is an excellent initial draft resume! Thanks a bunch, no 10,000 bunches.

I do apologize for taking so long to respond but as you so candidly identified I am a trouble shooter and I just got stuck with another smelly, sticky, difficult problem. The good news is that I have got it organized, under control and making progress.

Regards,

Walter S. H.

Dan,

You have done an "Awsome" job with my resume!

I will submit to you some minor suggested edits right away. I am excited with what you have done

I can't wait to see how you work up my BIO next.

This is well worth the wait.

Look for my feedback very quickly.

Best Regards,

James T.

Dan,

After I put my military mind aside, I see that you have created a masterful work.

BTW Dan, have you ever considered becoming a novelist?

Many thanks for your inspired work.

All the best,

Larry K.

Dear Freddie,

I am very pleased with the work that Tom Albano did on my resume. I would like to have my resume stored on your site. It is attached for your reference.

I I would also like to have my Bio prepared for sites like TheLadders.com.

Thanks in advance.

Bill S.

Hi, Greg!

I really love what you've done with this new one. I see exactly how you've emphasized the
business aspects to open the door towards general management.

THANK YOU, and what a great job!

As far as revisions go, I'm so tied up right now that I won't waste your time on the minor touchups that'll finish the job - I should be able to handle those once things slow down a bit here.

I do want to let you know that I really appreciate your terrific work!

Best Wishes!

Mark F.

Hi Ilona

I did receive and I think everything looks great!

As such, I think we are done. Can you send me both final documents? Is there anything else we need to do?

Best,

Jennifer R.

Hi Greg,

First, let me say, WOW! and thank you. These are great. I have attached the resume. I only had couple of questions, really more than changes.

Take and look and let me know what you think.

Again, this is amazing work - thank you!

Cheers,

Pollie B.

Wendy,

My wife and I went over the resume, answering questions, making corrections, and wording changes.

You did a very outstanding job, especially with what you had to work with.

Is this your 208th resume this year? What is the basic difference between the bio and resume?

Most that I read are usually done exactly the same.

I have to get alot done before the 102 degree's sets in today. We are lossing our crop very fast and its suppose to be this way all week.

Have a nice day and I will await your final draft resume.

Bye 😉

Roger T.

Thanks Kelley!

You have been most helpful. Once I have proof-read this final draft, I will send you back a final file if I make any further proofing edits so that you can keep it in your files for future retrieval. Otherwise, consider this version that you've sent me as the final.
The links below are most helpful.

Also, feel free to send me any customer satisfaction feedback survey....I would be happy to provide details on your excellent service.

I guess the proof is going to be in the pudding and I know this new resume is going to have a great impact on my next move....you will be the first to know when I land my next job....

Stay cool and have fun until then....

Thanks for your help.

Jitendra K.

Hi Jane,

Darlene did a great job on my resume. I am really pleased with it.

I will review the links below and get back to you.

Regards,

Janie T.

Hi Ilona ,

This looks great - very very minor changes in the attachment. After this round, I think we are good to go. Let me know what you think.

The cover letter looks good - I think that one is done!

Again, thanks for your patience as I fine-tune.

Best,

Jennifer R.

Rosie,

Looks great! I made a couple changes by the highlighted areas. Otherwise looks ready to go!

Thank You,

Mitch R.

Hi Tom,

I think we have a winner here. Everything looks good. I will let you know what is the reaction from potential employers.

Thanks again and regards,

Din L.

Hi Ilona,

I went over the resume and letter they look great. I tried to answer some of your questions, and made a few comments.

Thanks,

Dave S.

Tom,

I am very pleased with these results. There are a few changes that I have made in my resume to more clearly reflect reality (as per your request). Please see attached.

The cover letter is perfect as is. I am assuming this is also suitable as a cover letter to recruiters with minimal changes as well as for responses to job listings on the Internet.

Thanks and Best Regards,

Bill S.


Ilona:

Thank you very much for all of your efforts on my behalf to date.

I was so fired up when I saw what you delivered, I believe it is just what the doctored ordered.

You took my mess and really did an incredible job.

May I directly refer you more business?

Tony N.

Peter,

Thank you for the feedback. Your comments are highly appreciated and offer interesting insight.

I agree that having my CV redone by a professional writer is the way to go. So I will be happy to ask you to do that for me.

Regarding Objectives I understand that in proper style you do not explicitly mention objectives in the CV but probably somewhere else like a cover letter or e-mail.

As a convinced supporter and practitioner of P.F.Druckers and F.Maliks ideas on result-oriented management having and clearly stating professional objectives is very important to me especially at senior level.

What I especially like about your feedback is to make achievements in the CV even more measurable by quantifying results wherever possible which is what I do professionally anyway.

So I am looking forward to fruitful cooperation with you and your team.

I will have the request though to make my CV appealing not only to US but also to European or Asian companies.

Regards,

Martin S.

Wendy

Won't have time to spend on the resume until tomorrow and Wed (will get back to you by end-of-day Wed with all changes/clarifications), but just wanted to give you my quick reaction to the resume you put together: EXCEPTIONAL!!!

Your years of expertise, and the time you've obviously spent on this project, are truly shining through.

Scott L.

Ilona,

Thanks again for your expert feedback. I have attached the resume minus the asterisks in the title.

I received an email today from Peter Newfield regarding targeted distribution of the resume. I will definitely purchase a basic package.

Kudos again to you as a great representative of a first class operation.

Have a great weekend.

David W.

Hi Jeanie,

Sorry for my delay in getting back to you.

I absolutely LOVE what you did with my resume! I don't have any suggested revisions or further input, so we can put that to rest.

I really look forward to seeing what you do with the bio/profile portion of my order!

Yes, I noticed that you're in Blacksburg or Lynchburg? That's my favorite part of the state. I love the Blue Ridge and my best camping trips as a kid were always in that part of the state.

Best,

Jason H.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks.

It looks good to me!

Thanks for your help.

Regards,

Daniela V.

Peter,

I needed to take the time to thank both you and the gentleman who wrote my resume Greg Faherty.

I left Iraq in late March 2007 after working there for
two years, because of the threat to my personal safety. I returned to Houston looking for a job that in a market that was just starting to wake up.

My previous resume would barely net a call every other week. After having Greg overhaul my resume it went from looking as though it were written in crayon to the masterpiece I currently have.

On the best day I received eight calls from prospective employers, or recruiters. To say that the claims your website makes in you and your
associates ability to write a resume is correct, is definitely an understatement!

I am currently employed with Honeywell International as a Senior Network Consultant. I believe that your resume was a large reason
why I received such an excellent offer from my current employer.

I am thankful that I contacted you to write me what I would call the best resume I have ever seen. Not just because it is mine, but of how it was written.

There is no science fiction, and your writer knew enough about the IT industry to convey some of my information into something that a non-techie
could understand.

I thank you and my family thanks you for a creation that got me the opening that I needed to get the job of a lifetime!

The best resume I have ever had BAR NONE!!!

Thank you very much!

Robert "Bob" Martin

Hi Jeanie -

Sorry for the delay - I was traveling the last few weeks.

First of all I want to thank you for all your work, my resume never looked so good. I made a few minor revisions and I also wanted to add under accomplishments the VMA negotiations, I got the number of household impressions that make it sound better. Please let me know if you agree with my changes.

Thanks again for all your help.

Lynn P.i


Hi, Jeanie...

Very well done and certainly worth the wait.

I've made only a few corrections that I'll let you review/edit, then put into final for me, thence out into the vast beyond for potential employers to drool over.

Phil L.

Dear Jeanie,

You are extremely talented! My resume is much improved, and I believe will be very effective in my job search.

Attached is a first revision with just a few corrections and answers to your questions. I had some difficulty changing the size of some bullets.

Please update as soon as possible. I am very excited about sending my new resume to potential employers and recruiters.

Thanks,

Robert K.

Hi Ilona,

This cover letter is awesome. You made me sound more awesome than I am! Haha.

Do I need to sign anything for the added cost of the cover letter or is it all taken care of?

Claudia c.

Greg -

Wow! You do excellent work. I'm pleased with how the first draft turned out.

I've attached my comments (using Word's Track Changes function) to this e-mail. The resume and cover letter are attached. Please let me know if you need any additional information.

Thanks!

Denis P.

Ilona,

I have made only slight changes.

I am very pleased with these products, your professional skill, and your responsiveness.

I would also like to hire you for an additional bio service.

I want to send this resume and cover to Ounce of Prevention today!

Thanks again.

David W.

Dear Peter,

I just wanted to let you know that Ilona was great to work with. I know I had some apprehension at first, but I am very pleased with the results.

With that being said, do you offer any additional services that would get my resume in front of recruiters in the media/advertising world. If so, please let me know the price structure, etc.

Kind regards,

Mike C.

Ilona,

The resume and cover look great! I am an accomplished wordsmith, but you are a true pro.

I made minor revisions, but the essential content is unchanged. You presented lots of information with high-impact in the 3 page resume.

I look forward to your final feedback and going forward to get that executive dream job!

Thanks again,.

David W.

Dear Tom:

Thank you for your efforts.

I read it and was very impressed with your work product and really have nothing to add by way of editing.

Again, thank you.

Allyn L.

Dear Jeanie,

Thank you for an excellent effort in producing this document. The effort is commendable.

Herewith I have enclosed some minor changes and with the career landmarks and training included, its ready to go.

In the training, would you pls include :
1. Training in sweden with ABB
2. Training in England with AVK-SEG UK on marketing and business development
3. Otherv training in Australia as deatiled in my document sent to you earlier.

I will be away on vacation to India starting from today until 4th August 07 and will be slow to respond to mails.

Best regards,

Ravi A.

Ilona,

Thank you soooo much. I really appreciate all your effort on my behalf.

Marianne G.

Thank you Ilona.

I appreciate your efforts and will recommend your
services.

Michael C.

Peter,

Ilona did a great job on the resume. It got me another promotion at my existing company almost a year ago.

I am ready to have my resume updated with this new position. What do you need from me to do this?

Brad O.

Peter

,I have been extremely busy and unable to call rgarding doing an email campaign.

My wife and I are going on vacation July 10 and return July 27. Lets talk then as I would like to get busy on the search when I return.

I am very pleased with the resume and cover letter Rosie wrote!

Best Regards,

Paul F.

Deanne,

I'm very excited and impressed with the resume you sent me.

The new resume says everything it needs to say and really jumps off the page.

Thanks,

Donald R.

Hi Ilona,

On the cover letter I have nothing to add, it looks very professional. Your recommendation is a very good tip, many thanks for that.

I am only attaching the resume, where I have highlighted in green information which can be out of the resume and, could be bring out in the interview process.

Do not forget the my bio when you send me the final version.

I am very pleased with your work, once again many thanks for your help.

Regards,

Enrique A.

Ilona,

Tthe resume and cover letter look great - thank you very much!

I have only a few changes to the resume.

Marianne G.

Deanne,

This looks terrific.

I have attached a copy with my revisions. Please take a look and let me know they make sense.

Pete D.

Hi Rosie,

Thank you for the great job you did with my CV. I really like it.

Best regads,

Eric S.

Hi Ilona!

I had 2 today and one last week! And Another one in the mix!

So exciting, I cannot thank you enough.

Thanks again,

Milena D.

Dear Ilona,

I am attaching Cover Letter and Resume with changes / additions for your review.

I appreciate very much your help. The documents look impressive and motivating!!

Regards,

Enrique A.

Dear Jane and Dan,

Your resumes have produced terrific results:

Michael B. started a new position as VP for business development and marketing with a
tremendous opportunity to impact his new company's future direction -- just what he wanted!

Julia B. got a call for an interview within three hours of submitting her resume to her favorite Presidential candidate's campaign office, and was hired today as an analyst -- her first paid political job!

My daughter, Aimee O., has just begun applying to new positions and we are hopeful she will realize the same level of success.

Thank you so much for your wonderful work. You have made me look like a genius for recommending your services.

All the best,

Catherine O.

Hi Wendy and Darlene,

I wanted to thank you for the beautifully written resume and cover letter. It is already working.

Within a week of sending out just two resumes both companies have called me to set up interviews. I'll keep you posted as things progress.

Thank you again!

Suzanne Y.

Ilona,

I am attaching both the revised cover letter and resume. Looks great! I like the font and formatting.

Mark S.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks. I have'nt worked as hard on my resume as I have in the last 1 month or so.

The output is excellent. I have made some minor changes and let us take this as the final document.

Let me know if there are any other next steps.

Thanks,

Gopalan N.


Hi Donna,

Have just read your draft and it exceeds the high standard I expected!!

I will work on this Tuesday a.m. (UK time), following your guidelines and send you edits & comments (using Word: Track Changes).

Many thanks for your expert input to preparing my resume.

I am delighted with the results.

Best Wishes,

Jack C.

Donna,

Wow! I just glanced at the docs and so far am very impressed. I will review in more detail tonight and let you know.

Also, there are some folks on HR Ladders requesting my resume so your timing is impeccable! I also noticed an AVP position I am very interested in.

Attached is the position description and welcome your feedback for tailoring my skills for this position.

I'll follow-up with you on my feedback over the weekend. Maybe we can get the docs ready for me to apply early next week.

Sheila M.

Thanks for the update Donna.

Now that we have these items in place, can you walk me through next steps for our process (i.e. final documents, any hanging edits, future follow-up process, etc)?

Basically, I'm wondering how and if we continue or is there a closure to your services?

I really enjoyed working with you and feel you did an outstanding job in helping me put together documents that would market my talents for a higher executive position.

Just let me know what else is needed from me and next steps to our process.

Thanks again!

Sheila M.

Dear Donna:

I am thrilled with my resume. I would recommend your services to my colleagues any day!

Sandra P.

Donna,

I am impressed with the work you accomplished with so little with which to work.

We proofed it and highlighted changes with the red bolded corrections.

Otherwise, you masterful crafted the documents for positioning myself for my foray into the private sector.

So, after the corrections and next proffing, what is my next move?

Thanks for all of your assitance, advice and counsel.

Best regards,

Dale W.

Rosie,

Attached is my edited resume.

This looks great !!!

Thank You,

Robert C.

Hi Rosie,

I am very pleased with the resume - I think it looks terrific and I would hire me!

I like the focus on accomplishments rather than responsibilities. Also like the format.

I have attached a copy with some minor revisions highlighted in the manner you have requested.

I look forward to reviewing the changes and once again, the resume looks very solid!

Thank you,

Stephen C.

Rosie,

I have made several careful passes through the document.

It looks excellent apart from some minor things which I have highlighted.

If you have any further questions please let me know.

Regards,

Damian H.

Hi Ilona,

Just wanted to say that I am very happy with the work you have done for me! It looks great and former colleagues and friends have complimented as well.

Thank you,

Milena D.

Dan,

You have obviously done this before. This is outstanding work.

This is much, much better than I could have done on my own. I have read the resume over several times and can find no changes to make with my inexperienced eyes.

I am truly glad I went with Peters firm and I was very lucky to draw you as a verbal architect.

Thank you,

Chuck M.

Deanne,

Very Impressive! I really like it.

I made a few changes and added a couple of questions.

Thank you,

Mark H.


Hi Ilona,

I realized I hit send without writing a note! So sorry Ilona! Forgive my rudeness, it was completely unintentional.

I have attached the revisions and my questions regarding the cover letter. It looks great!

Thank you and I'm sure my tweaks are minor and manageable.

Also, assisting me so that I may be able to change my "Focus" or "Target job/career" to reflect advertising account management for those positions I am currently applying for, would be fantastic!

Have a safe and enjoyable journey and happy return!

Best,

Milena D.

Peter and Greg,

The resume you produced for me is outstanding!

I have received multiple calls and interviews.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Wayne S.

Ilona,

Thanks! Looks great. I answered the questions and made a correction.......it is attached.

Cara D.

Hello Jeanie,

Thank you so much for the outstanding first draft.

I have made a couple of word corrections, but I love it...absolutely love it.

Paul S.

Rosie

I have checked the draft and I liked it very much.

I made some comments con corrected some things. Please find attched the document with my comments.

Thanks again,

Juan G.

Ilona,

WOW this looks really good.

I have gone through it and have made a couple of comments as seen in yellowlooking forward to hearing back from youthanks.

Joseph N.

Jeanie,

I just wanted to drop you a line and let you know that I received an offer for my dream job today!

After signing up on The Ladders I initially received very little interest and was a bit discouraged. BUT, after you totally re-created by resume' and BIO, there was an almost immediate pickup in interest.

As of acceptance my Bio had been searched 409 times and reviewed 62 times by recruiters.

I don't know if many get back with you but I wanted to let you know that it was the best money I have spent and wanted to express my heartfelt thanks in working with me to create a document that I am confident landed me the new position.

Keep up the terrific work!

Oh and by the way GO CHIEFS!!!

Thanks a million!

Kevin W.

Hi Deanne,

I have read the resume once and am very impressed! The cover letter looks great as is!

I will re-read resume tonight and send any changes tomorrow.

Thanks,

Paul F.

Ilona,

Thanks a bunch--you are an amazing writer.

Colette P.

Greg,

Everything looks good. Now just need to add the cover letter.

Thanks for you expertise.

Regards,

Ray K,

Ilona,

You did a great job on the resume!! I do have some changes though. They are highlighted in Red. Please let me know if you do not understand anything and I can clarify.

The cover letter is great.

Thanks for all your help on this 🙂

Regards,

Vivian F.

Hi Jeanie,

I received a call and scheduled an interview within one hour of my resume being distributed via email! I had the interview this morning with McGraw Hill Education for a Business Development position.

I need a well-crafted thank you letter, which will serve as my intro to the group president. The HR Director provided guidance about what to say. I would greatly appreciate your assistance. I have a print copy of the job description, which I can fax to you.

Can you help? I would like to get this out by tomorrow pm or Wed. am at the latest.

Thanks so much,

Diane B.

Dan,

Great product. Very impressed (wife too) with your
work.

Thank you,

Jon S.

Dan,

Well Done, Thank you

Zachery S.

Good Morning Dan,

I have looked over the resume and I dont see anything that needs to be changed.

In fact I had to read it a couple of times to believe it was even me!

Very good job.

MSgt Christopher L. W.

Dan,

I am really happy with the resume. Just received an offer from Merrill Lynch and soon MassMutual for very high profile jobs.

Thx,

Rudi A.

Hi Ilona,

This looks good. I have answered your questions and suggested changes using either revisions or comments (in a few cases).

I think we can wrap this, as you expect, with some minor changes to a second revision.

Lance H.

Ilona,

I really like this resume!

I answered the questions you asked and made a couple of other changes. I will keep rereading it today.

Thank you,

David S.

Just wanted to say thank you.

I agree with your comments on the resume and think the cover letter is OUTSTANDING!!

All the best to you Jeanie.

Jairon F.

Jeanie,

Just an awesome job.

Cant believe how clear and concise you have made my rsum.

Well done. Just a few changes and these are final from my end.

Could you please edit and send back to me and job is done.

Thanks heaps.

Brian J.

Hi Peter,

Jeanie sent me the latest version of my Resume (Great Job!),

Let me know when can we chat about:

1. The cover letter
2. About asking for your help connecting me with VC's

Best Regards,

Shaull A.

Jeanie,

Did I mention that you did a fantastic job on my cover letter? Well I'm very happy with it, it looks great, thank you!

Scott P.

Jeanie,

This is an amazing CV, I cant believe its me youre incredible! Ill come back with a few comments following my initial ones below.

Marc L.

Jane,

I hope all is well with you. I have attached Dan's version of Michael's resume . . . we love it!

We will be applying to four positions today and would like to hear your ideas for distribution.

Jane, thank you for your advice with this early on . . . it has been truly valuable.

Best regards,

Catherine O.

Hi Peter/Ilona,

Thank you for the work well done. Have some interviews scheduled for next couple of days 🙂

One thing - would it be possible to send me a receipt over e-mail ? I would need that for my accountant.

Thanks.

Best regards,

Vesa P.

Jane,

Thanks for the email. I have the final version of my resume, Gregory did a great job and finished it in 1 day!

I have been out of town for the past 8
days and am now getting caught up and will be ready to move full steam ahead with my job search later this week.

I probably will have you do a bio for me but just need a few days to figure some things out.

Thanks again for everything. I'll be in touch.

Nora H.

Greg,

Thanks very much for your help - I made the direct edits in the document and here is the final; if you can give this a read over and let me know if you think anything else needs to be changed from your perspective and I think it is ready to go.

.I appreciate the help and it looks much better!

John M.

Ilona,

Thank You - this is so much better than my work!.

I've done the revisions I see as required in red and put comments in green.

William B.

Ilona,

Thank you for your work.

I think it looks great and I don't see any need to change anything.

Thanks,

Heather F.

Hi Rosie,

First of all, Id like to say how pleased I am with this draft of the resume.

I feel that you have done an excellent job in capturing my experiences.

Thanks.

Ed K.

Rosie,

All in all, I think the resume looks good.

Attached are the edits I would like.

Thanks,

Carol C.

Rosie,

I proofread the resume. It looks great !
I made one small change but that is it.

Thank you for the good work.

Robert R.

Greg,

Been traveling with no email access, as hard as that may sound to believe. Again, a few minor items.
Incorprate these and I am happy to sign off and move forward.

Appreciate all of your efforts. Next steps..into bio for OpsLadders....


Stephen K.

Ilona,

Looks great . Thanks so much. It has been great working with you.

Now it's time for me to get the new improved "me" out there! 🙂

Thanks again!!

Diane G.

Ilona,

Thank you, I think it looks great. I did my best to answer the questions in blue...my answers are in red. I will only need one more shot at it to finalize it, but thought it would be easier to proof again once it doesn't have extra correspondence all over it.

Thanks,

Heather F.

Jeanie,

This looks awesome. I answered all of your questions, highlighted.

This looks so good, I am very happy. I have at least 3 friends that want to use you after they saw my before and after.

Patrick L.

Jeanie,

Going through your draft I am really impressed. It reads and looks very good and there only are a few minor modifications needed (in RED in the revision V1.1 attached). Comparing your version to my old one this apparently was way too old-fashioned, probably good enough 10 years ago but not any more in the days of internet and globalisation where special s/w scans CVs for key words.

Cheers and have a nice weekend.

Heinz S.

Jeanie,

I just glanced at it and it looks like a great start! I cannot wait for the next draft to look at.

Thanks again.

Michael C.

Greg,

Thank you for spending quality time working on my documents. I have carefully reviewed them for correctly, intent, messaging and positioning.

Seeing the new docs has help me go back and check facts, real titles, locations and review my top accomplishments. For your convenience and to your request I have used Word revisions so you can see the changes.

As you will see from some of my edits, I did try to bring out a better balance in my business and technical acumen and put some refined color on how I achieve that. Since I have worked in both business and technical areas for most of these positions, I could write singularly a technical (development) only resume or a business focused resume, but I think that the best leverage of my talents are achieved when I am given responsibility to leverage both dimensions. I realize that having this dual focus makes the job of describing my abilities to do both while not shunning of opportunities where the initial screening is for only one dimension, a more difficult task.

Thus, I realize the extra effort it takes to structure such and I thank you for assisting me with this.

I look forward to your review and reworked version. Contact me if you have questions.

Regards,

Tommy F.

Peter,

Thanks to both Jeanie for accomplishing a great piece of work as well as to yourself, Peter, for your guidance. I will keep you guys posted on my progress, ask for your support whenever needed and will recommend your services to my business community people over here.

Cheers,

Michael B.

Ilona,

WOW! I love it! All the content looks accurate now. I justified some paragraphs and fixed the line spacing between Employer names and Job titles.

The cover letter is perfect!

Thank you!

-Giovanni M.

Hi Christine,

I think you've done a great job on my resume!

I've gone through added things that I think help. Please let me know if you need anything further or if what I added wasn't exactly what you were looking for.

Can't wait to see the finished product!

Allison B.

Hello Ilona,

Wow!!! Thank you so much, it looks great! I will go through it proof it and fill in the questions you have on it.

Regards,

Giovanni M.

Greg,

The only change I made was to take out the phone number on each document.

The resume is great and I wouldn't change a thing .

You do good work !!!

Have a wonderful day.

Tammy H.

Jane,

Thanks for the personal confirmation! I did receive receipts/confirmations for both Recruiter and VC distribution. I will pass along any "wrong" e-mail addresses if I get any returned.

You've been awesome to work with and I will certainly be recommending Career-Resumes to others.

Let's stay in touch.

Sincerely,

"Your new best friend in Texas"

Jim S.


Hello Jane thanks for the follow up.

I have been lucky enough to secure a position with an ex-President of Global Signal.

I actually start employment this week as Vice President of Engineering and Operations for a new start-up venture here in Florida.

Please pass on my thanks to your team for the manner in which my resume and information was compiled.

Regards,

Steve S.

Thank you Lynn.

I am very pleased with the results that you have generated.

Best Regards,

Dan B.

Deanne,

Thank you very much. The resume looks great.

The only change I made was on the second page. The bolded reference to 17x portfolio growth should now be 20x. Otherwise, I truly appreciate your very fine effort.

Thanks again,

Mitch W.

Hi Peter,

As a follow up, your service was excellent and I was very pleased with the results that your writer produced for me.

It was timely and excellent. Thanks to Jean Oscarson for a job well done.

Great experience.

Thanks very much,

Maik L.

Greg:

I have attached the proofed documents. I checked my business card for XXXXX and my title was VP Sales Access Division. I did have International responsibility, but Worldwide was not in my official title.

Great job, Thanks.

Bob W.

Hi Jane,

Just a note to thank you again and to let you know that the resume Kelly put together for me is generating a number of really good referrals for me.

I'm looking at several great opportunities. FYI, about a month ago I started to attached a professional photo to my e-mailings. Since that time responses are increasing. I'm sure it won't be long until my search is complete.

Sincerely,

Jim B.

Jeanie,


Thanks for the draft which really impressed me.

You accomplished a very interesting work on my resume. I put on yellow the modifications I noticed to be done.

Feel free to apply what you think is the most appropriate to have the best chance to put the resume on the right stack at the headhunter.

One more time, sorry about my nervousness on my last mail. After reading, the draft resume I received today, it erased totally my nervousness.

To be honest I am very impatient to find a new position related with my new knowledge, of course, in your so beautiful country.

Merry Easter

Best regards,

Pascal V.

Hello Greg,

I apologize for taking so long to respond. The resume looks good and I do not have any edits.

Thanks again.

Regards,

Ron M.

Hi Ilona

Thanks again for all your work on my document. It looks really great.

I have made some changes using the tracking function, but I also have some general questionsI ask these questions only because I dont know the answers, and am trying to think of all the angles. I will go with your recommendations on all of these matters.

Paula P.

Donna,

Wow -- I had my first hit on my resume.

Received great compliments on the resume, especially the opening. Thanks

I will send additional feedback on the resume later, but 2nd draft looks great.

Chris S.

Denise,

"The recent resume, cover letter, and bio development work by Jeanie Oscarson was extremely professional and worthwhile.

The feedback I've received has been been excellent!"

Jim S.

Hello Rosie,

I have went trough the resume and I like the form you have given it.


Best regards,

Benoit N.

Rosie,

I really like it. Thank you for doing such a great job.
You did my husbands (Joel M.) and his was great too...

Belkys E.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you, thank you!

You did a great job in rewriting my resume. It really looks great.

Thanks again!

Kind regards,

Aris Van B.

Denise-

Jeannie Oscarson did a fabulous job on my resume/bio/cover letters!

I would like to take you up on your offer to spend a few minutes on the phone with me discussing the optimal approach to get my new "paper" out into the search/networking community. (including website/ service recommendations)

Please reply with a couple of time slots starting on Monday, April 2nd that would work for me to call you.

Regards,

Jim S.

Rosie,

Great resume re-write!!

See my comments attached.

Call if you can't read my handwriting."

Best,

Roy P.

Hello Ilona,

My resume looks great, thank you for working on it. I could tell that you spent a lot of time on it--and I appreciate it! You are very talented!

I have attached a new file with my revisions in red. Please let me know your thoughts...as I mentioned before, I will be out of town on business Wednesday 3/28 and Thursday 3/29, returning Thursday evening.

Also, about my cover letter. You may use the letters of recommendation that I faxed to you for content. If you are looking for professional references that future employers may contact, I have a separate list.

Thanks again for everything! I hope that your computer situation is better, I understand how stressful that can be.

Have a great couple days...you are most wonderful.

Melina V.

Greg,

Thank you very much for this product you have
produced for me. There is only one change that I see
at this time.

I'm very pleased with your work and thank you again.

Sincerely,

Jerry H.

Dear Jeanie,

I've joined HCL America at Sunnyvale, N.Cal. The resume and the support document that you created were of great help and landed me in this job.

Thanks a ton for all the help & support your rendered.

Shankar H.

Ilona,

First I would like to thank you for your remarkable effort. I am impressed with the draft you sent me and can clearly see the difference ! Thanks again.

As for my comments and answers to the questions you had, it all included in the attachment in red. I would appreciate it if we could discuss the changes before you incorporate them, so please give me a call to discuss. You can reach me at (444) 444 4444.

N.B I have also attached a reference letter from my ex boss at Citibank as I thought it may be useful. As for the appraisal, after going through them I feel they are too technical to be used.

Thanks,

Doaa H.

Hi Rosie,

I'm sorry it has taken so long for me to get back to you.

Thank you for the resume. I think you did a great job.

I have a question. Can you remind me how much a cover letter would cost. Does the cost only cover one letter or can you do two different ones?

Look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you,

Brian McC.

Jeanie,

Let me spend some time with this over the next few days and make sure it says all I want it to say.

First glance says it looks great. You do spectacular work.

Thank you!

Andy H.

Peter,

I sent Jeanie back some revisions. You guys do great work. If you can have her do a cover letter, too, that would be great.

Andy H.

Hi Jeanie,

Your draft has indeed been worth waiting for I like it ! However, even more importantly the recruiters community has to like it.

I have inserted a couple of changes and suggestions using highlight changes so that you can easily track and incorporate. Let me please know if any further questions.

Michael B.

Deanne,

I really like this!

I did not change anything. I did add the positions that I reported to. Other than that, I think it is just fine.

Thanks,

Roy F.

Hi Marc,

I am a premium subscriber to the Ladders and took advantage of your free offer of a resume critique from career-resumes.com.

Jane was constructive, to the point, and did not use the opportunity to try and pitch me on paid resume rework. She was refreshingly honest and helpful, leading me to ask her whats the catch?. Of course, there was none, which makes me feel good about the subscription fee I pay to the Ladders and about recommending Jane, career-resumes.com, and Ladders.com to other job seekers.

Regards,


Jim D.

Hi,

I have finally come back from a business trip and was able to concentrate on reviewing your first draft.

I like it a lot! I have attached a copy of my edits/questions for your review to incorporate into a final version. I have highlighted in RED anything for you to pay attention to. Let me know if you have any questions. Otherwise, please send me back the final version.

I thank you greatly for all of your help!

Sincerely,

Jim C.

Hi, Jeanie!

