I left you a phone message to let you know I had received the resume draft. You did a fantastic job. Your wording is excellent. I can't even believe this is me you are talking about. I am very impressed with myself. I didn't know that it was acceptable to put performance review excerpts and comments from other people on a resume. Is this something new?
I spent Saturday working on this draft. I am being a little more detailed than the resume allows but I am doing this for you to see the complete picture of what I have done and then you can just pick out whatever you need to use to get the point across.
You will be hearing from me Sunday. Thanks for doing such a fantastic job.