Hi Ilona,
Hope you had a great Thanksgiving (I went to the parade for the first time--so fun!).
First I want to mention that I'm working in Word 2003, and it displays tracked changes differently than earlier versions. If you're working in another version of Word and can't see my edits properly, let me know and I can probably convert to PDF to show changes or figure out another solutions.
I really like the direction you've taken on the resume. I sent you a lot of junk and you really made sense of it. Bravo!! I'm attaching with some edits and questions that I've made (I tried to adapt it to AP style since I'm claiming this as an area of expertise; also made some other changes). If you have any feedback about my changes, let me know.
On the letter, my biggest concern is easily adapting this to different jobs since I'm applying to a wide range of opps. I seem to be getting a lot of response from companies looking for really strong writers, and have been told it's tough to find someone with my combined skill set. Any suggestions are appreciated!
Thanks so much!
Jen S.
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