Thank you again for all your hard work on my resume and cover letter.

I only had one minor edit to the cover letter, which Ive already made from my end, but attached the letter with the edit for you anyway, in the event that you needed to see it in order to send me the final letter. T

The resume looks great, but again, Ive attached the last revision of it, just in case you needed it for the final release of these documents.

I am looking forward to having you revise my bio on the Marketing Ladders web site as well. And once again, THANK YOU for all your work. You are an excellent writer and an absolute pleasure to work with.

Looking forward to receiving the FINAL documents from you so I can get the show on the road!!!

Michelle M. 🙂

Hi Jeanie,

You did a great job on my resume. Thank you!

Ill re-read it several times over the weekend and come back to you with comments early next week.

Have a nice weekend.

Aris van B.

Thanks Ilona,

The resume looks great.

I will review it thoroughly over the weekend when I
have time to think. This first week back is hectic.

Regards,

Tom L.

Deanne,

Thank you it was obviously a lot of work and well done.

Mark F.

Hello Deanne,

Thank you for the note and fine product!

I have reviewed and made my changes according to your instructions. I am in Germany all this week, so getting to my home e-mails has been a little tough.

Mark R.

Hi Jeanie,

I received the revised resume. I believe we have a final version. The resume looks great! Thank you!

Chuck T.

Jeanie,

I have done some edits and corrections in the document. I believe if a 3rd person does a proof, we are done.

Great job ...I would definitely hire myself!

Mit freundlichen Grssen / Best regards

Gerog R.


Jeanie,

Thanks much for all the hard work, quick communication and excellent service from you. I want to truly thank you for your responsiveness in the midst of your busy schedule.

I was very impressed with your work. So good luck to you. You have been fantastic to work with.

Best Regards,

Maik L.

Jeanie,

I have had a chance to take the great piece of work you did and update it to my liking. I would appreciate your comments. Separately, I am looking at the cover letter and will share my comments in a day or so.

I think you did a great job on the resume!

Regards,

Terry D.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks for all your work on these. They look great, and I have just a few changes to suggest.

Right now I am based in Zurich, which is 5 hours ahead of the East Coast USA. Ill send you these changes shortly so you will have them first thing in the morning. It would be great if you could turn them around and send them back to me before 2 pm EST (7 pm Zurich time) so I can then forward the CV to the company, which happens to be in Ireland. Im flying in there tomorrow first thing in the morning to meet with them.

Thanks for a great job!

Perry F.

Thanks Rosie,

As usual - excellent work - thank you!

Thanks for your assistance.

Rgds

Ed F.

Ilona,

Thank you.

IT LOOKS AMAZING!!!

Brian K.

Dear Ilona:

I am truly ecstatic with your level of writing and feel you created for me an eceptionally well written, professional document.

You truly made my accomplishments "shine."

The cover letter was a masterpiece and required no changes.

I made some minor changes to the resume, (elaborating where appropriate), that might need some polishing.

Thank you so much for your help. I believe this will truly make a difference in separating me from other candidates.

Brian K.

Ilona:

I get it: the top paragraph is to be adjusted according to the specific gig's requirements. Will the rest of the resume's format stay intact?

One more question: when responding electronically, is it recommended to send the resume as part of an e mail, or as an attachment ?

Any other comments, input, or questions? Am I ready to rock? OK, so that was two more questions.

Again, thanks for all your good work - well done. It is appreciated.

Be well,

Jack C.

Lynn,

I am really impressed by what you have done with my resume.

I have attached a modified version with minor changes. Besides those changes, the resume looks awesome.

If you have any questions or suggestions on proposed changes, please call me on (732) 111-1111. Looking forward to receiving my final resume, cover letter and Bio for Ladders and Linkedin websites.

Thanks again,

Ashish P.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks for all of your help. I think my resume look great!

All the best!

Cheryl M.

Dear Ilona,

Thanks for the quick turnaround. You have captured all the changes. I am very happy with the final documents.

Thank you for your work on this project. I appreciate your patience with the late feedback.

Best regards,

Anne D.

Mr. Faherty,

The documents look great. I have made a few corrections and changes. One change you will see is that I added a space between the different organizations - I think it makes it easier to read, they don't all run into each other. I also changed the font, increasing it, so again they stand out and it affords greater separation - what do you think?

Thanks,

Craig B.

Ilona,

Here are the corrections and/or responses to you questions.

Its looking really good. I entered a few questions of my own; however, Ill follow your advice and suggestions.

Thank you,

Tom R.

Ilona,

I received the proof. Wow...you are good! I didn't recognize myself.

I have a few changes (including some new information) and will get it to you today.

Thank you,

Randy Van A.

Hi Ilona

Finally I had some time to review and make changes to the document you created. I have been tied up with our annual sales meeting for the past several weeks and finally had some time to breathe.

I think you did a fantastic job consolidating the breadth of information I provided. I gave some feedback in redline format in the attached document. Of course, you're the expert, so I ask that you review and remove anything that you see as extraneous.

I would very much like for you to incorporate the testimonials in a cover letter. And would also like you to provide the "language" for marketing ladders that Peter mentioned could also be used on Linked-In.

So I imagine the format you provided is well received amongst people recruiting marketing folks?

Looking forward to working to finalization with you!

Kristen M.

Hi Greg,

I have reviewed each of these documents. In general I am quite pleased as I think that you have do an excellent job at synthesizing my information. I have attached each of the documents with changes. I might add, that there are not too many changes.

One of my strengths is communication; the ability to talk about IT "stuff" with anyone and get them to understand what they want/need. I added one line on my bio, but I am not sure where to put this into my resume. A lot of IT people get hung up on the technology and lose sight of the needs of the business. I want to make sure that this is somehow included as well.

Thanks,

John M.

Hi Ilona:

Sorry I haven't gotten back to you last week. It was a busy week at the office with a few late nights. Hopefully I'll get that kind of a week back in a marketing position soon.

Regarding the resume, I think it looks great. I've been reviewing and thinking, reviewing and thinking, and came to the conclusion that I'm over thinking and trying to make it too perfect. You are the expert and I think you did a great job capturing the key points and making sense out of them.

I feel I'm ready top get back in the job hunt with the ammunition you provided. What's the next steps?

Thanks,

Jerry F.

Rosie,

I have read the first draft of the resume. It is very direct, to the point and highlights my varied back ground and achievements.

Thank you,

Ken K.

Hi Rosie,

Great job!!! Thank you very much. I made a few changes because I dont want to overstate my qualifications when it comes to budgeting or computers.

Ill look over the other services your company offers
and let you know my decision.

Thanks.

Joanie H.

Hi Rosie,

Thank you for the cover letter and resume.

I've proofread the cover letter and it looks great.

I think I'm all set at this point.

Scott J.

Hi Rosie,


Find attached my review of the good work you've done for me.

Thank you,

Iulian P.

Ilona,

Thanks for the great work. I have made corrections/changes highlighted in red. I appreciate the tips about lenght of work histroy, etc. and am eager to see the final product.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Currin S.

Greg,

I want to extend my thank you for your help and your feedback.

Peter,

I will definitely recommend Greg to all my peers.

Thank you,

Rolan S.

Donna,

Thank you for my bio. Your quality of work is excellent.

Regards,

Lisa C.

Freddie

Thanks - let me look through your site and get back to you in the next few days.

I wanted to thank you for your time today and appreciate your honesty and advice to assist me in finding my next opportunity.

Regards,

Jane W.

Hi Ilona:

First I would like to say that I hope you had a wonderful break.

Second I would like to say excellent work on my resume and cover letter. I can now see that I was not seeing the forest from the trees.

Thank you,

Jerry F.

Dear Ilona

Thank you for the draft resume and cover letter. Overall, I am very pleased with the draft. I will review overnight and forward any changes tomorrow latest.

Thanks and regards

Anne D.

Hi Greg,

This looks great!!! Thank you very much.

Will you be starting with the Bio now?

Thanks,

Sudha B.

Hi Deanne,

Thank you for this resume. I think you have done a great job in capturing all the information and presenting it in a very compelling manner.

I think it looks great and I am very excited to begin using it in my job search.

Regards,

Jody S.

Greg,

Good news. I have Microsoft Word on my laptop. I was able to open up the file. Sorry for the confusion. BY THE WAY, IT LOOKS AWESOME... I love it.

Rolan S.

Hi Rosie,

The resume looks great!!

I'm currently working on editing it and I should
be finished in a couple of days.

Thanks,

Mohammed A.

Donna,

What a difference than what I wrote. I am excited to see the finsinhed product!!

I am faxing the changes and or information back to you now.

Regards,

Lisa C.

Deanne,

Great Job !! This is a impressive resume I can be proud to send out to potential employers.

Thanks for everything.

Robert H.

Hi Peter,

WOW. I hardly recognized myself in the resume prepared by Deanne Arnath. Anyone seeking a professional job should definitely hire your organization to write their resume. Having a laundry list of accomplishments is no longer enough.

Thanks for the leg up!

Lynn S.

Hi Greg,

Thanks for really making my resume Beautiful. It looks absolutely stunning... Here is my first updated quick Draft response. I will be looking at it more carefully again.

Sudha B.

Greg

Thanks for the quick turnaround on this document. It looks great. I won't be asking for a lot (if any) changes to the document. I need your help to pass the 10 second test and realize it's the rest of the process that's up to me! I'll review this more thoroughly tonight.

Thanks again!

Best regards,

Tony B.

Peter

Jeannie did an exceptional job with my resume in the 1 hour conversation we had she was able to understand who I am, my background and present the information on paper in a way I could never do

Thanks

Simon M.

Ilona,

Attached is the resume proof with my comments. It looks great, thank you for your help!

Mike C.

Deanne,

This resume and cover letter are amazing! Mine was good, but yours is fantastic! I do have some minor changes and/or suggestions. But before you make any, I want your input as to whether or not they should be implemented.

Thank you,

Pamela H.

Ilona,

Thank you very much - it looks great - good job!

Kathie B.

Denise,

Thanks for your helpful suggestions. And thanks for reaching out so promptly (not every company does what they commit to do, you know).

Regards,

Andy McF.

Thanks Rosie,

This version is great.

Don D.

Rosie,

Looks good to me,

Ron V.

Hi Rosie

Thanks for the draft, it looks great! I have proof read the same and have attached herewith the document with some changes and comments. Please review the same and advise.

Once again thank you for your hard work.

Regards,

Anish S.

Jeanie,

I used the 'track changes' option in the document. Not many changes.

You make me sound so good!

Rachel B.

Hello Jeanie,

Excellent work I really appreciate what you did with this resume I would now hire me!

I thought you would like this. I submitted my resume yesterday for that CEO job that I sent you the financial times posting for last week and got called today for an interview!

Simon M.

Ilona,

Almost makes me want to hire myself. :-))

Great job. Attached is the word.doc
with my answers to your questions and some minor revisions.

Thanks,

John C.

Hi Dan,

I just wanted to thank you for the fine work you did on my resume. I have had two interviews, several calls and 1 offer. I can't believe it!

Thank you very much,

Yvonne B.

Rosie,

I reviewed the resume and cover letter. Looks pretty impresive!

Thanks,

Don D.

Ilona,

The resume looks good. I don't see any other changes.

Thank you so much for all your work.

Frank C.

Jeanie,

Thanks for all of your amazing work!

I really appreciate you working overtime on this and am thrilled with the quality of the resume/letter.

Thanks for everything!!

Jim S.

Jeanie,

I read again the resume and I really like what you did with it. I also like your letter 🙂

Thanks!

Xavier G.

Jeanie,

Thank you very much. I really like what you have done.

I couple of additions have occured to me and I am curious to see whether you see the value in their addition. If you feel that they will add value can you please add them in your unique style? If not please omit.

I am not sure where we go from here? Aside from the comments above I am very pleased with what you have done and can't imagine I will many more comments.

Mark E.

Hi Jeanie!

Brilliant! The cover letter is perfect! Many thanks! No changes to it. I'm making MINOR edits to the resume now - the resume is great - I'm just tweaking a couple of minor things....should get it back to you tonight or very early tomorrow morning.

I greatly appreciate your help!

Best,

Janine F.

Hi Rosie,

See attached document.

This reads well and I am pleased with it at this point.

I changed a few numbers to update them to this years results.

I am anxious to take it on a test drive...

Thanks,

Brian S.

Kelley,

Thanks so much for a great job.

I have made a few changes mainly to improve accuracy. I look forward to seeing the final draft.

Brian McK.

Rosie,

I reviewed the resume and it looks very good. I like it.
Would it be possible to receive final copy save also as Adobe Reader PDF file in addition to Word file?

Thanks,

Kris O.

Hi Rosie,

Please find my comments attached. I think you did a great job. I would hire this guy! 🙂

Best regards,

Peter M.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you for sending the documents - I received them yesterday evening but did not get the chance to open until today.

They really look great - it is like having a makeover
or getting a new wardrobe!

I'm going to spend some time this weekend reviewing them, and hope to have a mark-up back to you early next week.

Thanks again and have a nice weekend.

Kindly,

Shannon D.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks, this is looking much much better!! I've attached the added data you wanted and some changes...hopefully they are clearly marked, just let me know if you have any quesitons about it. I added an accomplishment under Novell since it was a big deal at that time.

Also added a couple quotes from former managers if that helps and they can be pared down of course.

The font is actualy my favorite so that works perfectly for me.

I know at the time we decided no cover letter but can you tell me what that would cost at this stage? I realized that I would need a better one than I have at this point and might as well have it done by you if you are able to do that.

Thanks for you work and have a great weekend!

Dickie C.

Rosie,

Thank you for the outstanding work on my resume. I'm very pleased with it and you have certainly
exceeded my expectations.

I have proofread it multiple times and had two other people review it as well.

Scott J.

Denise,

I don't think I'll need to worry about the other services. I was able to land a job just days after my resume was prepared.

I was extremely satisfied with the product and fully endorse your company. (despite the price) 🙂

Take Care,

James G.

Ilona thanks for the positive feedback.

First draft looks great. I made changes/answered
questions where needed.

I have had my HR corporate wife proofread and make any suggestions. Don't worry not many.

Ed S.

Rosie,

You are GREAT!! I like the resume very much. The only thing I tried to change using the track changes command is as follows:

I tried using the track changes tool, but I am not sure if it worked properly.

Thank you, this is great.

Sincerely,

Herman C.

Ilona,

Got it! Wow, I'm impressed with myself!! 🙂 Also impressed with your work!! Thank you-I'll need the weekend to study it over and get the additional info. Have a great weekend!

Diana I.

Hi Ilona!

I wanted to let you know that I received the resume and cover letter and they look great.

I will review in depth this weekend and get back with you at the beginning of next week.

Have a great weekend and thank you for your work!

Chris A.

Thanks a ton Dan, you're the best!

I'll refer you in a heart beat to anyone I talk to.

Jerome G.

Rosie,

Very happy with the results. Tthere are a couple of changes I would like and also a question.

Thanks,

Fernando G.

Hi Rosie,

WOW! You did a fantastic job! You summarized things in a way that I just can't and you really socked it to 'em!! I am so grateful to you.

I just proofed it and made just a couple of changes. I hope they came through (in red) ok.

I feel that this resume is so superior to what I have and it will be a big asset to me.

Please let me know what you think about changes.

Best wishes.

Sincerely,

Myrene O'C.

Christine,

Thanks very much. Excellent work !!!.

I let you know if my work life change.

Kind regards,

Mara C.

Hi Peter,

I received the final version of my resume from Jeanie. I think that she did a great job!

I'm not sure if you charged my card for the balance that I owed you or not. Please let me know as I would like to make sure that I paid you in full.

Thanks and regards,

Frederick P.

Rosie,

The resume and cover letter is impressive!!

I have read, re-read it over and over and cannot find
any changes that are necessary. I have had my wife and a close friend in HR also review it and neither can find anything wrong. Both were very impressed.

Therefore, it appears the resume and cover are perfect as they stand.

I am confident that they will get me the interviews I am looking for.

Thanks so much!

Ken S.

Hi Rosie,

Attached is my resume for your review/edit. I made a few changes to it and everything is marked clear with the changes that were made.

In a nutshell, you created a wonderful document that shows clearly what I have been doing during my professional career.

Your protocol states to review it one more time so lets do that and move on. Thanks so much and I will edit it one more time after your corrections and off I go!

Thanks

Scott N.

Hi Deanne, Happy New Year!

You probably were wondering where I was. This past Holiday proved very challenging from a time standpoint but I was able to finally review the cover letter and resume draft.

Let me first say I was extremely pleased with your work! After a quick once through I thought I would hire me not necessarily an unbiased comment but I think you get the point.

Brian P.

Christine,

Im very glad with your job, it was excellent. Please find attached the resume with little changes in order you produce the final version.

Thank you very much,

Mara C.

Ilona,
The resume looks very good.

I think the resume is light years ahead of my old resume.

In terms of the cover letter, do you have other options I could look at? Please let me know of anything else you may need from me.

Thanks,

Joe Z.

Dear Deanne:

I wanted to take a moment and thank you for your hard work and meticulous proof-reading in providing me a quality resume in a timely manner.

I am still amazed as to having only a few minor questions/changes for you on the 1st draft you provided me.

To be honest I was apprehensive as to working with someone I did not know and who did not know me as well as mostly only working through e-mails. You made the process easy and stress free.

Although the proof is in getting interviews I feel confident that I have a quality resume and cover letter which will in fact lead to interviews.

The service, experience and end product were all of the highest caliber and I can not thank you enough.

Have a wonderful new year and best of luck in all your endeavors!

Warm Regards,

Barry J. V.

Ilona,

Attached is my only comment, it looks great!!

Peter G.

Ilona,

I am in receipt of the resume and cover letter. I will need to review and provide the dates and some corrections to the information. I should be able to get it done over the weekend.

Thanks, the resume flows very well.

Joe Z.

Ilona,

You did a great job! I really like the resume. I've attached my changes here. They don't really require you to do much other than please review and any other questions you have to make it more understandable would be great.

Thanks for your help.

I'd like to wrap up this week. Please let me know what you schedule looks like. Thanks!

Tonja P.

Deanne,

Thank you so much for all your hard work. The resume looks great, and the cover letter is perfect.

I feel much more confident moving forward with my job search now.

Thanks again,

Joel E.

Hi Becky,

It's fantastic. Thank you for your help.
For some company websites, they require the ASCII text version, what would you recommend that I do with this resume?

Sonya P.

Hello Donna,

I wanted to take a moment and let you know that I have been receiving excellent feedback on the latest resume update you did. It is good work and I am proud to use it.

I am using my new Email address as I have moved into the world of high speed.

Sincerely,

Tom C.

Hi Deanne,

Thanks for the final revisions. I believe it is ready for prime time. I am very pleased with the results of both the resume and cover letter.

Your diligent application of your expertise will no doubt produce favorable results in my search for new employment.

Thanks again very much for your efforts. I will be sure to let you know the results of my job search.

Dan L.

Hi Jeanie,

This looks great and will certainly give me a good starting point for introducing myself to recruiters etc as I start to consider some further career development. Thanks once again for your work,

I'm very happy with the result and it's been very helpful to have a 'outside professional' pull things together.

Best regards,

Andrew W.

Hi Jeanie,

Please note attached, small revisions, if they look good, I will send as is, but take the red text off and remove the "deleted" note on one of the first sections.

You made me look great!

Thank you,

Catherine K.

Dear Wendy,

Thank you for your time this morning to work with me on my cover letter and resume. I am very happy with the changes that were made and this will be the final draft and finished product. Now I will just need to have these versions changed in my text format.

Please thank Peter for keeping his word to me about giving me a cover letter and resume that I will be happy with. Ask him to please update my cover letter and resume that is being kept on file to the latest version. I will continue to work with Career Resumes in the future. I will keep in touch with my job search progress.

Sincerely,

Mike N.

Hi Ilona:

Thank you very muc for doing such a great job, with such a short turnaround. Happy Holidays!

Andrea S. 🙂

Ilona,

Thanks so much.

With all of the craziness of Xmas, I haven't been able to make much progress. I will review next week and can certainly send this as an interim resume with a few changes to the job I am seeking. I'll be in touch. Thanks so much for turning it around.

It looks so great!

Tonja P.

Hi Ilona:

I'm attaching both docs below with notations in red italics. Please let me know when you have received them, and if you have any questions.

My notes were very minor, because I think you did such an outstanding job.

Thank you,

Andrea S.

Hello Wendy,

Just wanted to take a moment to commend you and Becky for the redesign of my resume. True to your prediction, I have attracted a number of interested partiesand have two corporations that may make a job offer by the end of this week! In addition to that, I am now a Staff Writer for TicketNews.com; my first article for them on Broadway Shows gross reports which will be a weekly item, has been accepted and they are cutting my first check today. But thats not all the good newsIve also heard from USA Voice, a new online news service, and they are considering hiring me as a part-time reporter. Wow! Talk about results....

Thanks again! SO worth the money I invested!
Carol-Ann R.

P.S. Im referring your service to a close friend.

Dear Ilona,

I will proofread once more but I will not bother you with anything more on this. You have provided me with great a tool and Im confident, that I will get response, when I start the process after Christmas. (Dont write more CVs for Danes in the next 3 months!!!)

It has been great working with you - despite the distance. I assume, that You are situated in US but I can also see from Your surname, that You are Dutch or Flemish or maybe Your ancestors were ?

Anyway I wish you all the best and first and foremost a great Christmas and a fantastic entry into the New Year.

I might come back in the future with requests to maybe look over a cover letter for a specific job but lets see about that.

Cheers, all the best! .and many thanks!

Niels N.

Ilona,

Yes, I really like it!!

I am inserting my comments and I am almost done,
but will send it back ASAP.

Peter G.

Rosie,

I added the info where you indecated that it was needed. The rest seem very good.

Hope it works better than the last one did.

Thanks alot,

Roger R.

Dear Rosie

Your did the great job and I like it.

Regards,

Orest Y.

Hi Kelley,

What a great job! I really like the angle from which you have approached the CV to allow for the transfer of skills to other industries.

Thanks again. It gave me a great boost of confidence (which is needed in this unpleasant period) and I am truly amazed how well you have extracted this CV so clearly from my rambling work sheets.

Dario G.

Thanks Jeanie,

Really appreciate the help. I think this is soooooo.... much better than anything I could have developed separately!

Steve L.

Christine,

The resume looks great and thanks for the hints on responding to ads using the cover letter.

Thanks and Happy Holidays,
Jose F.

Rosie,

This is great, it looks good!! Invoice me or pull money from my account!!!

Thank you so much!!!!

Bruce G.

Christine,

This is great.

I have attached a revised version where I have made some minor corrections to the resume and cover letter. For the cover letter can you provide me some recommendations on editing it in case I need to answer to a specific ad.

Thanks,
Jose Carlos F.

Christine,

Here is an edited version of my resume. Thanks so much for putting this together.

I am very happy with the result.

BJ M.

Rosie,

Thanks, I think the resume looks great. You did a wonderful job.

Tom C.

Dear Jean,

Thank you very much for this new version of my CV.

Despite all efforts from my side, I could not find mistakes or improve it in any way.

Its just excellent. Please feel free to further modify it if you think it would help.

Thanks for your help.

Dr. Kurt N.

Thank you Jeanie looks great.

Thank you for all your efforts.

I am a happy client.

Kevin C.

Hi Ilona,

Hope you had a great Thanksgiving (I went to the parade for the first time--so fun!).

First I want to mention that I'm working in Word 2003, and it displays tracked changes differently than earlier versions. If you're working in another version of Word and can't see my edits properly, let me know and I can probably convert to PDF to show changes or figure out another solutions.

I really like the direction you've taken on the resume. I sent you a lot of junk and you really made sense of it. Bravo!! I'm attaching with some edits and questions that I've made (I tried to adapt it to AP style since I'm claiming this as an area of expertise; also made some other changes). If you have any feedback about my changes, let me know.

On the letter, my biggest concern is easily adapting this to different jobs since I'm applying to a wide range of opps. I seem to be getting a lot of response from companies looking for really strong writers, and have been told it's tough to find someone with my combined skill set. Any suggestions are appreciated!

Thanks so much!

Jen S.

Hi Ilona

I have looked at it over and over..... I think you have done an awesome job, definitely well worth the money. I have made just a few changes.

On the cover letter would it pertinent to incorporate in the third paragraph that I also work well in a team setting? I adjusted a few dates. I do have some gaps but they are not huge I did take some time off in 1996 and after selling our property took a few months to move here.

Other than that it is awesome.

Thank you,

Diana O.

Hello Rosie,

The doc. is great!! This is the final copy, it's right.

Take your time, it's to close to perfect to rush.

I thank you so much, you'll never know how big a help this has been for me.

With great appreciation,

David W.

Hi Jeanie.

Thanks for the great work...I really like the direction that this is headed. I am attaching my edits with some additional points that I would like to highlight. I either put in a 'Comment' using the MS-Word functionality or a direct edit using 'Track Changes'. If anything is unclear, please feel free to shoot me a quick email.

Best,

Bill G.

Rosie:

Thank you for your hard work in putting this resume together.

I am very happy with the product thus far.


Jim A.

Hello Ilona,

Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving holiday! Im forwarding the revisions that I have on my cover letter and resume. Im hoping my changes are clear and you have little problem deciphering them. If you run across any you cant follow, give me a shout.

Thanks for the great job!

Liza C.

Ilona,

Great, I looked at it briefly and you have done a great job. I will sit down tomorrow to really soak it all in.

Thank you,

Diana O.

Hi Donna,

Wow it looks fabulous! Thank you ever so much!!! I have tracked the changes and added comments and background info etc. for you to finish working your magic 🙂

Can't wait to see the changes and the cover letter! Guess I'd better finish all those projects around the house because this new resume might actually help me land a new job!

Kind regards,

Laura H.

Jeanie,

This first draft looks great. I am sending your version back with comments in blue. Thanks!

Van B.

Jeanie,

This is great work and I have attached my changes (minor) and the answers to your other questions. I hope this allows you to complete the project. I am excited about the final version.

Thanks!

Mark C.

Thanks one last time Ilona.

Its been very easy working with you & I'm very happy with the final outcome. It really has a different tone & you accomplished what I wanted to convey.

I'd definitely refer you & your service!

Best regards,

Carol F.

Christine,

Thank you again for your outstanding work on my resume and cover letter.

I have made a few minor edits that I would like to cross-check with you before finalizing. I tracked the changes so they should be easy to pick up. I am not at all sensitive about this. If you think my edits dont make sense please tell me so.

Dean S.

OK Ilona,

I made some edits to the 1st draft & re-attached. You did a really nice job & overall I'm very happy with it!

These edits should tighten it up & answer some of your questions. Let me know if you need further clarification on anything. Also, with it being in tracking mode, it ran over 2 pages, so you'll have to adjust so it fits back on 2

Let me know if you need further clarification on anything.

I'll assume the next draft will come over e-mail again?

Thank you,

Carol F.

Ilona,

I rearranged the skills summary and core competencies in order of strengths. I also answered your questions as best as I could.

I think you did a fantastic job!

Lloyd D.

Jean:

Thanks for polishing my resume. 2 months
after using your resume services, I landed a job that
is paying me 30% higher .

Regards,

Bala K.

Christine,

I am very happy with the work you have done on my resume. Please take a look at a couple of suggested changes/typos. If they don't work for some reason, let me know.

Thanks!

Sandi P.

Dear Jeanie,

Thank you for preparing this. I thinks it looks really good! I particularly like the intro parts before you start with the career highlights.

Albert S.

Peter,

Very satisfied with the resume Jeanie created... thank you. Have great search firms looking out for me. I'm all set. Thank you so very much for helping through this transition -- I'll be sure to recommend you every chance I get (which, as I'm sure you'll understand, I hope won't be many!)

Have a wonderful holiday season,

Cindy I.

Dear Rosie,

Thanks for the work. I would like to meet the person in the resume so I can hire him! But seriously, I think you did a great job.

Rich Q.

Kelley,

Everything looks good on the resume! I love it!

So this is it, I can use this one to send out for any jobs I see, correct?

Again, thank you for the awesome job, and a great resume.

Stephen L.

Ilona,

Hi! WOW! I'm pretty sure that I would hire me with such an outstanding cover letter and resume. Thank you so much. You really have a talent.

Did you major in Literature or English? I look forward to lots of great opportunities.

Michele F.

Ilona,

Everything seems to be fine with the resume. The cover letter is also good (I'll make the edits as necessary.)

Thank you for the service that you have provided.

Best Regards,

Larry J.

Ilona,

I was able to check most all without printing.

How much would it cost to have you write a generic cover letter? This looks wonderful and has given me new confidence.

I may be interested in your recruiter service. I think I
remember reading that your company offers a way to get my resume in front of recruiters.

If so, what is the cost?

Thank you,

Michele DoR.

Sherri,

I didn't get the doc attached on the last e-mail I sent you. I made a few changes. Let me know if you disagree - otherwise it looks GREAT!

Thanks for your hard work.

Sincerely,
Terry B. SPHR

Sherri,

Excellent work...I believe I made the right choice when I contacted your company. You really dominate the art of saying the same things but in a very impressive and smart way. I truly believe that my investment has been worth spending. I will surely promote you among my friends that are being let go as a result of the merger. I made a couple of very minor changes to it, thanks!

Abraham H.

Sherri,

I think the first blush of the product looks FANTASTIC !! I guess I had forgotten just how incredibly talented I was......hahahahahha

No changes in text at all. I thought the reference under HR on Demand as being an "interim position" was just fine...so I just left it in blue. I did fill in percentages as they related to retention, etc.....recalling them as best I could. I hope they don't look strange.

Anyway, I'm anxious to have the final draft and begin using it. Thank you for your efforts and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Don H.

Peter,

I am very happy with the resume and cover letter Christine prepared.

I will certainly recommend your company.

Rudy F.

Kelley:

Looks fantastic, two small revisions and it will be complete. Can you or Peter advise upon a company (or Peter himself) that could assist me for a fee in presenting my info out to the corporate world ?

Please advise. I will follow up with both documents for the you to make the minor revisions. You did an outstanding job.

Thanks,

Bob C.

Hi Ilona,

This looks great!! I think for now I am all set. It was great working with you.

Thanks for everything!!

Maura D.

Ilona,

It looks beautiful! I would like to check a few things by comparing my resume to the worksheet.

I am having trouble printing the worksheet
within word. I pasted it to notepad and was still not able to print. I can print other docs. from notepad, but not the worksheet.

Michele D.

Jeanie:

Thanks for your good work!

Attached is the mark-up. Yes, please draft me a
cover letter.

Best,

John F.

Hi Deanne,

This looks so wonderful. I feel like a new person. :).

You did an excellent job. I added a recent SHRM membership and gave you the date of the training
certification.

Lisa T.

Deanne,

Thanks for a very nice looking and sounding resume.

Cindy D.

Deanne,

Thanks for the quick turn around and follow-up call this morning.

I appreciate your comments regarding current trends in resume writing and the reason that you chose to take a particular approach.

