Thanks for your efforts, I've made a few suggested edits to the document. The biggest issue concerns the population that I serve. My formal job appointment is to run the Okeechobee County Health Department serving a population of around 40,000 in the Summer and up to 100,000 in the Winter season.
I am also appointed, as is reflected in the resume to act as co-chair for the health and medical functions of the regional domestic security task force which serves a population of over 3,000,000.
Otherwise, it looks great. I bow to your wisdom on any of the above...I want this to sell me, but don't want to over-state anything to the point that it might be challenged.