Good afternoon Jean:
Thank you for sending me this draft of my new resume. It is terrific! Great Work!
I have made a few changes to soften my participation in some projects to help prevent a resentment from creatives and marketing people.
Please review my proposed changes. If you do not agree, please ignore them.
Thank you again for the great work. Have a great day and a very enjoyable long weekend.
Sincerely,
Steve T.