As I told you during our call I am extremely pleased with your efforts and am confident this will be more direct and appealing to any reviewer.

Are you or someone else able to "burn" a copy for me?

Thanks again for you time and efforts on my behalf. Please let me know if there is anything that I need to do.

Al W.

Jeanie,

Both the resume and letter look incredible ...appreciate the work.

Thank you,

Elizabeth W.

Jeanie,

Thank you so much for this resume. It is just what I was looking for. I appreciate your hard work and I am sure that it will help me land my next job.

Bill K.

Hello Christine,

I think you did a fantastic job on the resume and cover letter. I have looked it over a couple of times and I do not see any errors 🙂 I am willing to put it out there and see what results I get from the resume and cover letter.

I do have one question for you: is this in the format that I can upload to Dice and Monsters sites?

I thought I read something about that it could be put in a format to upload to recruiting sites like Monster and Dice if need be.

Thank you for your professional work,

Mike N.

Peter

I should mention Chris did a wonderful job, down to the choice of font. It looks like my current assignment will be wrapping up at the end of the year, so I will be putting her work to good use shortly!

Many thanks again for your and Chris' responsiveness and skills! Blowing one's own trumpet is, unfortunately, a skill most well honed in those who are limited to speaking of their skills as opposed to demonstrating them.

Best regards,

Peters V.

Peter/Sherri,

I would like to personally thank you both for helping me develop my resume! I could not have done this in a million years!

As you said you are the experts at what you do and you proved it to me. I also like the personal
attention you gave me by calling me to explain what you do and how you do it........versus a impersonal e-mail!

Thanks again and I will be organizing my information for a campaign and will contact you soon.

Great work!

Sincerely,

Dave G.

Ilona,

You are amazing!

I answered your questions on my resume in red.
As far as leaving off my first name, everybody I've worked for knows me by my middle name.

Also, please let me know if there was any problem in running my credit card for the balance amount of $150. I'm in the process of switching banks, and
if you have already it, I might not have had enough in the account for it to clear. If you haven't run it yet, please let me know, and I'll telephone
you with another number to use ASAP.

Thank you for your amazing work. I was literally cheering out loud as I read my proof for the first time.

Elizabeth R.

Hi Becky:

The resume is awesome and I really like the new format.

Just a few changes/additions:

Can you add another Key competencies: Project Managment and Contignency Planning (Disaster Recovery)?

Thanks,

Daniel B.

Hi Christine:

I have two minor changes. You really did a great job!

Thanks,

Bob A.

Peter,

Well I have found a new job and to you and your staff thank you for the great resume.

Great opportunity came my way and Im very pleased.

Thanks

Pat McG.

Kelley,

I am very pleased with the resume that you created for me. I am having a mentor review it, but I have not seen any significant changes. I should return the resume to you today.

In addition to the resume and cover letter, please write a bio for Linked-In and Ladders. Also, please charge me for data base storage so we can efficiently maintain my marketing collateral.

Being a consulting professional, I have valued and have been impressed with colleagues of mine that are great communicators. I thank you for your expertise and efforts on my resume. I look forward to a career relationship with Career-Resumes.

Dave C.

Hi Ilona,

thanks a lot for the quick action. I am perfectly ok with the cuts. Content looks fine to me - no changes/ideas on my radar screen.

I just deleted a couple of words on page 2 ( see highlight in Red ).

I think the resume is ready for finalizing. ( formatting )

Thanks a lot for your great support.

Sandra K.

Hello Peter,

I hope everything is well with you.

I thank you for the work and support. I have received all documents today in full. My wife is now scared because I might go and get married again with this new CV look she said. ))) I will then blame it on you and Deanne and will not except any refunds form you.

As we have discussed before, I now need a controlled marketing campaign with parties whom they could really be a help. I simply do not want my CV to end up in NCCI HR some day.))) What do you think is going to be next to proceed further with this resume?

Can you pleas advise and assist on this?

Kind Regards,

Hakan A.

Dear Ilona,

thanks a lot for the first draft of my resume. It is very good.
I added my comments in Red.

As to what to cut ( shortening the resume to 2 pages ), I am not sure. I will leave it to your expertise. Please make a suggestion.

Thanks a lot.

Sandra K.

Hi Jeanie,

It actually looks great! See some minor changes in the document.

Kind regards,

Paul DeB.

Dear Jean,

I've written this recommendation of your work to share with other LinkedIn users.

Details of the Recommendation:

"Jean has rewritten my European resume into a US-style document (see my profile; as proof of her capabilities). She transformed my European work experience into a coherent resume for the American market.

I worked three months with this resume and was able to land a dream position at Frog Design; without her help this would not have been possible."

Ernest T.

Dear Ilona,

I think I can manage restructuring this resume for publishing purposes. I would like to thank you very much for a great job you have done on these documents.

I understand that the balance of $250
will be deducted from the credit card I gave you. If the procedure is different, please let me know.

Best,

Elizabeth K.

Jeanie,

I love it! It looks really strong and the writing
style is great.

I have attached my revisions and suggestions for you
to review and have corrected any errors that I saw.

Thanks and let me know if we need to chat on the phone about the resume changes.

Nathan C.

Hello Christine

The resume and cover letter are great. There is one change on the resume.

Thank you,

Phil S.

Hi Christine,

The resume looks great!!! Im very pleased..thank you. See attached for revisionsI only found two..

First on is in the Senior Manger, Systems Delivery HR/Systemsyou refere to 8M Peoplesoft..it only 2.5 millionmade the changes on the resume.

BTWIm away all day tomorrow and Tuesday. Will return on Wednesday to the office.

Regards,

Veronica N.


Christine,

It looks awesome. It is worth the investment!

Thanks.

Karina F.

Christine,

Sorry this has taken me so long to get back with you. I have had several people look over my resume.

Overall, it is great! I do have a few changes I would like made. I have marked them in the Word document.

Jami L.

Jeanie,

Let me first thank you for your efforts. You have brought forward in excellent fashion the essence of what I have done with my career over the past 32 years.

Attached please find my changes highlighted in red or with strikeouts.....thank you again for your efforts.

Gary V.

Jeanie,

Thanks again for your work revising my resume, after reviewing it, I am impressed with the result.

I am interested in customizing my resume for theladders.com website. Can you provide the service?

Edward G.

Hello,

I had my resume done by Sherri Morgan last year and I am now looking to get my resume updated with a new cover letter.

The resume and cover letter that was done for me last time made a huge improvement in my job search.

Can Sherri please contact me about getting this updated resume and cover letter done?

Thank you,

Best Regards,
Deborah T.

Hi Jeanie,

I just reviewed my resum and I am deeply impressed by your skills to summarize and accurately reflect my career so far.

I never imagined how outstanding you could reflect my performance. No comparison to my old resume.

I made some small changes, reflected in red. Also words in red brackets should be removed.

Thank you very much and have a great day!! I am really thrilled with this!

Claudius W.

Ilona,

This has come a long way! I am ready to introduce myself to potential employers, with confidence. I am proud of my experience and this showcases my experience very nicely. I am positive this polished,
professional resume, will serve as the key to open the doors of my future career!

Thanks for working with me.

Sincerely,

Mike M.


Kelley,

I like what you've done. I was looking for a better format, and some buzz words that I hadn't
thought of - "transparency" is a great one.

I'll go thru it some more this weekend & send you some questions early next week.

I appreciate your help.

Thanks,

Mike DiB.

Hi Kelley:

First look, outstanding. I know that you worked on this. Thanks !

I will be back after further review and of course, spousal review 🙂

Thanks so much.

Bob C.

Good afternoon Deanne,

Everything looks great! I greatly appreciate all the time and effort you've put into this project. You've helped me more than you can know.

In looking back at the worksheet that I sent you, I noticed that I neglected to include a position working at a summer camp in 2002. In applying for environmental education positions, it would be foolish of me not to highlight this experience.

Please let me know if you have any questions, and thank you again for all the work you have done for me.

Best,

Jon K.

Dear Rosie.

Final document is in order.

Thank you, I am very happy with the final product.

Best Regards,

George S.

Rosie,

Thank you so much....You did a 1st rate job.

Tom H.

Rosa,

I think you did a very good job.

I am very pleased with your work and I am eager to circulate it.

Best Regards,

Nick S.

Hi Rosie,

Hoping this find you doing well. I have reviewed my resume and it looks an extremely well done and professional. I am sure that I have made a very good investment that will pay off.

Regards
Gustavo A.

Rosie,

Thank you for the excellent resume. I am very pleased with the writing and readily admit the your phrasing and organization make for a much more powerful resume than mine.

As for the cover letter, I think it too is a very powerful document.

Again, thanks for the excellent work and I will await the final documents.

Frank B.

Good Morning

All looks very good. Thank you for such a nice job. I guess it makes a great deal of sense to work with professionals.

Mr. Newfield had discussed with me some of your resources as it relates to a mailing of my resume to executive firms, head hunters etc once my resume is complete.

As I have always believed most of the good jobs are never advertised. Can you shed some light on this and let me know what you think.

Pat McG.

Ilona,

Great job! I really like the resume. I agree with you that we do need to have the restaurant stuff in there since it was very successful and it makes more sense to have it in there. I have attached the resume with my suggestions and comments. I will look for your revisions. Hope you are having a great Friday.

Dillon O.

Dear Ilona,

It looks great. Thanks for all your help.

Jerome L.

Christine,

Thank you again. It looks great, and I do not have any further changes.

What is the next step?

Regards,

Robb I.

Hi Kelley,

May I, at the end of the process, congratulate you on a job very well done. It has been a pleasure to have worked with you.

You have boosted my confidence level with the quality of the documents that you produced. I look forward to the day that I can send you one more e-mail, one that thanks you for helping me to get a new job.

Regards

Pieter V.

Dear Donna:

Makes sense to me. Sounds like we're done with the resume.

Thanks for your brilliant efforts. What's next?

Bob F.

Dear Ilona,

I'm really pleased with the outcome, thanks so far!

I've corrected a small error in my cell phone number and added the information you requested.
Finally, I've added my NIMA-B diploma, since I think this of value.

Hope to receive the corrected version shortly so that I can send it this new resume to a number of headhunters.

Best regards,

Antoine L.

Ilona,

This is really great!

Thanks so much!

Becky M.

Ilona,

This really looks great! I love the cover letter too! I'm really getting excited to start job hunting now.

My present job will eventually be outsourced so this new resume come just at the right time for me to get started applying for jobs. I will keep you posted as to how I make out getting phone calls, etc...

With my new resume I now feel more confident with what skills I do have.

Thank you again!!

Becky S.

Dear Peter,

Thank you very much for your help with my resume.

Donna was an excellent choice. She prepared the document to my complete satisfaction.

I received the final document two days ago, and read it very carefully: it's my life, but in a different (and better!) presentation. (Wow, is it really me???).

As a lawyer, I find that the choice of words and the way one presents facts and information can be very crucial in court or in mediation sessions. After reading my new resume, I realized that my observation applies also to CVs. It's all about words and presentation (and Donna's skills).

Again I thank you,

Best Regards,

Mirabelle G.

Ilona

The CV looks really good, exciting to see when you put it in that format, thank you so much.

You will see I have made some changes and tracked them; you may wish to change some of them.

Many Thanks for your help and I look forward to the final proof!

Regards,

James C.

Ilona,

You did a great job and very much know your business!!!! I am very happy you took special attention to the task. The show I am at will take all my energy but when I have time I will work on it and also when I get home I will get it completed. You will probably hear from me for the final response next week.

Thanks tons for your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you,

Glenn McC.

Ilona,

I have recommended your service to couple of my friends - they will probably contact you or Peter shortly.

Jerome L.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks for the proof.

I think you captured the resume well from my documents (I'm even impressed with myself)

I made some adjustments as I see fit and activated the Tracking of changes in the revision.

I prefer the fonts like Arial, Tahoma or Century Gothic to the Times New Roman.

Regards,

Arend van der W.

Dear Ilona:

It is great! It certainly worth it!

Thanks a lot!

What is the cost for a generic cover letter???

Rgds,

Guillermo A.

Ilona,

Thank you for sending the resume proof. I plan to read this over carefully. Now, I have a slight hold up, visiting relatives from Texas. Since I am not an English major, I plan to review this my friends next
week. We can go over revisions after that.

At my first glance, I am impressed!


Sincerely,

Mike M.

Hi Jeanie,

I'm attaching my small tweaks on the resume.

Overall I'm really pleased with how I 'read' on paper; I would hire me!

You'll note I made a comment in the education department. I never completed college and as such have no degree (though I think my years of accomplishments hopefully overcome that deficit.)

Please let me know if there's anything else I need to supply.

Thank you.

Bohdan Z.

Jeanie:

Back at ya -- thought it was a great draft! Minor comments in red.

One question -- I am very proud of my experience, i've been told that showing my age could hurt me. I don't know if that's true, so what do you think?

Thanks!

John R.

Hi Jeanie,

I think you did an excellent job on this and consolidated a lot of information. I have tracked my changes for you and for the most part they are
minor.

Thanks and regards,

Gayle R.

Hi Jeanie,

Attached is my last revision of resume and cover letter. Thank you so much for everything...you did a terrific job.

Roland E.

Jeanie,

This was an outstanding effort. Thanks. I have some small changes, and one question for you. Take a look at the comment. I'm not sure I'm saying we should change it, I can defend it, but I would like your opinion. What are the next steps and what's the timeframe?

I do want to talk about a cover letter too.

BTW, I have had some input from some friends on this and I think you will have more business soon.

I will be referring people to you. What's the most appropriate way to do that?

Thanks,

Devin J.

Hi, Christine!

Ah, to see myself spoken so highly of in so articulate a manner brings tears of sheer joy to my eyes! 🙂

It's been DAYS since I've gotten to my Email, so my sincerest apologies for not acknowledging your mail sooner. I'd like to say "busy is good," but it's more like I've been going through jet lag adjusting my body to the early morning commute--getting up at 6:00 and zooming to be on a bus by 6:30 (to then get on another bus at 7:10 to get to work at 8:30) is a far cry from set the alarm for 8:45, brew a fresh cup, and dial in to a 9:00am conference call working from home... But ahhh... on the other hand, to be working with SANE people... "priceless!"

It will take me at least a day or two to digest! I do see the fill-ins I need to provide you!

Many thanks again! I'll be in touch shortly!

Best regards,

Peters V.

Kelley,

I thought you would want to know that I just received a job offer from Merrill Lynch.

While many factors influence such events, I do believe that my new resume was a very strong factor in being selected by HR and in the interviews that followed.

Kelley, nice work and thanks. I am referring you to my colleague, DC who also is interested in re-doing his resume. I will send him your contact info and let you two take it from there.

All the best and thanks again for all your help.

Best regards,

John G.

Rosie,

All looks very good. Thank you for such a nice job. I guess it makes a great deal of sense to work with professionals.

Mr. Newfield had discussed with me some of your resources as it relates to a mailing of my resume to executive firms, head hunters etc once my resume is complete. As I have always believed most of the good jobs are never advertised.

Can you shed some light on this and let me know what you think.

Pat McG.

Ilona,

Looks great!!

Thank you very much.

Topher M.

Hi Christine,

We are good to go. I found some minor changes to clarify things you wouldn't have known anyway, and I simply made those changes myself.

I am very happy with this resume, and I appreciate your help.

Regards,

Jay G.

Hi Ilona!

I have made some updates for your reviewlooks GREATI really like it. Question for you. When I send my resume and cover letter to companies where I do not know the name of the person, how do I address it. Also, I plan on sending this to companies who may not even have openings, how do I address those and how do I word things when Im not targeting and specific job opportunity.

Thanks,

Tim P.

Hi Ilona:

Sorry for the delay!

I have read the document that you sent me and I liked it a lot!

I answered all your questions and included a few comments!

Kind Regards,

Guliiermo A.

Peter,

In the three days of using the resume that Jean Oscarson produced, I have received one job offer and two call backs. To say the least, I am extremely
happy with your service.

I do want to take advantage of your service of
retaining the resume for future updates.

Please tell me how to pay for this
service.

Joe M.

Rosie

Thank you so much....You did a 1st rate job.

Tom

Thomas H.

Jeanie,

The document is superb. I am extremely pleased!

I will keep you and Peter informed of developments.

Joe M.

Hi Rosie

I'm very impressed with your work.

I'm interested in continueing to work with you in reference to a cover letter as well targeting my resume to head hunters, ex search firms etc.

I'm open to your advise .

Thank you,

Patrick M.

Rosie,

You did a great job! Thanks!

Alan B.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks! It looks great. I made some edits and think I'm all set for now.


Regards,

Ben D'.

Hi Ilona,

My resume and cover letter look very good. Thank you for all your time and effort to complete this project. I really appreciate all your hard work.

I do have a question regarding the storage of my resume. Do I contact you via email when I would like to update my resume? Is there a certain time frame that you store resumes? Please advise for future reference.

Thank You,

Wendy S.

Ilona,

This is great. Thank you. I really appreciate your help. What are our next steps?

Thanks.

Mike G.

Ilona,

I will not be submitting anymore changes, I think the
resume is in great shape and any customizing I need, I can do it myself from here.

Question: if I needed a short bio written could you
also do that and how much would it be? I have had this request from a few people.

Thanks so much!

Nikki B.

Christine,

It looks great. I can't wait to begin my campaign. I've attached my changes.

Regards,

Jim H.

Ilona,

Thank you for the draft. I think everything looks good. I have made some changes and placed these in Blue type.

Also, I would like you to create a cover letter for me.

Thank you,

Mike G.

Ilona,

I have reviewed both documents are an very happy with your work. I have made some minor changes to both - see attached redlined versions. Please review and tidy up where you feel it's appropriate.

Regards,

David W.

Good afternoon Jean:

Thank you for sending me this draft of my new resume. It is terrific! Great Work!

I have made a few changes to soften my participation in some projects to help prevent a resentment from creatives and marketing people.

Please review my proposed changes. If you do not agree, please ignore them.

Thank you again for the great work. Have a great day and a very enjoyable long weekend.

Sincerely,

Steve T.

Hi Jeanie,

It looks great! Thank you for doing such a nice job with this.

Bob (Robert P.)

Jeanie:

Good Afternoon. Thank you for your expedited initial draft of my resume. I am stunned in you ability to fit all this information on a 3-page resume. Your writing ability brings clarity, readability and intrigue to the document.

Nicely done!

David St. G.

Jeanie,

I received the daft. I must admit that it's much better than I expected. It is really, really good. Well worth the money. You are a superb writer.

I will get you back the few revisions shortly, and one or two comments. But, basically, it's almost good to go.

Joe M.

Hello, Ilona!

Thanks so much for revising my resume. Wawanesa insurance company offered me the claims rep position on 8/2/06 because of the eloquent resume you wrote. (They were very impressed). I started working there on 8/21/06, and I really like it.

It was great having you revise my resume, because thinking about writing a resume totally stresses me out! You took a heavy load off of my mind and helped me get hired to a better company!

Well, have a great Labor Day weekend! Keep up the great work, Ilona!!! God Bless You!

Angelica W.

Ilona,

Thanks so much for the resume and cover letter, they are a world of difference from what I am using!

I have attached the resume with some comments & questions. Today I am traveling and not reachable by phone but I will be around tomorrow after 2pm if you would like to discuss. friday I am around all day.

The cover letter was perfect for a template and I see exactly how I can customize so I have not attached it since I didn't see a need for adjustments.

Nikki B.

Ilona,

I like it and think that you did a great job on it. There are a few changes I listed in Red.

Thanks for your hard work.

Sandy P.

Jeanie,

Btw I know I made a lot of changes/suggestions, but you should take that as a compliment. I could only do that because you had done such a good job of providing me with a much improved platform to work from. Ive already refused to pay one resume writer who didnt know a BE from a BA, whose grammar was significantly worse than mine and whose second draft was about 10% of your first draft. And wasted 2 weeks on that effort which is also part of the reason for my chop chop behaviour.

Doug F.

Rosie,

I like the first draft. I looked it over today and I made minor changes. I plan to spend more time reviewing it this weekend and sending it to you afterwards.

Ian W.

Ilona,

Resume looks great! I'm very pleased. Now let's hope it leads to a few interviews.

Thank you!

Brendan H.

Ilona,

Everything looks good. I appreciate your expertise and candor in responding to my questions. I wanted to make this as good and fulfilling a process as you did.

Denise,

I would also like to thank you for your help and direction in pairing me with Ilona, she is very knowledgeable and helped me put together what I hope will be an outstanding marker of a resume for future choices and correspondence.

My thanks again to both of you

Michael S.

Rosie,

May I say I think you did a wonderful job!

Thanks,

Thomas H.

Peter,

My resume has been finalized...very few changes from what Jeanie wrote. I did email Jeanie today that I would like a cover letter done as well.

As far as the resume distribution services go, my new resume has been re-distributed, so I won't be needing that.

Thanks for your good service.

Jeanie did an excellent job!

Best regards,

Jim C.

Dear Peter,

I would like to thank you for the work Ilona Vanderwoude did for me in writing my rsum and cover letter. I hope that this professional version will help and support me in finding new job.

In one of your message in July, you told me about the service you can offer me to get my CV in the hands of recruiters.

I would be very happy to benefit of this kind of support. Please let me know if you can do something for me.

Anyway, once more again, thank you for the Rsum and Cover Letter.

Sincerely,

Libor S.

Kelley,

This is great. Thanks. How do we now post to TheLadders and BlueSteps?

Bob D.

Christine.

Just confirming we are done. Thanks for all of your help. It came out great.

Tim P.

Christine,

This looks really good. I made a few small changes with traking on so you can review. Please check for consistency and any other changes as you see
fit and return the final copy. From there, I think we are done!

A couple of questions on formatting - I inserted forced page breaks, is this the correct way to distribute? You placed the header inside the body
vs. in the header section, I assume this is more standard for uploading resumes?

Thanks for your excellent work.

TP

Christine,

I have attached my resume update form which has my most recent job duties and other information.

I want to explore other companies which are more suitable for me and therefore, I am planning to look for better positions.

I really want to Thank You for a wonderfull job you did on my resume which upon circulating landed me a job within 2 weeks. I appreciate your skills and knowledge of creating a professional resume.

If luck is with me again and your magic I will certainly get a better opportunity again.

If you need any information or clarrification please call me on my cell.

Thank you, once again.

Kaizad K. A.

Hello Ilona,

It's been some time since you worked on my resume, but I thought you might want to know I have "landed" at a startup in the healthcare information systems space, Net.Orange (www.netdotorange.com), as the Senior Vice President of Sales. I had thought I could focus on my search when we worked on my resume in late 2004/early 2005 - but continued issues with my family kept me from getting started until March of this year. I pushed the process hard and ended up getting six offers in the last two weeks of July before deciding on Net.Orange.

I hope all is well with you.

All the best,

Tom B.

I just got out of my interview Peter. Printed out your new resume and compared it to your former one. There is no comparison. The new one looks great, sharp and easy to follow and it sells you.

I will follow what is going on through ASAE (American Society of Association Executives) website to see if there are jobs that match your skills. I will let you know.

Take care.

Sharon O'Kelly Youngdahl
Account Executive
Prime Placements, Inc.

Hi Jeanie,

Many thank for you work, really impressive who is this guy???

I have made a solid round of revisions, and have suggested a few adjustments and additions. I have also added some comments for you in italic.

Obviously my edits and comments are only suggestions, you are the expert, so feel free to let me know if you have a better alternative/solution for anything within the document.

Your spelling of foreign words is pristine!

Many thanks again,

Take care,

Alejandro P.

Ilona,

It's perfect! Please send the internet ready files at your earliest opportunity.

Next steps: who should I talk to about additional offerings such as recruiter and mailing campaigns?

Thanks for your assistance!

Paul C.

Dear Ilona,

You did really great job. The resume looks very good. I Attached answers to your questions.

When reading the document, some ideas came and I would like to ask you for comments:

Sincerely,

Libor S.

Dear Ilona,

I think it looks terrific! I answered your questions in pink and I had one question at the bottom. I will have a friend look over this before we close the case though. He is a hiring manager at AMGEN
Pharma.

Thank You for your wonderful, hard work!!!

Tamera P.

Ilona,

Once again this is a very impressive effort! The cover letter is perfect! No changes whatsoever.

Regarding the resume, there are minor tweaks to finish it up. I have included the resume file with changes/edits in the file as well as notes, questions, and recommendations listed below.

Paul C.

Peter,

Good morning.

I wanted to take a minute to drop you a short note from Korea to tell you what an excellent job Dan Dorotik did in putting my resume together. He took
my previous resume, which contained various tenses, inconsistent data, etc. and with the resume questionnaire sheets, constructed a very good professional resume.

I feel very confident in sending this resume along with the cover letter he did to any potential employer. I feel that because of his work, I will soon be returning to the U.S. with full time employment.

Sincerely,

Joseph J (Nick) K.

Donna,

Hello again. I thought you might like to hear another success story, Im sure you get these often, but here goes anyway.

I have landed my dream job, using the resume you created for me. For the past three months, Ive enjoyed my new position as EMERGENCY
PREPAREDNESS MANAGER at the American Red Cross, Broward County Chapter. It is a wonderful organization to work for. With the profit
motive out of the picture, people are free to work just for the satisfaction of performing a much-needed community service. The moderate salaries are liveable but the satisfaction is immeasurable.

I wrote to Peter for your snail mail address and then inadvertently lost it when I cleaned out my inbox. Would you send it to me? I have a small token gift in mind, to express my gratitude for the work you
did on my behalf. I am a happy customer!

Kind regards,

Aniko B.

Christine,

I have attached my resume update form which has my most recent job duties and other information.

I want to explore other companies which are more suitable for me and therefore, I am planning to look for better positions.

I really want to Thank You for a wonderfull job you did on my resume which upon circulating landed me a job within 2 weeks. I appreciate your skills and knowledge of creating a professional resume.

If luck is with me again and your magic I will certainly get a better opportunity again.


Thank you once again,

Kaizad K. A.

Dear Donna:

I hope this e-mail finds you in good health and good spirit.

The last time we communicated with each other was back in July of 2005 at which time you put together a masterpiece of a resume for me. Once again I, would like to utilize your services. However, before I get to personal I would like to make sure that you are still doing your deal as the "world's
most elite resume writer."

Please either call me or e-mail me to let me know that your are still doing the deal. Hopefully this e-mail gets my point across to you as I'm a little paranoid sending the best of the best when it comes to the command of the English language.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Kindest regards.

Respectfully,

Tom W.

Hi Jeanie,

Have a look at this - I think you have done a fantastic job.

Mark N.

Jeanie,

Sorry for the delayed response. I wanted to read it over on several different days.

My first impression: I did the right thing in hiring your team. Great job in taking a diffused blob and making it concise.

Thanks for the great work.

Bob S.

Jeanie,

I do very much like the way you have organized and worded the material I sent to you. This is a vast improvement over what I have been using in the past.

I will look forward to the next version.

Thanks,

Jim G.

Hi Donna,

I will take a look at the document. Wow, mother will be so proud. I'm
I have several people very keenly interested in the result. This may lead to new business. Just remember who is
Cheers,

George E.

Dear Ilona,

You did a great job and I am very happy with the results.

I hope they work for me.

Thanks,

Joe P.

Christine,

Thank you for a job well done!

I like the resume very much.

I am attaching a copy for your feedback, if any. This copy has my changes which are minor with some re-ordering of accomplishments.

Daud M.

Dear Peter,

Thought I would let you know that Jeanie did a great job on my resume.

Thanks!

Gary S.

Dear Peter,

The resume Sherri wrote is a success!. I would like to know if your team could help me now to professionally prepare a specific response from a recruiter of how do I meet their Job specs. and also how your direct employers e-mail campaign could work for me .

Call you tomorrow at 9:30 am central time.


Best regards

Rafael R.

Peter,

I just wanted to let you know that I worked with Kelly today on the edits I provided her and she did an excellent job ... again!!

At this point I'm not looking to distribute my resume. I just wanted to have an updated version in my back pocket given the fact that our organization is undergoing such a massive restructuring effort. If and when I do get to that point, I will contact you regarding the other services you offer.

Thanks and have a great evening!

Christine A.

Jane,

Isn't life amazing? After two days, I received a phone
call from a recruiter who had received your mailer.
Anyone who does not take advantage of your contacts, your knowledge of the body - moving business, and your seemingly endless resources, is a fool. You are so much more than a resume service.

I am so very grateful to both Jane and Jeanine for the
professional, high - quality resume service, but the
TRUE secret of what makes you so excellent at what you do is to handle the whole exposure and distribution process. THIS is where you shine. I would NEVER have found the contact that is a PERFECT fit for my talents and interests, if I had chosen to go my own way, hunt and peck through hundreds of companies, email, fax, and mail my own resume, which is a full - time job of its own. You accomplished all of that with state - of - the - art software and a mailing list that you had
compiled that was truly amazing and effective.

You are the best in the industry at what you do.

I am grateful and very lucky to have found you.

Sincerely,

Daniel L.

Hi Donna,

W O W !!!! I am impressed.. You defintity have a talent.

Hats off.

I took your version and used red ink (via word) to catch your attention. On another sheet I show the reference and corrected verbage. You will see..it sounds more confusing than it is actual.

Take a look.

Tom L.

Dear Peter,

Please see below my endorsement of Christine Schimpff. I will encourage my current & future colleagues to reach out to her for business; it is in their best interest. Thank you for introducing me to Christine.

Regards,

Val T.


To whom it may concern:



I want to take couple of minutes to talk about Christine Schimpff and the work she performed.

Christine is an expert at resume writing.

There are many resume writers in the market from which to choose, however not all have the patience & keen innate understanding to decipher what the job candidate really wants/needs to say. Part of the challenge of using a writer is that the message being conveyed may not be a reflection of who you really are. The document looks professional but it's missing the "genuine identity print" of the candidate. Many HR Depts. can easily determine third party authorship as the resume appears generic in tone even though the substance may be unique; as such, the resume is systematically rejected.

I invested $575 to the contracting company to have Christine write my resume. Having never used a writer, I did not know what to expect. I'm a skilled writer myself but wanted capable outside assistance to provide fresh insight. I learned far more is needed than just skilled writing ability, which Christine is very competent. The writer must be patient & understanding and sincerely care about the candidate to effectively implant their identity/personality into the resume. Christine interacted with me as a consultant seeking to understand who I really am, learning about my professional history, and then drafting the resume to illustrate my value to the marketplace.

If you're considering hiring a resume writer, it would be a wise decision to invest in Christine's services. You will be glad you did.

Regards,

Val T.
B8 - KBR Operations
FOB - Korean Village

Rosie,

Thanks, you did a great job!

Sincerely,

Richard D.

Hi Rosie,

I am very impressed with your work.

Thank you,

Garth C.

Hi Jeanie,

Got draft, thanks. Made changes, should move to proofing and final approval now. I like the way you really pull things together, Kudos!

I definately will recommend your svcs next time. Also I enjoyed our conversation, stimulating. Looking forward to wrapping this up.

Cordially,

Kunle I.

