Attached are my track changes to your highlighted questions.
I didn't find anything I wanted to change because it is written right on the sweet spot. Much better than anything I had before on my old resume.
As for proofing I went over it twice and didn't find anything that caught my attention.
I am excited to see it formatted once it is complete as well as the cover letter. Please let me know if anything needs further clarification as well as when I will expect to receive the finalized resume with my cover letter.