Hi Jeanie:

I really like what you did so far, I would even hire myself!

Thanks,

Daniel V.

Jeanie,

This looks great. I'm sure I'm not the first person to tell you that. Interestingly, it does capture what I've done. I'm in marketing and I understand the power of words. You've done an outstanding job.

Debbie Jo S.

Hi Jeanie,

And thank you for a superb job in general,
and on the cover letter in particular. I thank you for your time, and for the quality of your work.

My best,

Dan L.

Hi Jean,

Just got my first interview off of the resume you wrote for me. Nothing like a quick ROI!

Best regards,

Robert R.

Christine,

I think it looks good. I've passed it by a few friends and it seems well received. I added the detail on Milward Brown. I'm attaching it so you'll have it on file.

Thanks and I"ll keep you and Jane posted on it's response rates. I've already sent it to a lead on bluesteps.com

Marc M.

Hello Rosie,

The resume looks terrific. What a difference from the one I had on file.

Thanks,

Adam R.

Hi Rosie,

WONDERFUL job!!

I have attatched the proof with a couple of minor corrections.

You are amazing!! THANK YOU a million times over!

Shenay B.

Dear Ilona,

THANK YOU! The resume and cover letter look spectacular. I appreciate your hard work and assistance. I added information on the resume about the Mill and current position title is Clinical Supervisor. My job changed twice in under three months. I don't know if Special Projects Coord even needs to be mentioned. I defer to your expertise. Clinical Supervisor is the role with the Monarch girls. The changes showed in red on my computer and blue for the dates in the professional affiliations. I hope they reflect as such on your screen.

I think they look fantastic. Thank you so much.

I would be willing to finalize with the additions today if that works for your schedule.

Thanks,

Mary J.

Hi Ilona,

It looks fantastic, thank you so much for all of your hard work. I like the title combination.

I am thrilled with the final copy. Please add the additional fee to utilize the text converted file for Internet posting and emailing. How do I save
that version, on disk or the harddrive?

Thank you for your assistance.

Sincerely,

Mary D.


Dear Mr. Newfield:

I would like to bring to your attention the fabulous job that Ilona did to my resume and in general - she is a highly professional, knowledgeable and caring person.

It was a pleasure to work with her; I believe, she deserve an extra reinforcement for being so great with the clients.

Best regards,

Irina I.

Dear Ilona:

Thank you again - you are great as I said once already. I did minor changes in the resume - please accept them and rewrite those pieces.

The cover letter is just perfect!

I cannot wait to have the final draft!

All the best,

Irina I.

Ilona,

Thank you very much for your help. I truly appreciate it. You are a very nice person and it was a pleasure working with you. Thanks for the confidence you have in me and offering assistance to help me with anything else. I am going to miss you even though we didnt talk everyday.

Cooky A.


Hi Ilona,

Wow, I feel like you actually know me in person. The track changes is not working on this computer so here are my comments:

(...)

Thanks for everything!! Look forward to seeing the next draft. I do not have any specific positions in mind just yet - so once I do should I contact you to assist with the final cover letter - after your vacation?

Sharon G.

Dear Ilona:

First of all, let me compliment you on your wonderful job. I'm deeply impressed. I truly believe, you heard this 1000 times but let me do it one more time again - wow! You are just great!

Now - I will list below the additions and corrections to the resume and the cover letter as you asked.

(....)

That's all and once again - thank you so much; great job!

Best regards,

Irina I.

HI Rosie,

I have attached some small changes.
I need to be very honest - I am very impressed on your product.

Thanks again for all the hard work. Please review for me again.

Do you think I need a different cover letter than the one attached?

Thanks,
Dom R.

Rosie,

I must apologize, I just checked my other email address and witnessed the wonderful masterpiece you developed on my behalf...

Thank you so much.......


Leslie S...

Hello Peter,

How are you.

Never let it be said that I will not admit when I am wrong.

I wanted to let you know that I have gotten some very positive feedback from the resume that Christine produced for me. I guess I dont know a good resume until it bites me in the .... anyway.

I would like to discuss with you how to get the maximum exposure for this new and improved marketing document.

When can we we talk about the networks that you have referred to?

Let me know what works for you.

Jeff S.

Jeanie,

I wanted to thank you for your time and excellent work. You have been a joy to work with. You answered my doubts and you delivered a work that truly reflects my professional image. A work that I myself could not produce because it is difficult to see oneself through oneself's eyes. You guys made me go through the self analysis steps and then independently produced a piece of work that speaks volumes about my professional person, my history, my experiences.

Thank you very, very much. You can count on my recommendation anytime you need to.

Regards,

Peter J.

Peter Newfield

Thanks for your critique and your organization. Please consider the work done and charge my account with for the balance owed. Cheers.

Kelley,

Looks great!! I made one change to the below sentence (I added "subsidiary of"):

Independently manage key accounts including subsidiary of the firms largest account.

Thank you so much for all of your help and your amazing (and ethical) business practices. It is such a pleasure to work with you. I have already recommended you to others.

Ellen E.

Donna,

Thank you so much for all your help. This is a huge relief for us to move forward with the next step. The resume looks amazing. I will definitely keep you in mind to revamp my resume.

Justin and I have similar work experience and Im doing my best to find a job in a different industry so we dont end up doing the same jobs. Ha, ha.

Thanks again,

Sara W.

Hi Ilona,

Awesome job, kudos. I just have a final question. If an employer asks me why I listed my education twice, what do I say? And aso about the internship and education being in the Professional Experience section. I just need to know how to reply to that question IF it comes up. Thank you for all you have done!

Anthony C.

Hi, lloma

Thanks for your opinion. I think I will star working with this resume. I do have a cover letter already made, thanks. And regarding the balance, I will contact my cousin because she is the one who will paying, so I will get back to you on that tomorrow.


Thanks for your work. I like it and I hope employers will like it as well; Hope to get job soon.

Thanks again,

Juliana S.

Hi Ilona,

The resume looks great! I'm still not sure about including my education and internship in my perfessional experience section. Also I have highlighted the things that need to be changed. Please note my question toward the end of the resume.

Thanks and I am looking forward to you response.

Anthony C.

Christine,

I made two typo changes, and am sending it back to you with Track Changes on so you can accept & we'll know we have the same versions. Other than that- it's excellent. I'm going to begin using it today, and I thank for a terrific job!

Best,

Lisa C.

Hello Rosie,

All I can say is WOW! Thank you so much, you've done an absolute wonderful job.

I am so appreciative. This most recent copy will indeed serve as my final copy of the resume.

Laura H.

Rosie,

This resume looks great! I made a few very minor changes. I am going to have another person proof it and I think it is good to go.

Thanks for your hard work.


Veronica L. P-D

Christine,

It looks great! I made some minor changes. Please review before you accept them, because I wasn't sure about some of the changes or exactly how to word them. I reviewed the numbers I gave you, and made some changes there.

Thanks for getting this done last night. How soon will you be able to return it to me?

Thanks,

Lisa C.


Donna,

We are done thank you for your hard work and the wonderful conversation and advice!

Wish me luck and take care

Sandi P.

Dan:

I took a good look & analysis of this during the
weekend. It far surpasses what I had before. It lifts
my resume out of the "commodity crowd", which is truly required to get good results in a job search. I am guessing that this resume was not easy to write,
too...

Upon initial read I was feeling it pushes me as being
more involved in the IT industry than I really am.
Then I realized that the reader can see the first page
is all about software development, with my military IT
experience explored on page 2. Information Technology appears to be a more rewarding and in-demand technology field in today's market, which I am bearing in mind.

I also appreciate the way you removed military jargon and phrased my experience in more civilian language. I wonder if I would get quibbles from any ex-military who reads this, but I suppose they would be in the minority and I can deal with it. The majority of readers might actually be put off by terms like
"commander", which you have thoughtfully removed.

Attached are a couple of minor corrections/additions
(I am very familiar with tracking features in MS
Word). On page 2, I also added a comment. You might want to review the wording and the formatting that resulted from my change and see if there's a better way..

Thank you for the good work! I look forward to seeing your next revision of the document.

Jay H.

Donna,


You're Great you're my resume "secret weapon"!

Thanks,

Wanda S.

Hey Donna,

Kevin and I agree it looks "AWESOME" we just wanted to have a few little things done and then we're cool 🙂

Where it says at the areas of expertise:

Could you change some things around for me? Financial Pre-Qual is good where it is and Property Evaluation. Can you change Contract Prep to be third and then Closing Deals fourth. I just wanted to have it in the order in which we do it.

Thank you and then that's a wrap 🙂

I am very appreciative to have you write my resume for me each time and extremely proud to present this and these being my achievement's in my field.

Thank you so much and it's probably time for Kevin to get a new resume so could you send us updated sheets for him as well - you just never know.

Thank you,

Wanda 🙂

Peter,

I am very pleased with Kelley's work.

I am currently working with a recruiter on an opportunity and would like to delay any decisions about the next step with broadcasting my resume.

I will contact you soon to discuss.

Regards,

Marc W.

Mr. Newfield,

Last fall your firm helped put together my resume and I must say it was very successful in aiding me in my job search. I would now like to update my resume with new job and contact information. If I remember correctly, the fee to update a resume is around $100 - $150. Ms. Kelley Smith prepared my original resume, therefore should I handle the update through you or contact Ms. Smith directly.

Please let me know how to proceed.

Thanks,

Tim P.

Mr. Newfield,

I had a wonderful resume created by Kelley Smith a while back and Id like to make some revisions to it.

Can you advise me how to proceed with a resume update at this time.

Thank you,

Sincerely,

Michael C.

Ilona,

Wow, you did a great job. I love it. 🙂

The word "client" being in there was for clarification, but, I see now that it defines that in the second sentence. No problem.

Just one question? Initially, I intended for the "product management" to follow "bottom-line contributions", not follow it, but, maybe it reads better the way you did it. What is your expert opinion?

Aside from that it is fantastic and now opens and prints on 2 pages.

Please just let me know your thoughts on the above question.

Thank you.

Kirk McQ.

Christine,

I like the changes and would like to say THANK YOU
very much.

Ed McN.

Peter,

I'm so sorry I have not gotten back with you sooner. If you would like, you can post the below on your website. Thanks again, Peter! Take care of Dan! He got me a great job!

Testimonial:

After long debate and much research on resume writers, I called Peter at Career Resumes. It took little convincing on his part that a resume should be written by one of his professionals. Peter turned my resume over to one of his highly professional resume writers, Dan. Upon receiving my resume back from Dan, I couldn't help but notice how well he was able to expound upon my strengths in the field in which I work. I was so excited with the results I posted my new resume on Monster.com. After two days on Monster, I was contacted by a recruiter with a position. My recruiter sent my resume to his client, and it wasn't any longer than ten minutes that I received a call back telling me that they wanted to interview me. This is no joke! As of yesterday afternoon, I was offered a very lucrative position with an excellent compensation package. Within two and a half weeks I was spotted, interviewed and offered a great job with excellent new opportunities. I strongly suggest anyone seeking a professional career in today's market to seek out Peter Newfield of Career Resumes, and ask for Dan. You will thank me later, I promise.

Thomas James
California

Rosie,

I'm very pleased with the result - you have provided me with an excellent resume, taking all the material that the inventory asked for, and you have moulded it into a very professional resume. You have certainly met - and exceeded my expectations!

Because of this, I'd like you to write my cover letter also - would you do that, please?

Many thanks,

Rgds,

Ed J.

Rosie,

Attached please find my revisions. I hope it did it correctly.

You made me sound great. Thanks.

Sherry K.

Many thanks Rosie,

I'm pleased with this! My attempt doesn't even compare!

I've made some changes, as requested - but I'm open to your comments and response.

Thanks again,

Ed J.

Hi Rosie-

I have looked this over and it looks fine. Thanks again.

I can tell it won't take long and I should be getting some results.

Sincerely-

Mark H.

Hi Rosie,

Thank you for the obvious hard work that you have put into creating my resume.

I cant believe that so much had been done in my career track.

Thank you,

Michel R.

Dear Ilona,

I am impressed! Thank you for the great work!
I included my answers in the text. Thank you for incorporating them into my resume (it was not that much).

Please let me know if you have any further question.

Thank you.

Best regards,

Valerie A.

Jeanie:

The documents look good. Thank you for all of your help. Please let me know about the next steps. I may want to do a mailing through your firm.

Thanks.

Pete S.

Rosie:

I must say that your work is awesome!
I've looked it over and I don't see any mistakes.
I highlighted a few things that I thought should be added. Please let me know what you think.

Once again I appreciate all your efforts and I am very happy with the way the resume' turned out.

Katrina S.

Hello Rosie,

Great job THANK YOU VERY MUCH. It captures all of my capabilities and professionalism.

Regarding the invoice how long is the resume stored for?

Once again thank you. You definitely have a way with words.

Sincerely,
Militza N.

Christine,

Thank you for doing such a great job with this. I am very pleased with the appearance and the wording. I made a couple of very minor changes; other than those, I am very satisfied with the result.

Please return the final proof at your earliest convenience. I look forward to flooding the market with this exceptional document!

Thanks, again,

Russ H.

Donna,

I wanted to let you know that I had a telephone interview last week. Additionally, I attended a seminar in connection with the job fair. The
speaker reaffirmed that my resume is so much better now. The difficult task before me is finding jobs to apply for. There are few opportunities and too
many lawyers in Pittsburgh. If I end up getting some interviews or a job I will let you know.

Kind Regards,

Nicola H-T.

Ilona:

Great work - I am very pleased with the first draft of the resume and cover letter. It is the exact direction I was looking for. I have absolutely no changes to the cover letter and have answered the questions presented in the attached resume.

Thank you!

Chris L.

Ilona,

Thanks so much for doing my resume. Because of your eloquent writing and beatiful presentation, I got hired as a claims representative for the Automobile Club of Southern California. I want you to revise my reume becuase I want to apply for a Sales Agent job for the same company.

Can you please help me? I don't remember if I paid a storage fee the last time for you to be able to update my resume.

Please let me know.

Thanks,

Angelica W.

Donna,

Wow, you're good. This is much better. I've made a few small changes - see attached.

Send me the bill - this was worth it. Let's hope they hire me.

Ellen T.

Hi Ilona,

I left you a phone message to let you know I had received the resume draft. You did a fantastic job. Your wording is excellent. I can't even believe this is me you are talking about. I am very impressed with myself. I didn't know that it was acceptable to put performance review excerpts and comments from other people on a resume. Is this something new?

I spent Saturday working on this draft. I am being a little more detailed than the resume allows but I am doing this for you to see the complete picture of what I have done and then you can just pick out whatever you need to use to get the point across.

You will be hearing from me Sunday. Thanks for doing such a fantastic job.

Cooky A.

Christine,

Thank you some much for the use of your talents. My resume' looks great.

Rick T.

Ilona,

I did ask a few others in the business and there are various comments but also a general theme. One woman put this succinctly:

- Whoever wrote this did an outstanding job, she asked if I had gotten any interviews with it, and I said no, I had not sent it out, she went on to tell me that she thinks I will, easily, with this resume.

I think she represents what I am hearing about your work

Thank you.

Frank M.

PS: She does not know who you are, but she is your competitor. She had every reason to criticize the work. I think that pretty much sums it up You did do an outstanding job

Hi Rosie,

Overall, I am very pleased with the layout and presentation of the resume!

Thanks for your hard work with getting this together, I am really pleased with how it came out!

I will have to get back to you about the cover letter, as I am not sure if I can swing it financially at the moment.

How much do you charge to make the resume "scannable" for posting on the internet?

Thanks again,

Ben C.

Dear Mr. Newfield,

I reviewed the draft of the resume Ms. Allen prepared and I am very glad that I chose your company. I have referred one marketing manager who needs resume drafting/consultation services to your website.

When we first spoke, I asked you about interview coaching.

Do you know of any company or person who provides high quality interview coaching for attorneys?

I will continue to refer my friends to your company.

Thanks again,

Harry K.
New Mexico State Prosecutor


Ms. Allen,

Thank you for your promt response. You are a true professional. I am very pleased with what you have done.

Again, Thank you.

Nicola H.T.

Rosie,

I have reviewed my resume and added the information where the highlights were.

It looks great!

Thank you.

Best Regards,

Brenda S. W.

Rosie,

You've done a great job with my resume! I'm very pleased.

Thanks!

Penelope W.

Hi Peter.

I'd love to have Donna's snail mail address. I want to thank her in spades.

I've got the dream job! I'm the new hire at Broward County Red Cross, my title: Emergency Preparedness Manager, i.e., community liaison and public relations work to form partnerships that can be mobilized at a moment's notice when disaster happens.

They said they were so impressed with my resume they called me literally within five minutes of receiving the electronic form. I had my first interview the following day, met and interviewed next with the CEO and was hired. I'm a happy woman.

Thank you again.

Panni B.

Ilona,

Thank you for the wonderful job u did with my resume. Once I submitted to several companies I got responses within 24 hours. I have been intervewing extensively and final found the perfect job. Again thank you for taking the time and being commited to helping people reach their goals through great resumes.

Have a blessed day and continue doing what u r doing.

Regards,

Elizabeth M.
Satisfied customer

Ilona,

That is exactly what I was wanting. I changed one thing which I highlited in blue. This should be good to go. If you can review it one last time for any structural errors and send it back to me, I will get it out to the employers I am targeting. Thank you for all your help.

I do have one question. If I am wanting to get guidance on changes I would like to make to the resume, what are the costs and whom do I comunicate this request to?

Regards,

Dana P.

Ilona,

Thanks for the resume changes/edits. I had an opportunity to review them and I am very pleased.

Take great care.

Alicia R.

Hi Ilona,

I have proofed the resume you have done for me. It looks really good. I am impressed.

I made the changes or answered your questions that were highlighted in blue. If you could make the these changes and then send them back to me, that would be great.

Dana P.

Ilona,

Thank you very much for all your time and creativity. I have all the confidence in the world that this will be a quality product to help me in my self marketing.

Regards,

Tim W.

Hi Ilona,

Thank you for the changes. I have just a couple more. Sorry. Can we please add database management in the intro section "Marketing Manager" at the top to the list of additional skills. Also, lets change the 2nd sentenance under Professional Background, Marketing Manager to read: Plan and execute marketing ...manufacturing and distribution industry niche paractices including M&A,...

After those changes, I believe we are all done.

This is wonderful! Thank you very much,

Morgan B.

Ilona,

Well, here you go as a first round of edits Whew, its looking pretty good. Let me know if you have any questions. The best number to contact me is 333-333-3333. My cell phone doesnt have service up here in the mountains.

Thanks again for all your hard work and creativity.

Regards,

Tim W.

Dear Rosie,

First of all I want to thank you very much for the great job that you have done for me.

Thanks

Guy G.

Hi Kelley,

Once again thank you very much for a fantastic work! Everything looks great and no final edits seem necessary. Thanks also for the additional information on various websites.



Its been a pleasure to work with you on this.

Best regards,

Jamie K.

Hey Ilona,

I've attached my resume and cover letter with changes. I'm very pleased with the outcome. You'll notice that I answered all of your questions and elaborated on my marketing internship. Should you have any additional questions, let me know.

Thank you in advance,

Crystal M.

Ilona,

I've attached my comments to the resume. I hope you can read them. If not, please call me at 333.333.3333 and I can go over them with you. Basically though, my changes are:

I have a house phone so I would like that added and my cell phone can stay on the resume. I now have over 7 years' experience. I want to add commercial lenders and rearrange the order of indistries in the intro paragraph. I don't provide transaction support services, rather the marketing for our transaction support services practice, so we'll have to change that somehow.

Again, thank you for the great resume! This is really a neat process. If you have any questions, you may call me on my cell phone today.

Thanks,

Morgan B.

Ilona

Happy Friday! Overall, I really like where the direction that this is going. It gives me hope 😉 HeckId hire me!

Here are my editsI kept Track Changes onits a combination of edits and comments (the shaded green boxes).

Please call/write if you have any questions.

Paul K.

Christine,

Here are my changes and thank you for the great look and feel to the new document.

Christopher R.

Hi Donna,

I had a couple other sets of eyes take a look at the Resume and Cover Letter and have included some minor changes. I probably could have made the changes myself, but needed your help to format correctly.

You'll notice the only change to the Cover Letter is the correct zip (inadvertently used my office zip on the original), but wanted to send it anyway in case there is any final formatting that you needed to complete.

Thanks again. This was money well spent!

Greg R.

Kelly

Thanks. The resume looks great. Appreciate the time and energy you put into making me look great! I shared the resume with a friend who is a career coach, and she thought the results were remarkable.

Thanks again.

Christy W.

Jane,

Just wanted to drop you a quick note to tell you I took Jean's re-write of my resume and applied online via online job site marketing.theladder.com to several positions in Brand Management and received 2 phone calls within 30 minutes requesting additional information (from HR Depts not 3rd Party recruiters!).

Needless to say, Jean's a talented writer who has made the most of what I can offer and I am already impressed at what an upgrade your service has provided me . I will recommend it to friends and colleagues.

Thanks very much,

Charlotte A.

Chris,

This looks great! I need it in text format too, because some companies will not upload a file, and I get all kinds of goofy characters when converting to text.

Thanks

Ed M.

Rosie -

Thanks for the great looking resume. I have enclosed the edited document. Very few changes/comments.

Thanks for your work. I look forward to using the resume.

Bruce B.

Dear Peter,

I wanted to tell you how incredibly grateful I am that I found your company through Salesladder.com. After sending my resume to you for a quick review it was apparent that I was going to spend well over $5,000.00 with an executive recruiting coach that would have been a incredible mistake. I decided to go with your company and you paired me up with Dan Doritik. I believe that was an incredible match up. I researched this writer and I was blown away by the google search responses on him. Dan provided me my rough draft within the 8th day, and 48 business hours left, I was presented with my final. I read this final and then my cover letter and I was floored. Finally, years of trying on my own, and it was like a piece of art. An incredible synopsis on 10 years of highlighted growth and success in my life to be presented towards my next position.

This was so successful that I received in less than 24 hours, 10 total responses on specific targeted companies for executive level positions within the sales industry. Most importantly my goal has been obtained, each of these companies are outside of my own industry!

I want to highly recommend Dan to everyone that has such an expansive background as mine that needs to capture the right essence of life on paper. Additionally I will recommend you to my companies that I work with, and in my further coaching efforts as I continue to further my career path.

Kindest Regards,

H. Brandon M.

Christine,

Thank you very much for your good work. You were able to produce such a good document about my career without even talking to me or seeing me once&
I proofread the document, and did some minor changes (highlighted and attached). Please note that I changed the paper size from Letter to A4 as this is the most used paper size in this part of the world, so some simple layout alignments might be required from your side.

Looking forward to receive the updated version, and maybe talk to you.

Regards,

Salah A. M.

Dear Dan:

I just had to write and thank you for my daughter Rachel's professional resume. As you might remember, Rachel wanted to move home from Tampa, Florida, to Syracuse, NY. I was thrilled that she wanted to move home, but, too be honest, almost discouraged her because I was very concerned about her finding a quality job in this area. Your questionnaire elicited just the right information to showcase Rachel's education, experience and talents. I was astounded when I saw the finished product.

Rachel sent out resumes before she left to drive from Tampa to Syracuse. By the time she arrived home, she had several interviews scheduled. She has been home for one week and today accepted a position that we could only have dreamed of for her. She is now on her way to a career.

We feel the resume that you wrote was definitely the reason Rachel got the interviews and then she was able to take it from there. We are in your debt!

Sincerely,

Ruth Willis
Syracuse, NY

Jean

This was an excellent first draft and you certainly made the most of the info I provided. I made revisions (not many) and feel very comfortable with what you've provided. Your positioning statement at the outset takes the focus away from the fact I've worked in one industry for almost 20 years - I could have never pulled this off myself!

Please review my marked up copy and thanks again - you've given me a whole new outlook on my possibilities !

Charlotte A.

Hi Ilona,

Everything looks great. I can't think of anymore edits that need to be done.

Thanks again for all your hard work and perseverance.

Sincerely,

Bill McE.

Dan,

You hit the nail on the head with this one!

Incredibly impressed and you definitely gave me the WOW factor that I was looking for. And yes, reading this resume I would be very excited to meet me. I am extremely excited to start sending this out and now I realize that my only problem will now be which offer to chose when I start sending this out.

You have definitely lived up to all of the great comments I have read about you through My Google search.

Have a fantastic week and thank you for going the extra step to portray what I was unable to do myself for many years! I believe with this you will have given me the edge I will need to successfully change
industries.

Best Wishes,

H. Brandon M.

Hi Ilona.

Everything looks great on the resume and cover letter. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your hard work. Following are the corrections along with the added data you suggested.

Thanks again.

Bill d'E.

Good morning, Rosie;

Your writing skills are unsurpassed !

Thank you for your assistance in putting together a winning resume.

Best regards,

Collin B.

Dear Donna,

Thank you for your assistance. You have done a great job and I enjoyed working with you as well. I am confident that your work will allow me to obtain what I am looking for.

Regards,

Nicolas D.

Hello Rosie.

The resume is great. I have made a couple minor changes. Please call me if you have any questions or cant make out the writing. I will fax the resume back to you today. I am assuming the fax your email signature are correct. I will send it to both
Thanks!

Justin S.

Dear Jeanie,

Thanks a lot for your first draft - it sure looks a lot better than the one that i've made myself.

I am sending you some minor changes to incorporate in the final document.

Dimitris T.

Jeanie,

This looks great. I like the change in format and emphasis. I will review and get you the changes.

Brad H.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks for the quick turnaround. I'm really pleased
with the first draft and will plan to have comments
back to you over the weekend.

Hope you have a terrific weekend and thanks for all
your help!

Linda M.

Jeanie,

Wow...who is this person?!?...seriously what a difference...thank you for your efforts....mark up attached..

Michael D.

Peter:

I just have one more edit before finalizing with Jeanie. (Jeanie is great I must say).

Once final, I am not going to pursue another job at the moment. I just wanted to have a resume on hand in case something arises unexpectedly.

Thanks,

Patty C.

Ilona,

Thanks for the great job on my resume. I have included some changes. I have also attached some of the job's that I have been targeting so you can make a parallel of what I am looking to move into. I also have P&L responsiblilities and work on the budgeting process i feel those should be added in the section under Center Director. I also just got promoted to Senior Director should I add this or leave it as I am job hunting. Any suggestions?

Also the formating is great I've never used this type of format only the old ones, so thanks again.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks,

Liz M.

Christine,

Great job! Although the attached copy contains a few potential changes, I thought your work was magnificent.

The biggest change I tried to include
was adding "Problem solving" in to my skill summary on page 1. Unfortunately, the addition threw off the formatting. I am not committed to
my changes and would like your thoughts on the advisability of their inclusion in the final resume.

Thanks,

Bruce N.

Hi Peter,

I just sent you a copy of the email I sent to the resume writer regarding Rachel W. I think you will remember me, I spoke to you on the phone early one morning -- just another crazy, frustrated mom. I thought Dan did a fantastic job and I so appreciate your speaking me so candidly.

Question for you: I thougth you could pay an extra fee to have the resume on file and updates done in the future. Can you please let me know what the expenses are and what they involve.

Again, thank you.

Ruth W.

Dan,

Just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your "expertise" in writing, my daughter, Rachels' resume. I thought you did an amazing job and I am very pleased. I feel that your fee was reasonable and fair and well worth the expense.

Thank you again.

Ruth W.

Peter,

I just received the final draft of my new resume yesterday. It was obviously well worth the effort and time it took to complete it. It looks great! I just feel much better knowing I have it ready when the right position becomes available for me to apply.

Not that you don't already know, but Donna Allen is just terrific to work with. I can honestly say I will be recommending you to my friends and colleagues. Thank you!

John K.

Ilona,

The resume looks wonderful. I've attached it with answers and changes as requested.

Thanks

Paul W.

Hi Jane,

I wanted to follow-up with an email to you to let you know how absolutely pleased I am with the resume built by Ilona. I can't tell you in words, what this has meant to me. She has been wonderful to work with - prompt, and professional, patient and most accommodating. And, I am just thrilled to have used your services to coordinate this difficult task.

I initially hesitated in the investment, but now - would without a doubt highly recommend your services to anyone seeking assistance. For someone, like myself - having spent so much time building credentials - and not having the time or expertise to pull it all together -- I would without any hesitation, entrust this project to you and your team of experts again!

Please feel free to use me as a reference at anytime~!

Most kindly,

Lorie T.

Ilona,

This is really good - much better than I even expected. In fact, I'm pretty blown away! So, thank you so much !!

I went through - and made some minor changes, here and there -- but, I noticed that the tense in some of the paragraphs was in the present -- and, this may be a mistake on my part - perhaps these are the words that the spider program(s) look for when sifting through thousands of resumes. If so - please adjust back accordingly. You are expert - I am not.

Also, recognizing the fact that we are trying to keep it to two pages - I honestly don't know what to cut out. It is all factual, and very reflective of my responsibilities. If, it has to go to 3 pages, I left some notes on what perhaps I can fill it with -- or if you think it's overkill, we can list references, or leave blank - again, please interject - I am cool with whatever.

Again, thank you ! I am floored !!!

Take care,

Lorie T.

Hello Peter,

My name is Timothy C. and I have used your services in the past with great success. I am now looking to make a career jump into a technical lead position and my cover letter was written a few years ago when I was looking for a basic developer position.

My resume is great and I have had it updated a couple times by your services already, but I have not had my cover letter revamped. So I was wondering what the costs associated with updating my coverletter would be?

Thanks in advance for your help.

Donna,

Thanks for getting back to me so quickly. I will be out of town for a week starting tomorrow but I will bring a copy of the resume and letter to review
and see if anything else needs changing. I read it over quickly and it looks great. I will email you when I return.

Thanks for answering my questions. I appreciate your explanations.

I think I just needed reassurances :).

Thanks again and I will get back to you in a week or so.

Josh G.

Peter,

Just a short note to thank you for your excellent service.

I needed my Bio professionally written and I needed it fast.

You delivered on both accounts.

Thanks again.

MES

Peter

Thanks for your message. Kelly did a wonderful job in rewriting my resum.

In the mean time I am close to finalizing on a new position.

Best regards,

Theo F.

Dan,

Thank you the cover letter. It looks great! If I should need any further assistance I will get in contact with you. Will look forward to receiving the final draft of the cover letter. It has been a big help, thank you.

Elizabeth F.

Hiiiiiiiiiiii Donna!!!

My data line went out yesterday shortly after we spoke and was out throughout the evening as well. When I went to bed at midnight, I was still Inetrnet deprived!!! I am just now able to get back online. Oh, we have become so dependent on the Internet!!!

The resume looks great, Donna. Just great. Thank you so much!

I appreciate the time and care you put into your efforts with me. I feel you went above and beyond on my behalf, and I wish there were bigger words than thank you...but for now, please accept my BIG thank you!

I saw the bill. Thank you. Having never used any sort of services like yours, I was not aware that the expenses are tax deductible. 🙂

I appreciate your continued presence, and thank you for being "there" for me when I have questions.

For now, no questions, just gratitude.
I am sure we will talk soon.

Take care,

Arlene P.

Good morning, Peter!

I have had the most amazing experience with Donna for the past few days, and feel very compelled to tell you that, just as you said, she is the best.

Responsive, astute, knowledgeable and savvy....I could not have asked for more.

I am thrilled with my resume and am looking forward to having very good news for you soon.

Take care, stay well. I may be in your neck of the woods later this year...I'll buy you a cup of coffee! (WITH a pastry, of course!)

Regards,

Arlene P.

Ilona,

I have attached the corrections you asked for in the resume and found one small correction in the cover letter. If you have any further questions feel free to contact me either via email or at my work phone.

You did a great job on the resume.

Kathleen O'C.

Hi Donna,

Good morning!!

I LOVE what you have done with my resume. I think we are just about there. I reviewed your attachments and am thrilled with the cover letter and made some suggested revisions for the resume. Please let me know what you think. I am only attaching the resume....the cover letter is perfect....they say exactly what I wanted them to say. I will not send out the resume till you clean it up!! I promise.

Do you think it will be possible to have it later today?

Take care,

Arlene P.

Ilona,

Two days after I applied for a job with Amazon.com using the new resume and the cover letter you wrote, I received an email requesting a phone interview!!

There is no doubt that it was your outstanding work that got it for me.

You are worth every penny!

Best,
Lorraine LoB.

Donna

You are awesome!!! I agree with combining the contract work ... I have made some changes (in red) please let me know if you think they are ok?

Lora B.

Donna: Thanks for your help.

I wish I could find 100 people like you!!!!

It's always a pleasure to speak with you. You are a CLASS ACT!!!

Kindest Regards : Calvin H.

Donna,

I like the way it reads.

I am trying to get a hold of my son for his input.

I'll continue to re-read and speak with you later.

I'm very pleased.

Thanks,

Matthew S.

HI Donna,

I would like to have an opportunity to speak with you briefly at your convenience regarding presenting this resume during an interview, as I think you are well qualified to provide some tips on what I should keep in mind when interviewing for a position. ...

Thank you again for you wonderful work!!!

Best regards,

Michelle A.

Dear Donna,

Thank you for the email. All is well. I am in school full-time and I have had a couple of really good interviews. The resume is really working!!

Thanks again,

Julie E.

Chris,

This is worth one million dollars!!! 😉

Thank you very much.

Toby M.

Hi Ilona,

The resume and cover letter look great! Here are some minor corrections, otherwise I think it will be just fine.

Lorraine LoB.

Hi Ilona,

The cover letter looks nice. Thank you. I am a bit
worried that I do not have all the computer skills
that many of the marketing jobs require. Do you think that it would it be beneficial to add a line about my ability to quickly learn new software? Also, I am
relocating to Jersey in May, possibly March if a job
opportunity opens. Should that be stated in my cover
letter?

Thanks again. I'm pleased and excited about my new resume and cover letter.

Sincerely,

April I.

Kelley,

Thanks for the quick response. I think it looks pretty good. I'll take a close look and let you know tomorrow.

A friend of mine saw my resume and was impressed with it. He wants you to write his resume too. I'm going to send your information to him and he might contact you.

Thanks,
Brandi F.

Donna -

This looks great. Here are my markups, and the answer to your one question. Just a couple of minor changes to moderate some of the descriptions to better reflect what I think a situation was.

I could never have done this myself. It is hard for me to be objective about my own achievements. I tend to look to see where something I did could have been done better. It helps tremendously to have your professional and independent eye.

Let me know where things go from here. Thanks.

James V.

Thanks Jeanie.

Really appreciate it. You did a wonderful job. I am already getting positive comments from people who had looked at what I had before and comparing to the new versions. One person asked for your contact information. Many thanks again.

Kindest regards,

Tayeb T.

Thanks Jeanie.

You did a great job on the letter and the resume. You made even me look good !!

Robert H.

Hi Jeanie,

This is more than an excellent resume and cover letter. If I was in Virginia and if you were single then I would have invited you out for a candle light dinner for it... :-).

But, sticking to reality, I think a big thank you is more appropriate for a job so well done!

Cazahow Q.

Hi Ilona,

Thank you for the resume draft. Both my wife and I have read it over numerous times and we are both very impressed. I am not specifically sending you back a file, but rather a few brief questions, and one comment.

Mike H.

Ilona:

You did a really fabulous job. I would hire myself if I got a resume that looked like this.

My changes/clarifications are attached.

Thanks so much.

Josh V.

Rosie:

Thanks for responding & answering my questions. Enclosed are the revisions.

Overall, everything looks wonderful. You did a marvelous job.

I greatly appreciate you working with me.

Thanks,

Rhondrea C.

Hi Rosie,

You sure do good work, I think I will hire myself
after reading the resume you put together for me.

I will review your other services but I would like to
have your company save this so it can be update for
each new postion.

Wayne R.

Ilona:

I looked at it very briefly as I am at work in my little
cubicle, so I need to be discreet.

It looks fabulous. I will review it carefully at home and respond in detail.

Josh V.

Hello Ilona,

The resume you prepared looked great. I feel that it
will give me the advantage that I was looking for in
my career search.

Please find my edited resume attached.

I may decided to have a cover letter written at a later
date.

Thanks,
April I.

Peter,

I would like to thank you and your colleagues for the expert transformation of my resume. Denise Horton provided a very good critique of my own version, and then arranged for Jeanie Oscarson to work with me on the development of a resume more suited to the intended audiences. I have enjoyed working with her, and am looking forward to the benefits of her writing as my career search takes on greater proportions. Jeanies work has been outstanding, and her thoughtfulness and courtesy have been most appreciated.

The resulting resume is, without question, a substantial improvement over my own attempts to reduce a career to writing. The process that you use in order to develop the background for the professional writing is comprehensive and effective. It has served, in my own case, to provide some new and meaningful insights about career opportunities and searches.

With best regards,

Dave McC.

Peter,

Just FYI.Jeanie did a fantastic job on my CV and Im really pleased with your services.

Please go ahead with the storage option and the
$25 storage fee.

Thanks,

Mauro F.

Jeanie,

I looked through the document one more time and Im really pleased with your work and help it looks so much better than what I had.

Thank you Jeanie youre a true professional !!!

Mauro F.

Jeanie,

I think your resume did the trick....and the hiring manager even commented on how he could see clearly the talent...Thanks much....I have referred to your services for friends who have asked.

Very impressive.

Thanks, Adel D.

Hi Peter,

The resume Dan wrote is greatthanks.

I dont need it sent out as I have already done so to the companies I am interested in and have been interviewing alllllllll week.

Thanks so much for your help, I have no doubt that that resume helped me tremendously.

Amy S.

Rosie,

Here is the proofed resume. I found a few minor fixes and used 'track changes' to note them. Let me know if there's any confusion or anything else you need.

Once again, the resume looks and sounds great.

Thanks again,

Paul H.

Jeanie,

Thanks for the quick turn around. It looks excellent.
I think you have done a very good job of capturing the essence of my experience.

Tayeb T.

Hi Ilona,

I hope you are enjoying the Holiday Season.

I am VERY pleased with the documents you have created for me.

I made a few edits but nothing major.

My biggest concern is that the resume is more than 2 pages long. Maybe that is an "old school" philosophy, but I just wanted to run it by you.

Thanks for all your hard work on this. I am looking forward to sending it out!

Karem McC.

Jeanie-

Attached is my final, final. There are some subtle changes in here so it's important this is the final one. Take a last proofread and be sure nothing jumps out at you.

I spoke to Peter and he asked that I mention to you to send it over to Jane to get it 'computer cut and paste ready' (text version). We hope to begin distribution the end of this week.

You've done good work and I'm grateful. Thank you.

Brett F.

Dear Jeanie,

Your job on CV looks great to me! I like it very much. As you have recommended I will read it few times and e-mail back to you tomorrow.

Jerzy J.

Jeanie,

The resume looks very good, you are an excellent writer. Regarding the career highlights: Please review and maybe spice up the item that has been added.I am looking forward to your input and the final resume!

Richard L.

Hi Jeanie,

I wanted to let you know that I am happy with the version you have produced for me. This is great and in my opinion should open at least 1 door for me in the next 2 months, which is all I need to get a new opportunity. I want to thank you for all the hard work.

Harry H.

Hello Rosie,

The rsum is great! I really am impressed.

Thanks Rosie!

Tom H.

Hi Rosie,

I love what you have done with the resume. I made a few minor edits. I added substitute teaching as a job.
On my days off from TSA I teach on occassions.

A few interviews that I went on were really impressed with it.

John B.

Rosie,

I LOVE THE RESUME. This resume will definetly show employers that I am qualified. I knew that I was all along but you put it into words.

I have carefully proofread the resume, and have found no problems.

THANK YOU,

Evangeline B.

Rosie

Thank-you for creating a resume for me. I am very pleased with it.

I have attached a copy of it with minor corrections.
I would be interested in an email campaign distributed by career resumes.

I would like some more information concerning this.

Regards

Antony L.

Thanks Rosie,

Please see attached and note minor changes, otherwise the resume/cover letter look great...........

Robert M.

Hi Rosie,

Just received the resume draft. Very good work.

Thanks,

Paul H.

Rosie - Thanks!

I reviewed the Draft, and we're all set.
Thanks again. You chose the right words, and put everything into a nice format for my use.
Good luck on your future projects.

Steve E.

Jeanie,

Thank you! It looks terrific. I'd hire me!

I made some changes highlighted in red.
Once you get the revisions done and returned to me, I would like to speak with you over the phone to discuss the final version.

Best Regards,

David A.

Jeanie,

Im impressed, I would hire this guy!

Well done and thanks.

I have used change tracker to make a few amendments.

Andy H.

Jeanie,

I am very pleased with your first draft. Attached are my revisions to your first draft of my resume. If my changes and additions do not come through highlighted in red, please contact me.

Thanks,

Roy K.

Hi Jeanie,

Thanks for the great work! Attached are my comments. It had captured most of the information I have provided quite accurately.

Shufen T.

Hi Jeanie,

Many thanks indeed for this. I had been completely stumped as to how to describe my career over the past 10 years, but you seem to have found a very consistent story to tell about it!

Paul H.

Dear Jeanie,

I have to say that I am very pleased by the result! I have some minor comments and corrections (see attached doc), but overall it is impressive! One request: when you do the final formatting, can you please set the page to A4 rather than US letter?

Bernhard K.

Iiona,

Looks great! A question that I have, should I take out the information about the Master Program or just add it in to which school I am attending?

Chris J.

Hi Dan and Denise,

I hope all is well with each of you. I have a phone interview with Amazon.com in Coffeyville, KS for a Human Resources Level 3 positions. Thank you for your help with my resume. I was told that my resume was what got me the interview.

I am hoping that you could help give me a salary range that I should be asking for and I would appreciate any benefits negotiation tips you might have. Thanks, I am looking forward to hearing from the both of you.

I will keep you informed on my progress.

Hope you have a very Merry Christmas and a productive New Year.

Warmest regards,

Jim P.

Hi Ilona,

Many thanks! Overall, this looks fantastic! I tried to answer your questions and a few little items, but definitely minimal. Great!

In reference to the keywords/core competencies, can you include top words in your expertise that are often searched for to best highlight during any revising I would be doing?

Thank you!

Dave B.

Dear Peter:

I have received the draft resume and reviewed it. It was a great job by Kelly. Thank you for your recommendation.

Just to let you know that I have asked her to do my covering letter as well.

I intend to mail my resume to the head of investment banking of leading US and European banks. Do you think that is a good idea, bearing in mind that this resume will be listed on Bluestep.com also?

Warm regards

Peter L.

Kelley,

Thanks for such a pleasurable experience. I had been putting this whole thing on the back burner for so long and your methods really helped me think things through.

Thanks again and have happy holidays.

Lisbeth K.

Ilona,

Thanks for all of your effort. You really cleaned up a mess and made me look pretty corporate-y.

Bert F.

Dear Sherri,

I have reviewed draft 2 and the cover letter and happy to report a positive output.

If I can have both documents as an attachment, I would be most grateful as the internet version was difficult to download as a separate word document.

Thank you for the professional service and do accept my appreciation for an assignment extremely well done.

As you approach the holiday season, I wish you and your family a Merry Christmas and a happy new year.

Thank you,

Hisham M M.

Ilona,

I received the revised copy and the only thing that I see is date on the membership that you requested. I have been a member since Oct. 2005 - present. Other than that everything looks great. You have done an excellent job on this. Thank you so much!

Karl T.

Ilona,

Thank you so much for your excellent work sometimes you lose track of your accomplishments until you read about them. I did do good and I will leave with my head held high.

Ill let you know when and where I will be working to close this chapter of my life.

Best wishes for a very Merry Christmas season.

Rose Ann M.

Ilona-

The resume looks great. I only have two small changes.

Thanks,

Walter J. McD.

Dan,

This is an excellent piece of work. Thank you.

I have a few minor larifications/questions/suggested changes that I'd like your input on.

Attached is the resume with my markup; hopefully the "track changes" function will work and you'll be able to see the changes I've proposed.

What are your thoughts on the recommended wording changes as marked in the document? Do they contribute to getting the message across to the reader?

Again, thanks.

The resume is a significant improvement over what I sent you. I hope the market feels the same way.

Best regards,

William R. N.

Hi Rosie,

I love what you have done with the resume. I made a few minor edits. I added substitute teaching as a job. On my days off from TSA I teach on occassions. I cut and pasted the job describtion.

John B.

Rosie,

I LOVE THE RESUME. This resume will definetly show employers that I am qualified. I knew that I was all along but you put it into words.

THANK YOU,
Evangeline B.

Dan,

Thank you for the resend on this - our email has been horrible lately.

Give me a few days to chew on this - I really like what I see from my first reading.

Major Mark M.

Ilona,

It looks great. I will make some changes and email you back.

Thanks!

Zoe E.

Hello IIona,

I read through my resume - it looks great! I have one question though. I am a member of two professional organizations, can you add a section and list the two organizations? I provided them in my paper work I filled out for you, but I will go ahead and name them here that way you do not have to fumble through all that paper. The organizations are:

American Society for Public Administration-Colorado and Washington D.C. Chapter
American Society for Women in Public Administration -Colorado Chapter.

Everything looks great. You had two questions for me on the resume, but don't worry about those I can change them.

Again, Excellent work! I think after the holidays I will contact you again so you can write a cover letter for me. I am definitely going to recommend your services to my friends.

Thanks!

Michele R.

Hi Kelley,

I've made a few changes noted in blue. You did a great Job. There is a chance that I may be meeting the Board at a new hospital this Wed, 12/1. I just happen to have an FL court appt at 9:30-10-:30 on 12/1. Therefore at this point I really have no idea if I'll need at immediate turn around, by Tues or simply when convenient. Since there are so few changes, I think you'll need 10 min to review then make all print black and were ready to go.

Hey, you amazed me!

Kent J.

Peter,

I just finalized the IT resume version with Jean and it looks great.

As I mentioned this has been a great experience. Jean worked the weekend with me to get this finished as I have a pending opportunity that I need
the updated resume for.

Jean is outstanding.

Thanks so much for all of your help.

Tom S.

Hello Jeanie,

Thanks for this new version! I like it very much and loved your cover letter!

I only have three little comments/questions. Please let me know how you see it.

Now I really feel that this resum will get me interviews!

Muchos saludos,

Sandrine D.

Thanks, Peter!

I appreciate your offer to help me distribute my resume to recruiters. However, I have already signed up for a service called BlueSteps and would like to give it a couple of weeks to see if it works before committing additional marketing dollars.

Please thank Jeanie for the wonderful job that she did on my resume and tell her that I will not be needing a cover letter!

Rosalind R.

Peter,

Thank you for the E-mail. I am very impressed with
the resume and cover letter that Kelley prepared.

I would certainly like to talk to you regarding
additional services. I will call you after
Thanksgiving --- I am in South Africa now and will
return next Thursday (while you are celebrating Thanksgiving).

Talk to you soon. Have a nice holiday.

Keith M.

Jeanie,

You did a great job on my resume. I would like to engage you to develop a good cover letter for me. Please send me the required forms so that we can get this underway!

Thanks,

Steve J.

Peter,

I wanted to let you know that it has been a great experience working with Jeanne Oscarson. I like her style and creativeness and the result has been well worth the effort.

That said, I have referred a colleague to you, his name is XXXX XXXXX and is a General Manager / Sr. VP level executive. I hope it turns into an opportunity for your company.

Regards,
Tom S.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks for the quick turnaround. At first glance it looks great. I will read and review this weekend and get back to you by Monday.

Have a great weekend.

Glenn W.

Denise and Jeanie,

I wanted to let you know that I accepted a position at Cisco and I start next week. The feedback that you gave me on my resume was extremely helpful in terms of getting this position at Cisco. Before my resume was more like a list. With your help, my resume could communicate my accomplishments and what I wanted to do next.

Thank you,

Esteban T.

Thanks, Jeanie!

I appreciate the quick turnaround and the great job you did on my resume.

Attached is the revised draft. Please call me either tonight or tomorrow morning so that I can ask you a couple of questions!

Rosalind R.


Jeanie,

I have made some revisions and comments. Please let me know what else I can provide to you on this. Thanks for the great work so far. I am excited about this!

Josh H.

Jeanie,

Excellent work! I especially like the upfront section.

Dean H.

Jeanie,

The resume looks beautiful. I have answered the various questions that you had throughout. Thank you.

Samantha B.

Jeanie,

Thanks for all of your great work! I made a couple of small changes. I would also like you to draft a cover letter for me.

Tom S.

Rosie,

Thank you for the resume. It is fantastic!

I truly appreciate your hard work and value your service.

Thanks again,

Randy Z.

Hi Ilona,

Thanks so much. My brain is not functioning yet, so give me 24 hours. So far, I look terriffic - I think I will hire me!

Barbara H.

Hi Denise,

First of all, I think my resume looks 10 times better. We will see, but I believe this document will really help me.I think Jeanie did a great job capturing what I wanted on this document (and putting up with my impatience)

Thanks,
John O'L.

Thanks very much for your e-mail Peter.

I am very happy with the CV prepared by Chris and have started distributing it in Asia.

Will be in touch if I need more help.

Many kind regards,

Dino B.

Hello Jeanie!

Thanks for this first draft! We are quite impressed!

Once you finish this one, I will give you my Resum as well.

Attached, you will find the version with our comments. Theyre very few.

Could you please also provide us with the cover letter that Peter had spoken to us about?


Sandrine S.

Peter,

The product sell's itself. Rosie did an outstanding job. I'm anxiously awaiting the fixed form so I can send them out.

Thank you.....

Clifford T.

Thanks Jeanie.

You did a wonderful job. The resume has already received positive reviews.

Brett G.

Rosie,

All in all, I think this is very good.

Mark H.

Dear Rosie:

This is by far the best resume I've seen in my industry at my level of care delivery.

Thank you for auctioning me so effectively."

Clifford T.

Dear Rosie,

In general I like what you proposed and the format seems to work pretty well.

Cheers,

Matt O.

Ilona

The resume you have created is amazing. I am very happy with the format and the context. I answered a few questions for you on timeframes for the positions and a more detailed description of my accomplishments. Again, I cannot say how happy I am with the presentation of this resume. I am eager to see the results I will get once I start applying for positions. On your website I had seen that there was an option to send my resume to recruiters through your company for I believe an extra fee. Is this correct? Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks

Renee S.

Hi Dan,

I just received the draft version and it looks impressive. I will go through the document and provide you feed back within the next couple of days.

Ravi J.

Jeanie,

Your first draft looks great! It does an excellent job of presenting a complete picture of my experience.

For your review, I have attached the resume with revisions. I look forward to receiving your next draft.

Thanks,

Brad

Jeanie,

Great job! Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. I have been traveling and very busy with work. Attached you will find my comments using track changes. Looking forward to the next version since I think we are very close right now. I have read your other email as well so we should talk about that and the cover letter as well. Let me know what works best for you.

Doug

Hi Jeanie,

This looks great! I have attached my additions under the track changes feature in Word.

Thank you,

Eric

Dear Jeanie,

This is AWESOME - GOOD JOB !!! Attached please find my revised draft for your further consideration.

Marcus M.

Hi Ilona,

Thank you very much for my resume and cover letter. You have done an
outstanding job! This resume is worlds better than the one I have been
using.

I have given this to 2 other people to review, and the only corrections we
have identified are very minor (i.e. the dates of my Prior Experience) so I
will just make these corrections myself.

In addition, thank you for the Job Search Skills document. This will come
in very useful.

It has been a pleasure working with you.

Patricia T.

Dear Kelley:

In my initial reading, I was blown away by your work! Thank you so much. I shall do a close reading and get back to your with comments. AWESOME!!! I really think this captures my experience and value.

Thank you,

Robin T.

Ilona,

Thank you so much for the fantastic resume and cover letter. I filled in the holes and made a few changes to the resume as you requested. The cover letter looks great. If you have any questions just let me know.

Thanks,

Rachel M.

Ilona:

This was worth every single penny!!!!!

All I had to adjust 4 things and yes please do emphasize my Protools Certification but DO NOT CHANGE ANYTHING ELSE. IT IS PERFECT!!!!!!

The opening summary is just beautiful!!!
And the way you described me is just wonderful!!!!!!

You have outdone yourself.

THANK YOU!!!!

LaShonda M.

Christine,

I'm very happy with this and will start distributing this next with the hope of find a job. Pls proceed to charge me for the balance.

Kind regards,

Dino B.

Ilona:

I have highlighted my changes in blue. The only adjustments I made to the below documents are dates and specific detail items to ensure that this
resume is as accurate as possible.

Please note my wording is not the best, so if you feel the need to add something to make my resume more appealing please feel free to do so!!

Thank you so much, you did a wonderful job and I am very grateful

Regards,

LaShonda J M.

Hi Rosie,

Thanks for the resume. It looks great.

Thanks,

Charles R.

Christine,

Thank you again very much for the excellent quality resume you created for me. I am sure this will get me in the door of many possible employers - and then its up to me.

Brandon M.

Ilona

Wow! I think my resume looks great! I am very pleased. Attached is the file with answers to your questions/suggestions. Track changes is active so they are easily noted.

Thank You.

John A.

Christine,

Wow!

I'll say that again...

Wow!

That first section blew me away. There is no way I could create that. That paragraph has such an impact it keeps the reader looking for more. And then the 'more' has the goods to back up the beginning. I'd hire me in a second 😉

I proofread as requested and did find a few items to discuss. I hope I used the tracking as you requested, that is a feature of Word I rarely use. If, in your experience, discussing the changes over the phone while we are both looking is a good idea, please call me at ANY time at 111-444-4444 and I will be ready right then.

Thank you again so much and I hope to hear from you soon.

Brandon M.

Hi Rosie,

Here is my file. I only made a few corrections and highlighted them in yellow as you did with address for one of my educational facilities.

It looks great and I am definitely anticipating that it will generate contacts.

Thank you,

Tammy L.

Hello Jane,

I have received the revised resume from Kelley. I think it is a superb job! Herewith a copy for you to mail to potential employers who need my profile.

Will buzz you tomorrow. Thanks for making me recognize the need for a professionally crafted resume!

Kindly forward bill for the service to my address on th resume.

Sincerely-
Thomas T.

Hi Chris,

I've conducted some small focus group activities on my resume with colleagues I greatly respect and trusted clients. This was an incredibly humbling activity to state the least. Attached is the updated document I'd like to use. I'm sending this to you so you can give it a final review and make recommendations as well. Other than the slugfest I endured over the past few weeks, this has been a very useful activity and I'm pleased with the services you provided.

I'm looking forward to wrapping up and engaging some recruiters.

Cheers!!

Greg S.

Hello Christine:

Thank you very much. For the first time I feel like honoring my CV. It is great.

There were some changes and I have placed them as comments for your review.

Please do let me know if I need to call to discuss this
further.

Thank you very much,

Siva M.

Donna,

Wow! It looks amazing! Thank you so much.

The missing information is:

1. I was a student assistant to James Haskins my entire senior year of undergrad, so the dates are about August 2001-May 2002

2. I was the Gatorade Player of the Year in 1998.

I can already tell I will feel much more confident about sending out my resume after this.

Thanks again,

Nicole H.

Hi Ilona,

I finally got round to filling in the blanks and making teh necessary changes. All changes are in blue.

You've done a great job...you make me look like a
superstar.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks.

Rhoda A.

Ilona,

It looks GREAT, as my wife put it This resume ROCKS"!!! Makes you look like a god, way better than the other resume. Just a few changes or comments:

Does the header need to be the same font type as the body?
In the footer Continued.. needs a third (.) period.
No changes to the Cover Letter, except to add my former supervisors titlewhich I already did on my copy. I did not know you can feature my Chiquita experience and just list the most previous jobs.

You cant believe how excited we are about the resume, it really pops. Once my wife finishes her degree (next year), I will make sure we contact you.

Thanks again,

Sincerely,

Kevin W.

Ilona

Wow! I think my resume looks great! I am very pleased. Attached is the file with answers to your questions/suggestions. Track changes is active so they are easily noted.

Thank You.

John A.

Rosie,

Thank you for the great job you did with my resume.

Attached please find some corrections for the next cut. I also looked closely for spelling or reference errors and could not find any.

Please call or EMAIL me with any questions.

Thanks.

Paul K.

Hi Rosie,

I thought the resume was very good and I have only made a few changes. Please understand it has been many years since I have written a resume, 20 plus, and understand any changes I made are just suggestions. Your experience is much greater than mine in this field so feel free to change any thing I have done.

Regards,

Tom H.

Donna,

Both of the documents look great. I made a few minor changes to them and have attached the updated docs.

Cynthia G.

Hi Donna,

This looks great!! I can totally picture myself saying these words, you really captured my thoughts and feedback! Thanks a million!

I hope this question doesn't offend you but is Denise Horton (the women who assigned you to me) your supervisor? If so, I'd like to email her and tell her what a great job you did. Or if there is someone else I can direct positive feedback to, I'd be more than happy to.

I really appreciate your help.

I don't think I need anything else. Just one question - I have a list of references - do you recommend sending that with my cover letter and resume?

I'm really happy! Please tell me what total you will be charging to my credit card so I can track my expenses. This was well worth the cost!

Thanks again,

Gina H.

Hi Donna,

Wowee! I really like it! I think it looks fantastic. To answer your questions - I did train 2 managers at XYZ Co. (actually they were Directors b/c they were my bosses) and CSU is located in Fort Collins, Colorado.

I think it looks great. I may have very minor tweaks after looking at it further and also I'd like to show it to my husband tonight too.

This looks great- thanks so much!! I look forward to seeing the cover letter soon.

Thanks for your work, I hope you can take a breather after my project!

Gina H.

Hi Christine,

Thank you - everything looks great. I can always remove the first paragraph of the cover letter if I choose to. I think we should leave everything the way it is for now.

I really appreciate your assistance and I'll let you know how the new documents work for me.

Warren G.

Thank you very much, Ilona.

I really appreciate your hard work. I've been stressing out about updating my resume for months, but you've made the process so easy. I'm positive I will be will blessed with a wonderful, high-paying job in the near future.

Sincerely,
Angelica W.

Hi Ilona,

You have done impressive work. Thanks for working very hard. It means a lot for me. Ilona, I have some suggestions and changes for you. Would it be possible to have interactive discussion, via phone, so that I can communicate effectively and will follow up with changes in the document.

Thanks,

Manmit S.

Peter

I just wanted to say thank you for your assistance and to recognize Kelley for her excellent writing skills. Taking four pages of data and condensing it into two pages of concise readable data is truly an art and Kelley is a great artist. The money was well spent.

Thanks,

Stuart F.

Hi Ilona,

I have my updates in bold Red. Overall, the resume looks Great!!!

Thanks,

Ash R.

Rosie,

Both the letter and the revised resume look great! I am able to convert the information to electronic format.

Your efforts are greatly appreciated.

Kathy R.

Rosie,

Thanks for all your help. I think you did a terrific job.

Take Care,

JoAnn H.

Hi Rosie,

Thanks for the resume. I really like it. I just did minor changes. Please
let me know what you think.

Maria J.

Hi Christine,

This looks great and I understand why you made the necessary changes and they are good calls.

Thank you,

YoGI

Hello Donna,

Wr-expert is spelled correctly.

I am very pleased with your work and appreciate
all your efforts.

Bob F.

Denise,

I want to tell you what a delight it has been to work with Jeanie Oscarson on the revision (no, the extreme makeover) of my resume and how happy I am with the final product. It couldn't have been an easy task for her -- if only because I fashion myself an editor, too, so no draft went unanswered or un-Ed-ited.

But Jeanie handled it all with expertise, style and speed as well as with what, at this end of the email at least, seemed a calm demeanor -- and I know I'm going back out with a much stronger document.

If the Big World of Amazing Jobs out there agrees and it works, you -- and Jeanie -- will both hear from me again, for sure.

Thanks.

Ed D.

Rosie,

I have proofread the resume and everything looks good. Thank you, I am very pleased on what you have created.

Thomas G.

Hi Ilona,

I guess no more changes are needed so we'll go with what we have. I'll tailor the Cover Letter to the job description. It looks really good and hopefully I'll get calls this time around.

I'm sending the files back to you one more time but it all looks good.

Thanks again. I'm not sure how you picked up on such great vocabulary to create a wonderful resume, but I guess we all have different strengths in life.

Best,

Ivana P.

Hi Ilona,

attached you will find the cover letter and the resume with some minor changes. My resume sounds and looks great! Thank you so much,
and I love the booklet with the tips for resume sending/follow up, etc.

If there's anything else you need, pleae let me know.

Regards,

Ivana P.

Dan,

This looks real nice. What can I say, you are a genius. In reviewing what you have written I have found a typo that I can repair myself. So what I have done to make it simple for you to follow is added a comment to the document and you can elaborate from there. If my assessment is correct I can make the changes. They would all be very minor and should not interfere with the flow of what you have written.

Regarding the cover letter, I have no specific ad. Id like to run with something I can make minor modifications too on the fly if that is possible.

Brian S.


Rosie,

WOW!!

You are oh so good! You make me sound just terrific. I am having surgery in one week, so I am cooking up a storm and trying to complete a couple of projects before I am sentenced to crutches for six weeks. I will review very carefully each sentence.

I won't get to read this until early next week. But I just want to thank you for making me sound so good. You are a real professional at this. I now realize that we all have skill sets and it is very wise to engage other people when the skill that is needed is not one I possess. You have a great weekend.

Thanks,
JoAnn H.

Christine,

I have attached few minor changes in the Cover Letter and the Resume. Overall, I must say now the resume looks really professional and I thank you for doing such an excellent job. If luck is in my path I am sure I will get a interview and then a good job which I am waiting for past 6 months. Keeping my fingers crossed.

Thank you once again.

Kaizad A.

Christine,

Will check any final detailed changes and revert, but on first read it looks pretty complete. I am very happy with the result and tested the response on a very good friend of mine who was the founder of Heidrick and Struggles in Asia. He confirmed the hugely improved impact over and above the old cv.

Best Regards

Graham B.

Ilona,

Thank you so very much you were terrific to work with and a great writer.

Rose Ann M.


Jeanie,

I am pleased with the result; the difference between this and my original is chalk and cheese. In fact I feel excited about hiring myself now! Not sure what happens next, but assume that you make a final check . Other than I should just get on and start using the new document!.

Will await your response and then close off with Peter.

Great Job!

Graham B.

Hi Jean,

WOW! What a change! Good job! I think you've got the broad picture and the salient points. Please take two steps back and see if there are any more changes you think, and also what's the title? "A rose by any other name would smell as sweet"

Barrie D.

Rosie,

I have reviewed my resume and everything looks great, there are some minor spelling issues, but overall I am very happy. I've shown my resume to
several recruiters and some friends looking for feedback. Most everyone agrees the resume looks very good. One suggestion was made that I add in
that Pax Machine is TS16949 registered. Before I add this I wanted to check with you to see where you thought it would be most appropriate.

Thanks,

Bryan P.

Happy Fourth of July Rosie!

I hope you are enjoying your holiday weekend. I am sorry about the delay, but I had an extremely busy and very unexpected week. I have made some
changes and suggestions on the document. It looks absolutely fabulous!!!!

Thank you so much for really finding the right words to fit my experience and my goals...

Cindy W.

You are a GODDESS! A well spent investment in my career, Jeanie! Great letter!

The rez looks fantastic, too. I have questions regarding customizing it per opportunity - no revisions necessary from you - just some directions on how to best use the weapons you've supplied!

When is a good time to reach you by phone and what number should I call?

Looking forward to speaking with you later today!

Karen F.

Peter,

I still owe you a testimonial, but how in the world do I explain this...after I told NEC that I was leaving, another NEC company, NEC Electronics America, Inc. made me their General Counsel, and now I'm getting ready to move to California!

Your service put in motion a series of events that I could never have predicted would happen. Thanks for making me go for it!

Peter W.

Christine,

Wow! This looks great. There are only a few minor things that I found. I can just deal with them myself if thats OK.

I apologize for getting back to you so late. I was out on vacation.

Darren F.

Ilona,

Thank you so much for all your hard work, support and encouragement. Thru your work you have restored my confidence that I can do a good job when in the right place. I have never encountered these kinds of people before and hope I never do again. Yet, it was a learning experience to say the least. Ill keep you informed when I have landed my next job.

Rose Ann and have a great vacation.

Donna,

Well it finally happened. I interviewed yesterday and got an offer today. The recruiter did not even want to meet with me prior to the interview with the company because my (your) resume was brilliant.

I've said it before, but you really are the best. Thanks,

Peter W.

Good morning Rosie,

Thanks for your resending my resume and cover letter. I reviewed them both and they appear to be excellent!

I spoke with Mr. Peter Newfield yesterday about continuing working with your organization using your e-mail distribution capabilities. One question that came to mind in reviewing the latest revision is the introductory sentence of the cover letter. Peter briefly mentioned that the introductory sentence would change depending on the recipient. Would the introductory sentence be changed to the appropriate language in the distribution campaign?

Other wise, I think that were good-to-go. Peter said that you would not prepare the text copy until we were satisfied with all the documents. Pending the above question, I expect that you will be sending the text copy to me today?

Please let me know your thoughts on the above question.

Thanks for your time and patients in this matter. Your work is out-standing and believe that these documents will help open the doors of opportunity in my job search.

Sincerely,

Saville S.

Dear Donna,

Once again, thank you! You are a great writer.

Tom W.


Ilona-

This looks great. I can't find anything else that needs to be changed.

Jackie G.

Donna,

I actually I have very little feedback to give as you have done an excellent job in capturing my qualifications and achievements. I would like to submit to you a piece of information that was in my personnel file that might be / could be listed on the resume (I am just not sure where or if it needs to be).

Other than that, I would like to finish up the final draft in time for the weekend/Sunday job postings, so can you let me know by the end of the business day on Friday (24th )if that is going to be possible. Thanks.

Regards,

Doug L.

Ilona:

Thanks for the quick turn around. You are a doll! I wasn't sure if chopping up the resume bothered HR people. I am not up in resume etiquette. Whatever you think, I will do, since you are my expert!

Stephen W.

Donna,

I am impressed with what you put together. I think what you came up with conveys a better picture of my skills and abilities and should grab the attention of prospective employers.

I have made some comments and edits in the resume using track changes. Please let me know what you think.

Best Regards,

Ed H.

Peter,

Jeanie has done an outstanding job with my resumeI am extremely pleased with her work. I am having her do a cover letter for me as well, so within the next few days I should be ready to go. I would really be interested in learning more about the other services that you offer for getting my resume in front of the right people. Bounce back with your thoughts on next steps.

Thanks,

Kevin W.

Dear Rosie,

Thanks for getting back to me promptly with the resume. It looks good.

Tell me more about converting the documents to electronic format for the Internet. I don't understand.

Thanks.

Dave G.

Rosie,

By the way, the resume looks great. It is exactly what I was looking for.

I feel like I certainly received value for the money.

Thank you

Ross C.

Hi Donna,

Thanks so much for my resume. I will be proofing it tonight and tomorrow. So far, I think it looks great!

I will email you soon with any changes on either document.

Thanks again,

Julie E.

Kelley,

I just got done talking with Jane Quick, and I shared with her how pleased I am with the final resume that you created. This represents me very well and I feel proud to use this - it's absolutely what I needed.

You were quick and accurate, and I do appreciate that. I can't believe how you could take so much information and narrow it down to the truly powerful and important description that you developed.

Thanks again!

Linda E.

Donna,

Your letter was perfect as written.

The resume needed a couple of reorganizations to be correct. It was easiest to delete and etc. in order to keep each word in the 2 pages.

Now, that was a real problem!!

This resume is great---I never would have described myself this way!

Patricia K.

Ilona,

I just wanted to thank you for the EXTREME MAKEOVER that you gave my resume!!!!!!!

The minute I posted your resume, the calls just began pouring in like crazy. I could tell when I read the verbiage on the resume that it was going to be effective, but I had no idea it would be this soon that I would begin seeing results! It was only 2 weeks ago when you did my resume and I have already interviewed with SEVERAL Fortune 500 companies including CNN, Georgia-Pacific, and Beazer Homes.

I was extended an offer from Georgia-Pacific for a position as Executive Assistant to the Vice President of Human Resources, starting at $51k...almost a $10,000 increase from the pay at my previous employer! I have accepted the offer, but I still have hiring decisions pending for CNN and Beazer Homes! Every since you did my resume, I have been having an interview everyday! You are "the BOMB", (for lack of a better choice of words)!!! You are truly knowledgeable about the Executive Support industry and it shows through your articulate usage of industry buzz words and carefully selected verbiage. This was truly the best $xxx I have ever spent!

Sincerely,

Bridgett B.

Dan -

I am extremely pleased with the revisions you have made. The draft you did comes much closer to what I would expect it to be. I have reviewed the draft and made some notations in blue. I addition I have filled out the client form and hopefully offered some additional detail that will make the resume even better. Please review and let me know if you need further clarifications via email or a discussion. Thank you for your excellent work on the draft.

Alison S.

Hi IIona-

The resume looks great! You have done a good job and I have enjoyed working with you. So wish me luck... maybe we'll have an opportunity to work together again in the future.

Also, I'm assuming the ASCII will arrive soon?

Thanks for all of your help!

Jeanette H.

Thanks Christine.

The resume looks amazing and thank you for all your help.

Kathleen K.

Denise,

Thank you for your help. From this point, its really just a couple of semantic issues (eg. its HIPAA not HIPPA), and I've already changed them. The cover letter and resume are great and I couldn't be happier. On a final note, As of the end of last week, I was offered and have already accepted a V.P. position with Smith-Nephew Orthopedics.

Take care,
Mary McC.

Jane,

I received it today. Proof reading right now.

Looks great so far. Excellent job by Rosie. Exactly what I was looking for.

Ross J.

Dear Jane,

It is nice to hear from you and thank you for following up. I am currently in London on an assignment (consulting) for three months. (June, July, August) This assignment is a direct result of the emails (cover / resume) that I sent out from Malta.

Please give my regards to Peter and let him know it worked great ... "GREAT JOB TO THE TEAM"

Yes, I am still very interested in doing the mail out / posting in the US market .. however I am somewhat delayed in coming back to NY until September time frame .. I think we could be targetting either July or should we wait until September ? perhaps September would be better as I would be there to follow-up / be available for the interviews.

Kindest regards,

Zoltan C.

Hi Rosie,

My dad had previously opened this file and has been handling my e-mail while I was hospitalized. I will not be able to start working anywhere until the 23rd
of June and am going to Florida on the 11th to recuperate with friends.

I will review the resume and get back to you within the next couple days. Glancing through it though it looks fantastic. Thanks so much. Be back to you in the next couple days.

Mary W.

Rosie,

Thanks for your efforts, I've made a few suggested edits to the document. The biggest issue concerns the population that I serve. My formal job appointment is to run the Okeechobee County Health Department serving a population of around 40,000 in the Summer and up to 100,000 in the Winter season.

I am also appointed, as is reflected in the resume to act as co-chair for the health and medical functions of the regional domestic security task force which serves a population of over 3,000,000.

Otherwise, it looks great. I bow to your wisdom on any of the above...I want this to sell me, but don't want to over-state anything to the point that it might be challenged.

Regards,

Michael H.

Dear Ilona,

I reviewed the resume and made some adjustments highlighted in yellow (the track changes for some reason didn't work), but it looks good otherwise. I have to admit I thought it was going to be longer, I guess for all the material I provided you had a lot to work with, but I am not disappointed, not at all! Actually, at this point, write also the other resume` focusing on my pr/hospitality/restaurant skills. Since you have the credit card on file, just go ahead and kill my budget!!

Thank you,

Ombretta DiM.

Donna,

I started my new job this Tuesday and have been very busy. I printed the resume and looked it over. It looks great! I appreciate your efforts and just wanted to say thanks.

Bob N.

Ilona,

You are GOOD! Thank you so much for your hard work on this project and patience. I will review and send the necessary responses that you request.

Rose Ann M.

Rosie,

Thank you the resume is great, You did a wonderful job. It will get the job done. Thanks again.

Vic T.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you very much. I read the resume quickly and liked what I saw. I will definitely proofread the resume carefully and return it to you, probably sometime next week. I will talk with you soon.

Regards,

John H.

Thanks, Ilona.

This looks great!

I'm going to start posting this to the online job boards IMMEDIATELY!

Bridgett B.

Donna,

I just wanted to drop you this tremendous note of THANKS! I faxed (imagine without fancy letterhead) 4 resumes to advertised positions in my
newspaper today at 9am......... At 1:00 pm I recieved a cell phone call from a title agency that was impressed with my resume, credentials and business experience. I have an interview tomorrow with the manager who is looking for a person with my qualifications and enthusiasm. I appreciate your professional attention to the details of my resume and also your helpful insights as to projecting myself with confidence regarding my education and past business skills.

The cover letter was excellent and most definately got the attention of the manager to further review my resume.

THANK YOU.

Sincerely,

Cindy A.

Rosie,

I am very impressed after the first read through, Thank You! I will take a day or two to analyze, proofread the document and get back to you.

Thanks Again,

Jim R.

Rosie:

I think you did an exceptional job.

Thanks for everything. I greatly appreciate your time and effort.

Thanks again,

Pat A.

Jeanie,

Looks great! Wow!!! I have made some minor edits/additions.

What about the "2 page rule"?

Derrick V.

Hi Ilona,

The resume looks fine. Tthanks you did a great job. If
you have any other advise that would also be helpful,
I have applied and followed up on many jobs and not
even a call....I am seeking a position out of state..if
you have any thoughts to speed up this process that
would be wonderful..

Thank you again.

April S.


Rosie,

Thank you for getting this out this morning and sorry for the heated e-mail. I have made some minor changes but the overall package looks excellent. I believe your work will prove to be a valuable investment in my job search.

Thank you,

Scott S.

Ilona,

You did a terrific job, especially since these fields
are highly specialized and probably somewhat
unfamiliar to you. I was wondering why you did not include my hours at Memphis State - I went ahead and added them back in unless you think I shouldn't.

Thanks,

Anne M.

Ilona,

You've done an outstanding job! I might add you're pretty smart too! So now I need to pay you the remaining balance for your work. Just send me what I need to fill out.

Thanks,

Tom C.

Ilona,

I need a huge favor...I need a copy of my receipt for all of the services that Career Resumes charged me. Thank you...I love the resume - what a difference.

Take Care.

Gayle L.

Donna,

Again, the resume is AWESOME. I have attached my corrected copy. The only correction was under SystemOne, (I was employee of the month four times).

I can't thank you enough for the great job you've done on my behalf.

Steve C.

Hello Ilona:

My revisions are attached. You did an excellent job of pulling everything together for which I am very appreciative. I am very excited to say the least and look forward to receiving the revisions from you.

Warmest Regards,
Karen K.

Hi Ilona,

The resume and cover letter are fabulous. Thank you. I took a little longer than expected to review and
re-review the documents. I only have a few questions / comments that I have marked on each document. Do let me know if any of my markings are unclear.

Thanks

Jay N.

Thanks Ilona.

The resume and cover letter both look great. As suggested by you I am going to go thru' them a few times (and sleep over it for one night) to make sure I provide all my feedback in one go.

You can expect to hear back from me by tomorrow
evening PST (after I get back from work).

Once again, Thanks for efforts

Jaideep N.

Peter,

Thanks for your support and passing the message to Jeanie .. The attached resume V2 really came together. She did an excellent job. I believe it will be a WINNER, (needs just minor clean-up). If you are happy with it than I am also and lets start the next phase.

I await your response, comments, and suggestions.

Kindest regards,

Zoltan C.

Christine,

The resume and cover letter both look great. I have no changes whatsoever, and I believe it is much better than what I had. I can't wait to start
testing it to see what kind of reception I get.

Thanks,

Emerich E.

Hello Jane,

Thank you for the info. It is good to know that if I need any additional assistance in my job search, you are willing to help.

I loved my new resume and cover letter Ilona prepared for me. This girl has got some goooooooooood skills!!!

Thank you once again for your assistance, Jane. It was a pleasure to work with both you and Ilona.

If I have any questions or concerns, or if I need any other services from you, I will let you know.

Regards,

Anna C.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you for my documents. I really liked what saw, reaaaaaaaaaly. I am going to work on the final changes tomorrow and as soon as I am done, I will let you know.

Regards,

Anna C.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you for all your hard work. I am pleased with the result. I have attached the first proof of my resume with some corrections/questions highlighted in red. Please review. Additionally, I am also very pleased with the cover letter. I ask, if possible, for you to write an ending statement for a situation where I am applying for a position online and may not have the information to contact a hiring manager directly - I guess a more general closing statement would be appropriate.

Thank you for you attention to these matters, and I look forward to hearing back. Let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Regards,

Ryan B.

Kelley,

This looks pretty good to me. I'd say let's go with it. Thank you very much for your quick turnaround. This resume certainly looks and flows better than what I've done and other "so-called pros" have prepared.

Hopefully, I can send some business your way.

Regards,

Jim B.

Ilona

First of all, wow! I think I gained at least 2 inches in height after reading this. Talk about standing proud. Thank you for being so thorough, it really is excellent. That means I'm nearing 6'4" and towering over people... as if I didn't have enough of a presence.

Greg D.

Dan:

The meeting went very well. Thank you for your support.

I guess he was more prepared than I was and offered a spot for me by addressing the reservations that I had.

So, THANK YOU again for the way you shaped my bio.

Regards

Padma N.

Thanks Dan,

I appreciate your help. The resume looks great, I've been getting some really great feedback from friends and colleagues. I've been telling everyone to call you guys. I'm sure I will get interviews once I start sending it out.

Thanks again,

Ollie P.

Ilona,

I have proof read the resume and cover letters, and will fax you some slight changes tomorrow. They look great!

Thanks!

Cynthia H.

Hi Christine,

What a nice job! Thank you for all this.

Michael R.

Ilona,

Your efforts have produced an excellent resume.

I've answered your questions, added a few points and made some factual corrections using red type. The factual corrections were needed due to
information I sent to you which was inaccurate.

Again, The resume is excellent. Transitioning into medical sale will be difficult but I'm going to give it a try before accepting a position in printing.

If I were to request a cover letter, how long would it take you to prepare it?

Thank you,

John R.

Peter:

I am delighted with the work Kelley Smith has done; I hope it works.

On the strength of her work how do I use you resume distribution service.

Thanks

Andrew F.

Jeanie-

Thank you very much. I am very happy with the end result. The true test will come in the upcoming months as I focus on the career search. Once again, thanks for our patience and understanding over the last few weeks. I appreciate your efforts.

Best of luck!

Nancy C.

Hi Ilona,

Just wanted to let you know they were very impressed with my resume! In fact, they've already asked me back for a 2nd interview! Thanks again for the great job.

Carol G.

Hi Jane,

This is just a note to tell you that Im thrilled with Ilonas draft of my resume. I think it will need just a bit of tinkering and then be good to go.

Thanks.

Susan T.

Peter,

I can't thank you enough for assigning Ilona as my writer. She's done a wonderful job and has been very easy to work with. This entire resume building process has been exceptional. Filling out the questionnaire forced me to examine what I've done over the yearsand boosted my self-esteem in the process. I'm in a much better place now and I have you to thank.

I know a good job is on the horizon for me. Thank you for helping me see the light at the end of the tunnel.

Carol G.

Jeanie,

I can't tell you how pleased I am with the outcome of this document.

I have made only a few changes and added the information you were asking to fill in.

Keith B.

Hi Ilona,

I reviewed the resume proof and have made changes/corrections using the Track Changes tool. As for my HR background, early in my career at Covance

My first reaction when I read it, was "Wow! I'd hire me!!" Great job on capturing my experience in a very positive way.

Carol G.

Thanks Ilona.

You did a FANTASTIC job and Ive already recommended Career Resumes (and YOU) to a colleague of mine.

Mary B.

Hi Ilona,

I wanted to let you know that the resume looks great! I have a few changes, but probably won't be able to get everything written up for you until this weekend. You should have my changes by Monday.

Mary B.

Peter

I think Jeanie has done a great job with the resume. Please give me a call and we can talk about the additional services you offer.

Thanks,

Brett G.

Ilona,

The first draft needs minor revisions. I need to review tomorrow with fresh eyes. I'm impressed!

Thanks,

Pat C.

Hi Rosie,

A fantastic job. I never knew I had really accomplished so much. It shows what attitude and an independent view can do.

I've made some changes and highlighted them in yellow as you indicated. I went through all my projects and put them in an excel file to get
values. I was shocked at the value, even when I went through to avoid duplication.

I've sent back the resume'. It looks great. I've done a lot of work through the years. 667 million less 325 million which was an estimate for Lockheed Martin facilities here still leaves 342 million dollars. Take inflation rates that vary from 1974 projects to 2005
projects and you are still left with an amazing figure of 750 million dollars of value in projects. enough of this, but I am very impressed with the resume so far.

It's uibelievable! I never would have totaled them if
the resume' you typed hadn't brought it to my attention.

Thanks,

Craig

Hi Rosie.

Wow - what a difference! I was pretty happy with what I'd done until I saw your work - thank you!

Thanks again for your hard work. I look forward to seeing the final draft soon. Please don't hesitate to email or call if you need additional feedback from me.

Have a nice weekend,

Dan

Dear Ilona'

This looks great!!

Please find enclosed the corrections. FYI, under the resume portion, I made a correction to 'actors'. This is ok, but I didn't have the time to try to figure out how to undo this:

(Types of flights ranged from road shows to rock tours and prominent actors.)

Thanks again for your help, and it would be great to finalize this by tomorrow.

Regards,

Robert F.

Ilona,

Um, all I can say is WOW money well spent!

Ive made a few minor tweaks to the file, but I would call what you sent me final.

Thanks a million it looks great!

Regards,

Steve W.

Hi Denise,

I must first say that my resum and cover letter look outstanding! I am very happy with the outcome of both documents than Dan Dorotik produced.

Now, I am interested in hearing about other services offered as you hinted to in your email, about getting
the exposure I need to move up and out of my current position. Please feel free to contact me with the details at you earliest convienience.

Edward H.

Hi Ilona,

I have taken a little time in reviewing the final resume and I am very happy with the results. I appreciate the professionalism you have brought to the presentation on my somewhat complex career.

Sincerely,

Ed B.


Jeanie,

You did a nice job. I don't know how you guys do it, but it was pretty good.

Thanks,

Jim C.

Hi Illona:

I don't know whether to compliment or complain. For
the past two months I have been cranking out your
cover letter and two page resume' (yes you are right
2 pages is fine), to Monster.com and other web job
sites, and recieving no response. However, I knew I
had a great cover letter and resume, and said to
myself, it's all going to happen at once.

Sure as heck, I got at least 12 phone calls this week, 4 were inquiry's, 3 were interviews that I declined, and I now have 5 interviews scheulded between this week and next. In fact, one was so important that a regional manager had the district manager meet me in the Brooklyn Home Depot where I was working at, and I had my interview in my work clothes, a bit bizzare, because he lives in astoria queens and a long way to drive . But I think they want me pretty bad and were taking no chances.

Will keep you informed. Hope you enjoyed your holiday.

Thank you,

Frank W.

Hi Jane!

Received your e-mail this morning. I've left you a phone message, however I do have one question: is there a difference using your resume distribution service vs "the other guys" (ie Monster.com, careerbuilder.com...etc)?

By the way - Laura did a fantastic job on my resume and cover letter. When I saw the first draft the first thing I said was "WOW!" I've made only minor changes.

Thanks so much for your help!!

Marlene R.

Jane,

I wanted to let you know that Laura done a wonderful job with my resume. I start my new job this Monday.

Thanks,

Ken G.

Hi Rosie,

I received the text version and I just wanted to thank you for your time and patience. The resume is fantastic !! How you turned a simple list of past employment into a work of art, I will never know.

Thanks again.

Sincerely David R.

Donna,

I never did thank you for the work you did on the resume and the cover letter. You are very good and very patient. Thanks very much.

Donald T.

Hi Ilona,

I have reviewed and made some minor changes to my new resume (see attached). I am very happy with the results and quality of your work. I think my resume now reflects the scope and depth of my career. My career has always seemed too complex and I think you have done a wonderful job of making it into a cohesive presentation. It is so good not to see the word I everywhere.

Edward B.

Jane,

The cover letter Jeanie prepared looks great, I have made a change in the second paragraph and have underlined. If this change is Ok, go ahead; if not please modify.

Many thanks to you and Jeanie for the talent and professional approach that has been applied to both CV and cover letter.

Don W.

Ilona,

Looks great. Heck, I'm impressed with myself (ha, ha). I made a few changes to the resume that are notated in plum. I added am additional comment from this years appraisal. I'll let you determine if it is necessary or not. I did not make any changes to the cover letter.

Thanks-
Marcie C.

Ilona,

OK. You did a terrifc job...you are a real pro! I felt like I should learn to walk on water!

Vincent DeF.

Hello Ilona,

I have made a few changes to the rough draft of my resume. The changes are highlighted in red. Thank you for your reply to my email on February 2.

Thank you and Career Resumes for your assistance in my career change.

Sincerely,

Gwen S.

Dan,

WOW! I know writing these for a living is what you do but I had no idea it would look so good! I noticed Minacs was miss spelled. That's all I can
see.

Do I need to just let you know to write a cover letter or contact Mrs. Horton? I am very impressed and would like the cover letter as well.

Thanks!

Ed H.

Christine,

Attached is the resume with my edits. I think you did a terrific job with the resume and I like the format very much. I will follow up with you later this week regarding the cover letter.

Thanks,

Maura H.

Christine,

You really do AMAZING work. I will look it over and let you know if there is anything else.

Thank you,

Matt W.

Denise,

Just reviewed a first draft of Jeanie's work on my resume. I wanted to let you know what an outstanding job she did. There is no doubt I will be referring others to you.

Marc K,

Hi Peter

Several months ago I contracted with your firm to revise my resume. Donna Allen took the ball and ran with it, and did an incredible job. Her work helped me to land an interview with a top-tier firm and they just offered me a Director-level position. And for those people who are curious about the cost-benefit analysis on your services the salary increase alone (not including bonus, etc.) is 40% greater than what Im taking home right now.

You guys really know your industry, and Donna did a great job on my resume. Thanks again!

Andrew O.

Dear Donna,

While the Lincoln Center gig apparently did not work out, I wanted to write to you in any case, just to say how much I appreciate everything you did in getting my resume and cover letter in tip-top shape.

After having used another service just in the past two years, your insight and laser-precision use of the language and ability to make sense of my diverse background stands miles above the others.

After hooking up with you, I feel confident I've seen how the best of the best works! Thanks again for all of your input.

Happy Holidays,

Peter W.

Donna,

Thank you for your hard work. Please remember, I never intended for you to see those worksheets, they were the product of some very early mornings (we have four children 6 & under so no other time). After I spoke to you, I was too anxious to re-work the word.doc. So I give you an A+.

Mike H.

Peter,

I received my resume from Ilona a few days ago and just had the opportunity to review it this evening. It is INCREDIBLE. She did a wonderful job.

Thank you for matching us up. Thank you for offering the free consultation - that led me to trying out your services.

Thank you! I look fabulous on paper. I definitely will get interviews with this resume.

Happy holidays!

Alice S.

Hello Ilona,

Thank you very much, with a little tweaking it will the finest resume out there!!! Great work, I will get you the updates you need.

Have a great weekend,

Richard C.

Hi Jeanie,

You may not immediately remeber me but you did some excellent work on my rsum earlier this year.

I just wanted to let you know that your work helped me a great deal and that I got the job I wanted!

Kind regards and a Merry Christmas!

Joost W.

Peter:

I'd like to thank you and Jean Oscarson for creating an outstanding resume for me. After a single offering of my new resume I was offered the type of position I was seeking.

Roger G.

Hello Jeanie and Denise,

RE The Resulting Doc and Your Firm (Denise) was right. Jeanie is/was able to do *everything* needed to get my resume to be a (much, much, much) better marketing document; something I knew I needed during my conversation with Denise. In fact, I found, and find, myself thinking every time I read my own resume that if I could just write that well, that is EXACTLY what I would want to convey about what happened and what it means to the person reading the resume. Plus 'less-than-strong' areas look a lot better. And the points being brought out now emphasize and present what needs to be brought out (ie, as a marketing doc to get the meeting and cut through the clutter) - I recognize this because I often am in the position of plowing through piles of resumes as the person needing to hire someone.

It would be a pleasure to be a reference (!) and I will pass on your firm and services to others who need it.

Thanks very much so far...

Best regards,

Kirk D.

Dan,

Wowza. It looks fantastic. I actually like the format you have, sort of a hybrid between straight reverse-chronological and cross-pollinated with functional specialization.

If we expand the summary, will it be too wordy and thus too lenghty for the reader to plow through?

Sandy M.

Donna,

I wanted to drop you a quick note to say THANK YOU for your help. I just got the first "hit" on my new resume, within 24 hours of sending out. I
can't say that's ever happened before. Thanks!

Andrew O.

Ilona,

Hi there,

I'm very pleased with this draft.....as many asked before me, is that really me??? I like the info, format, font, and excerpt. I've reviewed and
adjusted as much as I can. See attached....let me know if you can ascertain correctly. Also, see below in caps for answers to your questions.

Thanks,
Meloney S.

Rosie,

I want to thank you for the wonderful finished resume I received from you after final editing. I am very impressed with end product and look forward to it achieving its desired result.

I am interested in a better method of distribution. Peter mentioned this in an earlier email as well. I was wondering if you might forward this email with a request that Peter contact me so options can be developed.

Thanks and once again, thank you for developing a wonderful resume.

William M. (Mark) F.

Jeanie:

As I always say good is good and then there's excellent and that your skills truly are. It looks great to me. I'll have Mark Cooper review our final product.

Again I thank you for your effort and time I will be referring you consistently in the future when I return to the work force.

Sincerely,

John F.

Hi Ilona,

I've looked it over and you have done a fantastic job on it. Thank you so much for taking the time in creating such a wonderful resume...it truly reflects who I am. Now there are a couple of minor changes to the resume, but you'll be able to see them through the track changes. The attachment is presented for you to do the minor corrections. I look forward to seeing the final draft again thank you for your service. Take care.

Sincerely,

Jackie C.

Hi Donna--

I received everything and am reviewing it all. I will circle back to you by end of day Friday to give you my edits. My first impression is oh my god!

Many Thanks.

Donna L.

Hi Ilona,

I made a minor change myself but do not worry. It was exellent job. Everyone I showed this was so impressed with the job. It presicely discribes me.....

I want to say many thank you's. At first i was scared because it is not easy to dish out 500 plus dollars in a two page paper, but it was all woth it...can i ask you a question, do you think I should be looking for a job now or wait until Thankgiving is over? Or does it really matter....

Anyway you are verrrrryyyyy gifted individual and may the good lord keep safe.....

Have a great holiday.

Thank you,

Christine S.

Hi Ilona,

Sorry it's taken me sometime to persue everything and get back to you. I feel really good about the revamp you did for my resume. I felt like I was in that
awkward place between right our of school/entry level and growing professional and think you did good with the look and feel of both the resume and cover letter to portray a more sophisticated professional.

Claudia C.

Hi Ilona,

I appreciate the effort that you have put in to write a resume for me.

Thank you for your support.

As pleased as I am with the resume, I would like your services for a cover letter as well.

Regards,

Robert C.

Ilona:

Thank you for the draft resume. I am pleased with the creative style used in capturing my professional life. Truly, you are a gifted writer.

I have proof-read the resume and all is in order except for: the word "claims and made". The word is "claims-made" policies.

You are correct, I am not interested in storage of the document. I Look forward to receipt of the finalized version of the resume.

Thanks,

Martin M.

Peter,

I wanted to tell you what a great job Kelley Smith did on rewriting my resume. It might be worth giving you a bit of history as to how I reached the point of looking for help on my resume.

I decided to search Google one day for resume writing services and came across Career-Resumes.com. I submitted my resume and was called the next day by Jane Quick to give me a critique of my current resume as well as a quote to reconstruct my resume. I have to tell you that while I was impressed with Jane, the quote seemed like it was a lot to pay for a service that on the surface might or might not be beneficial to my job search.

I can tell you that Kelley did a great job and in the end I feel as if the value I received was far greater than what I paid (but please dont take that as an approval to bill me more!). I have already gotten very positive comments from a couple of recruiters and other professionals that I have shared my resume with. I had never gotten comments before except for asking why I changed jobs so frequently during a short period.

I would recommend this service to anyone I know who is trying to market themselves for other employment opportunities and I would especially recommend Kelley. She really took my thoughts and articulated them much better than I could have imagined.

I just thought you would want to know when someone in your organization does an outstanding job.

Patrick M.


Peter,

I have reduced my concerns to a single complaint: I am not a good one to toot my own horn. Try resolving this when I tell you that I own two
pipe organs, probably over 1,000 horns!

The cover letter and resume done by Sherri Morgan seem powerful. They capture my achievements and do so without exaggeration. I can identify my current and past efforts in the documents. So, well done.

I passed some minor suggestions back to Sherri and I would like to move forward.

One item we spoke of was a bio for obtaining director positions. I would like to explore others.

Craig S.

Peter,

Jeanie did a great job!

Id like to take you up on resume storage and a cover letter please.

How shall we precede?

Jason S.

Hi Christine

Thought I would end your week on a happy note! I just did the email campaign and web posting with Yaron and he is very very happy with his resume and the service we have provided. He said he is referring some of his senior colleagues to me to have their resume done. I will send them your way if they do buy!

Have a great weekend!

Jane Q.

Ilona,

I have read and proof read both attached documents. You have done an outstanding job and I am extremely pleased. There are a few changes such as changing the font to Garamond, centering my name and information at the top of the page and I am requesting that the line under my name for all pages be removed. All changes and questions noted have been highlighted and answered. Please let me know if there are any questions or you need further assistance.

Again, thanks so much!

Sandy M.R.

Hi, Ilona,

I've given the resume you've sent a cursory review,
and will be sending you changes. I think it's much
better than my old version, so thank you for that!

David A.

Jeanie,

This resume looks great.

I have made some minor changes. I numbered the top list indicating my order of preference for those catch phrases, I do not want them numbered. My number is a suggestion and if you have any thoughts please incorporate yours. You are the expert here. I have made a few suggestions but if you don't agree, then go with your thoughts.

At this point I do not need a cover letter. Actually I need information on services and costs that the company provides after the resume is complete. I did speak with Peter some time ago about these but have since forgot most of that conversation. If you do not have that information then please let me know who does. I appreciate the help.

Michael R.

Jeanie,

I made a few changes but make sure you got them and we are good to go.

Thanks for the help. Great work!

Sincerely,

Dave G.


Hi Ilona,

I finally had my interview with F. Lee Bailey. The feedback was quite favorable. Mr. Bailey was impressed with the resume. I have to take a test
after an online course. I have begun and it is going well. If I do well on the remainder of the testing I will have a second and final interview.

In the meantime I had another interview with a financial services company and am pretty certain I will be offered a position tomorrow, with the
understanding that if the VP position with Bailey becomes a reality, taking the position will be fine with the other company.

Thanks again for a wonderful job.

Clearly your efforts were a good investment in my future. I will be happy to write a testimonial if it would be of help.

Sincerely,

Dan G.

Good Afternoon Ilona;

My apologies for the delay in getting this back to you. It seems that I went to bed last night and when I woke up this morning, half the year had gone by.

Anyhow, I have attached my resume and have notated comments on the document itself. It looks really good, I will have to hire myself! Thank you.

There were also several questions that you had asked me about in your initial email. I have responded to them within your email that I have attached below.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.

The cover letter looks great!

Thank you again for all your help!

Could you provide me with a current price listing of the other services you offer?

Thanks,

Jeff D.

Denise,

Kelley Smith completed my resume and I really like the job that she did. You mentioned that you might be able to assist with next steps in a career
search. Would you be available to discuss this with me sometime on Tuesday, next week?

Let me know. I attached my new resume, just in case you had not seen it yet.

Best regards,

Ted D.

Hi, Ilona.

Got the resume, but my internet server was down yesterday. Thank you for
all of your hard work. ...... ........

I have enjoyed working with you!

Mary L.

Ilona,

First, thank you for doing such a great job.

As I read over what you've prepared, I realize that I wouldn't have been able to do this on my own. I've made notes onto the document itself. As well I've made some notes for clarification.

Tracy H.

Hi Ilona,

I have reviewed the resume and cover letter and they are great. I have made suggested changes in red and in green are statements that I am not 100% sold on.

Thanks again, you are a wonderful writer.

I will call you at 8:00 am my time and11:00 am your time to review.

Shelly D.

Thanks Rosie,

The resume looks great. It is exciting to see all of
my experience and qualifications presented in such a striking and attractive package.

Steve G.

Dear Donna -

I can't thank you enough for your input and regardless of how this opportunity works out, I will always appreciate your kindness and support.

Warmest Regards,

Peter W.

Hi Jane,

I was very happy with the resume Donna Allen put together for me. She didn't have much to work with and ended up doing a great job.

I'm writing you today because I would like to have Career Resumes provide me with a cover letter and then, in the future, possibly take advantage of the other resources you offer.

Please feel free to contact me.

Thank you.

Patty K.

Ilona,

You've done a great job on my resume.

Here are my corrections and edit. I hope I didn't make a mess of the document.

Also, I am going to Japan on Nov. 4th for two weeks. I
will be back on the 17th. I'm not sure what are time
frame is but I don't imagine I'll have any thing to
add after this go through. But let me know what the
next step is.

Thanks H.

Tracy

Hi, Ilona.

I received the resume this morning. I have read it and really like the format. I appreciate all of your hard work.

Mary H.

Ilona,

Thanks for all your help - and the encouragement. I'm really glad I got a hold of you - you've given me a great starting point! Thanks again,

Jason W.

Ilona,

Ive taken a quick look at the documents and they look really good. Ive answered some of your questions in the body of the resume and asked a couple of questions as well. I thought that I had done a pretty good job writing my own resume but what youve done is 100 times better. I guess thats why you do it for a living!

Thanks,

Rick A.

Hi

Jeanie did a fine job on my CV and it certainly looks
a lot better now. Thank you for your assistance.

Best regards,
Erik K.

Ilona,

Thanks for resume. I really like it. I made a couple small changes and tracked them. Please take a look and see that you think they make sense. ...........
Generally, I am really happy with it. Thanks again. ...........

Joe L.

Hi Peter,

The resume that Dan wrote worked. I posted it on Dice on Monday night and Tuesday morning received a call from a consultant firm. they hired me for a long term project, at higher then my normal billable rate, plus expenses. I could not believe that the resume worked in less then 12 hours. I am recommending you all around, so I expect you will be getting some calls.

Thank you,

Chris Howell

Ilona,

You did a great job-thanks! I feel much better about myself. I made some changes in a couple of lines. I moved one line from E.F. Mahon up to Motophoto. My rambling on the phone must have been confusing. I answered the questions. Most of the changes are highlighted or have strikethrough. This is a huge relief.

Thank you so much for your help. I look forward to
seeing the final.

Get some rest!!!

Dan G.

Hi Dan,

I am not sure if you received this when I sent it to you on Oct 8. Anyway, could you please make these changes and forward the changed resume to me. I made the changes on my copy. I then posted it on Dice and the next day I landed a long term contract for big money. The recruiter for the consulting company that hired me said that this is the easiest, most professional resume he has ever seen.

Thank you,

Chris H.

Dear Ilona:

After carefully reading my new and improved resume, I feel that it was written very professional and at the same time, captures my work expereince
beautifully.

I want to thank you for all your help in this process.

Thanks for eveything and I will keep you in my address book for future
recomendations and writting services.

Sincerely,

Manuel M.

Good Morning Ilona,

Everything looks great! I have one question; I have
always heard that your resume should be one page is there any truth to that?

Other than that I am very happy with the resume. Thank you again it has been great working with you.

Rgrds,

Steve M.

Denise,

Jeanie and I have pretty much finished the resume, it looks about 100 times better than my original. I was curious about what types of resume distribution services you offer that you mentioned in your earlier email.

I would like to know more about this service.

Please either call me or email me with some specifics on this.

Thanks in advance for your help.

John M.

Thank you Ilona.

It looks great. I made the changes they are high lighted in red. I look forward to seeing the final resume.

Thanks again,

Steve M.

Ilona,

It looks wonderful. You did a fantastic job.

Thank you very much.

Linda B.

Hello Donna,

I have recieved the resume and cover letter, which I am in the process of reviewing and making just a few corrections. All in all, I have to say I'm very impressed with the resume in general! I'd hire me. 🙂

Sean S.

Ilona

Thanks! So far you are my favorite resume writer (don't let my aunt who wrote one when I was trying to get a summer job in high school hear about
this). If I get the job I want with this one I am going to write not just an outstanding review but also I will be completely vindicated with my "doubting thomas" friends and will make the job hunting fools use you folks!

Thanks again for your help.

Steve F.

Donna,

You are an artist!

Upon reading your draft this morning my wife observed that you have transformed me into the "car god." I will proof the document and return it today. There may be a question or two that requires us to have a brief telephone conversation.

Again, Thank you for your professionalism.

Best Regards,

Mike A.

Hello Ilona,

I have reviewed the resume and it looked really good. Its all about word smithing isnt it! I have used the tracking function to make the changes and
attached it to this document. I didn;t have any trouble with the formatting so hopefully it comes back to you in one piece as well.

Please let me know your thoughts.

Nichole A.

Hi Donna,

It looks and sounds amazing! Thank you so much!

At first glance, I didn't notice a couple of minor things that need to be changed. I will review it more closely this week and get back to you on Monday. (I'm going out of town and Monday is the soonest I can get back to you.)

Thanks again.

Patty K.

Donna,

You are a pleasure to work with. Thank you for taking such excellent care of my paper work. Great meeting today. We should be close. Look forward to reading the 2 C/L options , then seeing the near final draft. You are the BEST!

Tim H.

P.S. (to Jane - she is very good!)

Hi Jeanie:

Attached is your draft of my resume that includes my comments. I just named it versions 1.0 so that I wont confuse documents. I think it is a great improvement. In fact, I found a job on Monster.com this morning that I think is a perfect match for my background and skills.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could edit my opening summary to focus on this position.

Again, thanks for the great work. Hopefully, it will help me secure an interview for this position.

Mary Ann M.

Hello Christine,

Please see enclosed suggested resume revisions for your review. I was very pleased with the draft resume in which my professional experience is presented in a concise manner.

If you would please let me know when I can expect the final version. I am very anxious to distribute to prospective employers.

Thank you for your help in this matter.

Sincerely,

Nat B.

Hi Jeanie,

I have one small change at the very end of page Once that change is made am I free to use the material?

I am very pleased with your work and will recommend to people that they use your services.

Thank You,

Rich M.

Ilona,

I thank you for all of your help. Other than the comments above, the draft
looks fine. I still can't believe the difference you made in my resume. You
are truly amazing.

Phillip

Ilona,

Is this me? I can't believe the difference between what I first sent your company and this version. I actually had to put it down after reading the
first paragraph I was so embarassed.

Thank you,

Phillip M.

Ilona,

Thank you for your expertise and the resume looks
great.

Ian P.

Hi Donna!

I received your e-mail and just at first glance, my resume looks amazing! Thanks so much for your hard work. I will review it carefully and let you know if there is anything I want you to add.

Thanks again,
Harriet K.

Ilona,

Awesome!!

OK now we can text convert it... now what exactly does that do in application to sending out my resume?

Michelle L.

Hi Jeanie,

The new resume looks great! I am reviewing it now and will have a few edits. I will e-mail you my edits in the morning.

Best Regards,

Rich M.

Jean --

Nice work. I've attached a Word doc with a few revisions and comments.

Vance K.

Hi Jean:

Thanks--this is good stuff. Most of it is right on the money (or darn close ). Yes, I would like a draft/template built for use in a cover letter.

Thanks again.

Catherine D.

Hi Jean,

I am just starting my recruiting and I have had excellent response to the resume you prepared for me. I think now its time to add a cover letter. Please let me know if you can take care of for me.

Regards,

Jim H.

Ms. St. Julian,

I appreciate all of your help. I was offered a new job on yesterday with Defense Intelligence Agency. My new resume helped me get noticed. Thanks!

Solina J.

Ilona,

The process was alot quicker for my reviews, then expected. Please note the additions in red are only suggestion of information you could add... not necessary changes.

Thank you so very much, you are doing an awesome job.

Let me know,

Michelle L.

You got it, Donna.

I like the document, I will review it carefully tomorrow morning, but on my first reading you really got it.

Well, I am really positively surprised with your speed and work.

Great job thanks!

Julio G.

Jane,

Thanks to you and Rosie! A quick glance of the resume and it looks great. I may request some minor change in the "highlights". I look forward to start using it right away. I'm sure it will help in my search.

I'll be in touch next week.

Bill M.

Ilona,

I have reviewed the resume draft and filled in where info was needed. I am very pleased with the draft. I appreciate all your hard work. I will await
to see if you have any more refinements. If you need to please do not hesitate to contact me.

Thanks Again,

Shane R.

Peter,

Thank you . I apologize for being so late in getting back to you. Christine did a wonderful job on my resume.

Heck I'd hire me.

David M.

Ilona,

Hi, this is David Orr you wrote my resume for me this summer. I just wanted to write you an e-mail to thank you again for doing such a wonderful job
with it. I have been flooded with job offers and interviews. I would recommend to anyone having you assist them with their resume etc.

Again thank you! you've really helped me showcase my business talents.

David

Hi Donna,

I am so impressed with this draft! I hate that I waisted $300 with another company on my first go around. I am almost in tears I have not seen
fresh organized verbage like this in years. I knew it would take some one professional to do this. I have worked corporate america and know what the
standards are. Thanks you so much for spending quality time on my resume.

It reads like it's specific to me. It's not cookie cutter or a lot of useless verbage. I like the draft. I can't think of anything that needs to be changed or added, let me know where we go from here. How much for a cover letter? I would like to speak with you by phone how can I reach you?

Thanks Again!

Carolyn S.

Ilona,

By the way, I'm looking forward to what this resume
can do. From what I can tell, you did a tremendous
job.

Rich W.

Donna,

Wow I think you hit a home run, everything seems to be done perfect.

Lee R.

Peter,

Ilona did a very nice job for me. I will certainly keep you in mind in regards to referrals.

Thanks,

Matthew C.

Ilona,

WOW!! This looks great. I can only see one correction which is on the location of my current position, should be Ft. Pierce. Other than that I am
very pleased.

You did an excellent job.

Thank you very much.

Henry T.

Hi Rosie,

I am very pleased with the format and only identified some minor changes to the proof which is attached. I would like for you to prepare a cover letter based on what I have seen from the reorganization of my resume. What is the process to go forward? I have a specific job in mind that I can provide lectronically that I would like this letter taylor'd too.

Thanks Again,

Robert D.

Rosie,

You did a fantastic job! You are a very talented and skilled writer. I am very pleased that I made the decision to have you rewrite my resume. Im sure that it will have a dramatic effect on my success in seeking new opportunities.

William P.

Rosie,

Who is this guy? I would definitely like to interview him myself. Oh, you mean that's me! Wow I had no idea I was so impressive!

If the lawyer who represents himself has a fool for a client, what about the person who writes his own resume!

Thanks Rosie, I love your work!

Mark F.

Hi Donna,

Sorry to take so long to get back to you. I think the
resume is done. I love it. I'm getting rave reviews
from everyone who sees it.

Thank you so much for everything!

Regards,

Liza P.

Hi Christine,

First I'd like to say you did a really fine job with my resume. It looks good. There were a couple items on the resume that I had questions about.

One other thing (I'm not sure if it is important) is my minor in French. I would like to get a position overseas and wonder if this in any way helps.

Thank you.

Dave M.

Hi Christine

Thanks for the resume. I have read it once already and it looks great and flows well. I will read it again for spelling etc. before i return to you ...hopefully by COB tomorrow. I do not see significant changes right now.

I would like to wait on the cover letter for a while. Can I do that? How much is the cover letter?

Talk to you soon.

Evette F.

Ilona,

Great job! I made a few minor error corrections.

Matthew C.

Hi Ilona,

So far any changes that need to be made are minor and, as you suggested, I can just make them myself.
I think it came out great and I've gotten very positive feedback!

Thanks for all your work and patience!!

Please let me know if there is anything else I need to do.

Peggy D.

Jane,

I just wanted to let you know that I have had outstanding success with my new resume. After only 25 days of using the new resume that Kelley Smith wrote, I secured a new position with the top company in my profession with a large increase in
salary. Thanks for making this possible for me and my family.

Gregg B.

Donna,

Just in time .... I don't know how much longer I can stand my current job so now that I have a beautiful resume I can concentrate on getting out of there.

mille mercis for all of your hard work.

Nancy D.

Hi Ilona,

Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. The cover letter and resume look great. After reading them I thought 'who is this!".

There will be a few VERY minor changes.
Right now there are just 2 -

1. remove the year I graduated from college
2. In the cover letter please change 'ethics' to 'ethic'.

I still need to do some more verification on the job descriptions.

Again I apologizefor the delay, it was a very busy week!!

Thanks,
Peggy D.

Hi Jeanie,

Have reviewed it now several times, catching something else each time I went through it. Looks great. A couple times I had to look at the top of the Resume to make sure it was mine!

The changes are tracked and ready for your review. If you have any questions, you may either call me on my cell phone or just send me an email.

Thanks for your help. Even though it's not yet finalized, it is definitely an improvement already.

Jimmy H.

Hello Ilona;

I received the draft of my resume and I have to say you certainly did make a silk purse out of a sows ear!!!! It is a world of difference from the "resume" I had prepared myself. I must say again I am very pleased with the document so far and look forward to the phone ringing off the hook for interviews.

Regards
Peter H.

PS The formatting of the document came out perfect when printed.....excellent job

Ilona,

Thank you for your hard work, this looks and sounds great. Here are your answers

I think that should do it, and if you ever get to Atlanta lets have dinner....

Thanks,

Joe

Hi Ilona,

thank you for your email. the resume and I think it's great.

......

Thanks again for your assistance.

Regards,

Jacqueline C.

Hi Jean:

I have the draft. It is very, very well done. Format and style are acceptable. I'm on the road today and tomorrow (Wed/Thurs) and will not be able to provide you with any changes or additions to
the content before Friday sometime.

Based upon my first "read through" , I don't foresee many re-writes, if any.

Thank you... GREAT JOB...

I'll get back to you on Friday.

Larry W.

Donna,

The resume looks great-need to go thru it very carefully but I don't foresee many changes. I will get the dates for you in terms of my promotions.

You have done a fabulous job!!

Lorraine S.

Hi Donna:

It's been about 4 weeks since we talked and I have received 3 letters of interests from recruiters and employers regarding positions that I have applied to. So, this letter is just a formal way of saying thanks for your help with my resume.

Now, all I have to do is manage the interviews.

Thanks,

Jeremiah

Ilona

It's PERFECTION!

Yes, I do know Windows 2000 and XP....I would love to send this out first thing in the morning. Truly appreciate you going above and beyond even with the technical difficulties. Also, appreicate you catching the redundancy in the resume.
You are a gem amongst jewels to work with!!

Gabe B.

Jeanie,

Thank you for being so prompt in returning my resume and cover letter. I know that the first day back after vacation can sometimes be very hectic and I appreciate your efforts on my behalf. I think you have done an excellent job at capturing who I am and in describing my professional experience. I have made just a couple of edits and would be happy to get your opinion on them. Also, for some reason, the bullet formatting is erratic in the version you sent me. Would you mind sending me a PDF version of the final resume along with a Word copy so I can see how it is supposed to look?

I must sayI am very impressed. I almost feel embarrassed returning a document with so few edits, but I think you have done an excellent job. I would be happy to refer you and Career Resumes to friends.

Thanks,

Scott H.

Jeanie,

I apologize if you have already received a copy of this email but something went wrong with my email when I tried to reply to your message. As I mentioned in that message, I really like what you have done with the structure and content of my resume. I think you have done a great job
characterizing my professional experience. I have made a few edits, some for errors which may be the result of different versions of MS word.

Thanks again,

Scott

Jeanie,

Both documents look great. I think I can handle any
further tuning and proofing. In general, I as very
pleased with the result. It's a big improvement and I
believe it does a much better job of representing my
capabilities and accomplishments. Thanks for the great job.

Thanks,
Linda

Hi Ilona,

There were only two or three adjustments. It looks great Thanks.

Regards,

Diana L.

Peter,

This is to express my total satisfaction with the work done by Jeanie and to confirm that I equally subscribe for the one time storage fee of $25.00 for possible future revisions.

Joost W.

Donna,

Thank you so much for the resume and cover letter! There really is not anything I would change! There are a couple of wording changes that I can make, but the whole document captures the spirit of what I wanted to say in my resume. If you want I can e-mail you back with the minor wording, but otherwise I would say that you were able to give me a stellar document the first time around! Let me know how you would like to finalize the resume and letter and I will respond quickly.

Thank you again!

Erik C.

Jeanie,

Thanks...received and reviewed the letter. No revisions at my end.....great job in writing! I thought I had writing skills, but you are exceptional in
communicating ideas clearly, without hyperbole.

Once you've made final revisions on the resume, we'll have a package ready for prime-time. You've done a super-job, exceeding my expectations. Once I have final package from you, I assume I'll be dealing with Peter to scope and execute a mailing. Also assume you'll be supplying Peter with text
letter and resume for an electronic mailing?

H. Richard L.

Ilona,

I thought it looked very good and I'm quite pleased with it - and excited to start sending it out! Thanks again, and let's get this thing polished and ready to go...

Todd S.

Hi Ilona,

Sorry for the late response I have been very busy.
Anyway, the cover letter and resume look great I am ready to start posting them.

I have attached my resume with some minor corrections for you to look over.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks,

Ash

Ilona,

Thanks so much for the resume. I am very happy with the quality of your work.

Brent K.

Ilona,

I read the resume, it looks great!!!

Thank you very much.

Katherine M.

Dear Peter:

I have reviewed the first darft, as I noted to Ilona itwas quite good. I have sent it back to for some very minor corrections. As for the letter, it was equally impressive. I am loking forward to reviewing the resume as a final product. As for other services, at this time my funds are very limited.

Take care.

Jules P.

Peter:

Donna and I hooked up a while back and she gave my resume a perfect little update. It looks great and she completed it very quickly. Thanks again for your help. Hopefully the NEW resume with help me land
the "job of my dreams". Unfortunately, there were no job listings for "Prima Princess" .

Thanks again.

Christina B.

Ilona,

All I can say is wow!!

Jules P.

Ilona,

Thanks so much. It looks great at first glance, with a few dates that are
off. I will fax you with the specific changes later today, Thursday.

Jon R.

Thanks Ilona !

That is a wonderful resume. I am really glad I took up your services. I am hoping it'll fetch me some great interviews. (other questions in between...)
Once again, thanks a ton. I will be recommending your services to some of my friends as well.

Frank B.

Hey Ilona -

If I ever get around to meeting you in this life, allow me to bow down to you. Simply stunning ! Astounding ! I just love the direction in which you are going with this. I feel so good, with the way you have repositioned me. Such a fantastic and fresh perspective.

Great job !

Pranav R.



Ilona,

Thanks for making my job so much easier. I have seen your work on my husband's resume and as we put it, its like having a designer perfume made
out of an off-the-shelf deodorant. The changes are drastic and the price no longer seems as steep as it did, considering the quality of work.

Archana P.

Rosie,

Again, thanks so much for all the work you've re-created on my behalf...these resumes would surely land an interview..

As one who can observe the details of anything under a microscope, your talent lies in observing through written information, then compiling it to make enough sense for the prospective employer to follow through. Though this technology doesn't allow a 'thank you' face to face, you can be quite sure how much I appreciate your efforts.

Sincerely,
Susan

Dear Joanne,

Many thanks for your keen insight and penmanship!

Kind regards,

Lloyd

Dear Peter,

Just to let you know how pleased I am with Kelley's efforts and her sense of urgency in completing the resume and cover letter in the time frame I was
working around.

This is to inform you as well that both products can be kept in storage.

With many thanks,

Evelyn G.

Chris,

I am very impressed with your work. Thank you.

Attached is the resume with my revisions. Let me know if the statements are strong enough for Encore.

Thanks,

Jim

Hi Tammi,

The resume not only looks great but its got me excited about looking for a new job. The focus was exactly what I was looking for. I will review the
resume over the next day to see if there is a need for any adjustments, but I don't think there will be. The Cover letter looks great as well. Thank
you for your help, and I look forward to working with you in the future.

Best Regards,
Brian R.l

Thank You Career-Resumes.com!!!

Three weeks after sending out the resume that Rosie St. Julian wrote for me, I now have a job! Out of 50 resumes sent, I received 7 interviews within two weeks of sending them! I got 4 job offers, with 2 offers that I ultimately had to choose between. Here it is three weeks later and I have just put in my notice and I begin work at my new job on June 1!

Thank you guys for your service. It was the best money I ever spent!!!

Kahne O'B.


Jeanie -

Sent the resume and a customized version of the cover letter in Arial type font to the Chairman of the Board of the company that is interested in me. He said "Your resume is extremely interesting and very impressive". I have an interview now scheduled for this Friday morning in New York City.

I can't think of a better way to compliment you on your work than the above statement made by the head of a major national company! It doesn't matter what you and I think of it, but when a major employer thinks the resume is so positive then you should be very proud of your efforts on my behalf! Please make sure that you send a copy of this email to whomever you report to -- I want them to know how great a job you did for me!

Marc W.

Jane,

I wanted to drop up a quick note to let you know how excited I was to see my new "professional" resume. After years of unitizing the same old strategy of updating the text in the same format, I felt it was time for an overhaul. I realize that an effective resume is essential to get you into an interview. Conversely, done wrong it can ruin any chance you may have had.

I am at a point in my career where I have built a strong and progressive story. I needed someone to help me sell it! After our discussion ,you had directed me to your resume "expert" for my professional field. I have to say Sherri completely redid my resume and hit a home run. She used the information sheets I sent and built a solid document. She was extremely easy to work with through the final tweaks.

All the key works and actions are now right up front and she was very good in creating a focused paper that speaks to multiple industries. Specific and tailored but not pigeon holed. She has written this document in a way that makes a reader sit up and take notice. That's what I call effective. It describes more what I can do for a company rather than tell a company what I have done for others. That gets you an interview and that is the primary importance of the document.

I'm sure you already know how effective Sherri is as a consultant and writer, but I wanted to let you know how pleased I am with the out come. Maybe she can come on the interviews with me?

Thank you for your professional help and I will be in touch shortly about further recruiting opportunities.

Sincerely,

Jim M.

Kelley,

Just wanted to thank you for your writing skills and hard work on my behalf. I knew that I interview well but I haven't seen some of the higher end opportunities, which I think was due to my resume.

Your version of my resume helped get the interviews for some of the better opportunities,
during which I was able to sell the whole package.

I start my new position as VP - Internal Audit with an outstanding offer that's 50%+ over my previous base salary.

Thanks for all your help and I will be in touch in the future to update my resume if you are still willing.

All the best for the future and I hope you don't mind if I pass along your name to others that may be interested.

PRJ

Thanks, Jean.

I have opened the document and will go through it
carefully for errors, etc. I am absolutely thrilled with it before changing anything and know this is an excellent resource for me in the future.

Really, it's just excellent.

Will get back to you,

Barbara

Hi Jeanie!

Looks great and definitely more appealing than mine. Will review to finalize and revert in due course.

Thank you for working hard !

Speak later,

Kind regards,

Arnold

Jeanie/Peter,

Thanks for the resume preparation, I am happy to take it from here.

I am pleased with the outcome, I could not have done what you accomplished and shall be recommending you.

Best Regards

Mark

Hi Rosie

My resume look 100 % better , thank you .

Yes , I would like for you to do my coverletter.

Ron S.

Thanks for the draft...it looks great!

Rosie,

I have highlighted couple of things on there very minor corrections.
Apart from those minor corrections, I absolutely love it.

I have attached the form for your review.

Katrina F.

Dear Joanne:

First, a very happy Friday to you! Hope you have a fun weekend planned. Second, thank you so much for the draft copies of my resume and cover letter. Your strategy is apparent and in my opinion, quite well articulated throughout both documents. Though I have marked a few minor changes (see attachments), I can not emphasize enough how impressed I am with your work; well worth the investment!

Please take a look at the attachments. As I said, you should find the changes minor. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me. I look forward to the "final" drafts and the opportunity to send them out to the marketplace. Thanks again for all your help. Have a great weekend.

Pat

Rosie,

You have done a fantastic job on my resume; thank you. I have not purchased the cover letter ffer...yet 🙂
Once again, thank you for your time and energy on my behalf.

Robert M.

Rosie,

Thanks for the great job! I think the presentation is terrific!

Patrick B.

Dear Rosie,

Thanks for all your help--the document looks great.

Anthony M.

Hi Christine,

I've attached the edited copy as requested ... only a few minor
adjustments, overall I'm *very* impressed - what a transformation !!

I've highlighted changes in red, as well as turning on 'track changes'
....I'll leave you to adjust formatting once the edits are complete ...


Thanks,

Rob.

Hi Jeanie,

Just let you know that I got very good feedback on my resume so far so it seems that youve done a very good job.

Thank you!

Wolfgang

Thanks Christine.

I would never have developed a resume like this on my own. You are a pro!

Kevin.

Hi Peter:

First of all, I just want to thank you, Laura West, and Career Resumes for helping me put together a top-notch resume in March of 2003. I received tremendous response to it internally at XXXXXX as well as externally from recruiters. I have also had several colleagues express interest in using your services based off the results that I received. Just so you are aware, I was able to find a position that was perfect for me, and I am now extremely happy with my the direction my career is currently headed in.

Even though I REALLY want to remain in my current position, I feel that I need to have my resume updated just in case I need to move on either due to job change or elimination or any other reason.

Heather

Tammi,

Thank you very much - looks excellent. I have proofread and added my
comments.

Kind Regards,
Steve

Tammi,

Great job summarizing a long work history and great
focus on results! While I made several comments and
some edits, they are tweeks, not of major substance,
though still important to the final product. Some
were cases where I was not clear. Hope these help.
After you implement these changes, I think we will be
done or almost done.

Thanks!
Bob

Tammi,

I did a quick once over out of anticipation. Very INCREDIBLE re-write! I
will look at all the details and instructions you provided and get back to
you sometime on Sunday. Thank you so much!

Gary

Peter,

I just completed and sent the completed worksheets and signature fax to Jeanie as you requested in your initial email.

I must compliment you on the thoroughness of your worksheets. They really challenged me to think about my career in a different way. I look forward to working with Jeanie to develop a winning resume that will help me secure a position where my skills will be of value.

Thank you again.
Sandy

Laura,

Your work got me three interviews and three job offers.

The last one was the best, and I have taken it. I will retire from the Indiana State Police as a Captain with 25 years, and will go on to work with the Indiana Department of Revenue, Criminal Investigative Division on January 5. The selection process had over twenty applicants but only the top seven were interviewed. Those interviewed were chosen from their resumes. Thankfully I was one of those seven.

You did a great job for me and the fee you charged turned out to be a great bargain. I have sent your name out to several of my colleagues; I hope this will help repay the good work you did for me. Thanks again,

Rudy

Peter,

Thank you and Jean for putting a great face on my resume....  I've never looked so good on paper!

Mark P.

Peter,

I wanted to drop you a line to thank you on a job well done. I am more then impressed with Donna's work. She is an excellent writer, and I would recommend her and your firm to anyone in need of clear, concise, and most importantly, positive writing.

Having been in marketing for quite some time myself, I have an eye for what sells. This resume sells itself; excellent work.

Donna was kind enough to mention a recruiter I should talk to, which I intend to do. Perhaps if you know someone I should talk to as well, that would be most appreciated.

I have several friends, all of them are very intelligent go getters, that I know would benefit immensely from your services. Consider your sales job on them done.

With gratitude,

Brian K. G.

Thanks Lynn,

I didn't realize you put comments in until I started to.  I have replied to your comments and added a few of my own.  Please let me know if you have any questions.  This should be the last of the changes. there are just a few things I am unsure about.

Thanks again. I think you did a great job!

Theresa R.

Hi Jeanie,

Thank you for the first draft, I was extremely impressed with the style in which it has been written. I can now see even more clearly why Peter Newfield said what he did about my original document.  Thank you for the time and effort you have put into the document to date.

Peter R.

Got it!  It looks great.  Thanks for the hard work.  I've made some corrections, but following your suggestions I will look at it again tomorrow morning and send it immediately.  I really like it.  This is much, much better than what I had.  If you could do the cover letter before Monday, then go ahead and do it please.

Zerene

Very nice work Jeanie!

Please, find attached my suggested edits, both in marked up and clean versions. Please, let me also know how much a cover letter would be.

Thank You,

Stephan

Jean,

You are wonderful. I just glanced at both documents and they look good. I will review them in detail over this weekend, but I am excited about the quality of your work.

Sincerely,

Paul

Lynn,

Your good.

This is the best resume/cover letter work I have had done for me by a professional ( I have used several over the years). I am very pleased and will recommend this company to other colleagues.

Randy L.

Lynn,

This is excellent!

Yes, please write me a cover letter as well. I only made 2-3 minor changes and highlighted them in yellow.

Outstanding work.... Thank you.

Randy L.

Hi Jeanie,

Got the draft resume. Looks
impressive! There are only some minor changes I will

need to incorporate. I am heading out of town later this morning and will be
back Sunday. I will send my comments to you on Monday and decide on the cover
letter.

Good Job!

Thanks.

John

Tammi,

You are the greatest. This
is absolutely wonderful. I sincerely thank

you for all your effort and look forward to recommending your services

to my friends and colleagues.



Thanks again.



Best Regards,

Suresh D.

Lynn,

Thanks. I sent this resume
to a job I was underqualified for (on

purpose) and they called. Lynn, I am very happy with your work.

Kurt K.

Tammi,



I think the draft looks great.  What a huge improvement over what I put
together.  I've made a few changes, but, I think you did really great work. 
I take it it's okay to leave off my General Electric experience?

Please let me know if you have any questions.



Thanks again,

Chris

Dear Jeanie,



I think this now provides a very complete summary of my qualifications and achievements.

Money well spent.



Thank you very much for your professional and creative work.

Tim

Lynn,



Thanks for the help with revisions. Looks good. If there are any changes

I think that it will be minor and I can do it. I couldn't have done it on

my own...especially in the time period provided. Now on to the next steps

and sending these out and getting a new job.

Thank you again.

Sanjay

Hello Lynn,



On the behalf of the Brooks family we would like to say think you. For the outstanding
job that you did preparing my resume. And the good news is I got the job on
Friday. With the signing bonus and six-figure salary with three weeks vacation.
They told me during interview that the resume was well put together, and highlighted
my strength and abilities. So now I'm back in the corporate sector as a Senior
Vice President of Information Technology at Goldman Sachs. All I can say is
thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!for the job you did



Thank you,

Kenneth B.

Hello Sherri,



I just wanted to let you know that I have accepted a position thanks to the
great resume that you put together. I received many calls and in 60 days I had
8 leads, and two offers for "C" level positions. Thanks for a job
well done. You took my complex information and developed a simple but very effective
profile, which delivered excellent results. Please update my file with the following
new information.



Thanks again,

C.S. - President, COO

Sherri,



The resume and cover letter have exceeded my expectations. It is more polished
and is a much better presentation of my skill sets. I believe these documents
are a great tool to get my on my way to a new life. Thanks for all of your hard
work.



Sincerely

D.F. Davis - Sales & Marketing Executive

Donna,

Donna, Just a note to let you know that I have secured a position with Harvard
University's Real Estate Division. As an officer of Harvard, I will be managing
an office in the Longwood Medical Area. I start on Monday. Thank's to all of
you for your prayers. IT WORKED!!

Dotti

Hi Donna,

Just wanted you to know that I had an interview today with Harvard University.
They have a position within the real estate division. It is to open an office
in the hospital area of Boston. Harvard is affiliated with all the major hospitals.
They will need people to assist faculty and students to find suitable housing
within and around that area of Boston. This will be done with their portfolio
or private housing options. If I secure this position, I will be an officer
of Harvard University's Real Estate Division. I will be responsible for this
new office. The best part is that I will be able to attend school to further
my education at the expense of Harvard as part of the benefits program. I
was told by the Assistant Director that she was very impressed with my resume.
She said it was well written and defined my qualifications in detail.
I
thought you would like to know that I receive many compliments regarding my
resume. I am waiting to receive! a call for a second interview. As you can tell,
I am really interested in this position. I am very qualified for this position.
I feel that being a part of Harvard will allow me to finally have stability
within my field. I am realistic to the point that there are a number of applicants,
however the interviewer said that she does not want to fool around and that
she is very interested in me. I should know something within a week or two.
I'll let you know. Thanks again for a job well done with my resume.

Dotti F.

Hey Jeanie,

I had 3 long meetings today
and have not been able to spend as much time on reviewing my resume as I had
wanted. I am going to review it again tonight and get you comments by tomorrow
afternoon. I have a 9:00 meeting in the morning. I am applying for a job that
closes on Monday, March 3. What is your turnaround time on changes? I don't
think there will be that many but am just wondering. Thanks. You are a wonderful
writer.

I have showed the resume
to friends today and they were impressed. I am very lucky to have connected
with you.

Thanks again.

Elaine F.

Hi Lynn,

Attached is the doc file I have made changes to per our conversation this
morning. I would like to thank you for the re-work you did on my resume. You
have condensed it down, made it very readable, and is an excellent presentation
of my work experience.

Thanks & Regards,

Stan D.

Jean,



I just accepted a VP of sales position in North Carolina and wanted to thank
you for your powerful and compelling resume which you so skillfully constructed. 
I am confident that your resume helped open the door to this new and exciting
opportunity.  I will stay in touch annually to ensure my resume stays current
especially in these economically turbulent times.  Please pass along my
thanks to Peter.  I don't have his email address.

My warmest regards,

Ron H.

Jeanie,


Hope this transmission gets to you.  You did a very good job on my resume and the cover letter and I am pleased with what you have done. 


I made a few revisions and I would appreciate your fresh thoughts. Is there another word you can think of other than "Ignited" revenues?  I cannot think of one at this hour of the day but I just have this image of firing off a rocket with that word. 

Everything you have written is factually accurate. The resume really has a very new and different spin on it based on all the information I sent to you. 

I guess in a town where things are generally so understated, one has to abandon all modesty and put he peddle to the metal.  This resume has a lot more of a high energy image to it now and that is what is needed. 

I appreciate all that you have done. Look forward to any final thoughts you may have.

Thanks!

Cliff G.

Hi Peter,


I've just finished up with Jeanie on my new resume and cover letter.

I am totally blown away, to say the least!!

Kudos to Jeanie and the outstanding job she has done for me!!

I've attached a copy of my wife's resume, Sharon K.  Your critique would be most appreciated.

Her contact numbers are on the resume.

Best regards,

Bruce A.B.

Joanne,



I wanted to let you know that I successfully
landed a very exciting and promising opportunity.  I was very happy with
the finished product and it clearly contributed to my success.



My family and I will be relocating to Southern Ca. where I accepted a position
as the EVP/CFO.  The company is involved in various types of real estate
development including residential track development, home building and retail
properties.  It is an exciting opportunity with the ability to participate
in the results and equity of the company. I am not sure where we will reside
with my office in Ontario, Ca it could be Pasadena Hills, Anaheim Hills, or
the Chino Hills areas.



I had also ended up being the lead for the CFO slot at XXXXXX Properties, a
public office REIT and my name was beginning to surface at other companies as
well.



I hope all is well for you.  If you need a reference for senior exec types,
please feel free to use me on a selective basis.

James G.

Lynn,


Just wanted to send you a quick note and let you know that I am very impressed with the quality of work I have received related to the resume, cover letter and thank you letter proofs.

I have a few minor changes to the documents and will have them back to you for final revisions tomorrow morning.

Thanks again for all of your hard work. If definitely was reflected in the product you sent me.

JoAnn W.

Jean,



Attached are my revisions. The draft was very close and clearly a document

that I can be very proud of.  Thank you so much for your help on this...



Thanks,

Kelley O'Reilly

Jeanie,

This is magnificent.  You truly are an artist with words.  

Best Regards

Ron

Donna,


Thanks for the great Resume. I think a friend of mine will be calling to get one done as well. I did not keep a copy though of mine in the computer.Can you e-mail it to me again. Thanks. Also we will be in Deer Valley Wednesday the 8th. Any thing we should know to save us all the first timer there mistakes?

Joe T.

Joanne,


Thank you very much for the wonderful job you did on my resume.
My best wishes for Christmas and happy New Year.
Sincerely,

Gerardo L.

Joanne,


Looks great! Thanks so much!

I made some minor edits, but please use your best
judgment on what to use. Looking forward to the
final.

Tom L.

Good Morning Donna,

I think this looks great.
What an improvement. I will review it in more detail this morning and get back
to you with edits, if any. If you don't hear from me, no news is good news.

Jamie

Rosie,


Generally, looks great. I am thrilled at how good it is and would not have been able to do this myself.

Ken Nemeth

Donna,


Attached are my corrections to the resume (I used the tracking mode in Word). The cover letter is excellent. Could you create a cover letter
designed for executive search firms/head hunters? I want to solicit this
audience as well.

Your work is outstanding -- I'm glad you're working for me!

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Thank you.

Bruce S.


Rosie,


I like the format you used and the resume reads really well. Is there anything else you will need from me?

It has been a real pleasure to use your service and I will glady recommend it to anyone .

Thanks again and wish me luck,

George


Dear Vivian!

I can't thank you enough for writing my resume! I just got an offer for a wonderful position right here in Columbus, Ohio!

This happened much faster than I expected and I feel that your words helped so much! I noticed that many of the people that I interviewed with at this Company had different things highlighted on their copy of my resume. So.. it looks like we had the RIGHT STUFF!

If you ever need me for a "testimonial"... feel free to contact me. I landed the job within a month of receiving your draft! Even better... I don't have to start until after the holidays!


I AM SO HAPPY and SO GRATEFUL for all your help and encouragement!

Take care and have a wonderful Thanksgiving.... I know I will! I have so much to be thankful for and you are on my list!

Thanks so much!

Julie Schmitt

Rosie,

the resume looks fabulous! You did a wonderful job! Thank you very
much!!

Steve

Tami,

Thank you very much for the excellent job you've done on my resume. I can
finally say what I've accomplished in my career in short, concise sentences.
And, it delivers the message with a punch.

I've made a few changes in the resume while the cover letter is perfect.

Thank you again,

Raffi

Dear Jeanie,

I just wanted to drop you a quick note to say thank you for the excellent
job you did putting together my resume. Although I'm in marketing and writing
is my forte, I was having a hard time selling myself on paper!

You did a really great job distilling all the information I sent and developing
what I think is a dynamite resume and cover letter. So far, I haven't received
any calls or inquiries via my posting on some Web sites, but I will say the
number of people actually looking at my resume for a more in-depth review has
increased dramatically.

For the first time, I feel like I really have a great resume. Thank you!

Angela M.


Hi Joanne,

I received both the resume and cover letter. Thank you for the excellent work.
Perhaps in a few months time, (when I actually decide to apply for some appetizing
positions) I will inform you of my success rate in receiving an interview due
to your work.

Regards,

Zeljko

Dear Donna,
 
Thanks for all your hard work. You truly have generated the look I desire. Just as little kudo to you, I showed this draft to a close Money Manager friend of mine from Payne Weber. She thought it was VERY well done. Smiles 🙂
 
Thanks again. Please call or email me with any other questions. I look forward to the next draft.
 
Sincerely,

Brian


Hello Rosie,

Beautiful job! I am very pleased. Looks and reads professional. I really like
that cover letter. I will be pleased to recommend you to others in the future.
This process has been fast, efficient, easy to follow, and professional. Thank
you.

Sincerely,

Sharry J.

Dear Kelley,


I was able to send out 47 resumes yesterday (nothing today, due to studying
again) and I received responses from about 10 - 12 of them, including phone
calls from at least 5 of them.  WOW -  what a difference !!!!



Thanks again,

Darla


Peter,

I want to pass along serious kudos to you and Sherri for the guidance and
the end product resume and marketing letter. The response has been nothing short
of powerful. Not only to the jaded search firms call but the internal company
executives comment as well.

My advice to your prospective clients is make the investment now!!! If only
my 401K had this type of return.

Warmest Professional Regards,

Richard L.

Lynn
-

You're
the expert so we go with your version. Everything looks
great with both the letter and the resume so you can make
them "gold." You did a great job!

Thanks,

Bernadette S.

As far
as Joanne,

I
am extremely pleased and happy with Joanne's (Career-Resumes)
work.
The resulting resume (and cover letter)
is clearly far beyond a mere cleaning up of the old version.
My own work efforts with Joanne took close to 3-4 days between
information and editing etc., but it has been a very informative,
enlightening and productive experience for me. I am also
far better prepared now for interviews as a result of the
'information' package provided by Joanne. First time I've
ever consolidated everything together like this. Going forward,
Career-Resumes are permanently in charge of 'my' resume.

Thank
You.

Peter W.

Jeanie,

NICE
JOB
& Only a couple of small changes. Also, when I printed it,
several vertical lines showed up on the right side of the
page. I would like the months placed next to the employment
dates unless you feel it is not appropriate. I left the
Wells job on 8/14/2001 (I believe this was on the questionnaire
to you. Did you put present for marketing reasons? I did
leave on good terms. Let me know if this should be changed).

Also,
no need for a cover letter at this time&

Thanks!!!

Tom

Jeannie
--

First
and most important, thanks for A GREAT JOB.
Looking
over your draft, I realized how "vanilla" my self-prepared
document is -- despite my endless tinkering.

My suggestions
to the resume and cover letter are attached -- nothing earth-shattering,
really, more like wordsmithing and a couple of typo's that
slipped through. I look forward to your response.

And
again, THANK YOU.

Best,

Jack

Vivian,

Everything looks great. I don't have any edits that I need you to make. I
will read through it several more times today but I think everything is in order.

Thanks again and send the cover letter when ready.

Regards,

Robert

Rosie:

So
far great job!
Couple of thoughts and included
most of the information you requested. What are the charges
for a cover letter? Lastly, when can I get the final proof?
I have a few "opportunities" that I would like to send this
out to as soon as possible. Please advise and just give
me an update.

Thanks

Eugene

Rosie,

Great
work! You sure know how to pack
a lot on two pages with style.
I do have a few
comments that I marked up with "Track Changes". Most are
straightforward, a couple are general. I'm sure you'll let
me know if you have questions.

Thanks,

David

Peter:

Laura
West has completed all her work on my resume and cover letter
and has done a great job. Many thanks for sending her my
way. Kindly let me know the additional itemized costs in
addition to the one below. I appreciate all your help and
guidance. I have now gone from
a BUICK to a MERCEDES resume.

Sincerely,

VERONICA M.


Kelley,

I have just reviewed draft number 2 and it's exactly what I want. Thank you
again for doing such an excellent job on updating my resume and for doing it
in such a timely manner. I have been recommending your service to people that
I know, and I am sure that quite a few of them will be contacting your company
shortly.

Best regards,

Doug

Jeanie,

WOW!  Denise said I wouldn't be disappointed and actually I'm blown away and so is my English major wife.  Thank you for all your help, I just have a couple of minor revisions and it looks like we'll be ready to go.

Brent H.

Thanks Lynn:

My wife
wants to go ahead with your service and I am forwarding
the URL to someone else. I told them that having my resume
written by you and Donna was the most important and best
thing I did in regard to a new position. You may also be
interested to know that largely
as a result of your resume, I got an interview and I am
currently a vice president in a major tertiary care medical
center in New York State
.

Bruce

Dear
Peter,

Good
to talk to you yesterday. Got Lynn's final resume draft
and three flavors of cover letters, i.e., for companies,
recruiters, and VCs. Excellent
work.
I'm too close to myself to write about
myself anymore and I'll forever be indebted to my good friend
and old Cray colleague, Terry S., for putting me on to Lynn,
and you. I showed the documents to my wife who's been a
corporate communications writer (and 10+ plus books she's
ghost written or co-written over the years ... she's now
a life-coach workshop leader), and one of the best editors
I've ever met. And she said it was excellent work. THAT,
Peter, from Caroline, is very high praise. So I'm
delighted with Lynn's work
. We both are.

Duncan O.

Hi Lynn:

I just
did a brief review and it looks
great
. I will proof carefully and get my edits
(if any) back to you by tomorrow COB. I& I may want you to do a cover letter for me, also. I believe
what I need is a general letter for a resume-broadcast campaign?
Let me know what you think.

Thanks

Ann R.

Jeannie:




Thanks for your work on my resume.
It looks fantastic.
I have proofed it and the
changes I suggest are tracked in the attached document.

Chad B.

Jeanie,



My sincere appreciation for a great job.  I know we got off on the wrong
foot due to the email problems, but the quality and creative writing you have
delivered has exceeded my expectations for a first draft.  With only minor
corrections/edits this is great stuff, and a quantum improvement over my "other"
attempts to create an exceptional resume on my own. I will gladly recommend
you to my colleagues and associates.  Thank you, I know you rearranged
your schedule to spend time on this to complete in less time than usual. 
You do great work!

Jean O.

I knew you would do a great job. I put some additions in
red. Please let me know what you think. Do you have any
recommendations on Executive Search firms? Though I will
relocate anywhere I would prefer to stay in New England
because of family network. My wife would love to move up
to Maine. Thank you for your effort. After
reading the draft I would give me an interview.

Cheers,

Joe

Lynn:

I'm
just returning from travel, and have printed the resume
for the first time today. It really
does look great; on-point, clear and concise.

You're
obviously spend a lot of time combing through the plethora
of stuff I sent you and have done yoeman's work in getting
it together.

Can
you spot me a few days to read and digest what you just
sent to me? I'll have any revisions to you by Monday at
the latest.

As for
the invoice, please debit my credit card for the balance.
I haven't decided on the cover letter, but will let you
know when/if I have any revisions.

Thanks
a million,

Tony

Peter,

Viv
just sent me my resume and cover letter. She did a great
job. What a difference!

Thanks.

Joe K.

Terri:

OUTSTANDING!
As you can probably imagine, shelling out hundreds of dollars
for an unknown quantity is slightly unnerving. However,
you have created a masterpiece!
I have made minor changes. Can you give me some idea regarding
final turnaround time? Again, great job!

Bill S.

Lynn,

Thanks
very much for your work on my resume and cover letter. I
showed it to a couple friends this morning. They liked both
the content and the format. Especially the cover letter.
Both people I showed it to this
morning read over the letter and turned to me and said "Bill,
this is you!"

I have
attached the same documents back to you with my comments.
Please be sure to view the comments, as I inserted a few
of them in the document. I have a few other questions for
you, not in the document:

Font
and format:

I thought your choice of font was interesting. It is good,
and people seem to like it very much, but it is not one
that I would have thought to use. Is this a font that you
use for all the resumes you work on? Will this translate
well, if I have to cut and paste this format into an online
resume processing system? Do you have a recommendation for
what I should do in those circumstances? Should I have a
plain text version of my resume as well?

Other
prospective clients for you:

One of the friends that I had look over my resume was asking
for your contact information. Is it OK for him to contact
you directly? or should he go through the main number?

Settling
up:

What do I need to do to settle-up my bill? Should I call
the main Newfield number? or can you process my credit card?

Bill G.

Jeanie,

I can't
thank you enough. The resume is great. I had *help* from
outplacement (Lee Hecht Harrison) and the rewrite you gave
me is so much stronger and better,
I wish I'd enlisted your help months ago, it's *that* much
better.
Truly. I can't wait to tell you my real
results, and hopefully a new job.

Friends,
including a VP recruitment for a major NYC retailer, who
I showed the before/after were really impressed. And she'd
OK'd my earlier version. I think you'll be hearing from
a number of my friends, including those from outplacement
with mediocre, run-of-the-mill resumes, written by outplacement
engines...

I feel
good, facing August and a tough market, with a better resume.

Thank
you, and Peter.

Sarah 🙂

Dear Sir,

I wanted to take a moment
to let you know of the success I've had using the

resume that Lynn Andenoro

helped write for me.



Using my old resume format I received exactly zero calls and no interviews

out of approximately 123 direct mailings.



Then I hired you to write my resume.  Using the detailed information I

provided, Lynn Andenoro worked collaboratively with me over several weeks,

and ultimately delivered what I considered a stunning, out-of-the-box

resume.  Most notable was Lynn's "challenge-context" presentation
format

that fit extremely well with the executive-level positions for which I was

interviewing.



I refocused my direct mailing and, using my new resume, received a 9.3%

response rate resulting in four executive-level interviews with major

technology and aerospace companies here in the Washington, D.C. area. 
The

series of numerous, intensive interviews at the executive vice president

level spanned three months.  On Monday one of the companies telephoned
to

make a tentative offer over the telephone, with the expected final offer

being made in a few days.



I had confidence in my communication skills to seal the deal once I got in

the door, but my old resume, I can now see, was a hindrance.  I don't want

to think about those 123 lost opportunities that I foolishly squandered.



Thank you for your help.  You can bet that in future as I'll ask your advice

on how to incorporate the expediencies of my new position into future

resumes.



Best wishes,

Tony V.

Vivian,

What a terrific job. I am impressed. I have some questions which I have written within the resume. Please use your judgment because in most cases I was not sure, I just wrote my thoughts. Also, when this is complete I would like to speak to you further about writing a cover letter and updates.

Thanks again for expediting this for me.

Ginger

Jeanie:

Great
! - At first review this is a masterpiece
-- thank you...

Peter M.

Donna,

I just
wanted to let you know that I received
my first call back on my new resume
. I sent out
the resume 7/20 and received a call today - I have to do
a phone interview and they want me to go to Virginia to
see them.

Thanks,
you did a great job.

Dave D.

Dear Lynn,

Last
fall (I think) you prepared my resume for me. I wanted to
report back that I landed a new
assignment and will be starting it on August 5th -- in no
small part due to the great job you did!
The
interviewing process lasted for almost 4 months. Thanks
again!

I do
have a problem now. While successfully backing up my work-related
files on my current company's network, I lost the resume
and cover letter you did for me. However, I did remember
that I paid for the service where your company stores my
resume for future updates. Could you please forward a copy
of those files to me?

Regards,

Vince B.

Jeanie,

WOW.
WOW. WOW
. I'm impressed. Yes, there is a little
tweaking, but...WOW. I'll get back to you in the morning.

Janet K.

Hi Terri,

I was
very impressed with your writing skills, job very well done.
The letter of introduction is
outstanding.
I am very anxious to get started.
Thank you very much.

Roger

Dear
Lynn,

I
was very pleased with your work on my resume.

Very tightly constructed with challenges, responsibilities
and accomplishments neatly drawn together. I have very few
changes as you will see on the attached. I did make some
changes to more correctly state my current work experience,
including eliminating the annual EBIT numbers which are
proprietary. Thanks so much for your professional assistance.
I look forward to the final draft.

Robin

Dear
Mr. Newfield:

Just
today, I received the final drafts for both my resume and
cover letter(s) prepared by Joanne Kowlowitz and I have
to tell you, I am extremely please by the final results.

I may
be a rare find, but I actually enjoyed the process of filling
out the resume worksheets (including the international history)
and after completion thought..."who the hell is going to
be able to take all this information and get it into a resume
that will be organized and be a true reflection of who I
am and what I have accomplished...". Well, Joanne Kowlowitz
did it.

It
is important to keep in mind that I started out (very briefly)
with Jeanie Oscarson, however due to her family situations
I was handed off to Joanne to assist in the development
of my resume and cover letters(s)...and as far as I am concerned,
I was handed over to the right person. I would also like
to add that, without question, Joanne did 95% of the work.
No doubt in my mind. After reviewing my worksheets, placing
a phone call to me and asking a couple of key questions,
Joanne had a strategy of what needed to be done and how
she was going to do it...and the bottom line...she did it!

Please
pass these words of praise onto Joanne and I would like
you to be aware that I have told a couple of people about
the work she did for me. If I find these individuals are
interested in updating their career history, I assume they
would contact you directly, so they can work with Joanne?
Please confirm.

Thanks
you...you have one very please customer on your hands.

Tim D., Vice President and Managing Director

Joanne,

You
are SO GOOD at this!!!& details. The document looks GREAT,
and I appreciate your patience in helping me develop appropriate
quantifiable results& your prompting. Attached are my edits. Let me know if you
need anything further. Thanks for everything and have a
great day.

Ed

Peter,

I wanted
to drop you a note and share with you what I fine job Jeanie
did writing my resume. I have gotten
many compliments and have already received some call-backs.

I have recommended your organization to several colleagues
who are getting ready to have a new resume composed.

Thank
you again for your assistance.

Michael F.

Joanne,

The
resume looks fantastic&
I am very happy& and I will recommend you to all my friends. My special thanks
for working so late last night.

Regards,

Richard

Hi Pete:

Just
to let you know the resume crafted by one of your distinguished
writers has landed me 3 top level interviews with international
companies in Mxico.

Currently
I am in conversations with all 3 companies assessing the
best opportunity for me. Your resume made it possible no
doubt about it.

Pete
I need my resume and cover letter translated into Spanish.
Could you refer me to a professional that can do an excellent
job at it? I would appreciate your assistance with this
matter. Thank you.

Warm
regards,

Manuel G.

Rosie

Your
work is absolutely excellent!!
I am very impressed
with the resume and the cover letter, and would be most
happy to provide a testimonial to this effect if you wish.

I've
attached an edited a "track changes" version of the documents.
Please modify accordingly, but please don't make a change
where you disagree with my input...your product clearly
demonstrates that you know what is right and what is wrong.

I checked
out the website and I will be wanting a targeted search
with most of the frills. I priced it out and oh my, it is
high, but I am convinced it will be worth it. I hope the
quoted price includes both the cover letter and the resume.

When
the resume and cover letter are in final form, please tell
me how I should proceed.

Thanks,

Arnie

Lynn,

I
am impressed. This is so good I would hire myself!

I think you did an excellent job. My minor changes are highlighted
in red.

I would
feel privileged if you would like me to be a reference for
your work. I sincerely appreciate your professionalism.
You see I think American business is beginning to loose
this trait. At any rate...

I certainly
would like you to write a killer cover letter for me.

I also
am interested in the targeted email campaign to recruiters
and specific companies and would appreciate speaking to
someone in your group about this. Let me know on this one.
Believe me I want this resume to go to the decision makers
but understand that we need to send a good amount of this
resume out to unsolicited people. I need guidance please.

One
question I do want to ask you or Peter is, "Having read
this resume where do you think Lew F. belongs in terms of
job title and industry/company?".

Looking
forward to hearing from you on my questions and the receipt
of final resume.

I'm
excited.

Regards,

Lew

Terri:

First
of all...there is no commission for the salary increases
attained with this new resume you prepared for me? Just
kidding! I have accepted a new job. I will now be the Plant
Controller for KPG. About two weeks after you finished my
new resume the position came open. They are in the same
building as my current employer (also a former part of Imation).
I applied, interviewed, and was offered the job.
It's a $20,000 increase in my base pay!

I would
also like you to know the Human Resources manger of KPG
(Kodak Polychrome Graphics) said it was the best
resume she had ever seen
. She has been employed
by 3M, Imation, and now KPG. Also, the Controller of KPG
in Connecticut said it was the best resume he had ever seen
and was keeping it in his file for future reference.

There
is another accountant in my office who will be contacting
you within a few months. She is currently taking the CPA
exam and will probably start looking in the next year for
a new job. She is going to be transferring into my job.
She saw my resume and was definitely interested in having
hers prepared.

Thanks
again! I didn't think this would happen so fast. This is
just a stepping stone to my next job as CFO.

Paula T.

Peter:

I want
to first tell you that I am very
pleased with the work done by Donna Allen
. I
sent out the new resume, received calls and some interviews.
You were certainly correct in your advice that I would not
be able to write a really effective resume on my own.

My
wife was similarly impressed and now would like a consultation
regarding her resume. She is a Registered Nurse, Nurse Practitioner
and Administrator. I am attaching a copy of her CV and we
would appreciate the benefit of your evaluation.

Thanks
again.

Bruce C.

Hi Lynn.

First
off, let me say that when I decided to go ahead and get
my resume professionally written, I really did not have
particularly high expectations and that I was probably going
to waste my time and money. I was very pleasantly surprised.
You did an outstanding job.
My yardstick was simply that I would hire myself after reading
what you created.

Paul B.

Hi Donna
-

Just
to let you know, I've been busy
with interviews... YES, Interviews! The resume appears to
be working.
Folks seem clear about my background,
but not put off or intimidated. I haven't had time to do
much about the cover letter, but have used parts of your
draft in notes. I'll let you know if I land something.

Thanks
again for your help!

Andy

Hello
Lynn,

Thank
you for the resume and the cover letter. You
did a terrific job.
I feel less hopeless. I only
made three minor corrections. As you recommended, I used
the highlight function. The corrections are in red.

Agnes C.

Jeanie,



I  wanted to pass a note along to let you know that I have accepted a position
with Microsoft in Redmond to manage the outsourcing partnerships and business
in the US. 

Thanks for having put together a great resume.

Geoff C.

Terri
-

My gosh,
girl - you are amazing! I am thrilled!!!
I feel like I've got Wonder Woman on my side.

Even I didn't know I could account this good! I need to
take another day to review the resume - the first couple
of times through triggered a few minor changes. I will scour
it tomorrow and get back to you before close of business
on Wednesday 4/24. Thank you so much for your great work.
I really appreciate your help, and I'll be in touch.

Regards,

Marilyn

Jean:

I REALLY
like my resume now. I think you
have done an excellent job here...
teasing out
all of the excellent accomplishments I have obtained in
my life... and really forgot.

I have
made some formatting changes, that put the resume in a from
I prefer (not much) and if you could edit this one more
time, paying particular attention to the first page, that
I did not take all the ZIP out of it you put into it.

Well,
done.

Regards:

C.J.G.

Hi Donna,

I hope
your vacation was fun and relaxing. I know it's hard to
get back into the swing of things after some time off. I
really appreciate you getting all my stuff together so quickly.
I love the resume and cover letter.
One of my